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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Sukor's fight was intense😲
The way suraj controlled his anger was nice😊
Chakor is still confused between guit & love
So some truth is revealed
I think the girl is imli
Waiting for next

Thanks yaar!

Happy that that the story is still interesting.

You may be right about the lady. I will not say anything!

Poor Chakor still stuck with her emotions!

Hope you like the remaining parts too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: chasa
Nic..liked sukor fight and convo
Guess sukor will be having a hard time convincing imli

Waiting for ur next update

Thanks dear!

Glad you liked their convo!

And I wish it continues!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Fabulous👏
Poor Chakor😭 She is suffering a lot b/w her love,heart and mind,guilt.
But finally chose her heart😃
Loved this dialogue of Suraj's "One more word against you,I don't know what I will do".It shows his respect towards her.
I guess the girl is Imli
Can't wait for full suspense to reveal !!

Thanks dear!

I'm happy that that line had an impact!

He respects her a lot, the way he loves her is different here.

You have to wait for at least 1 whole week as I will be updating EMI on 5th instead of part 14 of CAY where the revelation happens.

Hope you will like EMI too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Lo ek or syappa...
Who's that girl...?? May be imli...
Oohh it's tough for chakor to convince imli...
Sukor romance it's treat to watch...suraj tell her half truth...kehte hai na half truth is more dangerous than falsehood...chakor trust him now I hope suraj don't break her heart...

What to do dear? This story makes me write like this only. One over another suspense.

I hope too that he stands by her.

Glad you enjoyed their romance.

Thanks yaar!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: taahir004
Part 11

Fantastic and so Spanky at the same time

loved the confusion that Chakor is going through and the blame game on Suraj while he
feels nothing but admiration and love for her
she on the other hand feels he took advantage of her while he feels and hopes that she can see it was only his love

Thanks dear!

Happy to see that you felt the same thing what I wanted to show!

Hope you like the future parts too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Awesome!

This is the first time we see angry Suraj, he's always treated Chakor with care even when he was pretending to blackmail her.

Poor Chakor, however hard she tries to tell her self that their relation is wrong, her heart won't listen.

Loved Sukor romance! I'm glad that Suraj told her part of the truth.

I hope the woman is Imli, else Suraj will have some explaining to do.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Thanks a lot yaar!

This I'll be the only place you will see him angry.

Glad you loved their moments.

Will be updating tomorrow! See u!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: arena99
Keep up the good work maithu
Amazing,wonderful😊

Thank you!

😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: J.arora

I couldnt wait to read your stories after returning back to the forum.
Thank u so much for the pm!😃

This part was yet again superb...no words you see to appreciate you again...
Though the Paris track is over, still i am enjoying its aftermath...
Chakor is falling for Suraj...Guilty and Pleasures all together...
Plus so many suspenses...
Who is that lady?
Why did Suraj and Imli marry when they didnt love each other?
Waiting for The secrets of past to unfold soon..

waiting for 01/07😉

Thanks a lot dear!

It's fully my pleasure dear!

Glad you are enjoying the story line.

Answers for all the questions are in the part 14 which will be in 1 week!

Hope you find the story interesting till the end!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

Hello everyone!

How are you all?
We are approaching the end of the story in just 3 parts and I'm so happy with all the responses I get.
Thanks a lot!
Love you all!

Link for previous part: Part 12

Happy reading!

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Part 13

They split from each other with the reasoning sound of closing door.

Suraj didn't saw who was the person on the door who can open his cabin without permission.
Chakor embarrassed gets up from his lap and goes back to do her work as Suraj back to his.

*** OMG! Could it be someone?
Please! Tell me there was no one! Please! ***

In case it was someone, Suraj would have been informed.
So he though may be it's wind from his window that made the door creek open a bit and closed with a thund!

"No one was here!" he said to her seeing her laser eyes piercing the door.
"Oh!" getting back to her task.

- Sometimes I feel like she is still a teenage girl! And I love that. -

*** Thank goodness! No one was here! ***

Both of them were discussing about a quotation when Suraj got a call.
His expression changed to helplessness and regret.
More than anything, panic was visible hearing the caller.
All he managed to say is:
"I'm coming!"

*** Where is he going to go leaving this important tender? Hope it's nothing serious to someone. ***

Leaving the task in his hand, without giving a head to Chakor's question, he rushed out of his cabin.
Chakor got immediately worried seeing his behaviour. She got the main lift and asked the office driver to follow Suraj's car.

She saw him passing through stop light and asked the driver to just follow.
She tried to call his phone several times but no answer.

- Why is life this cruel? -

After 18 minutes of chasing, his car stopped and hers too.
They are now in front of the City Hospital.

She sees him enter and follows him until she collides with a lady.
Both exchanged their sorry as nothing wrong happened to anyone and the lady left.
Now, she couldn't find him. Not even a single view of him is visible to her eyes.

*** If he is here, it must be something emergency. So may be by this way. ***

She targeted on the way which was leading to ICU and there she saw him, broken and powerless.
She neared him to see him holding a paper in his hand, tears flowing down his eyes, shattered, sliding to ground.
Chakor runs towards him in the long corridor, making her feel like running miles and miles to reach the goal.

"Make yourself strong Mr. Rajvanshi. We couldn't save the mother and the child." the doctor who emerged from the chamber said before leaving him to take the time to sink the information. And that was the moment Chakor was by their side.

*** What is happening here?
Who is she talking about?
Child? ***

Curiosity took the best of her, making her move away from Suraj who by now was leaning on the wall with closed eyes, she went near the door of the room near them and looks through the glass frame to see the person she never dreamt of seeing in this state.

She turns to her left and

SLAP

She slapped him. His hand went to his left cheek and eyes wide.
Never in his life, someone has hurt him, hurt him physically and here she has slapped him. HIM.

"How dare you?
How dare you can do this to my sister?
You said she was just staying at your house and the baby?" she palmed her forehead.
"What did the baby do?
You are doing drama am I right?
You did this to her?
You did this to her?" pointing finger at him with fire in her eyes.

"You Aminal!
I thought you were just pervert but NO!" holding his collar as tears reached the ground like a falls.

She is shattered.
Her world is shattered.
She can't handle this.
She can't.

- I can't see her like this. -

She moves away from him and falls on her knees with her face in her hands.

"Don't! Don't come near me!" she yelled swatting his hand as he wanted to comfort her.

She stands up and makes her way to the door and looks at her Sistah through the glass frame with tears rolling down her cheeks. And stands there like a statue until her parents made their appearance.

Hospital procedures were done and the cremation happened the next day itself.

During this whole 24 hours, Suraj tried to go to Chakor and explain himself but she wasn't in a state to listen to anyone and especially not him.

She is lost.
She is not here.
She lost her sister.
She lost her best friend.
She lost her guardian.

Chakor was laying on her mother lap and sobbing thinking about her sister.
The rest of the elders were in their own world thinking about their time with the daughter they got.

Suraj entered his house with sadness written all over his face.
His father got up and met him in the mid way saying:
"Life is not an easy one son. Cope up with the loss and move on."

- I lost an important factor in my life. I lost. -

Taking the paper which look like the one he had in the hospital, he passes it to his father.
His father takes it and moves away from him.
Chakor see Suraj coming towards everyone.
Anger rises inside her, making her get up from her mother's lap, standing on her foot, she yells at him.

"You are the reason I lost my sister.
You are the reason everything happened.
I hate you! I hate you!" she screams making the mansion tremble.

This time, she really started to hate him. Or is this also a part of her mind and not her heart?
Everyone stood up seeing her like this when she ran away from there crying.
She ran up to the stairs, getting her way to the room where she used to stay.

*** I can't stand here for one more second! I can't let him have whatever he want! ***

She threw open a luggage and pulled all her belongings in it, closed the bag and made her way to her sister's room. Packed all the things in bags and got them out of the room before going into his room to check if there can be anything of her sister's there.

She analysed the whole room and went finally to side table.
There, she found something that caught her eyes.
She got near that and took it in her hand.
She flipped it to find the initial 'CSR' with 'C' a little bigger than 'SR'.

On the other side, the paper is circulating between the elders and all look at Suraj with a guilty look.

Back to room, Chakor passes her thumbs over the letters.

*** It's mine. ***

It's the bracelet she lost years back in the party where she came face to face with him.
It's the bracelet she bought with her first part-time job in Australia.
No body except her mother knew about that.
Hell no body no that she lost it.
Even her Sistah didn't know that she had made a Golden-Fish bracelet in her craziness for those fishes.
Only her mother saw that bracelet just before they enter that party which turned her world upside-down.

*** How can it be here?
And that too he modified it.
He added his initials!
There was only C when I lost it. ***

Her anger build as she brushed her thumb over the letters.
Leaving the task she was doing, she rushed downstairs to find her father holding Suraj's hand and crying to him.

"You did what I couldn't do.
You helped when she was most in need.
I don't know how I'm going to pay for all your" said Lal.
"Stop it Papa!" screamed Chakor who entered that space interrupting her father.

Everybody turned to Chakor's side as she was nearing Suraj with red angry eyes.
Her father left Suraj's hand free and moved away from there.

- She is vulnerable. She needs support but -

"How can you do this?
You are an Animal in the form of human." saying so she started to hit him over his chest and he was seeing her breaking in front of him as he can see that she isn't in a state to accept even one word from him now.

The explosion of emotions made her glare at him and she brought her hand to slap him only to be stopped by her father.

"What is this Chakor? We are missing her too but why are you putting the blame on a person Imli believed!"
"He is not that much worth Papa!"
"Mind your words Chakor. Give him the respect he des"
"Respect my foot!" she cut her father's words.

"Chakor" her mother yelled while Tejaswini palmed her mouth crying hysterically and she fainted.

Suraj was the first one to notice his mother lose the balance and he ran towards her and Chakor who started to open her mouth closed it as soon as she saw the scene unfold in front of her.

Suraj brought his mother to the couch and splashed water.
She slowly started to open her eyes which landed on Chakor who was sad for her state.
"I was angry on him. I didn't want to hurt you." Chakor said sobbing.
"Come here dear." Teju called her as she got up to a sitting position.
Suraj moved away from his mother.

*** I didn't want to hurt her but he... ***

Chakor joined her, taking a place in the couch.
Teju laid out her hand towards Kasturi who was holding the paper in her hand.
She handover it to her and she in return passed it to Chakor.

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Thanks for reading buddies!
How was it?
Sorry for making this part a bit emotional.
Waiting for tomatoes and eggs!
I know you all will have a lot of questions.
And all the answers are will be out in Part 14.

Next part on 08/07
As I will be posting EMI on 5th, this will be in one week!
Sorry for making you all wait! If I finish that part before, I will post it immediately.

See you guys!
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- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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