ff:a false commitment{I}part 1-34 - Page 4

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Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

part 2

recap

and then arohi starts running and heer following her suddenly she bumped into someone and thats the beginning beginning of her destruction or can say beginning of her struugle which will end to love

jst imagine this is the corridorr

heer jst madde her hands to the neckway of the perosn so that she doesnt falls and the person holds her with her waist they were so closed that the could feel each others breath and heer was struggling as her hair was flowing due to wind and she was uncomfortable and then her wye met with the persons dark chocolate eyes and then ...............

heer : oh shit ! cant u see and walk or u have the habit of bumping in to girls

the person: i thnk second option

heer :what ?? pardon

the person: prem juneja doesnt bumps into girls but girls drool over him u got me

heer: ha prem juneja the womanizer hmm i know u. u got me. so dont try to act oversmart u d have apologised and in place of that u r arguing

prem: wooh wooh m not arguing and prem juneja never says sorry and i really dont like to argue with girls as girls r not the thng with which u shd argue either u can do somethng rather interesting than that

heer:u r shameless

and with that heer stomped away thee corridor

at class

arohi :arre tu kaha reh gayi thi

heer: woh mil gaya the the so called prem juneja

arohi: wooh that handsome

:heer : tujhe to har koi handsome hi dikhta hai atleast have some class

:arohi : haha aur tujhe to sab ladke bure hi lagte hai

:heer : kisne kaha

arohi: ha everyone knows ya phir kuch ur baa hai bata tujhe ladklo mein interest hi nahi kya

:heer: what do u mean by that????

well i only trust arjun kyunki baki iss college mein koi trust ke layak nahi all cheapstae womanizer hai ladkiyon ko tissue samajhte hai

arohi: pata nahi tujhe kaun jhelega

heer : kyun tu jhelti hai na koi aur bhi jhel hi lega

arohi : ops mam is here sssshhhhhh

after the college

prem and his frnds rishabh (the villain)and many more were standing

rishabh:dekh heer the lady hitler

prem: haan haan apne apko bahot oversmart samajhti hai

rishabh:ha teri daal har jagah gal sakti hai yaha nahi

prem :................................................................

after this everythng they spoke is a suspense

here other part

arohi and arjun were fighting and heer is busy reading and laughing

and then some one arrives and stands infront of heer...............................

thats it frnds next part next day

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

PART - 3

RECAP-

arohi and arjun were fighting and heer is busy reading and laughing

and then some one arrives and stands infront of heer..

prem: hi

heer: yes what now??

prem : woh main keh raha tha ki i apologise for what i did in the morning i should have talked politely

heer: (her jaws dropped hearing prem apologise) she was left surprised ad didnt know how to react as she was kind hearted she jst took it lightly and said

its ok wellm sorry too i thnk i overreacted too

and then the thing that happened made aarun and arohi surprised too and heer was like m i dreaming

prem: so friends by extending his hand

heer was shocked and still was looking at prem like a statue and then arohi and arjun came from behind and arohi whispered arre heer hand shake kar le aisa maua phir nahi milega

and heer jst slapped arohi on her hand playfully

heer : well friendship thats a big thing it takes time but we can be acquaintances

and she shaked her hand

and thats the beginning of their frndship or beginning of their love or beginnig of revenge or beginning of destruction a beggining of change in life ......................

flashback ends..........

present

heer sitting with her glass and thinking and then someone calls her from back its kashish ( wife of preet and they also live in canada and they r the only one who often visit heer)

hey heer kaisi hai

heer: bas jee rahi hun well like to have some drink???

kashish: teri ye awful habit kyun kar rhai hai tu apne saath aisa

heer: ha mujhe bhi lagta hai mujhe to usi din suicide kar lena chaihye thakyun sabke liye paresaani hi hun main

tere aur preet ke liye ek zimmedari

media ke liye ek paheli

apne office staffs aur employees ke liye hitler

thak gayi hun main thak gayi

and then enters the handsome hunk preet

toh kya baat ho rhai ahi yaha

heer wiping her tears kuch nahi tumhari shikayat kar rahi thi kashish keh rahi thi ki tum usse bahot pareshaan karte ho

preet: ha isse aur kaam bhi kya hai ok main tumhe tumhare india ke tickets dene aaya tha tumhe yaad hai na hume next wekk arohi aur arjun ke engagement mein jaana hai

heer: ru sure mujhe janaa chahiye ??/

apne poorane jakhm kuretna chhaiye kyunki woh bhi honge waha jinhe dekh ke shayad meri itne saalon ki sambhli jindagi phir ulajh jaaye

and with that again the flashback starts :

.............................................................

thats the next part guys i hope u l like it

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

awesome update

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Originally posted by: --Sarah--

nice update..
feel sorry for heer
waiting for the next update

ya really thanks for liking will continue soon