SS : Crazy About You (Completed)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello people!
I know I said 3 week but I'm here with a new story.
Just one thing: I sketched the outline of the story and didn't write anything except the Sneak-Peak.
Give it a try and tell me your opinions.

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CrazyAboutYou
He is the Best!
He is the Man!
He is the definition of Love/Caring!
He is HIM!
Are the words Others says about him.
He is the Beast!
He is the Animal!
He is the definition of Lust/Cruelty!
He is not HIM!
Are the words She says about him.
Who is correct & Who is wrong ?

*****

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- Maithili
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sneak-Peak

"Present yourself please!" He said.

She started with a smile:
"I'm Chakor Bhuvan Lal. Finished my last semester in Business Management at University of Melbourne. Searching 6 months internship to validate my diploma and especially gain professional experience in the domain.

Being innovative and open-minded, SR Fashions, the best fashion house holding number 1 position in India, America and few other Asian countries will for sure give me an opportunity to ..."
...
"You are selected Miss. Lal!" bringing his hand in front of her.
"Thank you Jiju(BIL)" seeing him glare, she said "Thank you Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi. I will be an efficient worker." with a wink.

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He snakes his left hand over her bare waist through the saree while he blocks her way of escaping by placing his other hand on the kitchen slab.

With the sudden contact on her waist and the hot breath fanning on her left shoulder, she jerked in her place and tries to free herself when she got shocked seeing the person stuck to her back.
The only word that escaped her mouth is "Jiju!" all the while struggling to free herself.
...
"I want you!" he announced.
"You can't do that !" she yelled with anger visible through her red eyes, holding a knife in her hand.
"I can do more than that Doll!" he informed her.

*****

Warning! No No Information! No Warning to myself! No Information to you all! 😕

This story will not go overboard (No mature content - Only kisses and touchy-touchy scenes).
I know that SIL-BIL relationship is as pure as any other relationships.
So I know where the story will lead and I'm sure that those who will read it until the end will like.



- Maithili
Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Happy to hear u back di..i missed ur stories a lot...eagerly waiting for this sneak peak..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Maithu,whenever u come up with TS/FS,I will always ask u to try making it FS😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: amrutha131

Maithu,whenever u come up with TS/FS,I will always ask u to try making it FS😆


Me too 😆😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Eagerly waiting for today's udaan episode to finish;only for the sneak peak . Excited for new story. Your style to post the upcoming part with date and time is awesome. Waiting for FS
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting concept
Waiting for sneak peak
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Happy to hear u back di..i missed ur stories a lot...eagerly waiting for this sneak peak..Smile

Sorry to make you wait.
Hope you will like the story.😊

Originally posted by: amrutha131

Maithu,whenever u come up with TS/FS,I will always ask u to try making it FS😆

I know it dear.
The thing is I already sketched the story and I will follow it.
So that's why it might be a 3 or 4 or 5 shots. I can't guarantee😃.

I knew it little sis.😉

Originally posted by: Subi51

Eagerly waiting for today's udaan episode to finish;only for the sneak peak . Excited for new story. Your style to post the upcoming part with date and time is awesome. Waiting for FS

Pls don't expect a lot dear, I may not be up to it.😕
About my style of putting date is that I like to be organised even if it's for something entertaining.
I know you may feel I'm crazy. Yep a little. That's why my sis have a tough time to deal with me.😃

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting concept

Waiting for sneak peak

Thanks buddy!


*****

OMG!
I's just a SP guys!
Don't have a lot of expectations!
I don't want to ruin it. Pls.
I mean I'm scared to not be up to your expectations.

I got few minutes break, so Updated SP!
Hope you find it interesting.
Tell me how is it.
Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I liked the sneak peak,Maithili...👍🏼
Bil-sil relationship...strange.But I have my faith on you dear and you are also well aware of my preferences.😈

You know what,today I had decided to read POD and BILY,but ended up re reading My Possession instead...I loved it sooo much.😳
And I have already recommended it to my sis and my bestie as well.
I will catch on POD and BILY tomorrow.😛


This CAY sounds interesting...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You are a amazing writer maithu... Like the sneak peak... Waiting for the update...
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