Rang jao mere ishq mai updated part 18 page 43 on 18/1/2014 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful dear
maaneet's family accepted the relation😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...
who is the new entry.. me curious...
geet angry on maan...
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maan family accepted geet
who is this new entry
conti soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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MAAN IS SURPRISED AT THE ROKKA CEREMONY BUT HAPPY ABOUT IT TOO
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
Sab mangaye.. :-)
Maan k jaise mere ankh mein bi pani aya tha ..
Maan is shockd hearing abt roka ..
N y is geet ignoring maan ???
N whose call it was ???
Very curious to know .. :-)
Continue soon yar :-)
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Part 9

Maan reaches airport

Maan hugs him

Maan : thank u yaar kya surprise diya hai tune

Armaan : uff tu bole aur main a aaoun aise kabhi ho sagta hai kya

Maan : sach mai yaar itne short notice pe aaya hai tu

Armaan : waise who sab chod tune mujhe yahan itni sudden kyun bulaya hai koi important baat hai kya

Maan : tu car mai baith tujhe sab bata ta hoon

Armaan and Maan are on there way to geet's house and tell's him everything thing

Armaan : maan tu soch bhi nahi sagta ki mai tere liye kitna khush hoon akhir mai tune shaadi ke liye haan kar di

Maan : thanks yaar bas shahyad mai geet ke liye hi wait kar raha tha

And there reach geet's house

Armaan : maan tu andar jaa mai hospital mai call karke aata hoon agar unhe kabhi bhi meri zarurat hogi so there can contact me

Maan : chal ok

Ram : yeh lo maan bhi aa gaye maan kahan rah gaye the aap

Maan : papa mai kisi ko lene gaya tha

Ram : kise

Armaan : mujhe

Ram : arre armaan bete aap yahan aise

Armaan goes and touch dadimaa's priya and ram feet

Armaan : woh kya hai na uncle ki mujhe mere dost ne specially yahan aapne special occasion pe bulaya hai aap sab toh mujhe bhul hi gaye ho

Priya : hold's his ear hum bhul gaye hai haan tut oh humara call receive hi nahi karata itna bada doctor joh ban gaya hai

Armaan : chotimaa chodiye darta hota hai

Armaan : ji namsate mera name armaan malik hai mai maan ka cousin hoon aur dost bhi

Mr kapoor : Namaste beta baithiye

Everyone sits

Armaan whisper to maan

Armaan : yehi geet bhabhi hai na

Maan : hmmm

Armaan : aab tujhe kya huwa

Maan : kuch nahi chod

Dadimaa to armaan and maan : agar aap dono ki baaten ho gayi hai toh hum roke ki rasam kare

Maan : ji bilkul

Maan sits beside geet for roka rasam

Dadimaa comes and do tilak to geet and gives her jewellery and a sari and feeds sweets

Then Mrs kapoor comes and do tilak to maan and gives him shagun and feeds him sweet

Later even priya comes and do the same

Maan and Geet gets up and take ashirwad from everyone

Geet : maan mujhe aapse baat karni hai

Maan : bolo geet

Geet : haan yahan toh kitne aache se baat kar rahe hai aap aur aaj aapne mera phone tak nahi receive nahi kiya aur bolte hai ki mujhe tum aapna dost samjo

Maan : geet maine tumhara call nahi dekha agar dekhta toh kya mai receive nahi karta mujhe yahan jaldi aana tha iss liye mujhe sara kam time se phale khatam karna tha soo iss liye maine tumhara call receive nahi kiya aab aapne iss dost ki phalli galti maaf kardo

Geet : thik hai maaf kiya lekin aap yeh dubara nahi karoge aur haan dosti mai kuch rules hai no sorry no thank you and smiles

Dadimaa : chaliye aab hum sab chalte hai kafi late ho gaya hai

Mrs kapoor : arre aise kaise aap phali dafa humare ghar aayi hain please aap sab ko dinner karke jana hi hoga aur waise bhi aaj ka dinner geet ne banaya hai who lunch time mai aake ussne dinner aap sab ke liye ready kar diya tha

Dadimaa : arre wah geet ne banaya hai toh hum bilkul khayenge kyun ram

Ram : jaise aap sahi samje maa

And everyone have der dinner

Dadimaa : hum kal hi pandit ji se ek aacha mahurat niklate hai inn dono ki sagai k liye

Mrs kapoor : ji maaji jaise aap thik samje

Everyone was about to leave geet comes and touch dadimaa's feet

Dadimaa : jeete rahiye geet

Geet was about to touch priya's feet but she stops her and say's

Priya : aapko humare pair chune ki koi zarurat nahi hai and kiss her on her forehead

Ram : haan ki humare ghar mai betiyan kabi bhi pair nahi chuti

Mr kapoor & Mrs kapoor was really happy after seeing all this

Annie : bhabhi kal kya hum log koi milke program bana sagte hai plsss

Geet : thik hai lekin school ke baad

Vicky : koi problem nahi hai hum bhi college se jab taka a jayenge aur bhai bhi kyun bhai

Maan : hmmm

Armaan : toh kal ka program fix raha

Suddenly maan get's a message

Geet : maan kya hum raat ko baat kar sagte hai I want to speak to you regarding something important

Maan see's towards geet and blink his eye's like saying it a yes

At night in KM

Maan calls geet

Geet receive it as it rings it was as if she was waiting for his call

Maan : geet

Geet : ji maan woh mujhe aapse ek baat karni thi

Maan : haan geet bolo

Geet : maan mai armaan ko janti hoon

Maan : kya tum armaan ko janti ho lekin yeh baat mujhe armaan ne kyun nahi boli

Geet : maan armaan ko mai jnati hoon lekin armaan mujhe nahi janta

Maan : geet tum mujhe confuse kar rahi ho tumhare bolna ka kya matlab hai

Geet : armaan mere saheli ka husband hai ridhima

Maan : ohh aacha geet tumse ek baat puchun

Geet : haan puchiye

Maan : tumhe kaise laga aaj sab se milke

Geet : maan agar sach boloun toh mujhe bilkul aise nahi laga ki mai unn se phalli bar mil rahi hoon

Maan smiles

Maan : aacha geet aab bohat late ho gaya hai kal tumhara school bhi hai chalo gud nite bye

Geet : kal ki outing ka mat bhulna warna sab ko aacha nahi lagega

Maan : nahi bhulunga and haan I will pick you from your school thik hai

Geet : nahi maan iss ki koi

Maan cuts her in between

Maan : dost ka inta toh haq hota hai na geet

Geet : thik hai maan bye gud nite

NEXT DAY EVENING IN KM

Annie : mom dekho na maan bhai aab tak nahi aaye agar woh aaj late ho gaye toh hum bhi late ho jayenge phir geet bhabhi kya sochengi

Priya : arre annie maan ko yaad bhi hai ya nahi phale yeh toh socho

Just then armaan comes down

Armaan : chalo hum sab chalte hai

Annie : lekin maan bhai

Armaan : who sidha wahin pea a jayega tum tension mat lo aur geet bhabhi bhi uske saath hi aane wali hai

Vicky : armaan bhai agar aapko pata that oh hume phale se bataya kyun nahi

Armaan : ohh hello mujhe bhi aabhi pata chala hai maan ka call aaya tha usne hi bola hai agar who ghar aayega toh late ho jayega iss se aacha hai ki who sidha wahi pochenge geet bhabhi ko school se pick karke

Everyone leaves for the venue

Maan reaches geet school and calls geet

Maan : geet I am waiting out

Geet : maan aap please 2 mins wait karoge mai bas kuch cheezen leloun

Maan : ok I am waiting

After 5 mins geet comes and sit in car

Geet : sorry sorry sorry mujhe sach mai nahi pata tha itna late ho jayega

Maan : geet it's ok aab ek teacher se shaadi karne jaa raha hoon iski habit toh dalni padegi na mujhe

Geet : sach mai maan aap phalli baar yahan aaye aur mujhe late ho gaya

Maan : koi baat nahi geet waise bhi mai bhi toh thoda late hi aaya tha na chalta hai kabhi kabhi . Aab hum chale

Geet : ji chaliye waise maan hum kahan jaa rahe hai

Maan : making face's movie dekhne

Geet : maan aap se face's bana bana ke kyun bol rahe hai

Maan : kyunki mujhe movie dekhna nahi pasand

Geet : hawww maan aap kahin alien toh nahi ho na

Maan : kya matlab hai tumhara

Geet : maan movies na alien ko pasand nahi aati hai chado mujhe kya waise kaunsi movie dekhne jaa rahe hai

Maan : agar mujhe pata hota toh mai tumhe kahin aur nahi le jata

Geet : hahaha aap aur mujhe kahin aur leke jate aise ho hi nahi sagta

Maan : kyun darti ho mere saath akele jane mai

Geet : dosto se kaise darr

And there reach the venue

Maan calls armaan

Maan : kahan ho tum log

Armaan : tumhare piche

Armaan and Vicky : hi bhabhi

Geet : hi

Annie hugs geet : ohh thank u bhabhi aane k liye

Geet : aab tum logone bulaya that oh aana hi pada

And everyone enter's the theatre geet and maan sit's together den annie den Vicky den armaan

Geet is soo lost watching movie

And maan is lost watching geet her smile her face expression

Precap : surprise 😊😊

Edited by Zeba702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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terrific update! Wonderfully written! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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r
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itna chota update zeba? 😲
abi start kia and abi khatm 😲😲
i m angry 😡😡😡😡😡
mera fav character ARMAAN MALIK 😳😳😳 hayeee
and outing thank for considering my idea if u know what i mean 😆😆😆😆
zeba what a name re 👏👏👏
great update...
ab next update jaldi cahhiye and bada cahhiye ⭐️
take care
hira
Edited by sweetgirls1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetgirls1

r
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itna chota update zeba? 😲
abi start kia and abi khatm 😲😲
i m angry 😡
mera fav character ARMAAN MALIK 😳😳😳 hayeee
and outing thank for considering my idea if u know what i mean 😆
zeba what a name re 👏👏👏
great update...
ab next update jaldi cahhiye and bada cahhiye ⭐️
take care
hira

Thanks 4 the comment
Ur suggestion was awesome yaar
Yeh tujhe chota lagta hai this is the longer update i have given till now
Will try to update soon
Edited by Zeba702 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

terrific update! Wonderfully written! update soon

Thank u so much tht u love the way i wrote

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