ff:a false commitment{I}part 1-34 - Page 3

Originally posted by: nidhispharshan

wow aishwarya

nice update

thanks will update sonn and will pm u

Originally posted by: --Sarah--

nice update 😊

hey thanks for reading ha

Originally posted by: -fsn-

Hey aishwariya
its really nice
continue soon
wait 4 the next update asap.
pm me when u update.

luv
Fatima

hey fatima thanks for reading dear m glad that some ppl are reading my ff

ya will continue soon

ya i have added u to ma buddy list and willpm u on the next update i hope i l be updating today only

regards

aishwarya gayen

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

interesting concept

do pm me when u update

ya will surely pm u

and thnaks for reading

i hope il be updating today only

tc

regards

aishwarya gayen

Originally posted by: Premeer_chahat

Hey really nice update!! Plz continue soon!! Ur doin a gr8 job!! Plz pm wen u update!!

hey thanks for hte encouraging words

i l pm u when il update

and i l update asap

tc

regards

aishwarya

Originally posted by: MissSweetyPie

NIce HUn GUd Update Also NIce Idea Plzz PM When UPdate

Awesome Yaar

UPdate ASAP :)

thanks dear

ya i l pm u

tc and keep reading and replying

regards

aishwarya

Originally posted by: emacoolman

hey really nice update... plz plz plz PM me when you will update... can't wait for reading more... your concept is really nice...

ya ya i l i l pm u dont worry

actually this time when i updated second part i ant pm as i got some work so i jst completed and became ofline

bt next time i l surely do the pms and even will be maintaing the index

PART - 3

RECAP-

arohi and arjun were fighting and heer is busy reading and laughing

and then some one arrives and stands infront of heer..

prem: hi

heer: yes what now??

prem : woh main keh raha tha ki i apologise for what i did in the morning i should have talked politely

heer: (her jaws dropped hearing prem apologise) she was left surprised ad didnt know how to react as she was kind hearted she jst took it lightly and said

its ok wellm sorry too i thnk i overreacted too

and then the thing that happened made aarun and arohi surprised too and heer was like m i dreaming

prem: so friends by extending his hand

heer was shocked and still was looking at prem like a statue and then arohi and arjun came from behind and arohi whispered arre heer hand shake kar le aisa maua phir nahi milega

and heer jst slapped arohi on her hand playfully

heer : well friendship thats a big thing it takes time but we can be acquaintances

and she shaked her hand

and thats the beginning of their frndship or beginning of their love or beginnig of revenge or beginning of destruction a beggining of change in life ......................

flashback ends..........

present

heer sitting with her glass and thinking and then someone calls her from back its kashish ( wife of preet and they also live in canada and they r the only one who often visit heer)

hey heer kaisi hai

heer: bas jee rahi hun well like to have some drink???

kashish: teri ye awful habit kyun kar rhai hai tu apne saath aisa

heer: ha mujhe bhi lagta hai mujhe to usi din suicide kar lena chaihye thakyun sabke liye paresaani hi hun main

tere aur preet ke liye ek zimmedari

media ke liye ek paheli

apne office staffs aur employees ke liye hitler

thak gayi hun main thak gayi

and then enters the handsome hunk preet

toh kya baat ho rhai ahi yaha

heer wiping her tears kuch nahi tumhari shikayat kar rahi thi kashish keh rahi thi ki tum usse bahot pareshaan karte ho

preet: ha isse aur kaam bhi kya hai ok main tumhe tumhare india ke tickets dene aaya tha tumhe yaad hai na hume next wekk arohi aur arjun ke engagement mein jaana hai

heer: ru sure mujhe janaa chahiye ??/

apne poorane jakhm kuretna chhaiye kyunki woh bhi honge waha jinhe dekh ke shayad meri itne saalon ki sambhli jindagi phir ulajh jaaye

and with that again the flashback starts :

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thats the next part guys i hope u l like it