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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: appledesire

When... when.. when. ..

Kab pta chalega.. exactt equation b/w trio...

Suraj is crazy ..I know..

But chakor.. still unable to find her stand..

U know what.. I cant wait much...

Plz update asap

HOho dear!
It will take time!
That's the warning! The message I'm saying since long time, this equation is something difficult to resolve and even to write.
Luck me, I sketched the main plot, else I don't know what I would have been doing.

You are right, Suraj is justifying the title.
Chakor? You will get to know after 5th part.

You have to wait dear! Sorry!
See you soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
This is becoming more and more intriguing plot.
release date for TTW next part? loved it too
Do take your time dear.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

Oohhk so imli stays sleeps in separate room...

Kaha tha na kuch to gadbad hai...
I like chakor with tejasvini and KN...she is so cute...
Very interesting update maithu...
I love it...

Thanks buddy!
Glad u loved this part!
Hope the future updates will be as interesting as this one!
Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Chashmish786

I suck when complimenting so I usually just read the fics and like and then if I'm in a really good mood I comment too. I'm really looking forward to your all Fics and specially this one. As I've said it many times, you're an awesome writer and thinker. As I already told you I suck at complimenting so whatever I said just multiply it by 100 and my compliment for you is ready..😆

+ I get a korean drama "Queen of mystery's " wibes from suraj and Imli's relation. I will not write how and why because if any of my speculation is true the suspense might get spolied and also, I know I'll get to know everything in future updates. 😃


Ho dear!
Thanks a lot for your lovely words!
I'm melting with your compliments dear!

Never saw any Korean dramas.
Will try to read the synopsis of the drama you mentioned.
Let me know if your speculation was right in future.
Glad u like my works.

Thanks a ton once again.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Superb, this story is very interesting.
Suraj and his GM, which home did he expect?
So Imli and Suraj stay in separate room, interesting.
Chakor already calls Teju and KN Mum and Dad, this bodes well for the future.
I think there is a reason Chakor insists on calling Suraj jiju.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.

I think he expected his sassural! What say?
Normally it should be Imli who should call them like that but no pbm.
The reason for Chakor is in the next part.
Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: amrutha131

Awesome👍🏼
Many questions are running in my mind after reading this !!
Will wait for answers😊
How many parts will be in this SS ?

Thanks yaar!
May be you will get answers tomorrow for your questions.
I know that there will be more than 12 parts.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Subi51

This is becoming more and more intriguing plot.

release date for TTW next part? loved it too
Do take your time dear.

Thanks dear!
As I said, I will try to at least post 2 parts of TTW in June.
I mean it starts from tomorrow. And I'm challenging myself for that.
Thanks for insisting on that, else I don't I would have thought of doing something.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Hello everyone!

I'm back with the next part!
Link to previous part: Part 3
Just a small warning:
From here on there would be touch-touch scenes and kisses. I can't warn always. So here it goes.
Read at your own risk and don't blame me. LOL
Happy reading!

*******

Part 4

With that question of Chakor's, Imli avoided eye contact.
"No! I'm not sleeping in a separate room."

*** I saw you Sistah. Why are you lying to me? ***

Chakor leaving her work, turns to her sister's side and holds her by her shoulder
"I can see that you are hiding something from me. I know you are stubborn as much as I'm.
From your face I can tell that you are happy but something is missing between you and Jiju."
"Nothing like that. Suraj is the best man anyone can be with. He loves and cares for everyone."
"What about you Sistah? You must be special? The vibes between you two is nothing like man & woman. I saw you entering the room next to his last night when I came behind you to give your phone."
"I went there just to take my night dress."
"I waited 30 minutes outside the room but you didn't show up. Even if it's for your dress, why is it in a separate room?"
"It was just"
"Tell me when you want. I will always there for you. By the way, did you charged you phone this morning, it went off around the same time." cutting her sister in between.
"Hmmm" she nodded showing her phone.

*** She is one stubborn woman. And yeah, like me. ***

Chakor started to cut vegetables while Imli started to cook.
"Morning ladies! Can I get my morning coffee please?" Asked Suraj to no one in particular as he took a place in the kitchen stool from where he can see the whole place.
"Morning" said Imli.
"I will say pre-afternoon!" smiling to herself.
"My coffee?" he reminded.
"Chakor can you please make it. I will continue cooking."
"Okay!"

Chakor turned to her left, opened the door of the kitchen cabinet which is above the oven to take the coffee powder box.

- Oh my sexy lady! -

Once she done with it, she sets it back.
And the coffee was served in front of Suraj within minutes.
"Saree suits you!" he complimented.
"Thanks Ji Thank you!" and she went back to cutting her precious vegetables until they were disturbed by a call for Imli.

"I got to take this call. You just cut the vegetables, I will be back." saying so, she turned off the gaz and made her way out.
"Who is it Sistah?"
"Annie. I told you yesterday I'm going for her marriage next week. May be it's for shopping." and she is already out of Chakor's view.

- Nice timing. -

Chakor was humming a song and doing her work until...

He snakes his left hand over her bare waist through the saree while he blocks her way of escaping by placing his other hand on the kitchen slab.

*** Who the hell is this? ***

With the sudden contact on her waist and the hot breath fanning on her left shoulder, she jerked in her place and tries to free herself when she got shocked seeing the person stuck to her back.
The only word that escaped her mouth is "Jiju!" all the while struggling to free herself.

*** Did he take me as Sistah?
No! He saw her go. ***

"You look sexy in this." he said sucking her cheeks when she is shaking her whole body to get out of his hold.
"Leave me!"
"If that was the case I wouldn't been doing this." with his lips over her visible shoulder.

- You taste good Doll. -

"What are you doing? Leave me!" stamping on his foot.
"I'm doing what I wanted to do since you came."

- Wanted to do more than this but this is more than enough for now. -

"Ahaaa" he yelped leaving Chakor free and holding his right hand with his left as blood is coming from the cut she gave him.
"Don't come near me!" showing the knife, she went away from him.
"If I come."
"I will kill you."
"You won't!"
"I will tell my sister!"

"I want you!" he announced.
"You can't do that!" she yelled with anger visible through her red eyes, holding a knife in her hand.
"I can do more than that Doll!" he informed her.
"Pervert!"
He smirked and left from there and she collapsed on the floor.

- Take time to sink this event. Will be back Baby Doll. -

Few minutes after she gathered herself and went to the bathroom inside her room and closed it behind her.
Standing under the shower, she let her tears merge with water.

*** He can't do this.
He can't do this to my sister.
I can see love in Sistah's eyes even when she is not speaking about him or she is not around him.

I have to go from here. ***

TOK TOK. TOK TOK.

"Honey! Annie said she wanted me immediately. I asked Suraj, he said he is going to order pizza for you both. I will be back around 3. Then, we can go for shopping and once back we will cook dinner." Imli said once the sound of shower stopped.
"And ahaan I cleaned kitchen. See you!" she added before leaving from there.

*** How long have I been here?

I need to go from here.
I need to go away from here.

It's wrong.
It's unethical.

I have to speak to her.
I have to. ***

She was still in the bathroom when someone entered her room and went inside her walk-in-closet.

Chakor came out of the bathroom with a towel around her and went near her bed, lifted the pillow revealing a diary.

She took it and opened it.

"I thought you were as good as everyone think about you.
I thought you were as best as I always thought about you.
I loved you more than anything, even more than myself until I came to know I can never be yours.
I dreamt a lot about myself with you until I got to know I don't have right to dream about you.

I lost the rights to even pronounce your name.
I lost my dreams.
I lost you." tears started to form in her eyes.

"I don't know if you remember the first time we met.

I accidentally bumped into someone and I lost the balance of my fish pot, I was scared to lose my golden fish, my only friend, my life.
You were the one who took it safely and gave it back to me.
I didn't see your face that day but I saw your bracelet with initials written on it. That day I learned that if a fish can hold this much importance in my life. How much important I must be to my parents with whom I fought to have a bike.
I immediately rushed home and made up for my behaviour with my parents.

Since that day I searched you, I didn't know why but I wanted to see you.

I met you again 2 months after in a success party of my father's friend's company.
There, I was about to fall when I stepped on a kid's toy when you held me from kissing the floor.
When I was about to move after I thanked you, our bracelets got attached. That's when I saw the same initials, I was doing somersault in my head like a crazy teenager.
Once you freed my hand, you turned away and went from there as someone said your mother was waiting for you." tears rolling down her cheeks.

"That day I lost my bracelet in that party. Along with that I also lost a most important factor of my life too.
I got to know who you were and what you were doing.
From that day, I started to read economical magazines and to watch channels corresponding to you domain just to follow you.
I became a crazy fan-lover of a young businessman I met twice in my life." she laughed a mocking laugh to herself.

"My parents had an attack seeing me interested in business while I was used to watch cartoons.
My sister was suspicious about my activities whenever we came face to face.
All the whole, I became a new Chakor without my knowledge." caressing the page.

"It feels like yesterday but now I regret why I met you.
I was happy with my life until you came back into my life." hugging the open diary close to her heart.

"If you wanted me when you were the person I knew I would have given myself to you.
But now, you are not someone I want to be with.
You are not someone with whom I can be with." she closed the diary and pushed away the rest of her tears.
She got up leaving the diary on the bed.

"I hate myself for loving you.
I hate you for making me hate you.
I hate you Suraj."

*******

Thanks for reading buddies!
Hope you got few of your answers.
Did you thought she would have a past like this?
LIKE & COMMENT if you are eager to know what's coming up!
Next part Part 5

- Maithili


Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Interesting. ..

So.. sukor love each other..

Suraj.. is crazy .. because .. he wants chakor aftr knowing their current relationship status...

But chakor baby is in dilemma...

*fingers crossed* ..lets see what secret imli goin to unfold..

When I start reading... I found suraj... not a hero.. I dint like the way he behave. . But till end. Opinion changed...

This is the essence of ur story * expect the unexpected* & enjoy a lot..

One more thing..

I think pizza is suraj fav.. he order it every now @CaY @ToFM 😆

like this chapter...
Edited by appledesire - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
It was superb di..
I got to know tat chakor loves suraj before itself
Her feeling for him was awesome..
I think suraj also fell for her at tat time itself..
Suraj has more guts..eventhough her wife s in the same house..he was romancing her sister publicly..LOL
But who entered her room..
For ur qs..i never thought she will have the past like tis..
Eagerly waiting for next update..sis
Love u and take care..
Edited by Sania_suraj - 8 years ago

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