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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Hi di..
This was awesome asusual..
Suraj got a big treasure..he do some naughty things eventhough the family members r around him..
But now no one s there...he will play his game even more without pressure..
Poor chakor..she can't escape from him..
Wat a villanism..taking someone's phone without their permission itself wrong..but he took the phone and saved his no. as future..and also took her selfies..
Bad suraj..
I loved tis part a lot..
And I luv u too sis..tc
Waiting for ur next update eagerly..

Hey sis!

Thanks a lot dear!

How best player is he that even time is with him.

Yeah poor her!

She is trapped!

You know what? When I read the line about him being bad! I remembered a tamil song 'Bad boy!'from Alex Pandian.

Even if the film wasn't a hit but the song was one sort of it!

Hope you will like the next parts too!

A lot of surprises are in the list!

Love you too dear! 🤗

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: maithu_

Hey sis!
Thanks a lot dear!
How best player is he that even time is with him.
Yeah poor her!
She is trapped!
You know what? When I read the line about him being bad! I remembered a tamil song 'Bad boy!'from Alex Pandian.
Even if the film wasn't a hit but the song was one sort of it!
Hope you will like the next parts too!
A lot of surprises are in the list!
Love you too dear! 🤗

Yes sis..in tat film karthi will be a bad boy but it will be comic..but here he is a naughty boy as well as bad boy..

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Interesting update!
Only son! Here goes my theory Suraj had an identical twin.

Poor Chakor, she's suffering a lot, Suraj is acting as a crazy stalker. She must be dreading what he'll do in that month.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Thanks yaar!

You are telling me that I'm justifying the title?

It's less than 1 month as Imli will be there.

Interesting theory!

Have to wait.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Interesting👍🏼
Suraj ko tho lottery lag gayi...poor Chakor
Waiting for next update !!

Thanks dear!

Lottery kya, poura doukhan tho lag gayi!

Poor girl! He is going to entertain himself with her.

Half way in the next part!

So I will be on time tomorrow.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Ye lo even luck is not with her ... Bure fanse...poor chakor...
One month with this crazy Suraj 😲... What can she do...my future damm had hai ye to Suraj babu 😕...dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...

Yeah!

He is sooo confusing!

Sorry for that!

1 month - 1 week with both sisters!

1 week alone with Chakor!

Wow God is blessing him while Chakor is not even getting a bit.

Thanks dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Yes sis..in tat film karthi will be a bad boy but it will be comic..but here he is a naughty boy as well as bad boy..

More than that film, I like that song.

I think it can Suraj's bgm here! LOL

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: maithu_

More than that film, I like that song.
I think it can Suraj's bgm here! LOL

Pls sis..Put some other bgm for him becoz can't see like a bad boy eventhough he is tat..

Put bgm like mirutha mirutha from miruthan movie..Tat songs suits this series a lot..😎

Edited by Sania_suraj - 8 years ago

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chink

@appledesire

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Speeechless... 😳

Dee... is it contract marriage b/w imli n suraj..?

Lust v/s Love...!?!

I just wondering.. wht next.. they alone..now..
*emotions @ peak*

Now.. about..In this part.. I enjoy.." mobile phn " part very much..
Chakor's future suraj.. aha..all link connect.. just wife..achakor already admit suraj parents mom dad...only.. mrg clause pending..

Im still not able to decide..in which club iam.. is it chakor or suraj 😆
I imagine vj in suraj.. n its difficult to hate him..whtever he do..

I feel suraj try to make chakor convince they both whtever feels is mutual.. but the only problm is their relationship profile sil bil.. which suraj never admit..n chakor.. helpless baby..

Aap dee suspense na create kia kro.. mai sleepless ho jaati hun..
Eagerly desperately waiting.. sukor confrontation nxt..

Othwise... u excelled every part.. keep it up sis..
* superb*
*feel good after reading*

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Hello buddies!

Sorry for making tension filled chapters!
As said in the beginning, this is something needed for the story!

I wanted to ask you all few things!
Will you start to hate the person you loved from the second you got to know that the person isn't what you thought to be?
Is it easy to hate someone?
What will you do when someone is blackmailing you in the name of your family which is your first priority?
When the person you loved until yesterday is close to you and creating new sensations, will you give in? If yes, at which rate? If no, is it easy?

These are the questions I asked myself before writing last 2 parts and will be writing the upcoming ones.

Link for the previous part: Part 6
Happy reading buddies!

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Part 7

With his head on her lap, she was shocked to say anything.
It's more than a simple shock.

*** What is he doing? ***

"I'm just tired. If it pains tell me. Don't push me down." closing his eyes as a yawn escaped his mouth.
She felt 1000s of shooting stars in her stomach as he adjusted his position on her lap.

With the ringing sound of a phone she jerked out of her sleep to find her left hand over his waist, her head resting with the support of his body and her right hand inside his hair.
She saw him open his eyes making her quickly get back to her siting position with her hands off of him.
He rubbed his eyes lifting himself from her lap and pulled his phone from his pant pocket to find a call from his PA number.

*** I'm glad he didn't remark my position else he would have used it as a weapon against me.
But how come I slept?
Yeah! Tiredness! ***

"Yes Mrs. Joshi!" he said to the caller.
"OK!"
"No need to say that. He is like my brother."
"I will send a car tomorrow."
"Tell him to take rest else I break his broken leg." a small laugh.
"Take care of little Tara."
The call went off.

*** I mistook him.
He wasn't lying.
But he isn't a goody good to trust all his words.
He needs him so helped him. That's it! Selfish! ***

"How is he? What happened to him?" she asked.
"He met with a small accident and injured his left leg. He is sleeping now so his wife called."
"Hmmm"
"Do you trust me now?" waiting for a positive reply.
"That word doesn't look good when it comes from your mouth." she stands up to go.
"You can't go away from me like that." he pulled her towards him making her land on his lap.

- I need the feeling of you near me. -

"Leave me! I need to prepare dinner!" trying to pull always his hold on her waist.
He started to nuzzle her neck "I want my dessert before dinner. And dinner can wait."
"Please! It's wrong! No one is hereee!" she trailed the last word as she felt his lips over her neck.
"No one is here Baby Doll!" he said happily "Only You and Me! US!"
"I... do...n't likeee thissshhh" as his lips pressed on the corner of her lips.
"I lust this!" breaking his lips contact from her skin and having an eye to eye conact "Give me a kiss and I will let you go!"
She bent her head rifting her eyes from his, shaking her head negatively.

"I have no problem to stay like this." he tightened his hold and started to kiss her forehead.
From there he slides down to her nose. When he moves towards her cheek, he felt her soft lips pressed against his and smiled into the kiss making her hit lightly his arm.
Even if she started, he is the one dominating it now while sucking and nibbling, giving equal attention to both her lips.
With her left hand griping his arm and right over his shoulder for balance.
He asked for entrance which she refused adamantly, so he has to pinch her waist to get access to explore her sweet mouth with his tongue.

- If eternity exist, I want this moment to last as long as eternity. -

Their lips played in sync with their tongue dancing for dominance until he split his lips away from hers.
She rested head on his shoulder to get back her breath and him on the crock of her neck hugging her more.

*** My resolve is leaving me second by second with him near me.
I should hate him. I should. ***

Once they were at their normal rhythms, he freed her from his embrace and she left from their without making any eye contact.
She made dinner cursing her life, her actions to his commands, her reactions to his touches and him.

She put pasta in two plates and brought it to table to find him already seated.
"Sit Baby Doll!" he showed his lap with his eyes;
"Aggrrr If I get a chance I will kill you."
"That's what we are going to test now." he said making her sit on his lap, surrounding her waist with his left arm and taking a spoon full of pasta near her mouth.
She had no choice but to accept what comes on her way for now.
Suraj fed her and had his dinner while kissing her cheeks whenever he wanted.
Once finished, he made her stand and went to do dishes.

"I will" she started.
"No need! Choose a film in my room. We will watch a film."
"I feel sleepy" yawning "Can we do that tomorrow? I start my intership tomorrow and you see my CP Boss will not like that."
"CP?"
"Cunning and Pervert!"
He smirked and said "Don't worry I will tackle him, just go and do what I said."
"Animal!" she marched towards his room upstairs.
"Thanks Baby Doll!" he screamed from kitchen.

*** My fate! ***

- My luck! -

"What did you choose?" he asked entering his room then locking the door.
"Nothing!" in a not interested tone.
"Why?"
"No action films! Or science-fiction film!"
"Was it a lie that you said you love romantic films?"
"No! Not that I know!"
"Then?"
"It's not something to watch with you."
"Than with whom?"
"None! I quit watching it from this moment."

*** What is the need to watch romantic movies when lust is the only thing ruling my life now. ***

He smirked "So shall we sleep?" showing the bed.
"Hmmm I think I would like to watch 'Beauty and the Beast'!" she goes and takes a place in the one seater couch next to the bed.
Without letting his smirk go out of his face, he played the film and went near Chakor.

*** Beast watching the film with the beauty by torturing her. ***

"Not a bad choice Baby Doll! A Beast is going to watch 'Beauty and the Beast' with his Beauty." scooping her in bridal style.
"Leave me! I want to be alone." hitting his chest with her soft palms.
"Doll! Don't tickle me there!" putting her in a sitting position on his bed. He climbed on the bed and settled down near her after switching off the light.
"Hate you! Don't smirk!" she added.

He put his hands around her waist and pulled her toward himself, making her sit in-between his legs.
"Can't we just see the film instead of doing all this." she said.
"If that was a question! No!"
He pulled her more into him resting his chin over shoulder when she gave him a small punch with her elbow.
"Ouch! Non-violence policy applies in our bed." kissing her on the crock of her neck.
"Can you leave me? I would like to watch the film."
"Sure! But only like this." making himself confortable with her even closer than before.

*** Oh My God! It was my dream to be like this with you but now I feel like being in hell, cheating my Sistah.
I need to hate you! ***

She couldn't do anything more so she kept quiet and they watched the film.

She drifted to sleep while watching it.
So switching off the TV, he made her lay on the bed and got next to her with his hand around her.
Giving a peek on her forehead, he closed his eyes which opened the next instant hearing what she said in her sleep, hugging him tightly "I love you Suraj! I love you too babies!" which was audible because she was close to him.

He closed his eyes recalling the days he started to dream about her and the day he heard her speak to the diary.

- My life started the day I collided with a stranger, a girl when I was nearing my car.
She lost balance on her fish pot. Luck fish, I caught on time and handed her.
While giving it to her, I remarked her bracelet with golden fish design. I thought that day that she must be a crazy fan of fishes. I couldn't see her face as I was in hurry but I heard her say 'Thank you'.

2nd time we met was a coincidence too. It was during my friend's father's company success party where I was speaking to a guest when I say a beautiful girl trip over something. I was just two steps away from her so I turned to her side and took a step to hold her in my arms.

In her white gown, she looked like a fairy came from heaven. If I say I fell for her at that instant itself, does it make any sense?
The Beauty thanked me and started to move but came back face-2-face with me as our bracelets got attached.
There I saw the same bracelet and a smile formed on my lips.
When I freed our bracelets, my Mom called me through my friend Charlie so I had to leave from there when my heart said the contrary.

When I came back to the spot, she wasn't there. I searched her all over the place but I couldn't see her.
I checked CCTV cameras with the help of my friend and I saw that she was alone most of the time.
I can't ask my parents or his parents or my friend as he didn't know the list of persons invited.

Seeing her, I felt she must be in some college but then where can I search her in this big city?

Since that day, I was waiting for my second chance to meet her.
A chance that I will never leave to go waste.
A chance to a new life. -

He turned to Chakor's side, opening his eyes to see her sleeping with a frown. He lifted his hand and smoothed her forehead.

- 2 years passed since and a lot of things happened in my life.
One thing has never changed! My want for you in my life.
The day you stepped in front of me is the day I started to relive.
That day I decided that I will make you mine. MINE.

Should I say I'm lucky or unfortunate?
I heard all your talks and I read your diary too when you were with Imli helping her pack her bags.
I made you suffer.
I made you angry.
I made you feel hurt.

Sorry can't be enough.
Sorry is not the word to say.

I will make you mine.
I will give you myself.

Seeing you besides me makes me feel like being in heaven and I wish you feel the same in future.
You are just mine! Only MINE! -

He kissed on her forehead and drifted to deep slumber hugging her.

Suraj's phone rang around 7:30 in the morning, waking both the souls in an intimadating state.
From a little far, anybody would have said there is only one person sleeping on the bed and not two.
Chakor had her left leg over Suraj's body and right one between his, while her left hand in his hair, as her right hand was under his hand which is over her back when his right hand was around her shoulder, making her partially sleeping over him.

Taking his left hand from her back, he searched his phone on the side table and switched it off once he found it. He went back to previous position to be pushed away by Chakor.

*** Agrrrhhh! I want to pull my hair for being this close to him.
I need to destroy my love for him. ***

"Sleep Baby! We will wake up later!" in his husky sleepy voice.
"Move! I need to go." detaching herself from him.
Fully awake, he stretched his hands and pulled her over him, saying: "How come I can start my day without" smashed his lips with hers for a long time before leaving her breathless "A Morning Dirty Kiss!"

*** What else should I go through? ***

"Brush your teeth, you Animal!" she screamed before escaping from there.
"If that's the case, we can brush together and do a lot of things together in my bathroom." when she was near the door, opening it.
"Beast!" she muttered before shutting the door behind her.
He smirked.

- If only today was a Sunday! -

Both got ready in their rooms and Suraj got down finding Chakor finish her breakfast and heading towards the kitchen.
"Had dinner without me Baby Doll? It's not acceptable!"
"Who are you to say that? I will do what I please!"
"Not with me!"
"Your breakfast is there on the table. Have it! I'm leaving for office."
"We aren't leaving before executing your punishment."

*** What is this new thing now? ***

"I'm leaving and that's final."
"I'm taking your father's office under my control and that will be the final decision. Do you agree Doll?" with a smirk.

*** Animal! Always blackmailing me! ***

"What do you want?" crossing her hand over her chest as she finished cleaning her plate.
"Come here and feed me with your hand."

- Your punishment / My enjoyment. -

"You are not a child to feed." stepping closer to him with angry visible in her eyes.
"Don't look at me like that Baby Doll. Do your work quickly with affection and we will leave for office."

*** Affection! Does he know the definition? May be seeing his parents.
But does it look good from him? No. ***

"I'm not coming with you!" taking the spoon.
"Don't contradict me! And ahaan I want your fingers over her, not that silly spoon." pointing his lips.

- My lips need all of you but for now I will adjust with your fingers. -

She took a morsel in her trembling hand and brought near him.
He attacked her fingers like a lion attacks his prey and sucked the content she was holding along with her fingers.
This sent shivers down her spine and goosebumps formed all over her body.
Due to this sudden new feeling, she held tightly his shoulder and said:
"Suraj please!" it was a whisper which resembled as a moan

*** What is he doing to me? Please someone help me! ***

- Oh My Fu**ing Goddess! I can never get enough of her for sure. -

It continued until the last piece of food.
Once he finished the breakfast, she cleaned it and made her way to the main door to find the key hanging on the door and the car parked in front of her with Suraj in driver's place.
She knew she had no other choice, so she closed the door and went to take place in the passenger seat.

The journey to office was calm with romantic songs playing in the player as Suraj held her hand while driving.

Once in the parking lot, he took the private entrance with Chakor and made his way to a cabin in 5th floor.

"Sir!" the lady in the room stood up seeing Suraj.
"Mrs. Joshi! Hope you are doing well. You know that you have to take care of Karan's work?" she nodded "Here is Miss. Lal!" showing Chakor "I guess you saw her file." she nodded "I want you to show her the office and guide her with the needed instructions. You are not needed to attend the meetings." started to turn to Chakor's side but came back to facing Mrs. Joshi.
"And make sure, to be there with her, I will be back after the lunch with the client."

*** Rude and arrogant! ***

Now he turned towards Chakor:
"As you are new here, get to know the people you will be working with. I will see this afternoon.
Have lunch on time." making an eye-to-eye contact.
She nodded.
"See you!" he whispered before disappearing from there.

*** Hope he stays professional with me as long as we are in this office. ***

- I would have loved to stay with you if I didn't had these useless meetings which I got moved from last Friday. -

As told by Suraj, Chakor visiting the whole office and made notes of people she will working with.
She got all the needed instructions and document regarding the company adventures.
As time passed, Mrs. Joshi took care of her lunch and left her work in her new office which is in the same cabin as Suraj's.

She was going through the documents when the door fly open and Suraj was standing there holding few files in his hand.
"How do you find working?" he asked as he made his way to his chair after closing the door.
"Everything is perfect except the Perverted Boss!" taking back her eyes from him to the papers she was holding.
"I know that he is more than perfect for you." leaning on his chair.
"Mhhh" mocking smile with sadness crossing her eyes.
"How was the lunch?" taking the water bottle near him.
"Good"
"Hmm! Come here!"

*** Again his dominance! I really need to find a solution. ***

- The last 7 hours were terrible without your presence.
I don't know how I spend last 2 years without you. -

"Why?"
"I said it! So you do it!"
"Bossy!" getting up from her place.
"I'm doing my job Baby Doll!" putting back the bottle after drinking enough water.

"Yes!" standing in front of him on the other side of table.
"Here!" pointing the place next to him with his eyes, raising his brows.
"Agggrrrhh!"

Now she is standing just next to him with less than a arm distance.
"You have to do a work." he said facing her.
"What?" she asked with her left hand on her hip.
"Sign the papers Baby Doll." indicating the file in front of him.

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Thanks for reading buddies!
How was it?
What are the documents according to you?
LIKE & COMMENT if you are interested to read more.

Repeating the questions which I asked myself when I wrote this:

Will you start to hate the person you loved from the second you got to know the person isn't what you thought to be?
Is it easy to hate someone?
What will you do when someone is blackmailing you in the name of your family which is your first priority?
When the person you loved until yesterday is close to you and creating new sensations, will you give in? If yes, at which rate? If no, is it easy?

If possible answer!

Next part: Part 8

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Pls sis..Put some other bgm for him becoz can't see like a bad boy eventhough he is tat..
Put bgm like mirutha mirutha from miruthan movie..Tat songs suits this series a lot..😎

That song suits more for the Suraj of TOFM dear.

I feel like that!

If get time!

I want to do a VM for Sukor!

It will be like after 2 years if I go back doing VMs! LOL