ff:a false commitment{I}part 1-34

heres the character sketch

characters of my ff are-

HEER MANN-(IN PAST) a college girl who is

traditional ,sweet, caring,lovable person.

she led a life of happiness ,dreams and love.

but somethng changed her ,a false commitment changed her.

(IN PRESENT)

she is one of the top businesswoman of canada

newspaper headlines says that she is rude ,arrogant ,a drunkard ,party animal and all n all alone.

what changed her????

why she became so?????

arjun punj - (presant day)

a true friend of heer

and was a friend of prem

he is caring and lovable. he is protective towards his friend and cant see tears in her eyes . and he is in love with arohi .

arohi sharma( arjuns fiance and heers frnd)-

ah she is a talkative fellow and she doesnt knows where to stop but she doesnt do anythng intentionally it happens accidentally as arohi is afat ki puriya

preet juneja

dashing ,cool ,handsome,hot .he is the eyecandy and every girl would want to drool on him but he loves someone to whom thats a secret??/

kashish (thnk will be played by meher bt i like the name kashish more so i keep it )

shy girl ,who is beautiful ,innocent and believes in true love

lets see she gets her mr .perfect or not.

prem juneja -

son of the leaing businesss industrialist lalit juneja

(in past)

he is a perfect man ,he changes his gfs like his t- shirts

bt he says he is faithful to someone do u thnk he will keep his commitment

(in present)

a workholic , and in love with someone

.rishabh rampal- the villian

his only motive is revenge

part 1

the scenes start with a house in canada . a girl dressed in a white night gown was sitting on her chair with a glass of drink in her hand

the gown looks like this

her eyes were black and beautiful but the red clour in her eyes evidents the pain she had in her heart

she is thinking somethng which is causing her deep pain and then the screen starts to get blurred and..................

flashback 3 years back

in india - panchgani

the title mandolin track of kis desh mein hai mera dil is playing

and a girl dressed in pinnk churidar is walking down the stairs

she is heer

she lives with her friend arohi after she lost her parents in an accident 2 years back

after taking ashirwad of god and her parents photo she goes inside a room

HEER: hey arohi wkae up fast we l be late for the college

arohi: 5 minutes sweetheart itni jaldi college jaake kya karna hai

heer:accha ! ok main arjun ko bol dungi ki arohi is not interested to meet him .

arohi : nahi wait 5 minutes i l be back

heer: hahahahhaaha

arohi : its not fair tu mujhe hamesha arjun ke naam se dara deti hai aur ek woh hai pata nahi kab samjhega mere dil ki baat

heer : ok miss dramaqueen now get ready kyunki woh tujhe aise dekhega to kabhi propose nahi karega

arohi : ya ya going

IN COLLEGE

AROHI AND HEER ENTERS

AROHI TU BHI NA DEKH HUME DER HO GAYI

AUR TERI YE SPORTS CAR AROHI YE CHALTI KAM KHARAB JYADA HOTI HAI

AROHI: HA MERE DAD SWARG CHALE GAYE AUR MUJHE CHHOD GAYE YE SADI HUI SPORTS CAR, EK MANSION AUR BUSINESS, BUSINESS KA TO MAIN PICKLE BANA KE KHAUNGI

HEER: arohi kitni baar kaha hai apne dad ke baare mein koi aisa bolta hai kya

arohi : han han tu aur tere lectures ab ye band kar nahi to class mein main soo jaungi kyunki late hone ki wajah se waha bhi hume lectures hi milne wale hai

:heer : arohi rukkk

and then arohi starts running and heer following her suddenly she bumped into someone and thats the beginning beginning of her destruction or can say beginning of her struugle which will end to love

Originally posted by: emacoolman

nice yaar, waiting for your next update...

well will update soon

and thank god some1 read it thought my ff will end today only

ya ya will go according to my plan will continue tomorrow and thanks dear for reading and ommenting

Originally posted by: hreeyaa

nice

thanks for reading

take care

regards

aishwarya gayen

Originally posted by: Momana

nice😛
cont soon

thanks ya i l continue soon byye

and tc

regards aishwarya gayen