Rang jao mere ishq mai updated part 18 page 43 on 18/1/2014 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update

hope geet move on
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enjoyed reading all the parts
pl continue and waiting for the pure love to blossom
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Awesome update
Loved it very much
Waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 11/12

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awsmmm partsss dear...
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Loved the way maan alwys support geet,...
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finally they got married,,,,, maan gve geet time...
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i alwyss Fall more for Maan...
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Continue soon...

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PART 13

Maan geet ko hospital leke jata hai...Doctor geet ka X-ray nikalte hai...

Doctor: Mr. Khurana ghabrane ki koi baat nahi...fracture nahin hai lekin pair me kuch moch aa gayi hai aur uske baye haath me jo kanch laga tha woh maine nikal diya hai lekin kuch stitches aaye hai...ab woh bilkul thik hai...waqt pe dawai aur thodi sa aaram ki zaroorat hai...agar aap chahe to abhi apne saath unhe le ja sakte hai...

Maan : phir kab aana hai haath ki dressing ke liye...

Doctor: ab aapko yahaan aane ki koi zaroorat nahi ...woh hotel mai ek doctor hai...woh khud aake dressing kar sakti hai...per use teen din tak complete bed rest karna hoga...varna pair me fracture bhi aa sakta hai...So, youngman take good care of your wife...

Maan : Thank you doctor...

Maan geet ke saath wapas taxi leke aate hai...maan aur geet apne Kamre ki aur ja rahe the jab maan yeh baat notice karta hai ki geet ko chalne me thodi taklef ho rahi hai...maan geet ko apni baahoin me uthakar room me le jake use bed pe sulata hai...

Maan : Tum ab sirf aaram karogi...tum apna pair is bistar se neche nahi rakhogi...jo bhi tumhe chahiye muje kehna...main yaha tumhare liye hi hoon...

Geet : ok...

Maan ne geet ki bahot hi achichi tarah se dekhbhal ki...yaha tak ki geet ne aaj maan ke haath se khana bhi khaya...

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Maan aur geet milke baatein kar rahe the...

Maan : janti ho jab main London padhne ke liye gaya tha to wahi main apne dost vikram ke waha dehra tha...aur janti ho...maine aaj tak unke jaisa insaan nahi dekha...apne dost ke saath majak to thik lekin apne professor tak ko bhi nahi chodta tha...lekin dil ka bahot hi achcha tha...geet yeh dost bhi kitne ajeeb hai na...hasate hai..,,,,,,,,

Geet : aur kabhi rulate bhi hai...

Maan : Tumhare bhi bahot sare dost honge college me muje apne dosto ke bare me nahi bataogi...

Geet : maine dost banana chod diya hai...

Maan : kyun...

Geet : kyun jab woh chod ke chale jate hai to dukh aur yaad ke alawa kuch nahi rehta...meri ek hi bachpan ki saheli thi riya jo kuch saal pehle woh is duniya se chal basi...

Maan : I am so sorry geet ...lekin tum akeli nahi ho main tumhara dost hoon...

Maan aur geet dono ek dusre ko samjne ki koshish kar rahe the...

Maan : geet ab raat kafi ho gayi hai aur ab tumhe aaram ki zaroorat hai...ab tum so jao...

Maan helps geet to sleep comfortable...

Maan : Good Night...

Geet : good night...

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Raat me geet ko sapne me woh sab kuch dikhai de raha tha jo rahul aur geet ke beech us raat accident mai huwa ...geet darr ke neend se jag jati hai...geet ne dekha ki maan uske pass betha so raha hai...geet ki aankh me yeh dekh ke aanshu aa gaye...

Geet : Kitna pyaar karte hai aap mujse...meri kitni fikar hai aapko...aur main hoon ki...i am sorry maan ...

Geet pani lene ke liye bistar se uth ke samne pade table ke pass ja hi rahi hoti hai ki uske pair me dard hota hai aur geet wahi zameen pe beth jati hai...geet bahot uthne ki Koshish karti hai lekin uth nahi pa rahi...

Geet : maan

Maan jab dekhta hai to geet apna pair pakad ke zameen pe bethi huyi hoti hai...

Maan : geet ...haath do apna...

Maan geet ko bed pe sulata hai aur geet pe bahot hi gussa ho jata hai...

Maan : kya kar rahi thi thik se so nahi sakti...kya zarurat thi bistar se udhne ki...kuch chahiye tha to muje keh deti...

Geet : I am sorry...muje pani chahiye tha aur aap so rahe the...is liye main aapko disturb nahi karna chahti thi...

Maan : sorry tumhe nahi muje kehna chahiye...I am sorry...Muje tum pe be wajah gussa nahi karna chahiye tha...muje maff kar dena...

Geet : aap ple mujse aise mafi mat magiye...muje aur bhi meri galti pe sharminda hona padega...

Maan : thik hai lekin ab tumhe jo bhi chahiye tum mujse kahogi thik hai...

Geet : thik hai...

Maan gives water to geet

After some time geet slept due to effect of medicines

And Maan kept staring at her beautiful face

Maan didn't knew when sleep took over him and he slept

His sleep was disturbed by sun rays...

Maan :Oh its morning

Maan murmured

And his glance fall on geet.

Sleeping like a baby

He leaned forward and planted a kiss on her forehead...

He went into kitchen and made breakfast for both of them

Cottage had a small kitchen.

After some time...

Maan come with a small bowl of hot oil with him and saw geet was still sleeping

He sat near the foot rim of bed and took her legs and started massaging slowing on her foot

This movement broke geet sleep and she took shock of her life

Maan was massaging her foot

She jerked her foot back and Maan was shocked due to this movement

Geet: what is this? Maan you cant touch my foot...

Maan : Ohhh yea why????

He hold his foot tightly and started to massage again

Geet : Maan husbands don't touch theirs wife's foot...

Maan : Don't be so narrow minded geet remember we are friends first.

Geet : But ...

Maan glance at geet angrily and she zipped her mouth.

But this gesture brought back some memories in her mind.

>>>>>>>>>>> flash back>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Rahul pushed geet in the swimming pool giggling

Geet ki bachi tu to gai...

Geet was in swimming pool all wet and rahul laughing standing all dry

Geet pouted and come out of swimming pool but slipped due to slippery ground

Rahul rushed to geet.

Geet was not hurt much but she acted like she is hurt

Geet : Ahhh...

Rahul : I m so sorry geet.

Geet : My ankle...

Rahul took her in their bedroom.

Geet : Rahul massage oil on my ankle na...

Rahul :No way... I will not touch your foot.

Geet : Rahul...

Rahul took stubbornly crossing his hand on his chest.

While geet throw pillow on him

And their cat and mouse show begin again..

End of flashback <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Maan : Its done...

Geet : Thanks Maan.

Maan : In friendship its no thanku and no sorry madame...

Geet smiled

Then Maan brought breakfast.

Geet : Why have you made this your self? i ...

Maan cut her

Maan : No way... You are on bed rest ...

Geet : But...

Maan : No now open your mouth.

Geet opened and Maan pushed a morsel in her mouth.

Maan : Eat like a good girl now...

After break fast Maan gave geet medicine and made her sleep forcefully ...

3 days passed in this routine ...

Maan has planned for a outing today to the local market of shimla

In car

Geet : maan aaj phir aapne breakfast kyun banaya tha

Maan : geet tumhara leg thik ho gaya hoga lekin aabhi tak tumhara haath thik nahi huwa hai aur waise geet tum kitna bolti hoo shaadi se phale toh tum nahi bolti thi hamesh mere samne chup rahti thi

Geet : haw maan aapka bolne ka matlab hai ki mai bohat bolti hoon

Maan : haan tumhe aab samaj aaya

Geet : chado aapse na baat karna hi bekar hai

Maan : geet tumhe kisi ne kaha hai ki jab tum gussa hoti ho bohat cute lagti ho

Geet blush on this statement of maan

There reach the local market

And geet was shopping for everyone

Geet : maan chudiyaannn

Geet starts selecting bangles of different color and maan was standing beside her

After doing the shopping

Geet : maan mujhe bht bhook lagi hai

Maan : haan lage gi hi na madam ne itne joh ghum chuki hai chalo

Geet : maan aap har baat pe mujhe unn tease karna band ki jiye na
maan : geet aab tumhe tease na karun toh kisko karun

Suddenly few girls see maan

Girl 1 : arre who dekho kitna handsome ladka hai

Girl 2 : haan yaar sach mai kitna hot lag raha hai

Geet was listening to all this and was getting jealous of them

Geet hold maan hands and starts walk there reach to the hotel

continued below

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Maan : mai khana order kar deta hoon tum fresh ho jao

Geet : ji

Geet fresh hoke room mai aati hai maan was waiting for her with lunch

Geet was about to eat

Maan : geet ruko

Geet : kya huwa maan

Maan : geet tum shahyad bhul gayi ho ki tumhare haaath mai chot lagi hai aur tum aapne haath se nahi kha sagti

And maan starts feeding geet and geet stop him on the second morsel and feed him with his own hand but by holding his hand

Maan : geet I love you

Geet was stunned to hear this words from maan

Geet : maan yun aachnak

Maan : aise hi geet bas dil k itoh bol diya

Aise hi geet aur maan ke beech me nazdikiyaan badh rahi thi...aur un dono ka honeymoon khatam ho jata hai...ab geet ka pair bilkul thik hai aur dono wapas Delhi aa jate hai...

Next day in kc when maan returns maan was shocked to see what was going in office

Maan after seeing the file

Maan : yeh sab ho kya raha hai yahan mai kuch din yahan nahi tha aur tum logo ne mere office ko circus bana diya hai

Adi : sir wo wo sir

Maan : chup raho adi tum, mujhe koi excause nahi chahiye kal presentation hai aur tum logo ne aab tak file complete nahi ki

Adi : sir just give me 2 hrs mai sab complete kar lounga

Maan : this is you first and last warning adi warna iske baad tum kahin aur job dekhna start kar do

At lunch time geet enter with lunch at KC sasha stops her

As sasha was not there in maan's marriage so she doesn't know that she is maan's wife

Sasha : kaun ho tum aur kine tumhe yahan andar aane diya

Geet was shocked to listen a rude tone

Sasha : oye hello mai tumse baat kar rahi hoon tum bol nahi sagti kya

Geet : mai yahan maan se milne aayi hoon

Sasha : its Mr Khurana for you understand MK koi nahi pasand koi unhe unke name se bulaye

Geet : kyun unka name aacha nahi hai kya waise bhi mere pas yun fuzool ka time nahi hai tum se baat karne ka

Sasha was insulted in front of the whole office and she was about to hit geet

When geet hold her hand

Geet : yeh haath agar kam karne k liye rakho toh aacha hoga warna mujhe kuch seconds nahi lagenge tumhe iss job se niklne mai

Sasha : hahahah tum aur mujhe iss job se nikalo gi hoti kaun ho tum

Maan who was watching and listening all this from his cabin monitor came at the moment outside his cabin

Maan : sasha she is MRS GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA and you are fired MISS SASHA SHERGILL

Sasha : I am sorry MK mujhe nahi pata tha ki yeh aapki wife hai

Maan : agar tumhe pata na bhi ho aur agar yeh meri wife nahi hoti toh kya tum har kisi se aise behave karti and get one thing in your mind miss shergill mai aapni wife ke against ek word nahi tolerate kar sagta toh tumne toh uss pe haath uthaya hai

Geet and maan see's towards eachother maan holds geet hand and walk with her to the cabin

Geet : maan aap shant ho jaiye

Maan : kaise shant ho jaoun geet usne tumhare upar haath uthaya

Geet : maan woh sab chodo aapne mujhe se pucha bhi nahi ki mai yahan kyun aayi hoon

Maan : ohhh haan geet tum yahan office mai kaise

Geet : woh kya hai na maan mera pati itna bhulakda hai ki aab mujhe unke piche piche lunch leke phirna padta hai and she giggles

Maan : geeettt

Geet : maan mujhe pata hai mera name geet hai aab chahiye lunch kariye

There both had lunch and after maan work was done there went for a long drive and it was raining

Geet : maan chahliye na barish mai bhigte hai

Maan : nahi geet mujhe barish mai bhigna pasand nahi hai

Geet : chado mai chali bhigne

Geet was after a long time enjoying in rain after the death of rahul is never loved rain but now she started loving rain again and now she never remember rahul

Maan was seeing geet and in came out of car and went near geet

Maan was back of geet

His hot breaths falling on geet geet turn and collide with maan before she was about to fall maan hold her tight and geet was just starring in his eyes she was completely lost

Maan kissed on geet forehead and then her eyes one by one then her cheeks and then he was moving towards her lips maan looks toward geet her eyes was closed maan was about to kiss geet then lighting maan came back to his sense and realize what was he going to do

Maan : geet

Geet opens her eyes which was completely lost in maans love

Maan : I am sorry geet mujhe

Geet keeps her hand on maan's lips

Geet : maan aapko sorry bolne ki koi zarurat nahi hai yeh aapka pyaar tha iss mai please aap koi guilt mai leke aaiye bas mujhe thoda sa waqt di jiye aab chale hum late ho rahe hai aur agar zyaada dair hum barish mai rahe toh sardi ho sakti hai aur phir kuch aur din aap office nahi jaa payenge and she giggles

There move to the way for home

next update after 50 likes and 2 page comments

thank you everyone for the likes and lovelycomments for the previous update

Edited by Zeba702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update..
loved it to the core...
but chota t :P

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part
finally maaneet comfortable with each other
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
geet reminded of her past
maan nd geet coming close nd maan fired tht stupid sasha fr messing wid his wife
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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wonderful update..love the way maan take care of geet and protect her..sasha😡😡😡 deserve to be sacked..cant wait for geet to love maan back..pls cont soon..

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