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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: amrutha131

It's just getting more interesting !!!
Waiting for next part !!

Thanks dear!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: appledesire

Not fair...
I want more...

Curiosity to know.. the exact equation between them.. kills me...I dont know.. if its lust or love.. wht suraj feels..for chakor...but chakor.. surely hides something...
Morever... *love blooms in paris*
I would say... "crazy about ff"

I can imagine chakor under mischievous suraj radar...

Sorry for making all these suspense.
Lust or Love? That is the topic here.
"Love blooms in Paris"? didn't think about it yet dear!
If I do, I will make sure to take you all a tour with few pics from my Insta.
Thanks honey!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Superb sis..

But i have some qs for u..
1. Is suraj speaks abt kiss tat line "yours sync with mine"
2. Chakor line "i just go to what i was back" represents wat sis
3. And last line who s telling tat chakor or suraj.
I think something s there btw sukor..wat s tat..just waiting for ur next part..just loved tis part..

Thanks dear!
1) He was thinking about it only! Always talking and thinking about his advantages.

2) Secret! You will come to know in future.

3) The last lines are clear dear. Chakor is telling him, so he thinks where he is going without his knowledge. See the marks, it's " - ".
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: vs215blooms

Maithu dear, beautiful... 😊 Love this suraj a lot... Is he really married to imli??? Why chakor didn't call him by his name??? Are they going to paris??? Is chakor hiding something about suraj??? How suraj deeply attracted to chakor??? Waiting waiting waiting...

Thank u Buddy!
Glad u love this Suraj.
Sorry! Answers for all your queries in future updates.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Great update!
The mystery is getting deeper.
Suraj is so smitten by Chakor, did this happen after their recent meeting or does it have older roots?
I wonder what's Chakor hiding, is she running away from something?
Is there more to why she insists on calling Suraj jiju?

The story is very interesting, can't wait for the next update.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Intresting start maithu...
Both updates was Fabulous...
You know naa I love our Suraj...
I don't know what is equation they have...love or lust...???
Jo bhi hai manzoor hai...
I don't understand why suraj ask her not call him jiju call him just by his name...well I know you reveal soon...
And sorry for late reply dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: meshmesh

Great update!

The mystery is getting deeper.
Suraj is so smitten by Chakor, did this happen after their recent meeting or does it have older roots?
I wonder what's Chakor hiding, is she running away from something?
Is there more to why she insists on calling Suraj jiju?

The story is very interesting, can't wait for the next update.

Thanks dear!
Sorry dear, can't say anything for now dear!
Will try to update tomorrow!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

Intresting start maithu...

Both updates was Fabulous...
You know naa I love our Suraj...
I don't know what is equation they have...love or lust...???
Jo bhi hai manzoor hai...
I don't understand why suraj ask her not call him jiju call him just by his name...well I know you reveal soon...
And sorry for late reply dear

No need to worry dear!
Thanks a lot buddy!
Nothing will be revealed in the next part!
Everything will come slowly or like a fire gun!
Have to wait dear!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Hey!


Here is Part 3 of CAY!
Still the suspense continues.
Hope you will not lose interest.
Link for previous part: Part 2
Happy reading!

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Part 3


When she said to meet him back at home, he started to wear a questioning look on his face.

- Whose home she is talking about? -

"Home?" leaning over the table, loosening his tie.
"Your home! I'm staying there for 2 days. Sistah wanted me stay with her as we are seeing after a long gap. So she, uncle and aunt convinced my parents for my stay. From here I'm directly going there then 2 day with you all. And Finally Dad will come to pick me on Sunday evening." she said in one breath.

*** 2 days Sistah. Hope everything goes well. ***

- How can she change her expression each second?
Happy, grinning, shinning, childish, joyful and a bit of sadness.
Wait! Wait! She is going to stay with me!
Wow! Not bad! -

"Your bag?"
"In the reception! Once I call the cab, I will get it."
"Why cab when I'm here?"
"Ahaan?"
"We are going together."
"But"
"It's 5:30 PM! Normal time to finish."
"Oh! Ok Ji" she stopped.
He smiled and said "Wait I will come in 2 minutes."
She nodded and started to play with the paper weight.

*** Is he coming because of me or is it his habitual time? Wish it's not because of me. ***

- A good start to a long WE.
Travelling with you will be an opportunity to know the reason why you are not using my name. -

He went out of room and closed the door.
Picked his phone and composed a number.
"Karan! Postpone the rest of the meetings for next week."
"Tell them that if they want to collaborate with SR Fashions, they have to accept the change."
"Even that."
"Don't call me this WE!"
"Just send mails. If I need anything I will call you!"
"None of your business!"

He opened his cabin's door and entered.
"Ready to go?"
"Yeah! I just need to get my bag!"
"It's already in the car!"
"Ohh!"

*** This much speed! Is it good? ***

They entered a different lift which doesn't contain even a piece of glass.
Chakor leaned over the lift wall, studying her right hand nails while the other hand is crossed over her waist.
"Why don't you want me to call you Jiju?" once the door closed.
"I can ask the same." facing her, crossing his hands over his chest.
"It's our relationship!"
He smirked.
"Please don't do that."
"What?"
"Smirk!"
"Born with me!" still smirking.
"Is it that difficult to not do that?"

- She has problem in calling me by my name.
She has problem with my smirk.
What else can be added to that list of hers? -

*** Can't he just stop smirking? Agrrr! I want to pull my hair. ***

Lift opened and they were directly in the parking area.
"This way!" he said guiding her towards his car.

"Thank you!" she said when he opened the car door for her.

The driver started the car with Suraj and Chakor in back seat with a free place in the middle.

"I need to call you Jiju." facing the window.
"Why is that so?"
"It's what I should call you."
"Can we just stop this conversation here? And driver, switch on the radio."

- I had enough of this. -

'Ae Dil Hai Mushkil' song played and Chakor started to humm along the song with all emotions passing through her eyes while Suraj was on his phone but watching Chakor from the corner of his eyes.

*** May be RJ is in the same mood as me to play this song. ***

The songs changed but their action was still the same.

Finally they arrived at Rajvanshi mansion.
Suraj got down quickly and went to open the door for Chakor, she thanked him before entering.

Her sister was waiting for her in the hallway but when she saw her coming with Suraj, at this time, she got a little shock.

"Suraj! You?"
"He has became more important to you than me Sistah? Not even a Hi! Hello! I'm going back." she started to turn.
Suraj smiled seeing Chakor's drama.
"Oh my baby sister. How are you?" holding her sister's hand, stopping her from moving.
"She don't need to welcome the daughter of this family!" announced Teju who was on her way downstairs.

- Thanks for being here, Mom & Chakor with your drama club! Great escape! -

"I'm tired. I'm going to my room! Mom, my special tea please." Suraj left from there.

Once he left, Imli turned towards Chakor and said:
"You see Aunt is right. I don't need to Welcome you here!"
"Yeah yeah!" sarcastically.

Teju came near Chakor and gave her a motherly hug before leaving to kitchen.
"So where am I staying Sistah?"
"There is a free room on the left side of the study room you went yesterday or on the other side of the corridor. Select the one you wish."
"I will take the one near your room."
"So the room next to the study room." as they climbed the stairs.

*** Great! Same floor! One room in between here. Same cabin at work. What else is missing? ***

"You know what Sistah. We have to go for shopping, watch movies, cook together and a lot of things to do."
"Ok ok! We will try to checklist at least half of what you have planned before you go back home."
"Do you want me to ask your husband permission to take his wife away from him for few hours?" while taking in the aspect of her room.
A sad expression crossed Imli's face before she turned and smiled at her sister who is now putting her bag inside the walk in closet.
"No need to ask anything to anybody."
"Free bird ahaan?"
She smiled.

*** Glad he is a good person as said on TV and by our parents. ***

Tejaswini cooked dinner as KN wanted Teju's special today. But she promised that the kitchen is for the sisters the next day, Saturday.

All took place around the round table with KN, Teju, Imli, Chakor and Suraj as Suraj was the last one to join the gang. Everyone was serving for themselves when KN called for Chakor.

"I heard that you are joining SR Fashions."
"Yes uncle!"
KN launched a missile through his eyes and Teju coughed.
"I mead Dad!" Chakor corrected.

- What Dad? Who Dad? Why am I not in sync with the conversation? -

Suraj shifted his target from his plate to Chakor's face.
"Good girl!" Teju said.
"I'm always the good girl. Only one piece and it's me Mom." she said to Teju.
"Can I just know what is happening?" Suraj asked to no one in particular.
"Baby is crying, so we are giving wood-wards gripe water. What say Sistah?" Everyone laughed for her lame joke, even Suraj had a smile over his lips.

- She is a mature kid. -

"Be happy that at least your wife's sister is calling us Mom and Dad." Teju said in a complaining tone but grinning.
"Okay!" is what he could say.

- Oh! That's the thing! I have no objection in that. -

*** Wish Sistah could call them like that instead of me. ***

The dinner went over a lot of subjects, especially by Chakor and making others laugh.
Everybody did their parts in cleaning the table and dishes before getting into their rooms.
That night, the sisters spent qualities times discussing about their old golden memories before Imli left her sister alone and went to her room.

Next day, breakfast was a normal affair as Suraj was still sleeping and Teju left to Harshad Malhotra's house with KN, saying the sisters that they will be back for dinner.

It's around 11 when the sisters get into the kitchen.
"You should wear saree often honey. You look good in it."
"Come on Sistah! I wanted just to try it! And that too for you."
"You want me to say Thank you!" taking out vegetables from fridge.
"No but you can answer my question."
"What is that?" with a suspicious look.
"Why are you sleeping in a separate room?" cutting carrots as she remembered her sister enter the room which is between the elder Rajvanshis and the younger one.

*******

Thanks for reading!
Hope it wasn't terrible!
LIKE it & COMMENT if you are waiting for the next part.
Next part on Part 4

- Maithili


Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Thanks for pm
Interesting update👏
Chakor is so bubbly , everyone likes her😊
Sukor are equally affected by each other😉
Imli stays sleeps in separate room😲
Waiting for the truth to unfold

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