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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: vs215blooms
Amazing maithu...😊 God, chakor already loves suraj... She develops her business knowledge for him... Chakor is awesome... Does suraj know about that??? May be he know, so hhe was attracted by her... What i think was, suraj is not imli's husband... Imli and suraj hide something or someone... Chakor is in big confusion and hatred after suraj's encounter in kitchen... Is suraj entered her room??? Beautifully written maithu... 😊 waiting for the next part...and thanks for pm... 👏

Thanks a lot dear!

May be your hypothesis could be true as much as not!

No opening anything here!

Hope you will like the future parts too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
So sukor had a past😊
Loved the feelings of chakor described in the diary😊
I think both fall in love at that time😊
Suraj was bold enough to romance chakor when imli was still in house😉
Curious to know the mystery about imli
Chakor hates suraj for his behaviour in kitchen, let see how their love story shape up
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!

I'm glad you loved everything related to them.

I thought to send Imli out but it wouldn't be as interesting as now. LOL

Hypothesis couldn't be confirmed now! You will know in future!

It will take a long route for them to go!

Next update tomorrow!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Interesting update!

So Chakor is in love with Suraj and he's attracted to her. I wonder if he'll find out about her feelings.

Was it Suraj who was hiding in her closet?

Loved the part describing how she fell in love with him , that's why shr insists on calling him jiju.

I felt for Chakor, seeing the man she loves, flirting with her and betraying her sister. How will she work with him after what happened? Will her hatred show in her behavior with him?

Thanks for the PM, looking forward to the next part.

Thanks buddy!

The answer for your question is in the next 2/3 parts.

She is so sensitive, that's why she insist but he is adamant!

It's her destiny!

Who wrote it! You will find in future!

For the question about her behaviour, the answer is explicitly in the next part that I will finish tomorrow.

Thanks once again buddy!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Superb👍🏼
So both are crazy about each other😉
Eagerly waiting for next !

Thank u dear!

Craziness in a couple is something I love so trying it with Sukor!

Will be updating by this evening!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: appledesire
Maithu dee... iam ready for surprises...

Anyways.
Current relationship (sil bil)aftr knowing this.. he still want her , behind her..dare to touch her..offer job to her.. I know... it can be lust..
But
I found his actions.. like a crazy lover..

Soo..
May Or may not..he love her... whatever it is..
Iam sure.. it would to great fun to read..

WAITIN...

I understand sis what you are saying!

Like The crazy lover Suraj that e want to see in soap!

Surprises are fun but sometimes you may not like it!

So you have to tell me how you find every parts! Whenever possible!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Tq..Pls reveal the persons identity in the next part di..can't wait upto 6th..

May be you will get to know even if I don't say!

So no worries!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Hello dear!

Hope you are all doing good!
Here is the next part of CAY!
Link for previous part: Part 4

Happy reading!

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Part 5

"I hate you." she went inside the walk-in-closet and picked a dress from her bag and went in front the mirror and got into a simple dress.

The person in the closet has tears rolling down with closed eyes hearing what Chakor said.

She left her room and went downstairs to pick her phone from kitchen.

*** I don't think that 2 minutes of encounter from that party is still in his mind.
In that case or not, he is a player and playing with my sister and now want to use me as a toy.
I need to prevent Sistah. ***

She was making her way upstairs typing a message to her sister when someone grabbed her hand.
She pulled away her hand and lifted her head to come face to face with her BIL only to notice that she is caged with his hands on either side of her, holding the handrails.
Her phone landed on the floor and she was staring at his eyes giving competition.

"You are my sister's husband and you can't behave like this with me."
"In that case you must have heard that tagline for wife's sister's saying them to be their BIL's half-wife. Sooo you are my HALF-WIFE." pressing the last word.

*** Not as you think mister. I hate myself for liking this monster. ***

- Why half-wife? Just wife! That will be good. -

"That doesn't mean you can behave as you wish."
"I can and I will."
"You shouldn't. And I will never let."
"We will see!" he smirked and took hold of her hand by her wrist "I need to talk." and started to pull her towards his room.

*** Talk in which sense? ***

"Leave me alone. I don't want to talk with you. I have to talk to my sister. Leave me." she struggled without any use.
He smirked.
"I'm breaking my internship contract with your company." she announced.
"Decision overruled Doll! You are late in deciding."
"I can!"
"Not in my company! You remember the article 2.3.3? No problem, I will sum-up. You can't interrupt the contract until you give a valid reason which is related to you and only you. Even if it's an internship.
In case you say you got internship in some other company with nice package, don't forget that I'll do something to make you to be in front of me even if it's your father's company."

*** I'm really stuck now. My Sistah or my internship? ***

They entered inside his room and he pushed her over his bed and went to close the door.
"What are you doing? I will scream?" she was moving backwards as she saw him nearing his bed.

*** Is he trying to... No no no! I can't let him. ***

He sat on the corner of his bed facing her.
"I will not do anything to you until you ask me to do it."
She laughed for her situation and said "Never!"

*** Am I going to trust his words? ***

"You are going to live with me here, in this house from now on."
"Do you think that will happen?"

*** Live here with him. My BIL! Sistah's husband. With a beast. Never! ***

- I will make it happen Sweetheart! -

"Of course!" he answered sincerely.
"If you wanted a mistress. Why did you marry my sister? Why are you cheating on her now?
Along with you, you want me to cheat her?"
"Not a mistress."
"It's not like you are asking me to be your lover or wife. You are bloody already married with my sister."
"I gave your sister what she wanted and I didn't want anything in return from her. So neither you are cheating nor I'm."
"I see." she said sarcastically.

*** If he says, is it going to happen? I'm not going to stay here once my sister comes back. ***

"Listen! I want you for myself. I give you two choices." he informed.
"I also can give you 2 choices. One, say bye to this lustful creature of yours. Two, say bye to your family and prestige, I'm going to ruin it."
"Who is going to ruin who, Baby Doll?"
"You don't even have rights to call me by my name, you Animal."
"I have all rights."
"No!" she started to get out of the bed.
"One step on the floor. Consequences will be unbearable."

*** What can he do? Threaten me? With what? ***

"Let me see." she got out and moved towards the door when she was pulled back by his hard hand which made her land on his bed.

- Let's play it together Doll. -

He jumped over her blocking her legs, holding her hands over her head with one hand and other one caressing her left cheek.
"You beast! Move!" struggling.
"Don't make it worse Doll!"
"Can it get even worse?"
"Not for you but Your.Family.Including.Your.Sistaaah!"

*** Family! Sistah! Is he going to hurt them? NOOO! ***

She stopped struggling and her eyes widened.

- Got you with your weakness Baby Doll! -

He smirked and said:
"Family business! Sister's life! 50% shareholder! Father, a heart patient! From where do you want me to start?" in a threatening tone which scared the hell out of her.
He shifted besides her leaving her free, still facing her with his head in his hand in the balance of his elbow.

"No one will be hurt if you do what I say." tracing his left hand thumb over her lips.

She shivered under his touch but managed to ask "What?"
He smile and put his arm around her waist "Be here with me."
"Until?"
"Will tell!"
"How can I trust you?"

*** How can I trust him that he will not back-stab me as he is doing with my Sistah?
How can Papa be careless? He made this monster 50% of shareholder in all his business. Agrrr ***

"I trust you that you will not say anything to anybody. I.Mean.No.One. Same way, you have to."
She nodded.
"I promise! I will not hurt you. You must be only mine. If everything goes well between us, everything around us will also go well."
She nodded.
"I don't trust papers. I trust words and actions." he pulled her towards him.
She seemed confused.

- Let's see Doll, what you have in store for me? -

"Kiss me Doll!" he brought his face over hers.
She shook her head.
"I'm not asking you! I telling you to do." he came even more closer to her face. Their breath merged into one.
She shook her head taking hold of his collar.

*** No! It's wrong! He is my sister's husband. No! ***

"Kiss me!"
He brushed his lips against hers and she started to kiss him with what felt like love. But for who?
He was surprised that she kissed him but pushed it away in seconds and enjoyed her ride over his lips.
With each passing seconds, the kiss become more and more intense with her grip loosen from his shirt collar with both hands travelling over his nuke. One hand rested there and other started to roam in his hair.

- She tastes more like a strawberry than a cherry. -

They kissed giving their life in it until they became breathless.
Suraj rested his forehead on her, then peeked her there after gaining his breath.
Chakor has her eyes closed and a lone tear escaped from the corner of her eyes which didn't went unnoticed by Suraj.
He sucked that tear and asked her to join him for lunch.

*** I did a sin.

A sin I will never be able to remove from me.

I should have died instead of being alive and doing things I shouldn't.

I hate myself. ***

- These tears will not last long Doll! It's my promise to myself. -

He made her sit on his lap and opened the pizza box which he got before getting her into his room.
He made her eat it and he had it too.

"Do you want to do anything Doll?"
She shook her head.
"Go and rest. Think about how to stay with me here until your sister come back."
She got up to leave. He held her wrist and made her bend a little to bring their face at equal height.
He gave her a small kiss and let go of her wrist.

*** Where am I stuck? ***

Around 3PM Imli came back and found Suraj in hall with his laptop on his lap, Chakor's room door locked.
She changed into something confortable and started to chat on Skype until Chakor came to her room at 5:49.
"Sorry Sistah!"
"For sleeping?" she asked with a smile.
She shook her head in all direction.
"Oh my angel. Don't worry we will go for shopping some other day." hugging her sister.
"How is Annie?"
"She is stressed."
"Why?" breaking the hug.
"They may prepone the wedding for next week!"
"She is in love with him. So there must be no problem if it's today or tomorrow."
"I see my sister is becoming expert in love."

*** If only you know what is happening around you. ***

"Nothing like that."
"It's regarding arrangements."
"Oh!"
"They will know it tomorrow and if it's confirmed to be on coming Thursday, we have to leave to Goa tomorrow evening itself."
"Hmmm!" lost in thoughts.
"What are you thinking?"
"Hmmm Nothing! Just that I wanted to spend more time with you."
"Don't worry honey. Once I'm back I will ask Ma and Papa to let you here with me for few days or I will come there."
She nodded.
"Come let's go and prepare the diner. Uncle and Aunt could be on their way back."

*** God! Please make him stay in his room! I don't want to see him now. Please! ***

She nodded and they went down to kitchen.
On their way there, she saw him over his laptop. Silently, she followed her sister.

"Suraj! Do you want anything?" Imli asked from kitchen entrance.
From where Suraj is, he can see the whole kitchen.
"I would like to have the same coffee as this morning." he said looking straight at Chakor who was waiting to know what he was going to say, standing behind Imli.
"Okay!" she smiled and turned to Chakor's side and asked her to prepare coffee for all.

*** My fate! ***

- She looks even more sexy when angry. And even more when she can't show it. -

Chakor started preparing coffee while being fully aware of the fact that Suraj is observing her moves.
Imli started to kneel the dough.

Once coffee prepared, she put her cup and her sister's on the side and went towards Suraj who was smiling at her.
She stared menacingly at him but that didn't affect him.

When she was near him, he pretended to work, so she has to call him to take his coffee as Imli might be watching them.
"Coffee!"
No action only smirk.
"Take your coffee!"
Nothing.
"She is watching us, take it!"

*** Rip his smirk. Not only smirk, even him. ***

- Let's play Baby! Let's play! -

"Please take this cup!" she said lifting his head with her hand.
"Were you talking to me?" lifting his head.
"Do you see any ghost here? I can only see a beast." acting serious.
"No Doll!" smirking.
She shook her head.
"She won't hear what we talk."
"It's wrong!"
"Everything is fair in Love & Lust! Is it Love or Lust Doll?"
"A heartless person shouldn't talk about Love! Take this cup, I have to go."
"If you want I can talk to Imli, she will be ok to leave you with me. You see?"
She again shook her head.

*** How dare her? ***

- I dare everything Baby Doll. Everything! -

"Give me a kiss or call me by my name, I will take my coffee."
"Never!"
"Your choice Babe!"
"Ugggh Suraj!" frustrated.
"Yes Baby Doll!"
"Take this coffee!"
"Ahaan?"
"Suraj.Please.Take.This.Suraj!"
"It would have been nice with a smile but no problem." he took his cup from the tray and she escaped running from there which gained a chuckle from Suraj.

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- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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