ff:a false commitment{I}part 1-34 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

hey ashwarya...

nice starting...

thanx for the pm...

continue soon dear...

regards,
Suhana.

arre tu thanks mat bol thanks to mujhe bolna chahiye that u got some time and read it

gosh i thothoughthought i have to end today only bt finally got some readers

i l continue soon and pm u

tc

Originally posted by: cute_17deeks

hey!!
really nice yaar..
i seriously liked it a lot...
waiting for next update..
plz add me to ur PM list.....

thanks a lot that u read

i l add u to my pm list

and next update will be soon mght be tomorrow

tc

regards aishwarya

Originally posted by: --Sarah--

Nice..do continue and waiting for the next update

ya i l continue soon

thanks for reading

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

wow..vry nyc part dear..continue soon

thanks ya will continue soon

tc

part 2

recap

and then arohi starts running and heer following her suddenly she bumped into someone and thats the beginning beginning of her destruction or can say beginning of her struugle which will end to love

jst imagine this is the corridorr

heer jst madde her hands to the neckway of the perosn so that she doesnt falls and the person holds her with her waist they were so closed that the could feel each others breath and heer was struggling as her hair was flowing due to wind and she was uncomfortable and then her wye met with the persons dark chocolate eyes and then ...............

heer : oh shit ! cant u see and walk or u have the habit of bumping in to girls

the person: i thnk second option

heer :what ?? pardon

the person: prem juneja doesnt bumps into girls but girls drool over him u got me

heer: ha prem juneja the womanizer hmm i know u. u got me. so dont try to act oversmart u d have apologised and in place of that u r arguing

prem: wooh wooh m not arguing and prem juneja never says sorry and i really dont like to argue with girls as girls r not the thng with which u shd argue either u can do somethng rather interesting than that

heer:u r shameless

and with that heer stomped away thee corridor

at class

arohi :arre tu kaha reh gayi thi

heer: woh mil gaya the the so called prem juneja

arohi: wooh that handsome

:heer : tujhe to har koi handsome hi dikhta hai atleast have some class

:arohi : haha aur tujhe to sab ladke bure hi lagte hai

:heer : kisne kaha

arohi: ha everyone knows ya phir kuch ur baa hai bata tujhe ladklo mein interest hi nahi kya

:heer: what do u mean by that????

well i only trust arjun kyunki baki iss college mein koi trust ke layak nahi all cheapstae womanizer hai ladkiyon ko tissue samajhte hai

arohi: pata nahi tujhe kaun jhelega

heer : kyun tu jhelti hai na koi aur bhi jhel hi lega

arohi : ops mam is here sssshhhhhh

after the college

prem and his frnds rishabh (the villain)and many more were standing

rishabh:dekh heer the lady hitler

prem: haan haan apne apko bahot oversmart samajhti hai

rishabh:ha teri daal har jagah gal sakti hai yaha nahi

prem :................................................................

after this everythng they spoke is a suspense

here other part

arohi and arjun were fighting and heer is busy reading and laughing

and then some one arrives and stands infront of heer...............................

thats it frnds next part next day