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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello people!


I'm so happy that you are liking how the story is moving.
Sorry to disappoint few of you, all the hotness will stay at this level only as I don't want to go in detail with this Mr. Lust.
Attention Please!
You may hate me or this part depending on how you see things.

Link to previous part: Part 10

Happy reading!

*******

Part 11



Seeing the condition of the room and theirs, her thoughts went wild.

*** What is this?
How can he?
I should remember what happened last night
I remember going to the party.
He ordered juice.
I ordered alcohol.
I challenged him.
I drank them.
And then?
Think! Think! THINK!
Why can't I get anything?
May be he took advantage of me?
May be I... No No No It can't be me!
It must be him! ***


She turned to his side to find him looking at her as if she's a piece of art exposed in an art gallery.
She cleared her throat.
"What happened last night?"
"You happened." he replied simply.
"Me? I'm sure you must have done something. Who gave you rights to change my clothes? Where are your pants?" kneeling on the bed, giving him the full view of her assets.
Seeing his eyes not on her face, she makes the way of his sight and gasped seeing where it landed "Pervert!" she buttoned the rest of the buttons.

He smiled and remembered last night event.

***** LAST NIGHT *****

When then were discussing about sleeping, Chakor started to run and he followed her.
When he caught her, and turned her to make her lay on the bed, she puked unintentionally on his pants.
She made a baby face feeling guilty.
As her dress was just at hand distance, he pulled it and cleaned her mouth. She got the dress from his hand and threw in a direction she will not remember.

He finally succeeded to make her lay on the bed.
"Your pants!" she pointed.
He got out of the pant and rolled it when she pulled him over her.
Their lips met. It was more like a dirty kiss than a fresh air.

He heard her snore still with her lips stuck to his, so pulled away from her.
Prepared the aspirin and water glass on her side of table for her before switching off the light and sleeping with her in his embrace.

***** NOW *****


She remarks his smile and the mark.
"What is that?" pointing to mark.
He knew it but he wanted to play.
"What are you asking about?"
"That!" poking her index finger on it "An insect bite?" she added one more question.
"Ouch!" massaging "Yeah a big one! Around your height." he smirked.
She opened her mouth to counter attack but closed it.

"What happened?"
"I think you heard the first time itself. Anyway! Repeating it for you Baby doll! You.Happened."
The expression on her face cleared all the sequences that may have happened.
"Did I" bending her head.
"You did!"
"Why didn't you stop?" in an accusing tone, fearing with her eyes.
"Why would I stop my enjoyment?" still smirking.

- Yeah enjoyment!
I got to see the real you with me!
The girl who loves me.
I assure you, you will be the happiest person in this world in few weeks. -


*** Yeah enjoyment!
How can a pervert behave when he gets his eyes on a girl?
And that to the person he likes to torture?
If only I remember everything.
He is going to pay for it. ***


She pushed the duvet away from her and climbed on his lap with her legs on either side with anger which didn't let her think what she is doing and can be the consequences.
"You enjoyed it? Enjoy this also!" she punched in his stomach.
As he opened his mouth to yelp, she attacked his mouth and bite there confirming the presence of blood.

- Oh no!
To bad Doll!
Have to pay! -


*** Oh yes!
A punishment in his own way! ***


Coming out of the pain immediately, he pinned her to his chest holding by her waist and gave her the same pain on her lips.
"You!" she started to pull his hair and they started to fight like a kid rolling and pulling each other until they saw the way and the position in which they were.
Their bodies stuck to each other other in their appropriate places, her hands in his hair and his one hand was in her nuke and one in the back entrance of the shirt she was wearing.

Their eyes locked and breath mingled with her losing her control in heat of passion and love she had and she has, she smashed her lips on his making the first move, which he took control over in few seconds. Not only her lips but on her body too, putting the end date to her V-card.

*** I lost it!
I lost it!
I betrayed my Sistah for my desire.
I'm a sin. ***


- Will she regret?
Hope no!
It wasn't sex, it was love.
Hope she can see that. -


They are lying under the duvet with Suraj's left hand around her, her head on his chest and her left hand doing circles over his chest. He was facing the ceiling and she at an object she couldn't find.
"I hate you!"
"Hmmm"
"It's wrong what we did."
"Few things can be wrong from one's POV and right from others." facing her, pulling her hair behind her ear.
"I'm cheating on my sister." with tears.
"No!" pushing them away.

"I loved you!" she said.
"What about now?"
She shook her head.
"You mean to say 'NO'?"he asked.
She shook her head.
He smiled and peeked her head.

"Get ready Baby Doll!"
"Hmmm?"
"Going to visit the rest of Paris and if you want, we can go for shopping."
"HmmmHmmm" shaking her head.
"Go Doll." making himself rest on the headrest.
"You go out." covering her body with the duvet.
"Hey! It's not like I didn't see anything. I won't mind to see again. You can walk, dance, jump... Do anything you want Doll."
"Pervert! Get out of the room."
"Ok" starting to get down.

"Wait wait! Cover yourself before going out of the room!" turning other side.
"If I take the cover, you will be in your glorious form and that too in front of me. Are you ok with it?" he asked playfully sitting on the edge of bed.
She turns his side and punches in his stomach.
"Ouch Jungli Bili (Wild-Cat)"
"Cover with your dress!" holding the duvet as strong as she can.

"You see it's in that corner." showing the place.
"Hide your treasure with a pillow and dress yourself, I will be under the duvet!" she gets under the duvet facing opposite side.
"You are behaving like a kid." he complained.
"Kids don't do this." she showed her hand between them from under the duvet.
"If you want I can give company under the duvet Baby Doll." moving the duvet a little.
"Are you going or you want me to add poison in your food?" pulling the duvet back from his hand with closed eyes "A wife can do anything." she added the last words in a threatening tone hearing his laugh.
"Going Going" smiling to himself.

- It feels good to hear you say wife. -

With the word wife, all the flashes of last night came running to her.

*** OMG! What I did?
I told him most of my secrets. What most? I told him everything.
Ohhh! I asked his shirt, a love bite.
How am I going to face him?

Hmmm I need to act like i didn't remember anything. ANYTHING!

Then then I gave him myself.
He is making me weak.
Now, is there a point to go back and turn the events no! So nothing to do!
I gave in and End! ***


Preparing her mind and herself, she went to get ready with her sour body.

She was applying her make-up, seated near the mirror opposite to bathroom when Suraj came out of the bathroom only in a towel.
Her eyes travelled from his body to his face to see the smirk.

"Liking what you are seeing?" he asked her in a husky tone.
"Most of the time you are like this." brushing away with her hand "So it's not a first." she added.
"But it's the first time after"
"Shameless creature!" she cut him off and got up to take her bag before exiting the room.

They visited the rest of the places, had lunch and went to pack their bags to be in India the next day morning.
To be precise, on Sunday.

During the whole time, Suraj was holding her hand, drawing patters with his thumb.
She, on the other hand was in a dilemma but put the battle behind and enjoyed the visit.

They landed in India the next day morning and they made their way to the Rajvanshi mansion.
Chakor's mind started to throw all sort of questions to her and unconsciously she held tightly his hand.
"Don't worry Doll! Everything will be all right!"
"How can you be this cool?"
"There is nothing to worry about. So why should I be in tension?"
"We are backstabbing my sister." she whispered angrily taking care of not being loud for driver to hear her.
"Cool down! All is well!"

*** Nothing is well!
I screwed with my BIL, I mean he says he is my husband but 2 wives is not a good equation even if it's with my sister.
Why I can't be really angry on him?
Yeah! Well I loved more than anything and I still have feelings!
That sounds great but not good! ***


- Few more weeks and everything will fall in its place automatically. -

They are in front of the door to be opened with Chakor trying to create a gap between them while Suraj doing the contrary.
Imli welcomed them and Suraj left to his room with his luggage.
"So how was Paris?"
"Good Sistah!" avoiding her eyes.
"Did you enjoyed the trip?"
"Hmmm" searching something in her bag "Got it!"
"Mad!" Imli laughed at her sister.
"This is for you."
"Beautiful!" turning the music machine she got as a gift "For sure my baby will love this when he or she can hear."
"Baby?" facing her Sistah?

"I...I mean in future. You see?"
She didn't buy what her Sistah wanted to pass but wasn't in a mood to question her too.
"I think you must be tired.
Take a nap.
We will discuss later.
I have to call Maa.
She wanted to know how are you after your trip.
"

*** She is more happy than before.
She is s**ttering.
Am I missing some points?
I feel exhausted.
Will catch with Sistah later. ***


"We have to talk." she informed her Sistah before making her way to her room.

Chakor woke up only at 7 in the evening and freshen up before getting downstairs.
They all had dinner with Chakor telling the places she visited with constant question from her sister and then it was Imli's turn to fill her ears with the marriage details and how happy she is for her best friend.

The tiredness didn't leave her, so she excused herself and got back to her room locking the door.
Once Suraj confirmed there was no movement in the house, he made his way to Chakor's room to find it closed.
Even if he knew she didn't do it intentionally, the anger got best of him, making him retire to his room after breaking the flower pot in front of her room.

Chakor got ready for office and made her way out of her room to find him leaning over the wall with closed eyes, few traces of mud and the flower pot missing.
"Why did you close your door last night?"
"I Hmmm forgot." she said searching if she could see any other being there and turned to see him frown "I willl not do that again."
"Hmmm" he nodded, opened his eyes and made his way to the dining table.

Chakor went to kitchen to find her sister cooking breakfast while receiving angry glare from him. While helping her sister, she sees a burnt mark in her hand and questions her:
"God! What happened Sistah? How did you got this?"
"She smiled and said "Calm down Honey! It's normal while cooking and thinking about something."
"Are you sure? It must be hurting." saddened
"Nothing!" pushing her sister out of the kitchen "Go and sit. Breakfast is almost ready."
"I will help you."
"No need."

She didn't let her Sistah do anything further.

*** Why I feel like it's not a simple burnt mark?
Can he be behind this?
He was angry on me this morning.
Is he showing his anger on my Sistah?
I have to know it. I will. ***


While setting the table, she was constantly glaring at him.
If look can kill, he would have been dead by now.
He was confused with her behaviour making his expression to change from anger to confusion.

- I must be the one to be launching those glares but why is she doing this?
Is there something I missed?
Have to find! -


Breakfast was a calm affair as glares were exchanged between Suraj and Chakor which went unnoticed by Imli as she was on her phone and food.

*******


Thanks for reading dears!
I know that few are angry on me now for making them take this drastic step but you will find it why in future.

Did you liked it?
If yes! Hit the LIKE & COMMENT.
Want to see what you think about this, even if it's negative: comment.
Waiting for tomatoes and eggs! :-;

Advance Eid Mubarak friends!
Next part: Part 12

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting update👏
Loved sukor moment, it was very hot😉
Chakor is feeling guilty of breaking imli's trust but suraj is calm about it😲
How imli got the burnt mark, too much mysterious
Waiting for the mystery to unveil
Eid Mubark to you in advance
Edited by katheriene - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting update!

Everything is happening as Suraj wants, Chakor made the first move.

I can't believe she gave in, she must feel very guilty. Suraj has no problems because he knows they're doing nothing wrong. I'm glad Chakor finally closed the door in his face.

Why does he have to wait before telling her the truth?

Did Imli really attend her friends wedding or is there a secret? It seems that even here she's pregnant 😆. What was on Imli's mind when she burnt her hand?

Poor Suraj, he doesn't know what's coming his way.

So many mysteries! Can't wait for the next update.
Edited by meshmesh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oohh I love sukors hot romantic moment...
She feel not good coz she think she betrayed her sister...she loves Suraj but this is not so easy for her...
What...cgakor think Suraj burn imlis hand coz he is angry on her... Poor Suraj confused what happened to her...
I like this update too...
Eid Mubarak to everyone in advance...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi di
It's a nice update..
I was happy..tat nothing happened btw them in night.
Bt wat happened in the mrng was not expected..
I know tat both are of out of control..bt if it creates any pblm in future..
Is imli pregnant?
I don't no what to say..becoz i was in a shock mode after reading tis part..
But just eagerly waiting for next update..
Edited by Sania_suraj - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Loved sukor moment, it was very hot😉
Chakor is feeling guilty of breaking imli's trust but suraj is calm about it😲
How imli got the burnt mark, too much mysterious
Waiting for the mystery to unveil
Eid Mubark to you in advance

Thanks a lot dear!
Glad you loved their moments!
Happy that you enjoyed it!

We are nearing the end, so one by one, everything will be out from next part.

Thanks dear for the wish!
Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting update!


Everything is happening as Suraj wants, Chakor made the first move.

I can't believe she gave in, she must feel very guilty. Suraj has no problems because he knows they're doing nothing wrong. I'm glad Chakor finally closed the door in his face.

Why does he have to wait before telling her the truth?

Did Imli really attend her friends wedding or is there a secret? It seems that even here she's pregnant 😆. What was on Imli's mind when she burnt her hand?

Poor Suraj, he doesn't know what's coming his way.

So many mysteries! Can't wait for the next update.

Thanks dear!

Yeah! Chakor made the first move and everything is done!
Me too! Happy that she is showing her anger to him!

Why he have to wait?
Answer in part 14

Will not say anything about your assumptions!
You might be right! You might not be too!
One more day!

Pitying Suraj when he is the main culprit! LOL

Thanks once again dear!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

Oohh I love sukors hot romantic moment...

She feel not good coz she think she betrayed her sister...she loves Suraj but this is not so easy for her...
What...cgakor think Suraj burn imlis hand coz he is angry on her... Poor Suraj confused what happened to her...
I like this update too...
Eid Mubarak to everyone in advance...

Glad you loved their moments dear!
Happy that you liked this post too!
She is like in bipolar state between her good mind and guilty conciousness!
I will say poor Chakor! Do you agree?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Hi di

It's a nice update..
I was happy..tat nothing happened btw them in night.
Bt wat happened in the mrng was not expected..
I know tat both are of out of control..bt if it creates any pblm in future..
Is imli pregnant?
I don't no what to say..becoz i was in a shock mode after reading tis part..
But just eagerly waiting for next update..

Hey Little Sis!
Thanks dear!
What happened in the morning will for sure have an impact!
Sorry to shock you but be aware of the fact that maybe more shocking things can happen in future!
No answer for your question!
See you tomorrow with the update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello!

I'm so happy with all the responses I'm getting with this story!
Thanks a lot people!
We are nearing the end!
Hope the end will be interesting too!

Link to previous part:
Part 11

Happy reading!

*******

Part 12

Once breakfast finished, they made their way towards Suraj's car.
"No need!" Suraj said to the driver who came near the car.
The driver acknowledged the order he got and moved away from him.

*** I'm not going to bend to him any more!
How dare he to do this to my Sistah? ***


Suraj opened the passenger seat for Chakor but she went the other side and took a place behind, avoiding his gaze.
"Come here." Suraj called the driver and handed him the key and got in next to Chakor.

- She is getting in my nerves.
Let's see until when she can be like this. -


The car started to move and so his hand searching hers which is on her lap.
She had her head turned to outside world but he could see through reflection she is tearing.
He took hold of her right hand in his right, as his left surrounded her over her waist.
She pulled his hand off of her and tried to free her hand but nothing worked.
She struggled until she couldn't, so she turned to face him with tears rolling down her cheeks and her eyes red in anger.

- Am I hurting her? No, I'm doing this for our future only.
She will get to know everything.
But how can I solve her problem when I don't know? -


Suraj immediately left her hand free and brought his left hand from the hidden place to take a kerchief and passed it to her. She pushed his hand but he brought it again in front of her.
"Please Chakor."

*** Does this man know to say Please?
He is Leave it! I don't want to think about anything. ***


She was a bit shocked to hear her name from him after a long time and that to in a pleading way. She glared and pushed her tears always with the back of her hands and took a tissue paper from the pocket she had in her bag to correct her appearance. Suraj took his hand back to him and kept silent until they reached their cabin as he saw her keeping distance with him without any reasons.

He closed the door and locked it.
He came in front of her and took her by her shoulder, making her face him.
"What is your bloody problem?" with anger visible in his eyes.
"You!" she screamed with the same level of anger.
"Explain!" he ordered.
"You hurt my sister even after you got to do whatever you want with me. And asking me, what's my problem?" pushing his hand away from her shoulder.
"Hurt? Who hurt Imli?" there was a bit of concern in his eyes but the questioning look and confusion covered it.
"Of course you! Who else will dare to do that?"

*** Nice acting Mister! ***

- Why is she acting like I did a crime? -

"Why will I?" taking a deep breath to calm his nerves.
"You burnt her hand because you couldn't sleep with me.
You burnt her hand because you couldn't fulfil your needs.
You burnt her hand because you couldn't satisfy your lust.
"
"Chakor" he roared like a lion raising his hand but stopped seeing her accusing gaze.

*** That's the only thing missed. ***

"You want to hit me! Hit! I'm not scared of you. I wanted my family to be happy.
But you! You hurt my sister physically. And I'm in with you to hurt her feelings.
"

- Calm down! Calm Down! CALM DOWN! You need to be calm to her. -

"Listen" he yelled gripping strongly her shoulders forgetting his resolution "I didn't hurt her. I don't know what you are talking about. If I want to hurt someone, it will never be something small." she closed her eyes "I may be a beast for you but I will not hurt someone without reasons.
I
" inhaling and exhaling "I don't need you only for my bed. I wanted you and I want you. But that will not be the reason for me to hurt someone." leaving her shoulder "Believe this or not but I'm not the reason."

- I will never hurt anyone even when it comes to business. -

She opened her eyes to see him get to his seat and take his phone.
"Karan! Ask Doctor Mrs. Violet to go to my house and check on Imli."
"No! Nothing serious!"
"Don't ask questions! Do it man!"
"Yeah!"
"See you!"

She took her seat and hides her face in her hands.

*** Am I wrong in judging people?
Am I wrong in accusing him?
Sistah was hurt, he was angry, what conclusion can I get linking these knots?
What Sistah was saying was true?
What he said was it true?
Am I overreacting?
Should I say sorry?
No! Even if he is not at fault for hurting her physically I will not say sorry. ***


She calms down slowly and gets up from her seat and goes near him.
"Tell me!" he asked seeing a shadow fall over his file.
"I thought that"
"I know what you thought about me." he faced her and there was something different. He couldn't put the finger on what she is expressing "Come here." he said.

*** Why am I like this? ***

- She is confused. Few more weeks and no more problems or confusions. -

She came to his side. He asks her to sit in his lap with his eyes and she does.
He put his around her and asked calmly: "What is troubling you?"
She closed her eyes and gulped the saliva that formed before responding "Us!"

She put her head in his shoulder "I remember that night in Paris." she said calmly.
"Hmmm"
"I don't know what I'm doing."
"Hmmm"
"I... I can't cheat on my sister any more. I... feel like a s**t."
"One more word against you, I don't know what I will do." in a threatening voice.
"I..." tears formed in her eyes and started to gather in the corner.
He held her face in one hand and kissed her eyes stopping tears from rolling.
He kissed her nose.
He trailed up to her left cheek then to her jaw, next to her right cheek.
"Do you feel it wrong?"
She shook her head negatively.
"It's not wrong." he planted his lips over hers without giving time to think.

One hour later, they were laying under the duvet in the room next to their cabin, which has two entrance with security system. One is from a personal lift and the other one from the cabin.

*** Why am I not feeling this wrong?
Why am I not feeling bad about this?
I'm guilty about my actions towards my Sistah but not with my feelings. ***


- I will make everything okay Baby Doll. I will! -

Chakor head was resting over Suraj's shoulder while he was playing with her hair.
"Baby Doll"
"Hmmm"
"Are you ok?"
"Hmmm" closing her eyes.
"Please listen to me calmly!"
"Hmmm"
"Don't work out with your mind until I finish."
"Hmmm"
Taking a deep breath "Imli wanted to stay in our house, so she is staying there.
She was my friend. And she is still my friend. Just friend for me and she know that too.
For the outer world we can be husband and wife but not for me and I assure you it's the same for her too. You are the only one I ever wanted since the moment I saw you.
You can name this as lust but it isn't.
Trust me I will not let you down.
" finished with a kiss on her forehead.

"Do you want to ask something?" he demanded seeing her face and look.
"Why did you marry her?"
"All I could say was said, nothing left. I can't say anything else in this matter."
"Why?" putting her hand on his bare chest.
"I trust you. That's why I said all this. Promise me that you will not pronounce one word of what we discussed here. Promise on me." he asked.
She leaned over him and peeked his lips before smiling and hiding in his chest.

*** I don't know why? Even after all this, I want to trust him.
I want to trust the love I had on him.
I want to trust the love I have on him.
I want to trust him with my body, mind and soul. ***


- You are killing me with that smile of yours Baby Doll. -

That day evening when they went back to the house and the sisters talked to their parents and they all had dinner in the silence of the room before they retired to their room.

When Chakor was about to sleep, she heard a faint knock on her door and she opened it to welcome Suraj in.
Once they settled on the bed, they cuddled, kissed until sleep overtook them.

The Paris Fashion project started and everyone in the company is involved in that.
Suraj and Chakor came closer than before with each passing second.
Days started to move on with regular activities.
And like this 4 weeks flies and their parents are back.

Imli asked her parents if Chakor can stay with her for few more days and they accepted happily knowing the bond between the sisters.
Chakor felt guilty for hiding the most important meaning of her life from her Sistah but does she has a choice?
Suraj was as always happy making everyone run around his world of words.

Time flew away and two more weeks passes.

One day after lunch, Suraj made Chakor sit in his lap with her legs fallen on either sides.
His hand circling her body as the other one was roaming in her hair and hers in his.
He was attacking her lips and moans were echoing in the room.

Minutes later, the door fly open revealing a girl in mid-twenties, standing there with tear in her eyes.
Seeing them in an intimate position made the woman shed more tears and left from there closing the room with a thud.

*******

Thanks for reading friends!
How was it?
Who is the lady? Any idea!
May be the next part can be a shocker for few of you.

Hit the LIKE button & COMMENT if you are waiting for the next.

Next part: Part 13

- Maithili


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