Rang jao mere ishq mai updated part 18 page 43 on 18/1/2014 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Hii Zeba Dear...
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Firstly Wanna say that U r a great writer 😊😊
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Tittle is very beautiful -
RANG JAO MERE RANG MAI

Geet is widow nd still rahul... Maan is in love with Geet at first sight awsme 😃
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Shadi bhi pakki ho gaye...😳😳😳 geet said maan that she still can't forget rahul but maan have no prob lovelyyy 😃😃
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then ghar wale bhi maan gaye... All happy 😆😆
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movie scene was also very cute 😳😳
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Then the kamin* sharma misbehave with Geet ...
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Geet Maan Hug awsme...
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Maan made geet principle of School amazinggg 😳😳
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Maan singh khurana Is Best 😳
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Waiting for next 😛😛😛
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Love Nelu
Edited by nelufar10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
part 10
awesome...
poor Geet...
that man was so disgusting...
Maan saved Geet from the hurt...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
wonderful update..love the way maan support geet..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Hay nice update.bt I m a new reader and need time fr reading all previous parts.so will comment proparly after reading whole story.😊Thanks fr pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
lovely update
maan protected geet's honor in his own way
hope he kicks tht teacher also who misbehaved wid her
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
awesome

thanx fr d pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
AWESOME DEAR
LOVED MAAN'S WAY TO SHUT EVERYONE'S MOUTH
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
lovely update
that principal...
naab zarur usse aise hi nahi chodne wala

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 11

The news was stunning even for khurana family but not for Mr khurana and somewhere they all now understand the importance of geet in maan's life and the doubts which were in their hearts somewhere were now very well cleared...
Before leaving the school maan has announced that Mr Sharma will not be in the school or will not been in any school and no was able to question him about this. The sun dawned with great hustle bustle in both houses as today was haldi function and than mehndi with sangeet... Khuranas arrived at geet's place for haldi...she was sitted in middle with yellow dress with mustard dupatta... her make up free face looks beautiful n everyone appraises maan's choice and some commented that they now knew y he didnt agreed to get married till now causing a hue to develop on geets face... Her salwar was folded till knees whereas the shirt was sleeveless. priya came forward to apply haldi first complementing her followed by annie...vicky n rest of the people...
although she was trying hard to concentrate on function but still somewhere her mind was struck on her first marriage n how rahul never misses a change to get a glimpse of her...her eyes burned with tears but she keep on holding them...
she was missing her family too who were out of touch since her husbands death as they think widows are not so worthy and are bad omen for family and their good luck...they called her manhoos and keep her away from everything they do... slowly their all ties broke leaving geet totally with her in laws and she was unconsciously feel happy with it... Later on she went to take shower as the other function was in evening
On the other hand people were finding diffficult to apply haldi to MSK as he was showing his big big eyes in anger n full tantrums to his family who.were now fighting with him after coming from geets place
Annie : bhai thats not fair...haldi.toh sab lgatay hain naa...ye toh rasam hai.. cribbed annie woth a bowl of haldi in her hand.
Maan was irriated with all this
Maan : sab lgatay hongay per main nahi or wasay bhi ma in fuzool rasmo ko nhi maanta...
Dadimaa: maan bohat huwa wohi karo joh humne kahan hai nahi toh ... left her sentence to linger
maan asked with a raised eye brow : nahi toh ???
nahi toh hum shaam ko aapko function mai aapne saath nahi leke challenge aur aap ghar pe hi rahenge ... daadimaa said calmly maan looked at her shocked maan: aapne kya kaha dadimaa??? he thought he heard her wrong
dadimaa: humne kaha ki agar aapne haldi nahi lagwayi toh aaj shaam ke fuction pe hum aapko aapne saath nahi leke chalenge...now dadi made herself more clear maan : aap mazak kar rahi hai na dadimaa
dadimaa : ji bilkul nahi ... smiled dadi
maan : dadimaa meri shaadi ka sangeet hai aur aap mujhe hi mana kar rahi hai jane se yeh kya baat huvi ...maan was getting anxious on the idea of not seeing geet.
Dadimaa : waise hi jaise aap haldi lagne se mana kar rahe hai...dadi smiled wickedly daadi... maan whined like a teenager making daadi laugh aloud with others but she didnt budged.
Maan : thik hai dadimaa lekin zara jaldi kariye aur aap yeh sab joh kar rahi hai usse blackmailing khate hai... said maan while sitting in centre for haldi but dadi just kissed his forehead making him smile... no one can say that its the same MSK who ruled business world and who is cruel n shrewd beyond expectations
In the evening it was mehndi combined with sangeet... geet wore half sleeves white sharara with silver sequences where maan look dashing in his velvet black prince suit...
khuranas reached geets home and maan intentionally slows down his walk after aarti on main door...
every girl was looking at him in awe..
geet tera dulha toh bara dashing ha...few girls said to geet causing her to give a shy smile... geet looks here n there to spot maan but he was enjoying this game of hide n seek... he intentionally avoid coming in front of her making her restless for him ...
maan was mesmerized to see her beauty...
she was indeed a fairy descended from heaven for him whereas geet looks at him unbelieving...
how can someone loooks like this...
he was a prince himself with oceans of emotions in his captivating eyes they danced in rhythm making the.moment more perfect by.complementing each other...
everyone presenta in the party appraised geet except maan who was just smiling softly at her...
she just forgot to think about the world n got lost in his eyes n Charming smile...
she so much wanted him to appraise her but he was testing his patience...
teasing her more n more. finally the party comes to end an as khurana's started to leave geet's face lost its light of hearing any compliment from him...
maan can see it n it was giving him positive hopes of making her his in every sense...
he can feel his importance and it was lighting a whole new flame of hope in his heart to win her castle of love...
geet reached to her room annoyed to take off her dress n jewelry as she was pissed off...
maan didn't compliment her...
she was angry n irritated when her eyes fall on a small white box on dressing table with a rose...
she opened the velvety box to find a solitaire diamond ring embedded in white gold with a chit saying...
I didn't compliment u becoz words failed me u were looking like a fairy...
my fairy a small compensation for teasing u i know it will look more beautiful in ur hand
love maan
she smiled and slides the ring in her slim finger...
it was indeed beautiful...
thanks alot its pretty...
she texted him no more than u...
was the instant reply from him she kissed her finger lightly n closes her eyes to sleep in anticipation of new dawn

precap : twist next update after 50 likes and 2 page comments

Edited by Zeba702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
abb kaunsa twiist hai...maan very bad...why teasing geet haan...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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