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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

I just want to read their happily married life without any hateredness towards each other..some cute romantic moments btw them..which s not shown in the real series..sis

Okay Dear !

That will happen really soon as it's something I have planned with Little plus and minus here and there!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Hi maithu
I feel suraj loves only chakor (rather I want)

The option i feel a message to her family and thanking suraj for helping her out.

I would like sukor to have a nice talk and happy life about their future

Thanks for participating but you have chosen 2 options here!

So which I should take in account!

Else the wish is interesting and it will suit a lot for the next story or Orenda!

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nemo316

@nemo316

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Posted: 8 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: maithu_

Interesting explanation!
Thanks for participating!
Will announce the answers and winners with the next part!
By the way, what do you want if you win?

I have no special wish, so I'll go with vk1nonly's request for jungle romance.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: meshmesh

I have no special wish, so I'll go with vk1nonly's request for jungle romance.

Ok dear!

Taken in account!

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: maithu_

Thanks for participating but you have chosen 2 options here!
So which I should take in account!

Else the wish is interesting and it will suit a lot for the next story or Orenda!

Message to family

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Message to family

Ok dear! Thanks for choosing one!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#267

Hello everyone!

The most awaited chapter is here!
Hope you all like it!
Link to previous part: Part 13

Happy reading!

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Part 14

Chakor opened the folded paper with curiosity killing her.

***** LETTER STARTS *****

Dear Suraj,

Thanks a lot. Thanks a lot for everything.
I don't think I will be alive when you read this letter. So here I'm writing what I needed to tell you.
Thank you for everything you did for me and Vivaan.
Thank you for keeping my marriage a secret and giving me a place to live under your roof.
Thank you for taking my responsibilities as my best friend. As our best friend.

I could have called you but I lost my voice and it will be easy to write with the time I have in my hand.

You need to know two important events that turned my life upside-down. Be strong ok!
I know I wasn't strong enough, that's why I'm in my dead bed but you should be strong for my family as well as yours.
Vivaan was present at the NY bar during the terrorist attack.
He left us alone in this world without even saying a good bye. Neither to you nor to me.
Along with him he also took our 3 months' baby.
Yep buddy! I was pregnant.
I wanted to surprise Vivaan when he comes back from his company mission but I think he gave me the best surprise I can ever expect. That's why it went as an unsaid event now.
When I came back from your company, I got hit by a unstable car and lost our little life in the process.
Yes buddy, I came to your office but couldn't tell you.
I'm going to join them, my hubby and my baby.

I know that by now you will be crying for your friends but don't cry.
We are and we will be happy. And we will be by your side forever.
Even Vivaan would have said the same as me for you as you are his only friend and only family.

You are the best man I have ever seen in my life.
If I have met you before Vivaan, I think I would have fallen in love with you. LOL
But I know that you love the Golden-Fish bracelet girl.
And I'm sure she was the one with you in your cabin when I came there, am I right buddy?
And that's why I didn't want to disturb your happiness with my sorrow.
As much as I know you, you love all of us a lot but not as much as that girl whom I couldn't meet.
I'm just angry that you didn't tell me about you finding her.
You were searching her like crazy and talking about her only.
And when you found her, you forget us.
No problem.
Marry her and live happily.
Tell her that I said she got a gem of a Man as her husband. And she is lucky when you both are happily married.

Coming to the serious matter we have in our hand.
I wanted to tell the truth about Me and Vivaan to our family next month but now I don't think they need to know anything except the fact that I'm just your friend and nothing else. Don't forget to tell them that else I will come as ghost and torture you.

Give a tight hug to the best sister in the world as she will be wanting to come along with me.
Tell her that she is a fool and she can't come with me.
Tell her that she has to open about her love to the person she loves secretly since months or even years.
Tell her also that I know my sister like no one else know her and her eyes speaks more than what she wants to say.

Your Mom and Dad are the best parents I could ever get after my parents(even if my father was against my love marriage. Does it matter now?).
Tell them that I love all of them and I will be always there to see you all happy. I love you all.

I want something from you and from other too.
Don't take me wrong to ask you something even in this situation.
I don't want you all to cry, I'm happy and I want you all to be happy too.
Always smile.

- Imli

***** LETTER ENDS *****

Tears were rolling down her cheeks after reading her sister's words.
Her mind is not working to think anything.
Suraj sat next to her and took the paper out of her hands and folded it before putting in his shirt pocket.
Chakor turned to Suraj's side and took hold of his right hand in her shaky ones and put her head on his shoulder before murmuring a "Sorry".

*** Why didn't Sistah shared with me any of this?
Was she scared that I will tell to our parents?
Oh god!
If she has told us
What is the need to think about this now when we have lost her.

Not only her. I also lost my nephew. ***

- She needs me!
She needs support!
She needs rest! -

He took her hands which was holding his hand with the bracelet in his other one before putting his right hand over her shoulder to comfort her. The bracelet fall down but they weren't in a state to notice that but Teju noticed it and pulled it up and showed it to others and they all left Suraj and Chakor alone as Kasturi asked them through her eyes and hands.
"Why didn't you tell me?"
"Imli wanted time."
"But I was feeling"

"Sorry I couldn't break the promise."
"You broke me."
"I know sorry isn't enough. I will mend my errors."
"I hate you!"
"I love you too!" kissed her head.
"Maa Papa?"
"I think they got to know."

She distanced herself from him with a questioning with her hands still in his and his arm around her shoulder.
He showed their surrounding with his eyes and she followed his to find out that they were left alone.
"Oh!"
"I know how much you miss Imli and I too miss her. I not only lost one friend but both my friends." laying on her lap as she starts to play with his hair.
"I never saw you with her." putting her head over his body.
"We became friends in college. I worked at my dad's office after classes so that's why."

They discus about Imli and Suraj ask if he is forgiven.
She says she tried to hate him but never succeeded in.

"Does that mean I'm forgiven?"
"May be not."
"Why?"
"You blackmailed me."

"I will do" he stopped as they heard footsteps coming downstairs. They both got up seeing their parents coming downstairs.
No emotions.
"I think it's time for us to leave." Bhuvan said to Kamal and turned to Chakor's side "Get your bags Chakor we are leaving."
"She can..can't come with you uncle." said Suraj taking hold of her left hand in his right, facing the elders.
Chakor tried to get out of his hold but it got tighter by each second.

- I can't let her go now. -

*** What is happening?
Is it necessary?
Can't he see that I will be back after few days or something like that? ***

"Why can't she? We weren't here in India and Imli... Imli was here to see her. But now she can't stay here." with his voice which went low remembering Imli.
"She has to stay here." like an adamant kid.
"What are you doing Suraj? Let her go with her parents." Teju said.
"I can't!" Chakor trembled with his voice.
"Suraj! Keep your voice down with us." KN warned.
Chakor shook her head to Suraj knowing what is coming next but he didn't give a head to her.

*** What is he doing? He can't do that now.
Parents are hurt with the loss and now. No! ***

- This may not be the right time but I can't let her go.
In this state. -

"She will stay here." facing Bhuvan before turning to his father "If that's a problem, I will go out with her."
"Suraj! Listen" Chakor muttered.
"No You listen! You are coming with me and that's final."
"Don't talk to my daughter like that young Man." Suraj smirked "You can't decide her life." Bhuvan added.
"I can't but our relationship can." he said.

"Suraj!" she hissed digging her nail in his skin to make him aware of the fact that he is talking to the elders but he cared less about that now. All that mattered is Chakor. His Chakor!

All elders looked at him with a look of accusation and questioning.
"We are legally married and I think we are pregnant!"
Chakor jaw dropped down.
Teju and Kasturi eyes popped out.
Kamal and Bhuvan exchanged looks without knowing what to do.
Suraj was grinning seeing all these reactions.

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Thanks for reading buddies!
Did you all got all the answers from the letter?
If not let me know.

Was the suspense worth it?
If you didn't really liked a bit of this part!
Waiting to receive tomatoes and eggs!

Hope the evolution of emotions is acceptable.
It' started in a sad note then turned to angry, happiness, ... before ending in shock.
Let me know how you find this part through LIKES & COMMENTS.

Next Part = Last Part : Part 15

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#268

Thanks for each and everyone who participated in the Quiz!

It was really entertaining to know your views and the options you chose.

As said, now you all know that there was not only one answer but 3 answers!

2) Information about baby's father

4) A message to her family (about her lover if one exist, her wishes, her family, her sadness)

5) A thank you Note for our hero

So a lot of winners are there!

Few of them already told their wishes but still few didn't!

So separating the winners in 2 categories, so that the people who didn't say their wish can say it now!

Winner who need to say their wish:
- katherine
- Khushi_Dillse
- amrutha_131

Winners with wishes already in my agenda:
- Sania_suraj (A sweet happy married life moments without understanding)
- vk1nonly (Mungle in Jungle)
- sumsukor (happy life for Sukor)
- meshmesh (same as vk1nonly)

Thanks once again buddies for playing the game!
Will be waiting to know what the 3 remaining people want!

See you all!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago