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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 18

Maan was searching geet madly

Maan was like a wounded lion He entered his office at 1am

His eyes was spitting fire Maan sat on his chair

Maan : i want my wife back in 12 hrs i would say 12 hrs are more den enough for u all and i don't want any excuse or u all know that what i can do

The commissioner and the detective was really scared and don't have any idea how could there get back Mrs. khurana that to in just 12 hrs were there have no clue about her where about

As everyone left maan broke down and fall on his knees

Maan : kahan ho tum Geet. Kahan chali gayi aapne Maan ko chod ke.

Maan went to gym and started his tai chi.

Every time he close his eyes he could only see geet's smiling face while doing aarti

Everyone in the house was restless sleep was far away from everyone's eyes

At last leaving no option he went to room

Everywhere he can just see geet her smiling face some where her pouting.

O saathi re.. tere bina bhi kya jeena
Tere bina bhi kya jeena
O saathi re.. tere bina bhi kya jeena
Tere bina bhi kya jeena

Tears were flowing from his eyes...every where he could see only geet...


Phoolon mein, kaliyon mein
Sapnon ki galiyon mein
Phoolon mein, kaliyon mein
Sapnon ki galiyon mein
Tere bina kuchh kahin na
Tere bina bhi kya jeena

He was remembering their moments..

How they both used to fight over silly-2 things...

How she used to threaten him..

Her cute baby faces..

Her pout..

Her fake anger...

Everywhere he could see only geet..


O saathi re.. tere bina bhi kya jeena
Tere bina bhi kya jeena


Har dhadkan mein pyaas hai teri
Saanson mein teri khushboo hai
Is dharati se us ambar tak
Meri nazar mein tu hi tu hai
Pyaar yeh toote na...
Pyaar yeh toote na
Tu mujhse roothe na
Saath yeh chhoote kabhi na
Tere bina bhi kya jeena

Saathi re.. tere bina bhi kya jeena
Tere bina bhi kya jeena

He was rembering how she used to take care of his small-2 things..

His office attire, his files, his breakfast...from minor to major his every need was taken care by geet...

Whenever he was tired she would do his head massage so as to make him relax...

Tujh bin jogan meri raatein
Tujh bin mere din banjaare
Mera jeevan jalati dhooni
Bujhe-bujhe mere sapne saare
Tere bina meri ...
Tere bina meri, mere bina teri
Yeh zindagi zindagi na
Tere bina bhi kya jeena

Where ever he was going he can see geet their...

He could see her sitting on dining table...serving breakfast..

Chiding him for being workaholic..

He was seeing her sitting on couch...with dadi ma completing about him...

In bed room he was remembering their blanket fight...
He went to do tai-chi...their also he could see geet...

Her memories were everywhere in the house...


O saathi re.. tere bina bhi kya jeena
Tere bina bhi kya jeena
Tere bina bhi kya jeena
Tere bina bhi kya jeena

Tears were continuously falling from his eyes...

Please geet come back to me...

Where are you geet...?? How could you leave your Maan like this...

Maan : having no choice he called Mr. Chopra. Mr chopra was shocked to see maan's name display at his mob at 3 am

Mr chopra : hello Maan : papa

Mr chopra was worried after hearing maan's restless voice

Mr chopra : kya baat hai maan sab thik hai na

Maan : kuch thik nahi hai papa mujhe maaf kar di jiye

Mr chopra : maan aap phale aapne aapko sambhaliye aur phir mujhe sab boliye

Maan narated each and every single thing to mr chopra

Mr chopra : maan yeh kam koi aapke dushman ka toh ho hi nahi sagta kyunki woh aache se janata hai ki aap kya kar sagte ho

Maan : phir kaun hoga papa jisko geet ki dusri shaadi se problem hai

Mr chopra : maan kya aapne aabhi yeh kaha ki yeh sab geet ki dusri shaadi k waje se huwa hai

Maan : ji papa

Mr chopra : maan yahan agar iss duniya mai kisi ko geet ki dusri shaadi se problem hai toh woh khud geet k ghar wale hai aur khastor pe darji aur brij

Maan : darji aur brij

Mr chopra : haan maan unhe hi inn sab cheezon se taklif hai aur joh unke banaye huwe uzool ko todta hai woh usse kuch bhi kar sagte hai

Maan : papa kya aap mujhe bol sagte hai ki woh iss waqt kahan honge

Mr chopra : maan woh hoshiyarpur mai hi honge lekin wahan jana khatre se khali nahi hai

Maan : aap uski chinta mat karo

sorry all for the late update
was out of country
hope u all will like it 😊

do leave ur comments


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Posted: 11 years ago
abb ayega maaza...maan singh khurana se panga...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the part beautiful update
Edited by leenukiguru - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hayee geet missing 😲
lonely maan 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update buddy 👍🏼
loved maaneet moments
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
feel sad fr maan
hope he saves her on time
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
very emotional part..hope maan will find geet on time..welcome back yaar and pls cont the next part soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its all done by geet familly now waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
emotional update...
maan feeling seeing geet every where...
finally he called Mr chopra...he told abt geet's darji n brij...
its all done by her family😡

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Posted: 11 years ago
So finally Maan got clue where his Geet will be.. hope maan will find her soon.. She just recently started smiling.. n here they come...😡Waiting for next part.

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