Rang jao mere ishq mai updated part 18 page 43 on 18/1/2014

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Hi everyone this is my first ss ever unrequited love which is changed to rang jao mere ishq mai
i am hope you all will like my work

Pyaar ek aise lafz hai jisse sirf mehsoos kiya jaa sagta hai

Pyaar ek aise lafz hai joh ek kori zindagi mai rang bhar sagta hai

Kya yehi pyaar geet ki kori zindagi mai bhi wapis rang bhar sagta hai maan ke sariye

Kya geet pyaar ke is lafz ko wapis aapne zindagi mai mehsoos karegi yah phir joh dil k darwaze ussne ban kar diye hai who hamesh k liye ban rahnege

Kya maan usse utna pyaar dega jiss se geet k ban huwe dil k darwaze khul jayenge

Yeh hai maan aur geet ki kahani

I WON'T BE GIVING THE CHACTER SKETCH
THANKS KAVYA FOR THE BANNER
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PART 1

Happy Birthday to u
happy birthday to u
happy birthday dear Rahul
happy birthday to u

Rahul ne jaise hi cake cut kiya uss ka phala bite geet ko khilaya his better half GEET RAHUL KAPOOR
bolo rahul aaj kya chahiye tumhe as a birthday gift

Rahul: Geet mujhe tum mil gayi aab mujhe kuch bhi nahi chahiye
jabse tum meri zindagi mai aayi ho meri zindagi mai sab badal gaya hai zindagi phale kabhi bhi itni haseen na thi
I LOVE U GEET

Geet : I LOVE YOU 2 RAHUL

GEET GEET beta utho nahi toh school ke liye late ho jaogi aur aaj tumhare practice section bhi toh hai jaldi karo

Geet aapni aankhe kholti hai aur aapne bed k samne wale wall pe RAHUL ki photo dekhti hai jis pe phool ka har hota hai

GOOD MORNING RAHUL

Who pichle 6 months se aise hi RAHUL ko wish karti hai

Geet niche ready hoke dinning hall mai aati hai ek white sari jis pe light read color ka border hai

Good morning mom

Good morning dad

Mr kapoor : good morning beta aur sunao kaisi chal rahi hai tumhare school ke annual day ki taiyari

Mrs kapoor : yeh lo who niche aayi nahi ki aap dono ki bateen shuru ho gayi usse nashta toh karne dijiye phale

Geet ek toast leke mom aur dad ko good bye bol ke jane wali hoti hai ki usse yaad aata ki ussne Rahul ko toh good bye bola hi nahi

Geet : maa mai RAHUL ko good bye bolke aati hoon

Woh aapne room ki taraf bhagti huvi jati hai

Mrs kapoor: suniye ji akhir yeh kab tak chale ga aise aap geet se baat kyu nahi karte usse samajiye ki Rahul hum sab ko hamesh k liye chod k chala gaya hai

Mr kapoor : samjaya usse jata hai joh kuch samjna chata ho Geet toh kuch sune k liye ready hi nahi hai

Mrs kapoor : bas maine soch liye hai ki aab mujhe geet se usski shaadi ki baat karni hogi aaj shaam k school k function k baad mai uss se baat karungi
utne mai geet niche aati hai aur who dono chup ho jate hai

Precap : school evening function and MSK entry

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PART 2

Rahul ki death k baad Geet ne ek school mai teaching start kar di hai uss join kar ke sirf 4 month huwe hai lekin who sab students aur staff ki fav thi

Bache uss pyaar se didi bulte the jab who school k bahar dikti thi

School ka Annual day tha aur sari dance show ki zimedari geet k upar thi

GEET aur sare 12th grade k girls ready ho rahe hote hai performance k liye aur yahan school k bahar hoti hai chief guest k aane ka itezaar

A car just stopped in front of the Entrance. The bodyguards come forward n open the Door for their Boss

Really he is the Boss..he one n only owner of Khurana Empire... As soon as the door opens...

A man's shoes cums out which was enough to show the arrogance n pride of him. As soon as he stpd out.

Media Pounced on him with Questions which were Avoiuded by his BG.

Yes he Was Maan Singh Khurana... A perfect Well Tones Body Age of 25 which has dark chocolate Brown eyes n M shaped Lips which were like a Cherry on top of cake on his well handsome n hot looks..

As he entered everyone wished him and welcomed him with flowers and was taken to the main HALL where the event was about to start

As he took the seat the music started and the curtains of the stage was opened with geet in front with all the girls at back of her


Maan was completely mesmerized with the way Geet was dancing
her face had all kind of expression but he couldn't see any smile on her face

PRECAP : GEET AND MRS KAPOOR TALK
MAAN THINKING ABOUT GEET

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me first ⭐️
i m glad that u have restarted it on IF only... 😉
i always had loved ur ff...
me waiting for new parts...

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wow
congrats for new ss
geet and rahul married and geet become vwidow😒
poor girl
waiting for next
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Part 3
Annual day khatam hote hi geet ghar pochti hai aur dekhti hai ki Mrs kapoor uska wait kar rahi hai

Geet : maa aap aab tak soyi nahi
Mrs kapoor : geet mai tumhara hi intezar kar rahi thi aao baitho
kaise raha aaj ka program

Geet: aacha tha maa bas aab bacho ke exams bhi start hone wale hai kuch din mai phir yeh academy year bhi khatam ho jayega aur 2 months ki holidays ho jayegi

Mrs kapoor : geet mujhe tujhe se ek zaruri baat karni hai

Geet: haan maa bolo na

Mrs kapoor : geet akhir kab tak aise chalte rahega tujhe aab meri baat mani padegi tu samjti kyu nahi hai ki rahul aab zinda nahi hai who mar chukka hai tujhe aab dusri shaadi karni hi hogi mai kuch nahi janti bas

Geet: maa RAHUL aap sab k liye mar gaya ho shahyad lekin mere liye who aaj bhi mere saans mai basta hai who mere dil mai rahta hai maa
mai uski jaga kisi aur ko kaise dedoun aap boliye mujhe yeh maa

Mrs kapoor : geet tu baat samaj ne ki koshish kare bte aaj hum tere saath hai lekin kal ko hum nahi honege tab tu kya karegi bete tujhe meri kasam hai shaadi k liye haan karde warna tu mere mara huwa muh dekhe gi

Geet :MAA

Geet wahan se rote huwe aapne room ki taraf chahli jati hai
Geet : RAHUL mai kya karun maa kyun nahi samjti ki mai tumhari jaga kisi aur ko nahi de sagti hoon
Rahul q tum mujhe akela chod k chale gaye kyu RAHUL

FLASHBACK

GEET AUR RAHUL dono ki shaadi bachpan mai hi tai ki jati hai
geet ki family bohat hi chote sher se hoti hai woh kabhi bhi aapni izzat mai koi dag bardash nahi kar sagte the agar koi bhi unki izaat mai dag dalne ki koshish bhi karta chahe who koi aapna bhi kyun na ho who usse jaan se mar dalte

Geet ko bachpan se yehi sikhaya gaya hai ki Rahul hi uska hone wala pati hai

Waqt bita gaya aur GEET aur RAHUL ki shaadi ho gayi

dono shaadi se bohat khush the RAHUL AUR GEET ek dusre se be inteha pyaar karte the

Rahul k liye geet ki ek choti bhi wish k liye who kuch bhi kar sagta tha

Aise hi ek raat GEET ko long drive pe jana tha ussne RAHUL ko kaha aur RAHUL ne usse ready hoke niche aane k liye kaha

Who dono long drive pe nikal gaye lekin kuch dur jane k baad RAHUL ko ehsaas huwa ki car k break fail ho gaye hai uss ne GEET ko kuch nahi bola aur Geet ko car se bahar Dhaka de diya aur car jake ek tree se ja lag gayi aur RAHUL front glass se bahar nikla aur uska sar jake tree pe lag gaya

Geet RAHUL ko leke hospital poch gayi aur MR KAPOOR & MRS KAPOOR ko call kar diya

Doctor ne RAHUL ko bachne ki bohat koshish ki lekin uss ke pas thoda sa hi time tha

RAHUL ne GEET ko marte huwe bhi yeh kaha

RAHUL: GEET humara saath bas yahin tak tha lekin GEET iss waje se tum jina nahi choda please tum dubara shaadi karlena mere liye aapne RAHUL ki yeh akhri wish puri karogi na GEET

Iss se phale ki Geet kuch jawab deti Rahul ki saans ne dam thod diya

FLASH BACK ENDS

Geet yeh sab sochte huwe soo jati hai

Aur dusri taraf KM mai mano aaj jaise koi khushi ka mahol hai
Ho bhi kyun na MAAN SINGH KHURANA itne waqt baad smile joh kar rahe the

Yahan maan ko kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha ki usse huwa kya hai
MAAN car k back seat pe hota tha aur jab who aapne dusre side dekhta hai toh usse GEET nazar aati hai woh usse chune jata hai toh woh gayab ho jati hai usse bas har jagah geet hi dikh rahi thi who geet ko ek bar dekhna chahta that oh who uske piche uske ghar tak jata hai yeh dekhne ki geet sahi salmat ghar pochi ki nahi jab who dekhta hai geet ghar k andar jane wali hai who driver ko KM chalne k liye bolta hai

MAAN jab se function se wapis aaya hai bas who GEET k bare mai hi sochta jaa raha hai usse uske siwa kuch aur nahi dikh raha hai

Woh dadimaa k pass jata hai aur door mai knock karta hai

Dadimaa: arre maan bete aapko kab se humare door mai knock karne ki zarurat pad gayi aayi yahan humare pas baithye

Maan : dadimaa bas yunhi

Dadimaa: kya baat hai maan aaj aap humari aankho mai dekh k baat nahi kar rahi hai kuch chupa rahe hai humse

Maan : dadimaa aap toh janti hai ki mai aapse aur mom dad se kabhi kuch nahi chupa sagta

Aur maan dadimaa k godh mai aapna sar rakh deta hai

Dadimaa: toh boliye maan bete kya baat hai

Maan: dadimaa mai aaj joh function mai gaya tha wahan mujhe ek ladki dikhi uss dekh k mujhe aur kuch nahi mehsoos ho raha tha jaise hi woh wahan se chali gayi meri aankhe usse hi dhund rahi thi mai jab se aaya hoon mai uska hi chehra mujhe har jaga nazar aata hai mujhe mujhe kya huwa hai dadimaa

Dadimaa maan ki baaten sunke smile karti hai

Dadimaa: kuch nahi huwa hai aapko maan bete bas aapko ek choti si bimari ho gayi hai aur uska name bhi hum jante hai

Maan : kaisi bimari dadimaa boliye naa

Dadimaa : pyaar aapko pyaar ho gaya hai maan bete

Maan : mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai dadimaa

Dadimaa : haan bete wohi pyaar joh shaadi k baad aapke papa ko aapki mummy se bhi huwa aise hi humare pass aaye the aapne sawalo ka jawab puchne

Maan : sach mai dadimaa
iss ka matlab mujhe geet se pyaar ho gaya hai

Dadimaa : ohhh toh uska name geet hai bada pyaar name hai

Maan smiles aacha dadimaa aab mai sone jata hoon

Dadimaa: thik hai bete GOOD NIGHT

PRECAP: geet's decision and maan comes to know about geet

here is the update but i am very much disappointed with the likes and comments
thanks for those who have like and comment

Edited by Zeba702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update... but i had already read it before.. me waiting for actual updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept
all parts were great
geet widow of rahul
maan in love with geet
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maan loves geetbut his love will reqiuted??????????/

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