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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Hi di..
Sorry for the late comment..as i had an exam yesterday..
It was a lovely part..
Atlast sukor were married..
Already he s planning for honeymoon..but now..lol
I think imli is helping him indirectly..
Is my assumption right sis..
Suraj is such a brilliant guy..how smartly he inscriped his name in the ring..
Waiting for the next update..sis
Luv u..tc

Hey dear!

No problem and no need to say sorry!

How was your exam? Wishing you the best.

I can't say if your assumption or correct or not dear!

Else my part 13 will be a flop!

Thanks a lot dear!

See you tomorrow with a new part!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: appledesire
Absolutely brilliant piece of work...

I enjoyed.. *paris tour*..

U know..wht.. suraj nt only surprise chakor.. bt readers also..

Craziness dosage level ...raised by every chapter...

Hes beyond our thought process...

Whtever b the situation.. bt they enjoyed their moments...

*both yearn for each other* still few dots need to be connected. .

Marriage twist was expected.. Bt honeymoon tour "just wow"

All credit is yors dee...
Thnx for paris ...n beautiful update..

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you enjoyed the trip!

Accept the fact that he is crazy and in love.

It's really difficult to put his coat to write!

Happy that you enjoyed their moments.

All dots will be connected before the end. LOL

Nope!

All credits to all of us as your support means a lot and that's the only point which pushes me to write.

So thanks to you all.

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Oohhhooo so those papers related to sukor marriage...
Yeahhh sukor now married...suraj is so smart thats why he don't want Chakor read that papers, hmmm clever Mr. Rajvanshi ...Wait that means Suraj is not married to imli...ye ho kya raha hai... And imli knows about sukor and there marriage...im very curious now...
I'm very much enjoyed Paris trip...i hope you give us beautiful sukor scenes... Sorry for late reply dear...

He is bloody criminal minded love sick puppy!

How to hate him? I'm asking myself.

No say for your hypothesis as it will reveal the secret I have kept until now.

But I'm a bit scared of the fact that you are all going to throw things when I reveal it!

And I'm going to scream 'HELP ME!' LOL

Glad you enjoyed the trip!

I have a lot of Sukor scenes in reserve but I don't know if it will be okay with you all.

See you tomorrow with the next part.

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Hey!

I see that you all enjoyed the visit!
Thanks to you all I'm interested in writing more and more!
If you want to see few more pics from Paris, here is my Instagram link: immaithu_
I feel like it's a filler part here!
Let me know about it after reading!
Link to previous part: Part 9
Happy reading!

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Part 10

Hearing the last word from her sister, she came out of her trance and chocked
"I... have to... go Sistah. Will.. talk L... later."
"Take care Honey! See you!" the call went off and she stood on her feet freeing from Suraj's hands.

"You could confirm her that we are here for that only you know?" he said closing the door and she threw the first thing she had, her phone for which she regretted later, seeing it in 3 pieces.
And her anger increased hearing the chuckle from the other side.
"Heartless creature!" she yelled.

*** My poor phone!
I should have trashed his head instead of my phone. ***

- The cutest she could ever be, is when she is angry and I love that. Muha!
I didn't knew that she wanted to come to Paris for HM and here we are!
God is great!
Always with me! -

The silent treatment continued for the rest of the day.
They went to meet the client and started to discuss about the new project with that fashion house. The clients invited both the Indians for the show organised in the evening.

They got back to their room and Chakor started to get ready for the event.
She saw that there was an elegant red one-piece dress on the bed with a note.
'For my wife!'
She started to have a smile but later turned to a mixture of anger and sadness.
She wore it and came out to find him in his black Tux with red matching tie.

*** If only you aren't my Sistah's hubby. I would have ate you! ***

- The dress fits you as if it's made specially for you. Sexy hot Baby Doll! -

They made through the show and now they are enjoying the after party with Suraj talking with business people and Chakor trailing behind him.
"One shot vodka and a glass of juice please." he said when they were near the bar.

*** I'm not in a mood to listen to him. ***

"Instead of juice, can I get something stronger please!" she said to the bartender.

*** Let's see if the alcohol calms my nerves or not. ***

- She is doing it on purpose. She need to know it's not a joke! -

"You can't handle it Chakor." he whispered gently to her taking her hand.
She swatted his hand "You will not decide what I do or don't here." turning towards bartender "Speed up please."

*** I can handle anything in this world as I'm already handling the hurt you are causing me. ***

- She has to listen to me! I don't feel like she already bozzed or something. -

"Listen! It's not"
"I know what I'm doing" with a mocking laugh "It will be my first but not the last one. And I can challenge you that I can handle myself." they got their drinks "Cheers Mr." she mouthed "Lustful Husband".
He smirked and said "Let's see Baby!" raising an eyebrow and the shot.

- I can already see myself winning!

*** As if I'm going to let him win. I can do it! Yeah! I can. ***

The first one burnt her throat a little, but she was not in the state to care, all that mattered now is her anger and the challenge.

One after another, she gulped her shots while Suraj limited to the first one as he saw that he is needed to keep her safe.

Around her 9th shot, she leaned over Suraj with her right hand around his neck and her left index finger brushing against his lips. Suraj took her to the corner of the hall as he didn't want to be noticed.
"Whyyy areh you doinng dis?"
When he opened his mouth to speak, she put her finger inside his mouth and said
"Tosday I speak, yoou listen." he nodded "Closh your mouth" with still her fingers inside.
He didn't budge.
"Closhhh" and he closed his mouth while she closed her eyes.
"I like thishh" she said.

- Is her inner voice speaking over her mind? -

He held her with both his hands around her form and started to play with his tongue over finger.
"Suraj" she moaned.
They were in safe zone as music was high.
She withdrew her finger and opened her eyes.
"I'm going to tel you a shecret."
He smiled and joined his forehead with hers.
"I love you a losh but I hate yoou. I want you but I can't."
"I think it's time for us to leave Chakor." he said distancing his head away from hers.
"Doll! Baby Doll! Call me thats."
He smiled "Come Baby Doll!" he took hold of her hand and they went to their room.

They were lucky that the event was in the same hotel as they are staying, to not run into someone.

Once inside the room, he left her hand to lock the door. But when he turned, he didn't find her. He heard jumping sound coming from the room, so in few strides, he was there.

- The angel is flying in the air! And I need to bring her to Earth! -

Seeing the scene in front of him, the smile didn't leave his lips.
Her heels were laying on two corner and she was jumping like a kid on the bed.
"Is this the way you handle yourself?" smirking
She stopped hearing the voice and turned to see him smirking "Don't!"
"Why?"
she sat down in Indian style and patted the place next to him and he did what he was told.
"It makes things here." pointing to her tummy "Even when I saw you on TVsh." she put her head in his shoulder "I loved you GG!" closing her eyes.
"GG?"

She opened her eyes and distanced herself asking "You don't know what ish it?" giggling like a child.
He shook his head.
She climber on his lap with both her legs on his right side, playing with his shirt button, she replied shyly bending her head, turning crimson "Greek God!" she hid in his chest.
And he laughed seeing her antics.
"Don't laugh. You are bad, you know that."
"How?" he asked her as he ran his arm around her frame.
"I loved you. You married my sishter. You want me. You married me. I didn't know it. You blackmail me. I hate you." leaving his button and his neck, she started to count everything with her fingers "You hurt me here." pointing to her heart "So shee all these faults." showing all her 10 fingers "But I still love you." she kisses him on his neck.

- She is not in her right mind and you are, so behave! Behave! -

"Please don't Doll."
"Hmmm?" lifting her head with puppy eyes and pouty lips that he wanted to kiss at that moment.
"You aren't yourself. Come let's sleep."
"I'm meee. I don't want to shleep." and she bites in his neck making him moan.
"You need a sleep Baby Doll."
"I need you." she gets up from his lap freely as his hold was not strong enough.

She got down of the bed and reached the zip of her dress and he followed suite to her to hold her hand there asking:
"No need to change. We will sleep like this."
"I'm not going to sleep." with a glint of shyness "I'm going do this for you, it was my dream. Stripe!" nodding for herself and reaching the zip.
"Stripe?"
"Hmmm! You don't know. Let me showw you." pushing away his hand, she started unzipped fully her dress, revealing most of her back while he closed his eyes and turned other side.
"Chakor put your dress on! Else you will regret tomorrow!"
"Why will I when it's me doing it and not you."
"Tell me once you wore your dress."

- Even now she is talking with all intelligence but only sometimes. -

Few seconds later, she poked him with her index finger.
"Can I turn?" he asked.
"Hmmm" nodding.
He bent his head and turned to her side opening his eyes to find her dress and inner wears laying on floor. He immediately turned away from her to not lose control.
"Put your dress Chakor!"
"HmmmHmmm"
"Chakor dress"
She threw her dress on him.
"Baby Doll" removing her dress from his head.
"Heun!"
"Please dress yourself Baby Doll."

- I think she likes that name! -

"Hmmm Give me your shirt." in baby voice.
"Why my shirt?" he started to turn but remembered her state and stopped.
"I want it and now."
"Wear yours!" he said showing her dress.
"You said I'm your wife yesterday?" in a controlling tone.
"Yes." still her dress in his hand.
"Then listen to me. GIVE.ME.YOUR.SHIRT" ordering him.

- Wah! What a turning of events. -

Defeated he put her dress on the bed and removed his coat, she helped to remove it and threw it in a corner. Then he started to unbutton his shirt.
"You turn. I will do it for you." she said and tried to make him turn but failed.
He removed his shirt with the speed he can manage and handover to her.

- First time going to see her in my shirt! Yahoo!
Calm down and cool down! You aren't a teenager. And she isn't in her right mind remember that. -

Few minutes later.
"Turnish."
"Are you sure?"
"Hmmm" nodding vigorously her head.
He turned with the same strategy as before and shifted his eyes slowly upwards to the piece of cloth over her body, covering up to her upper tights and leaving the first two button open.
When their eyes locked, he could see the need and love she is waiting to have from him.
She ogled over his body before getting to see the mark she has left between his neck and shoulder.

- I need to control my running hands and horse. I need to control. CONTROL. -

"I want that." pointing to something he thought it was behind him.
"What?" he turns to the side to see nothing and brings back the attention to her.
She closes in to him and he can feel the coldness of her body against his.
She brings her hand to the bite and caresses it "This!"
"It will pain." he says shoving off her hand.
"Hey!" she put back her hand there "I.WANT" the same tone she used before, bending her head side way to give him access.

- No way in the paradise it's going to go well. -

He hesitated for few moments.
"Speed up!"
He removed her hair from there, bent his head a little, holding her by her waist, pressing her frame to his, feeling all her parts away from his only due to his shirt, fanning her neck, she closed her eyes feeling a lot new things than before.
He pressed his lips there, trailed a little until he found her secret spot when a moan escaped her lips. He started to attack that place, nibbling, sucking, creating sensation.

Chakor started to roam her free hand on his bare back.
That place in her body started to get colour compared to other places.
"Suraj" she moaned and he stopped what he was doing.

- Stop it now or never. NOW! -

Feeling no action on her back and neck, she came face to face with him and peeked his lips
"Pleashe don't stop." she begged.
"We have to stop Baby Doll. We will do it tomorrow if it's ok for you."
"Now."
"I'm tired and you too. Please Baby Doll."
She peeked his lips.
"Now."

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Welcoming the sun, Chakor opened her eyes with a heavy headache. She turned to her side to find the tablets and water. Without any questions, she swallowed them and closed her eyes for few minutes.

Once she felt it's better, she made herself comfortable on the headrest, passing her hand over her neck "Ouch" it's then she notices her surroundings and her dress.

Her red dress she was wearing last night is laying near the door with something white on it.
Her inner wears are near the bathroom.
Suraj's coat in a corner.
And she is wearing his shirt.
She moved the quilt a little to see that she wasn't wearing anything else than that and the person besides her, resting his back in the headrest, is only in his boxer and he is concentrated on his phone.
Where could be his pant? She turned to her side and the pant was laying there like a ball.

Her face started to heat up with plenty of questions revolving around her head about her, about him and about them.

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Thanks for reading friends.
Hope you all liked this part too!
What do you guys think could have happened?
I'm for sure getting haters now for making a fragile Lady here.
Don't know what could I say for the next part.
May be prepare tomato and eggs to launch on me.

Want to hear your views, so COMMENT and if you liked it, hit the LIKE button.

Next part: Part 11

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Hi sis..

Tq for the pm..sis

Omg..its sweating here..can't imagine chakor like tat..

Its a very big surprise..mr.lust acts as a mr.gentlemen..

Wat happen btw them?

Sis..y did u stop here..my head s going to blast thinking abt wat happens btw them?

So many suspense..i have a very lil heart..so pls update soon sis..

Luv u sis for tis suspense thriller stories..

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Vanshika Singh

@vk1nonly

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#186

According to me, nothing happened between them. Because Suraj well knew that Chakor is not in her senses. She would hate him even more if anything happens or she will die of guilt.
Suraj in your story is portrayed as an intelligent person. He won't do anything so wrong.
That's my opinion. Don't know what happens.
But it was good.
I won't throw any tomatoes on you.
Just chill.
By the way, I am going to follow you on Instagram.
My username is @vijayendrakumeriafanno.1

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Interesting update👏

Sukor moment was so hot & wild😉

Chakor's fantasies are so wild, poor suraj😆

I think nothing happened between sukor as suraj was sober😉

Waiting for next

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#188

You make me wonder Maithu...

what a flow

Just was getting hottt but then nice to bring the gentleman in Suraj. Just liked the way you said CONTROL CONTROL!!!! haha well the readers were definitely loosing their contrl...

Chakor was sooo cute... rightly as somebody said Suraj would dare touch her when she is not in her senses as he knows how the wild cat will turn against him... So he is taking cool!!!

Excellent , hope the dots (lots of questions in mind------ sure you will answer in your style) are connected and get to get the real hot scene...

Waiting for the next one!

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Awww drunken chakor is treat to watch...

Her wild fantasy and Suraj too hot to handle...

Suraj is perfect gentleman he know she is not in her sense...so keep distance...love this Suraj...

So DDLJ part 2 scene coming soon...chakor misunderstood Suraj and lots of raita phalauing...i would like to see some respect for suraj in chakors eyes apart from love and hate... ..fantastic update Maithu...

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#190

Superb!

Drunk Chakor was too wild for Suraj! Who could imagine he'll be the one showing restraint!! I'm happy he was a gentleman and didn't take advantage of her state.

I believe nothing happened between them, but will Suraj tell her the truth or leave her imagination to run wild.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.