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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey!


Here is the 1st part of CAY!
Don't blame that I'm not warning you.
This is like an introduction to the story.
Happy reading!

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Part 1

"Sistah" a girl jumped over another girl who just opened the main door.
"Chakor! When did you come? Why didn't you tell me? Where are our parents? How is your studies?"
"Oh Oh! Stop blasting with your question! Won't you welcome me to your house?"
"Come!" taking Chakor's hand in hers, she makes her get in and made her sit on the couch as she took a place near her.

*** I'm so happy for my Sistah. Can see the happiness in her eyes.
And this house is full of positive vibes. ***

"Time to answer Sistah! I came yesterday from Australia. I wanted to surprise you and my Jiju. Mom and Dad are doing their favorite work. I finished my studies; I mean I have only an internship to do."

"Imli! Who is that?" a lady in her 50's emerged from what seemed like kitchen.
"Aunty! My sister Chakor is here." getting up.

*** She must be her MIL. She looks great at this age. ***

Chakor gets up from her place and takes the elder lady's blessing.
"I'm Suraj's mother."
"I'm Chakor aunty! The world's best sister!" grinning seeing Imli smile.
"Best sister! Interesting dear! Your sister told me you were studying in Australia. How are your studies going on?"
"Good aunty! I have to finish my internship and then all good! And I also heard about. You are a great mother, my Sistah told me."
"Good to hear that but I'm not happy with your sister."
"Tell me aunty, I will teach her lessons to be a good DIL!" hands over her hips while Imli is smiling at the lady.

*** What can it be?
My sis is someone so sweet! I have to wait to know. ***

"Tell her to call me Ma or Mom!"

*** That's it! I thought it was something big. ***

"That's it! I thought I have to take 2 days of lessons." smiling widely.
Turning to her sister's side: "You are disappointing her with this small thing. She is your mom too now, so call her like she wishes."
"I like to call her Aunty! Sorry!" Imli replied making baby face.

*** I can see that she will not give up on this matter. It's a simple ting, why making a big affair. ***

"I will get her something." Imli said before disappearing from there.
"You see, I'm telling her to call me like that since 1 month, the day she came here and she is still not ready." Suraj's mother complained.
"Don't worry aunty! If you want I will call you Mom! What say?" winking.

*** It's not a big deal if it makes her happy. ***

"And me Papa or Dad if you call her Mom!" exclaimed a man who is coming downstairs.

*** Competion starts. Yahooo! He must be uncle. ***

Chakor's happy expression turns into a questioning one.
"Suraj's father." Lady answered.
"Teju! Who is this young lady we have?" he asked joining the duo.

*** They make an exemplary couple I think. ***

Chakor's takes his blessing.
"Sure Dad!"
"Kamal, She is the world's best sister Chakor, Imli's sister." Teju answered teasing Chakor.
"Oh I see!" Kamal.

*** I don't want to be their teasing statue. ***

"Nice name Kamal and Teju!" Chakor smiled like a child.
"It's Tejaswini and Kamal Narayanan dear!" KN smiled warmly at her.
"Are you ready to go for shopping?" KN asked turning to his wife.
"Always!" Tejaswini answered.

*** Did I real heard him? Shopping? Him? With Aunt? How? Did I missed something in this world. I thought Men don't like to go shopping with their ladies. That's what they show on TV and that's what I heard from my friends. I should voice it out. ***

"You shopping? With Aunty?" Chakor said shocked.
"Mom!" Teju warned.
"Ahann with Mom?" facing KN.
"It's normal!" KN.
"Nooo! It's 8th wonder of this world that a man go with his wife for shopping Unc I mean Dad."
"It's a normal thing for Rajvanshis" KN said with an affectionate smile.
"Sistah is lucky!"
"You will too!" Teju said placing her hand over Chakor's shoulder.

*** Hope so! But I don't think I will have that chance in this life. ***

"Carry on with your plans. I will have my time with Sistah!" Chakor.
"See you! Come back whenever possible dear!" Teju said giving a motherly kiss on her forehead.
"Take care Sweetheart! Miss us!" KN said and took hold of Teju's hand before dragging her out of the house.

*** They are really lovely. ***

"Mom and Dad are really a cute couple!" Chakor announced once she saw Imli approaching her.
"Mom Dad?"
"I mean Jiju's mom and dad!"
"Yeah they are really adorable!"
"In that case you could call them as they wish."
"I don't want to."
"You are stubborn."
"As if you are not!"
"When it comes to family, I will let anyone win over me. You know that?"

*** Family comes first. ***

"Take this!"
Taking a cookie: "Tell me why did you never told me about your love? Am I that distant from you. I know how much you love your hubby but that must not be the reason for him to come between us."

*** She got married to the love of her life 1 month before without our parents consent and I wasn't even informed until she called me to tell that she moved out of our home.
Now I want to know why she hide her love story from me. ***

"It's not that! I was scared of"
"Our parents but what about me?" completing the phrase.

*** Our father is against Love Marriage but if he got to know whom the person was, I think he would have arranged the wedding himself.
I'm happy for her that they accepted her with whole heart after her marriage. Maybe because he is rich. Don't know. ***

"I wanted to say but the circumstances were like that."
"It's not like you fallen in love today and the next day you got married."
"It's complicated."
"How much?" she finished her cookie.

*** It can't be as complicated as what I'm going through. ***

Ding Dong! Ding Dong!

"Suraj! How was your day?" Imli asked seeing the person at the door once she opened it.

*** He is here. OMG! OMG! ***

"Tiring!"
"My sister Chakor is here."
"So?" loosening his tie and pulling out his shirt hand buttons when he saw the back of a girl in the couch.

- I don't want to hurt her but what am I going to do with her sister? -

Chakor turned to her sister voice and she comes fully visible to the eyes of Suraj.
1000s of expression passed through his eyes in just few seconds before he could plaster a smile.

- What is she doing here? -

"Chakor! He is"
"Jiju!" interrupting her sister, Chakor came in front of Suraj with a smile playing on her lips.

*** I have to. That to for my Sistah. ***

"Hi! Nice to meet you! It would have been nice if you both invited me for your marriage. No problem! I forgive you all!" changing her expression from a simple smile to angry one then finally coming to her smile.
"Coffee as always?" Imli asked diverting the subject.
"Yep!" taking a place, opposite to Chakor.
"I will be back in minutes." saying so she left to kitchen.

"Jiju, you" she got interrupted.
"Nice to meet you too! By the way call me Suraj or Raj!" as soft as possible but came out as rude.

- How come is this possible? -

*** Why can't I? ***

"I kind of like it!" she started.
"I kind of hate it!"
"It's rude!"
"Your choice!"
"I will call you what comes at the moment."
"Except Jiju!"
"Will try!"

*** Just try!
Not a good impression on him with the way he talks.
But Sistah seems happy.
Business magazines and channels also uses only good words about him.
Uncl Dad and Mom too are super cool.
It must be tiredness. ***

- Why can't she understand? -

Imli got a cup of coffee for Suraj and made herself confortable near Chakor.
Suraj picked a magazine and went through it while sipping his coffee.

"So you are joining Dad's company for your internship?"
"No Sistah!"

*** I want to make it on my own. ***

"Why?" Suraj asks as he was partially listening to their talk.

- I'm not listening to them. They are just opposite to me and they are talking aloud. Nothing wrong in that. -

"I want it with my own efforts." Chakor replied.
"Good! If I give you an offer after checking your qualifications?"

- I can't miss this chance. -

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Thanks for reading buddies!
How is this part.
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Next Part: Part 2

- Maithili
Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Awesome ... 👏 👏 👏 loved it.bubbly chakor and rude Suraj.loved them I got some idea of the story when I read the sneak peek.so feeling sympathy for this Imli.but not the real one.N plz update soon.
I am the first.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Nice ..good start..warm and refreshing. .loved it

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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Amazing maithu di
i just love it
chakor is a bubbly girl here right ?😉
i like the love etween two sisters
waiting for the next part eagerly ...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
but one question does suraj really loves imli that much ?😔
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Interesting update👏
Chakor is so bubbly 😊
Suraj seems little rude
Had suraj meet chakor before
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Interesting start !
Does Suraj know Chakor already ?
Can't wait for whole story to unfold !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Awesome di..
In my mind there r many qs are popping out..
First, is suraj and imli are really married becoz he don't want chakor to call him as jiju..
Next, is suraj already no chakor becoz he said tat he don't want to miss tis chance..
So many twists r here..so pls reveal it fast tat means update soon my dear sistah..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Great start!

KN and Teju are such a lovely couple. I like Chakor's character. I think Imli is hiding something. I think their marriage is fake, that's why she does not want to call her in-laws Mum and Dad.

It seems Suraj already knows Chakor but Chakor doesn't know him. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
D.I.F.F.E.R.E.N.T.

but like it...

Really. Suraj imli married...

Chakor calling suraj parents mom dad. .. but imli not...

Suraj ..must be hiding something...

but Chakor...so adorable n cute...

Overall... SIL BIL ..interesting. ..episode

Waiting for twists...
Hope sukor justifies their roles. ..

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