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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Paris for honeymoon...wow perfect destination for lovers...

Sweet surprise but I don't think chakor like it... I don't understand why Suraj can't say her directly he loves her a lot... Problem hi khatam...

Wonderful update dear... Now I'm liking this story more...

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Chakor is so confused between her heart & mind😆
Suraj is aware of chakor's confused state & taking the advantage of her😉
Loved chakor's monologue about suraj & his family
What is suraj hiding from chakor
Waiting for next

Thanks dear!

The evil Suraj he is, I don't know how Chakor is going to manage with him in Paris.

The hiding part is suspense. LOL

I will try to update it by tomorrow morning or afternoon.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Interesting👍🏼
About surprise,I thought he would make her sign some contract,but I was surprised to see Visa papers
Would love to see Paris through ur writing !
Waiting for next !

Thanks yaar!

Glad you find it interesting.

I hope you will like the visit and the surprise.

May be you have judged him quickly. Or not! I don't know!

See you tomorrow.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Fine di..
How r u?
It was an awesome update..
I became mad on suraj..eventhough he s arrogant..i love him a lot..
While reading i can feel the suraj touches on chakor..here i got a goosebumbs..
For me it s a surprise..tat wat is the truth he speaking about?
Becoz i know when he said abt honeymoon tat he s going to take her to paris nly..lol
I love paris so excited for next part..
And also waiting for wat suraj s going to do with chakor..
I am waiting..😃

Great dear!

Thanks a lot dear!

I know Suraj is unhateable. LOL

That's a big thing that my writing affect you. I mean Suraj affect you.

Ah the truth! May be in the next part.

Hope you like the tour.

Ah dear if only you know what this Suraj is planning.

Will be on time for tomorrow.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing update!

The dialogue between Chakor's heart and mind was awesome. She wants to hate him so badly but can't.

I hope Suraj doesn't push things forward between them before the whole truth is out.

Can't wait for their Paris trip.

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you liked the conversation between her mind and heart.

Hope you will like the Paris trip!

For now most of the characters in my writings are truth to their words, so here anything is possible only when 2 hands claps.

You see what I mean.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: appledesire
Wow..
Excellent work..

I just cannot believe. . *paris* superb surprise. .

Mind v/s heart dilemma.. another one of my fav part..

Such a thin difference b/w lust & love.. chakor def of love = suraj lust..

Dee.. can't wait for nxt update..

Again... chakor inner turmoil is so evident. . Shes confused b/w her feelings & whts right ?..

Suraj.. can't he simply tell her.. how much he love her.. he always demanding physicl pleasure. .thats y.. wo zyada scary n wrong lagta hai..

But I know... whenever.. he disclose his feelings. .the real truth.. uska alag e mza ayega...
Moreover.. he cnt do anythng w/o chakor consent.. but I still hope she shud nt easily givein..

I just want.. broken chakor.. crying her heart.. n then wanna see.. wht shud b suraj take..his lusty side.. or the caring??

* enjoyed loads*
Dhanyavaad dee

Thanks a lot dear sis!

Glad you liked it a lot and see through their characters.

This Chakor might be fully emotional but she will not let it affect in front of him. May be depending on circonstances.

Hope you like the upcoming parts.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Paris for honeymoon...wow perfect destination for lovers...
Sweet surprise but I don't think chakor like it... I don't understand why Suraj can't say her directly he loves her a lot... Problem hi khatam...
Wonderful update dear... Now I'm liking this story more...

Thanks buddy!

Glad you are liking this story!

Hope I give a valid reason why Suraj isn't opening up.

If she like the surprise or not! In next part!

See u tomorrow!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Hey!

How are you all?
Hope you are liking how the story is moving.
I have an interesting info for you all. May be for few of you all.
We are going to visit Paris with our favourite Pair.
There are links of pictures of those few places from my Instagram in this part.
Click if you want to get a view.
Back to the story!
Link to previous part: Part 8
Happy reading.

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Part 9

*** He brought me to Paris.
Should I say thank you or yell at him?
Arghh! ***

"Let's move Baby Doll! We have to go to a place after."
"Where?" with attitude while climbing down the stairs.
"Surprise!" he whispered near her ear making her shiver. "The climate is just perfect a little sunny with breeze. Just a jacket will be enough. What say?" he asked her when they neared a car parked just next to the plane.

*** Is this real? Am I in Paris?
And that too with the person I dream of to be with.
But. Why Paris?
Why? ***

- Finally landed in the land of Love as it's called. -

When he turned to her side, he found her walk like a statue with an expression that he can't describe.
"Baby Doll! What happened?" shaking her a little by her shoulder.
"You happened!" still in daze.
He smirked and laughed which brought her out of her land.
"Why... why Paris? Is... it because I asked?" praying to god it shouldn't be.
"Hmmm Yes & No!" opening the car door for her.
Seeing her questioning look, he continued:
"No as we have to attend a fashion show here tomorrow. Yes, as you are here with me." taking his seat and the car started to move.

*** How am I supposed to react now?
Enjoy? Or Hide my likings? ***

- Even if there wasn't any client, I would have brought you here. -

He took her left hand in his and played with her fingers while she was looking out through window discovering the place from the airport Charles de Gaulle to Paris.
It took approximately 40 minutes to reach the most prestigious hotel near Le Palais de l'Elysee.
The door of the car was opened when it stopped in front of the entrance and both got down saying 'Hello' to the workers. Suraj went to Chakor's side and asked her to make the first step after holding her hand.

They made their way to the reception and checked-in to the room which was reserved for them.
Their bags were sent to their room few seconds after.

The room was huge with a kind of hall and a room with attached bathroom.
Chakor felt like being in a dreamland as whenever they go somewhere, they would be staying at their relatives' house or she will get a simple hotel room for her.

*** I feel like it's a palace with all the paintings and decors.
Is he planning something?
I should be aware! I should. ***

- The expression in her face says that she like the room.
Hope she feels comfortable too. -

"Doll! Go and freshen up! We have to go out." getting her back from her dreamland.
"Ahaan?"
"Freshen up Baby Doll!" settling on the couch in the hall.

She went inside the room with her luggage and took the necessary items before entering the bathroom.
She took almost 30 minutes to shower and change into a simple dress which reached ankle.
Once she was out, Suraj got in saying: "Looking sexy as ever!"
She muttered "Pervert!"

He came in a simple jeans and shirt and grabbed his jacket from the bed before getting out of the room to find Chakor examining the paintings present in the room.
He took his phone out and clicked few pics of her without her knowledge and went near her.
Putting his hands around her waist, he back hugged her, kissing her neck, sending shiver down her spine.

"You said we have to go out!" with closed eyes.
"If you look like this tempting. How can I resist?"
"Beast!"
"Yes Beauty!"
"I hate you!"
"I Lust You Baby Doll!"
"Agrrhhh"
"Come let's go!" he freed her and entwined their hands as he passed her jacket which was on the couch before exiting their room.

*** Always saying something and spoiling my already spoilt mood.
Is he doing it wantedly?
Agrrr! ***

- If I didn't plan this evening I would have loved to just cuddle with you.
No problem! The surprise I have for you is better than everything. -

Suraj already informed the driver about their schedule.
So once in the car, she started to examine the view of Paris being aware of his piercing eyes and him nearing her with his hand around her waist.

They were in their own world with Chakor enjoying the view and having a fight between her heart and mind while Suraj enjoying each second of his life for being with her.
They both came out to the real world as the car came to a halt near Seine.
Chakor lifted her head a little to find the Lady in the beautiful glory and she squealed in excitement which brought a smile in Suraj's face.
She got down without waiting and Suraj followed her action after telling the driver to be in the corner and he will call him.

*** Seeing it for the first time in real and I feel like I have the Eiffel Tower at night all to myself. ***

- Seeing her this excited tells me that my decision to bring her here was not a bad idea. -

Suraj took hold of her hand and went a little away from the place where they were dropped to have the full view.
Chakor took her phone out and started to snap photos of herself with different faces. He smiled for her childish behaviour and pulled away the phone from her hand and took his phone to take pic of both of them as by now he was holding her by her shoulder.

*** Should I say thank you? No! He is for sure up to something.
I can feel that from his smiles and smirks.
Have to wait! ***

- I'm so happy today. My Doll is with me in the city of Love and the best part is she is happy and not complaining. -

Once the photo session finished, they made their way to the lift.
Riding in the elevator to the top while Chakor is experiencing as flying through the Tower's metallic skeleton.
As the elevator moves, they start to see flashes of the city shrinking below them. When it comes to a stop, the view is maddeningly beautiful.

It was time for sunset. As the sky darkens, the city of Paris begins to grow brighter. It didn't take long for the buildings below to light up in wonderful, intricate patterns.

*** Never imagined this would arrive.
I'm standing on ET with the Man I wanted to be with?
But not fully happy.
Yeah! I'm happy that I here but not like this under blackmailing and him being Mr. Lust. ***

- It's not the first time I'm here but it's the first for us to be here.
It's just perfect. -

There they took few picks before admiring the magnificent view in front of them.
Suraj had his left hand around her, making her lean on him.
After few minutes of contemplation, he turned her to his side and locked his eyes with his Lady who is standing on the Lady everyone admires.

"Do you like it?"
"Hmmm"
"We will come tomorrow to see the morning view before going for the meeting."
She smiled with butterflies ruling her tummy.
"I thought it was an imaginary client."
He smiled and said "I would have loved if that was the case. We could have spent all our time together."
Her smile disappeared and something new replaced it.
"Can we?" he asked.

She brought her right hand around his neck, leaning over him and being aware that what she is doing is not right. The hesitation was visible as she stopped in mid-way, so Suraj taking charge of the situation, got to the target, her lips. They kissed and kissed bringing life to the scene.

Suraj took her left hand in his and they continued their action until Chakor pulled away as she felt something sliding in her ring finger.

*** What is he doing? ***

- Finally the time arrived. -

Seeing a beautiful simple ring with CSR marked behind when she turned her hand.
"What is this ring for? And this inscription on the ring?"
"It's to symbolize you are mine Mrs. Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi." with a satisfied smirking smile.
She didn't understand a word.
"We are married!" he added.
Her jaw dropped down, so he has to close it with his index finger, lifting her cheek.
"We are legally married since Monday."
"It's illegal to have 2 wives!"
He smirked.
"How?" she asked still in shock.
"The document you signed."
"You criminal."

"Excuse-me" a man around 40 came to them.
"Yes" Suraj.
"I took a picture of you both. You are looking adorable in it; Would you like to want it?"
"How can you take our photo without our" Suraj stopped in his track as he saw the beautiful picture of both of them kissing with a breath taking view in background "How much is this?" he asked.
"10 please!" the man.
"Yeah sure!" he gave the money to the man and he moved away from there.

*** How can he do this to me? And Sistah?
She will be heartbroken when she will come to know. ***

Chakor was having a disgusted look on her face.
"What is your problem Baby Doll?"
"You! Why did you do this to me and"
He put his index finger over her lips, cutting her words.
"We have to go now." saying this he took hold of her hand and brought her to the same place where they were dropped few hours ago.

Chakor wasn't giving a damn to him as she was extremely angry.
Understanding the situation, he let her be in her space for the rest of the night.
She wasn't hungry so she just got a sandwich and orange juice to their room while he ordered a full menu to celebrate the day.

She slept in the corner of bed, being shocked that he hadn't compiled her to do anything today. But he knows that in her sleep she will move to the middle of the bed where he is purposely sleeping now.

Morning they woke up in their normal position and Suraj just peeked her lips before entering the bathroom.

*** Was it different from what he does every morning?
Is it because
Wake up Girl!
He is using you and nothing else.
No love and No Trust!
He is cheating your sister and you are his partner in crime in it. ***

They both got ready and had breakfast before exiting the hotel room.
She is still annoyed over the fact that he is taking her for granted and playing with her sister.
He on the other side was more than calm and composed.

They directly went to see the The elegant beauty - Sacre Couer from where a different view of Paris can be seen. There they got to know that the view of this Basilique in night is extraordinary.

Then they got back to see the Lady with pride in the morning light to remember the moment they spent there the day before.
For Her it's was to remember the information she got yesterday about her being not single anymore.
And for Him, beautiful memories for their sweet time.

From there, they made their way to see the Largest intersection in the world where 12 streets running down their way. He made her walk up to the top the monument (i.e. +250 steps to climb) to see the model of Arc de Triompe which represented what they saw when they were out.
From the top floor of the monument, they could see all the important places all around the monument.

Once they finished dealing with this, they went to one last monument to see the Masterpiece of Gothic architecture which is situated near the Seine with splendid look, Notre Dame de Paris. When they got out of it, the climate was cloudy but it wasn't a big deal as they are going for the client meeting along with a fashion show after freshening up..

All this time, Chakor was in her own closed world as she was hurt, hurt by the man she loved. Whenever he held her hand, she snatched it away from him.

Chakor went first to get ride of the tiredness. She was inside when she got a call on Whatsapp. Seeing it was Imli, she picked it.
"Hey Honey! How are you?"
"Fine Sistah and you?"
"Why are you dull Honey?"
"Nothing" making herself believe she is happy.
"Ok! So tell me! How is the trip going on?"

*** It's one hell of a trip when I'm in a place I love with the only man in my life but he is yours.
How is it now, you say? ***

"Nice!" opening the door cleaning her face with towel, using one hand and other one for phone "We are in Paris!" she collides with a hard rock, leaving the towel fall down from her hand to hold on something, better someone and as she was about to fall when the person took hold of her by her waist and took hold of her phone, she was holding in her left hand which made her press the speaker button unintentionally.
"What! Paris! OMG! You must be kidding Honey! You said you will go there only for your honeymoon?"

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Thanks buddies!
How was the visit, dears?
Hope you enjoyed the ride.
Did you find the surprise in this part?
Was it a shock or surprise?
Do you think they are really going to have a real honeymoon?
Do you think our Lady will give in to him?

Waiting for the next part? Me too!
LIKE & COMMENT your opinions!
Next Part: Part 10

If you want to see other places, here is my Instagram id: immaithu_

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Thanks for pm

Interesting update👏

Sukor are married😲

So the papers were related to sukor marriage😲

Chakor is bound to hate suraj as suraj is not clearing chakor's confusion🥱

Loved the description of paris👏

Is the paris trip their honeymoon😲

Waiting for mystery to solve

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SilverLove.

@SilverLove.

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Awsome di

amazing i loved it .

it was simply super .

thank u so much for taking us on a tour to paris .

i really loved it very much and i came to know more about paris .😊.

will u reveal the mystery about suraj and imli relationship in next part?

and i have lot of question circling in my mind

does imli really loves suraj ?

ok i will wait for ur answer.

this part is really written beautifully .

maithu di sorry for not commenting in ur stories . because now a days i am little busy with my studies .u know what now even 11th STD students should write public exam 😭.

but i will definitely comment when i get time 😃

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Edited by pershial - 8 years ago