ff:a false commitment{I}part 1-34 - Page 5

Originally posted by: emacoolman

wow yaar awesome... gud going... waitng for next do PM me about update...

thanks for reading and liking

even in the next update too il pm u

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

very nice update yar...

plz continue soon...

thanx for the pm...

take care,

regards,

Suhana.

hey thanks for reading m too glad that u liked it

even m waiting for ur ff to be continued

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

god...prem so attitude..haww...n ye prem n rishab k beech kya baat hui..suspense jaldi kholna...me waiting

hey m replying to jst one of ur replies sorry

well loved the way u expressed ur feeling in short makling it long hahaha

hanks for liking so much dear

suspense to khulega dont worryy

main jab dossro ke ff padhti sab bade suspensse likhke mujhe pareshaan karte now its my turn i have a big story ahead

dheere dheere har panna aur raaz khulega

its going to b different than all other saas bahu bakwaass except kis desh usme kabhi bakwass nahi hota

as harshad ko jab dekhi sab bhool jaati main

will continue asap

tc

regards aishwarya gayen

Hi aishwarya

I read ur ff (till second part) and liked it a lot⭐️. Can you add me in your pm list. Do update soon. Why I do have a feeling that prem is involved in a bet with rishab that he can make heer fall in love with him. I think it will be difficult for him but when ultimately when heer would give in it would be when she would love him truly. Will he then brake her heart then?😭

Sia

Originally posted by: MissSweetyPie

Love It Yaar

App Plz Kaldi Update Karo

PLzzzz

hey dear thanks a lot for reading and replying

well haha main kaldi (jaldi) update karungi

actually i thnk i l update today as i want to mark the day its 09/09/09

and it a day that will appear in another thousands year and by the time we will bemummies hahahahah

tc

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey
Nice update

thanks pooji

i hope u l even like the next update

thanks for replying

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Hi aishwarya

I read ur ff (till second part)and liked it a lot⭐️. Can you add me in your pm list. Do update soon. Why I do have a feeling that prem is involved in a bet with rishab that he can make heer fall in love with him. I think it will be difficult for him but when ultimately when heer would give in it would be when she would love him truly. Will he then brake her heart then?😭

Sia

well thanks for reading and liking read the third part too ya i have added u to my buddy list u l get the pms on next updates . well dont thnk so much and get stressed i l reveal the facts soon.bettttttt hmm mght be or mght be not mght be theres somethng else some more interesting points of past ... well he l broke her heart i dont thnk so

okk u jst wait and watchhhhhhhhhh all the mysteries will be solved and i thnk i l eng the story in a tragic way bt if my mind changes i l make it happy

god knowsssss ????/

and ya todays date is really lucky on 9/9/9 hahahhaahah

part -4

recap

preet: ha isse aur kaam bhi kya hai ok main tumhe tumhare india ke tickets dene aaya tha tumhe yaad hai na hume next wekk arohi aur arjun ke engagement mein jaana hai

heer: ru sure mujhe janaa chahiye ??/

apne poorane jakhm kuretna chhaiye kyunki woh bhi honge waha jinhe dekh ke shayad meri itne saalon ki sambhli jindagi phir ulajh jaaye

and then preet puts his hand on heers shoulder to console her

preet:heer hume unse koi matlab nahi hum waha apne frnds ke liye jaa rahe hai

heer: hmmmmm (wiping her tears and taking one more sip from her glass)

kashish: hey preet dekho ab bechari arohi ke bhi khushi ke din khatm ho gaye ab woh bhi ghar ki chakki mein piss ke reh jayegi

preet: tum hamesha ulta hi bolti ho mujhe to bechare arjun pe taras aa raha hai ek aur bali ka bakra ghori chadega

kashish: what do u mean by that preet

preet: i meant ki bakra dulhann ko bolega aa meri pooja kar le aur mujhe kaat

kashish: uuuuuuuuuuu

preet: hahaha time kaise beet jaata hai na abhi kuch din pehle to hum mile the

and theen the three sits on the sofa and

flashback starts::::

preet coming to heer

hi heer

hi preet

woh heer mujhe tumhari madad chahiye thi

hmm kaho na kya hua koi project nahi ban raha kya

preet"arre ye mere jindagi ke project ka sawaal hai

heer:kya matlab

preet: woh main mian main main

heer: tumhe kisine goat ki acting karne ka punishment diya hai kya main main kyun kar rahe ho

preet: arre samjho na hmmmmmmmmm accha suno main tumhari frnd kashish se yaar karta haun usse shadi karna chahta hun uske saath apne kida chahta hun apni mummy se usse milwana chahta hun aurrrrrrr ( he says all this in one breathe)

heer: wait waitt kyaaaaaa itni aage ki planning

u know kashish loves some1 usne mujhe kaha tha aur agar usne tere muh se ye sun liya to tu to gaya

and hearing heer saying kashish loves some1 else preet became a statue

preet: kya????????/

heer: haaaaaaaaaa

and then preet leaves silently

heer: preet meri baat to sunoooooo preet

after the college that day

arjun ,arohi .heer and kashish all together getting out of the college

heer: kashish mujhe tumhe kuch batana tha

kashish: ha heer

heer: woh main keh rahi thi ki woh preet aaj mere paas aaya tha aur woh tumse pyaar karta hai

par dont worry maine keh diya ki you lve some1 else

kashish: kyaaaaaaaaaa?

heer: maine thik kiya na

kashsih: ye tune kya kiya heer miane tujhe bataya tha na main kisi s oyaar karti hun par keh nahi pati woh preet hai preetttt

heer:: whattt????

kahsish : main tumse baad mein milti hun

and with that she runs and arjun and arohi are standing like statues and then they burst into laughing

heer: stop it guys and with that heer runs after kashish

kahsish: tumne preet ko dekh kya

someone: ha woh terrace ki taraf gaya hai

heer: kahsish meri bata to sun ruk

kahsihs: on terrace preet !

preet: kya hua woh woh tumhe heer ne sab bata diya na see i dont want to hurt u its ok u love some1 else

kashish: itni der laga di kehne mein

preet : see leave me alone

kahsihs: uska naam nahi sunoge

preet: woh woh

kahsish: uska naam hai prettttt

preet : ohhhh sadly and then he understood what is happenning and in happiness he says kyaaaaaaaaa miannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

kahsish : ha buddhu tum main tumhe uss din se pasand karti hun jab main pehle din tumse mili thi phir humne saath prject kiya i love u i love u

preet: i love u tooooooo

and then he picks up kahsish in his arms and abt whole of the college was staring themmm and then everyone clappeddddd

flash back ends...........................

here the three of then started laughingg hahahahahh

woh bhi kya din the na::::says preet

hmmm

kashish: aur uske baad hamari engagement

and with that kahsish and preet started talking about there engagement and heer was thinking something else

flashback begins:;;;;;;

on the day of engagement whole of the college was called

including premmmmm and that night something changed in heer and prems life a neww feeling occured........................................