Rang jao mere ishq mai updated part 18 page 43 on 18/1/2014 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon


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Originally posted by: goldenmoon


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Karo but mai update kal hi doungi šŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
thanx fr pm
geet start to feel something
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update chahiyeee šŸ˜†
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loveled it
so geet strt to feel fr him
cont soon
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Awsme story.loved all parts.pls cnt soon and thanks fr pm.)
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PART 12

It was most beautiful day of maan's life he is gng to get married wid his lady love.

All khurana's were busy in prepartions.

where as kapoors were to busy in prepartion...

with a smile on their face as they are fulfilling the last wish of their son

geet was getting ready on her room but somewhere lost in thoughts of rahul
how both got married n how their life start n how the deedful day of her life came when rahul left her

there was some tint of tears in her eyes which she wiped

her frnds where giggling n chatting

they teased geet on the name of maan...

maan ka name sunte hi geet was lost in his thoughts

how maan has changed her life

when he entered in her life she is changed

maan is caring possessive..n most imp. his selfless love for her, she really respect him how he stood with her in all difficult time after coming to her life

how he came in her college n showed people she is his property n if anyone dares to say or look at her ...he will snatch his happiness

geet is happy to get a humsafar like maan who understand her who cares for her small small needs and knws how to make her smile

where in km all were waiting for maan to come down in his wedding attire

all were ready n waiting for him...n there wait over when maan steeped down with armaan in golden n maroon serwani

looking extremly handsome

priya uski najar utarke...do tilak n ask aniee to make him wear sehra

which aniee did happily while teasing him like hell...n maan was blushing

but sometym showing his big big eyes to alll

after all rituals dadi came near him n put kala tikka behind his ear n blessed them while maan touched her feet

after that all moved toward kapoor's house

all were dancing n enjoying in barrat n after that they reached geet's home.

mrs.kapoor n mr. kapoor welcomed them whole heartly

n then geet came down in beautiful red colour lehnga looking gorgeous

maan was drooling over her, he have never seen her in bright colours but today she is looking angel in red...he smiled on his thought

Geet was seated beside maan She was looking gorgeouse The pandit told them to stand for jaymala

Annie came and gave the jaymala to maan and geet Maan was about to put jaymala on geet put she was pulled back my Vicky

Vicky : bhai mujhe aise mat dekhiye mai toh bhabhimaa ke side hoon

And the started then fun of jay mala

But at last maan has put jaymala on geet

Now it was geet's turn to put jay mala And here maan she bowed his head down as if waiting for geet to put jaymala

And geet waa seeing maan that how he in bowed his head in front of geet who never bowed his head in front of anyone

Geet put jaymala on maan

Then there were sited and pandit started the mantra and the rituals was started

slowly maan and geet fulfill n complete all rituals ...

maan fill geet's parting with pure ..

then maan tie up the mangasutra on her neck maaneet get up n took Sath Phere ...

when all throw flowers on them Elders blessed them n younger wish for their best...everyone accept they made for each other...how they compliment each other...

Maaneet bend n took blessings from elders

In all this process geet was remembering rahul how she did all this rituals with her and took a promise to be there lifetime but left her alone in this world

It was time for bidaii

Geet : mom aap aapna khayal rakhna aur who Bp ki dawai dad ko time pe dena aapko pata hai na and she started crying and hugged her mom

Geet then took blessing from MR kapoor and mrs kapoor went to maan's mom

Mrs kapoor : geet humari bahu nahi balki beti hai hum bohat khush hai ki mujhe yeh mokha mila ki mai geet ka kayadan karun agar kabhi bhi geet se koi bhul ho jaye toh aap usse bachi samaj ke maaf kar di jiye ga

Mrs khurana : arre aap yeh kaise baat kar rahi hai geet wahan meri bahu nahi balki meri beti banke jayegi aap uski chinta mat kare

The bidaii was over

Shaadi ke baad maan aur geet khurana house aate hai jaha pe Priya un dono ki aarti karti hai...

Priya: geet...is kalash ko girake is thal me panv rakhke andar aa jao...

geet chawalwala kalash girake...Kankuwale pair karke ghar me gruhpravesh karti hai...maan aur geet ram aur Priya aur dadimaa ka aashirwad lete hai...

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geet apna ghoonghat dalkar bister pe bethi huyi thi...geet bahot hi ghabara rahi thi jab maan kamre me aata hai aur darwaze ki aawaz se geet ko pata chalta hai...maan geet ke kareeb aata hai...maan geet ka ghoonght uthata hai...

maan: Main samaj sakta hoon ki tumhe is waqt kaisa mehsoos ho raha hoga...main tumhare dil ka hal samaj sakta hoon... maine tumse vaada kiya hai geet ki mai aapni jaga tumhare dil mai banaoga aur rahi baat rahul ki toh mujhe kabhi mujhe woh jaga nahi chahiye joh rahul ki hai mai kabi bhi rahul ki jaga nahi le sagta kyunki woh tumhara phela pyaar hai aur tum mera ...ghabrao mat jab tak tum nahi chahogi main apni maryada banaye rakhunga...lekin hum dost to hai na...kyunki kisi bhi ristey ki buniyaad dosti ho to rishta aur bhi mazboot hota hai...aur sawaal raat bitane ka hai to main bahar bhi jake so sakta hoon lekin bahar Mama ko pata chal jayega aur unhe bura lagega...is liye muje yahi pe sona hoga...kya tumhe mujpe barosha to hai...

geet: Haa...

maan apne aur ka bistar banake so jata hai...

geet (apne aap se): main vaada karti hoon ki main apni aur se puri koshish karungi lekin is waqt muje kuch waqt chahiye...

geet bhi apne gehne nikal ke wahi pass me so jati hai...dono ek hi bistar per soye the lekin bahot hi duri thi un dono ke bich...

Subaah hote hi geet apni aankhein kholti hai to maan ko apne pass sote dekhkar pehle geet maan ko dekhti hi rehti hai...

geet (apne aap se):maan...aap sote huye kitne masoom lag rahe hai...lekin mujhw waqt lage ga maan mai rahul ko nahi bhul sagti
mujhe maaf kar dena

geet bistar se uthane hi wali hoti hai lekin aisa lagta hai ki kisi chiz ne geet ko rok ke rakha ho...geet jab mud ke dekhti hai to maan ke haath ke neeche geet ki saare hoti hai...geet apni saare nikal ke wash room me taiyaar hone chali jati hai...geet aaine me dekhkar taiyaar ho rahi thi jab woh yeh baat ko gaur karti hai ki khidaki me roshni ke waje se maan ko sone me taklif ho rahi hai...geet parde ko thik se bandh karke neeche kitchen me chali jati hai...

geet: main kuch madad kar doon...

Priya: nahi...beta...hamare yahaan jab tak dulhan ke haath ki mehndi nahi utharti woh koi kaam nahi kar sakti...agar tum kaam karna hi chahti ho to yeh coffe maan ko de aao...aur use jaga bhi do...

annie: Bhabhi...newspaper lejana mat bhulna...

vicky: Nahi ab to bhai thode hi coffee akbar dekhkar piyenge...kyun bhabhimaa...sahi kaha na...

geet sharma jati hai aur annie aur vicky hasne lagte hai...

Priya: bahot mazak ho gaya...geet tum jao...

Geet jab kamre me aati hai to dekhti hai ki maan abhi tak soya hua hai...geet use jagane hi wali thi lekin uske haath ruk gaye...geet apni choodi ki khanak se maan ko jagane lagi...Thodi dair baad maan apni aankhein kholta hai aur apne samne geet ko dekhta hai jiske haath me coffee hoti hai...

maan: good morning...

geet: good morning...aapki coffee aur newspaper...

maan: thanks...

geet bistar banane lagti hai...

maan :geet ...tumse ek sawaal puchu...

geet: jee...puchiye...

maan : tum is shaadi se khush to ho...

geet: yeh kaisa sawaal hai...

maan : bada hi sidha sawaal hai...kya tum khush ho...

geet: woh main...

Jab Priya andar aati hai...

Priya: uth gaya,,,,,,,ab yeh lo yeh tumhare flight tickets hai aaj dus baje ki Shimla ke liye...tumhara honeymoon...ab jaldi se apna saman bandho...tumhe ek ghante me nikalna hai...Main annie ko bhejti hoon woh geet ki madad kar degi...

Priya waha se chali jati hai aur maan bhi taiyaar hoke neeche chala jata hai...

Geet aapni aur maan ki packing kar rahi hoti hai jab waha pe annie uski madad karne aati hai...

Jab maan kamre me aata hai...

Maan : ho gayi packing...neeche Mama aur papa humara intzaar kar rahe hai...chale...

Geet : jee...

Maan saman leke neeche jata hai...geet unke peeche peeche chalti hai...maan aur geet dono airport ke liye nikal jate hai...


Maan geet ko uska bording pass deta hai jispe naam likha hota hai GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA

geet (apne aap se): Kaise ek din me meri puri zindagi badal di hai...ek waqt tha jab main rahul ke saath Kashmir gayi thi kitni khush thi main...lekin aaj dekho...kya hai mere pass...kuch bhi to nahi...na mera pyaar hai na hi mera rahul ...hai to ek unjuda rishta...pata nahi ab zindagi kaunsa naya imtihan le rahi hai...

Maan : geet chale...flights ka time ho raha hai.....

Maan aur geet dono plane me jake bethte hai...thodi hi dair me plane shuru hota hai aur geet kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos karne lagti hai...Jab maan uski aur dekhta hai to ghabra jata hai...

Maan : geet ...tum thik to ho....

Geet : main thik hoon...woh muje Asphyxia hai...

Maan : kya...

Geet : breating problems...landing or take off me...

Maan : r u sure ...u r ok...

Geet : haa...woh bas main aise hi saans leti rahungi thodi dair me thik ho jayega...

Maan : geet...take a deep breath...sab thik ho jayega...

Thodi dar bad sab kuch normal ho jata hai...

Geet : I am sorry...muje aapko pehle bata dena tha...ki muje breathing problem hai...

Maan : Tumhe muje Sorry kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi ...yaad hai hum dost hai...

Geet sirf use dekhte hi rehti hai...thodi dair ke baad Plane landing hone hi wala tha ki phir se maan geet ki madad karta hai...

Maan aur geet dono thik se Hotel pahunch jate hai lekin tab tak bahot raat ho gayi hoti hai...Dono itne thak gaye the ki foran so jate hai...


Subaah hote hi dono taiyaar hoke neeche lobby me aate hai...

Maan : geet...tum aaj se pehle kabhi Shimla aayi ho...

geet: nahi...aur aap...

maan: main bhi nahi,,,,,,thik hai to aaj hum log sightseeing ke liye jayenge...

Maan hotel manager se punchta hai...

maan: yaha pe koi aisi jagaah hai jo hume dekhni chahiye...

Manager: waise to yahaan per dekhne ko kai jagah hai lekin yaha pe pass me hi pahadi pe ek mandir hai...aur kehte hai ki jo bhi waha jake jo bhi mangta hai uski marade puri ho jati hai,...

Maan: thik hai tab to hum zaroor jayenge...thank you...

Maan aur geet Mandir pahunchte hai...Dono Mandir ki andar pahunchte hai...

geet: Hai Bhagwan...maine kabhi apne liye to nahi manga...lekin maan jo bhi mange use de dena...

maan: Hai bhagwan...muje geet ke pyaar ke alawa aur kuch nahi chahiye...

Maan aur geet dono sidiyon se utar hi rahe the jab geet ka pair fisalta hai aur woh Sidiyon se gir jati hai...

next update after 50 likes and 2 page comments

thank you everyone for the likes and lovely comments for the previous update

Edited by Zeba702 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
lovely update
maaneet mrrd
but still geet is living in her memo of rahul
hope she moves on soon
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz geet maan k dil maat todna...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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