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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amrutha131

Interesting👍🏼
Slowly,Suraj's love is coming out
And yeah,I know u will make me love Suraj by the end😆
Waiting for the next !!

Thanks dear!
Hopefully I wish that happens by the end!
Will try to be on time!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Hi sis..

This update was superb..
I got the answer who was tat in her room
Suraj also loved her before itself..and also he got to know tat chakor also loves him..
Wat r these document..tat he wants to sign her..
Eagerly waiting for the next updates..
I just loved tis..and also luv u sis..tc

Hey dear!
Thanks a lot sis!
The answer for your question is in the next part dear!
Glad you loved it dear!
Love you too! Hugs! Hugs!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

Aahhh... If I was in chakors place I will definitely kill Suraj he is always playing family card to control chakor and this one I don't like it...i don't understand if he loves chakor then WHY WHY he Marry imlidevi...can't he find her or wait for her...i love sukor's all scenes but this is wrong... Jo galat hai wo galat hai...


Hating someone is not easing enough, who was once your beloved one. True love never ends, it lasts upto the end of your life. Though you are not talking to him/her anymore, but still the link never ends. The two comes closer only if there is something in both of them which they like of each other. So, it is hard enough to hate someone who was once part of your life.

According to me if you love someone then its not only for their appearance or for their outer beauty if it is so then its not love,it's simply lust...Loving someone it means u like him/her from the bottom of your heart, not for his appearance but for the person he/she is.

Thanks dear!
May be you can vent your anger on Suraj with all the words you want.

Love can be showed in different ways.
Few calmly.
Few aggressively.
Few by words.
Few by actions.
Few as lovers.
Few as hunters.

So it all depends on how we see and how we approach.
No! don't think I did PhD in Love or something.
It's just what I felt.

Thanks for answering for the questions dear!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi!


How are you all?
Hope you are liking the story!
Thanks for all your answers.
There is a small surprise in this part.
May be a bigger one in the next part.
It depends on how you take it: Surprise or shock.
Link to previous part: Part 7
Happy reading!

*******

Part 8

Seeing the file, 1000s of questions formed in her mind.

"Can I take time to read it and then sign?"
"Yeah sure!" he pulled her by holding her wrist towards him, making her land on his lap "It's the best place to sit and read I suppose."
He put his left arm around her waist and the other one started to carres her right hand.

- I feel like being in heaven. -

*** The hell! That is what this means for me for now. ***

"I... can't read li...ke this." shivering under his touch as she couldn't even open the file, worst the file kissed that table as Chakor searched for a grip.
He came near her ears, brushed his lips over her earlobes sending shiver down her spine as he huskily whispered "You have to read like this only."
"Ho..w?" as she felt his lips capturing her earlobe.

Trailing wet kisses down to her neck while saying each word between his kisses "If.You.Want.To.Read.You.Have.To.Read.With.My.Sweet.Tortures.Only."

Suraj interlocked his fingers with her right hand fingers while her left hand held tightly his pant over his knee. His left hand found his way under her tops as he started to make circles around her belly button.
"Peeleeassshhh"
"Siggn themmm." he said sucking her neck like a vampire.
"Hhhmmm"

*** God! Do you exist?
Why can't I hate him?
Why am I giving in his touches?
Is it difficul to hate someone we loved?
Gold! Help me! I want to hate him! Please! ***

- Mamma Mia! What am I doing?
I just wanted to distract her and I'm getting distracted.
This is going to be tough to not go off board. -

He stopped his handwork on her stomach and distanced his face from her neck.
"Go on!"
Stabilising her breath, she tried to get up but his hold is still stronger as her legs are caged between his, slowly she opens her eyes and signs the papers using her left hand as her right hand is still linked to his, saying:
"You didn't want me to read these papers."
"Not bad! You know what Doll. You look so cute when you are angry, sad, shivering, etc, etc."
"Finished!" making an angry face.

*** The first thing to stop him disturbing me is to not let him speak.
Is that possible.
Agrrrhhh ***

- One task finished. -

He made her shift a bit in order to see her face.
"Pack your bags in 3 days Baby Doll."
"Why?"
"For our honeymoon!"
"Ho...ho" her jaw dropped down and eyes came out of their socket.
He quickly peeked her lips making them close "Yes Doll! Honeymoon! You know what husband and wife do during honeymoon, right?" smirking.
"Hus...band?"
"I will explain everything once we get free time. I don't know what you will tell your family but be ready by Thursday morning. And by the way, this file contains your visa papers."
"It...it's wrong!"
"Everything is fair in Love & Lust!" crashing his lips with with hers.

*** Why can't I think anything!
Oh god!
Honeymoon!
But he said he will not!
I should blame myself.
How can I trust him even if he said he will not go to that point?
Ohhh! ***

"I waited a long. I want you!" he once again captured her lips after saying these words.
"You will love it!" he said once he broke the kiss and saw her disgusted face.
"Love word sounds horrible from you!" she said.
"As you say, if it's Lust for me, take it as Love for you.
In my world it will be by actions, in your world by words.
For me, it will be doing s*x while for you it will be making love. That's it!"
"Disgusting Animal!" she muttered.
"Whom you are going to see in full form."
"I need to go!" trying to get up.
"To get your parents permission?"
"In your dreams."
"Even in my dreams, it's only you and me."
He smiles and lets her free and she runs out of the room taking her bag which was over her table.

*** I need to think! Think! THINK! ***

- You will get time to think Doll! Never! NEVER! -

He took his phone and called her:
"What do you want now?"
"It will be always you Baby Doll!"
"Stop flirting!"
He smirked.
"Don't!" she said feeling what he could possibly be doing.
"Driver is waiting for you outside the building. He will take you to your house. Take the needed items from there."
"If I don't?"
"Driver will be fired and his family of 4 children will be on road."
"You! Disgusting!"
"Thanks for the compliment Doll!"
She cut the call.

*** Always blackmailing! Ouuff ***

As ordered by Suraj, Chakor went to the office car and asked the driver to take her to her house.
Getting down from the car, she asked the driver if he wants to have something. He denied saying 'Thank you'.
So leaving him outside the house, she entered her home to feel the positive aura of her environment.

She went directly to her room and landed on her bed recalling all the events from the day she meet the stranger who turned out to be the businessman, Suraj Rajvanshi.
Who is now her Perverted BIL.
She got up from her bed and started to pack few of her needed dresses from her closest and went back to her bed.

"Hello Sistah!" picking the call she received.
"Hey Honey! How are you?"
"Mmm good! Missing you!"
"Same! Missing you more then when you were in Australia."
"Hmmm"
"Taking your things for trip?"
"How do you know? Is there any camera in my room?"
"Just now I called Suraj, he said you have a meeting in 3 days in some other country!"
"That bas***d!" she muttered closing the phone "Ahaan Sistah! We are going on Thursday an we will be back as soon as the meeting finishes."
"Pack your bags correctly!"
"Yep!" rolling her eyes.

Laying on her stomach:
"You tell! How is marriage preparation going on?"
"Great!"
"Ok!"
"By the way which country it is?"

*** So he didn't say that to her. Pervert.
I have to find a solution! Yep ***

"It's secret until we finish the deal."
"Oh! Ok!"

*** Should I say about him to Sistah?
What if he hurt Sistah?
No No No I can't risk her life with that animal!
My fate!
Calling the Man I loved wholeheartedly with bad words is something I never dreamt of.
Even him behaving like this. ***

The sisters continued to talk for more than 20 minutes when Chakor remarked there is an international call coming in the second line.
"I think Maa is calling me!"
"Ok Honey! Take care of yourself. Eat on time. Sleep well. Take care of Suraj too as you are there with him. We will see once you are back!"
"Thanks for making me remembrer that I'm still a 5 years, taking care of a 3 years' one." sarcastically.
"Bye dear!"
"Bye! Enjoy!"
"You too Honey!" Chakor rolled her eyes hearing her sister.

Once the call get cut, Chakor connects to the second call.
"Hello Chakor baby! How are you?"
"Fine Maa! How are you all doing there?"
"Superb baby! How is the internship going on?"
"It hasn't been one full day Maa!"
"So you are in the office now?"
"No! I came to our house to take few of my belongings." she said sadly.
"Sorry baby to leave you alone. I know you must be missing us and we too miss you a lot!"
"MaaMaa!"
"Don't worry baby! I will talk to Suraj to take you out on week-end with Imli."
"Maa!"

*** If only you know how much he is taking care of his SIL. ***

"Yes baby!"
"There is a foreign meeting I'm going to attend this Friday."
"Hmmm!"
"Say something Maa!"
"Good! Enjoy your trip and do your work. Don't go alone anywhere."
"I'm not a kid Maa! You are speaking as if I'm going out of the house for the first time."
"It's not like that baby!"
"Hmmm! Where is Papa?"
"He went with KN brother for a business meeting."
"You are alone."
"No baby! I'm with Teju! Wait! She wants to speak with you!"
"Ok Maa!"

*** I still didn't get how could they have him as their only son.
I think he is adopted.
Yeah! That is the only thing I can see. ***

"Hello dear!" in sitting position.
"Hi Aun"
Tejashwini cleared her throat.
"Hi Mom! How are you doing?"
"After speaking with you it feels great dear! So how is Suraj treating you?"
Turning the mute button on "He is not treating me but threatening me." turning it back off "Good! He is really taking good care of me."
"So I heard that you are attending foreign client meeting on Friday. Are you prepared?"
"I don't know Mom!"
"This is an opportunity to learn and improve your skills. So best of luck. If any problem, contact us. Ok dear?"

*** If only you know what is Mr. Lust is going to teach me. ***

"Sure Mom!"
"Take care dear! See you!"
"You too!" and the call went off.

She throw her phone over the bed along with herself.
Closing her eyes, she heard the battle between her mind and her heart.

~ Listen to me! You are not doing anything wrong.
# Oh really! He is her Jiju now!
~ He is the one coming to her.
# She have to be the one going away from him.
~ You are so mean. She has feeling for him.
# Correction! She HAD! In first place, she shouldn't have accepted his internship offer.
~ She wanted to know if she can keep her emotions away from her with him near her.
# With him near her, she is lossing it.
~ Mind what you are saying.
# What? I'm not saying something wrong. When he asks her to sit, she does. When he asks her to kiss, she does. When he asks her to hug, she does.
~ He is threatening her.
# The problem is she still loves him!
~ Oh! Keep quiet. She needs a nap now.
# Yeah! You too!

The bed dipped by the side of Chakor, waking her out of the land she was being in.
"What are you doing here? What time is it?" in her sleepy voice, seeing the lights on.
"To get you back home. It's 7:48 now." laying near her and encircling her half waist with his arm.
"Give me 10 minutes to freshen up!" trying to get up.
"After few minutes." putting his free hand under her head and pulling her close to him.
"Why are you doing this to me and my family?"
"I want you with your consent." peeking her lips.
"It will not happen."
He smirked.
"Please don't." she pleaded.

*** It was something I liked a lot when I watched his interviews and photos but not now. ***

"You like it!" he stated before taking her lower lips in-between his and started to nibble it.
"Suraj" she moaned putting fire in his desire.
He did the same to her upper one before taking full control of her lips and sweet spots inside her precious mouth.
Once he finished exploring every inches of it, he brought his lips over her forehead before pressing it there.
"You look sexy with closed eyes, parted lips, dishevelled hair, goosebumps in your body and shivering to my touches." he said as sexily as possible but his words made her open her eyes she has closed during the kiss they shared with an expression showing a mixture of anger and sadness.
"Come Baby Doll! Let's go home." getting up from bed.
"I need to"
"No need for anything! I checked your bags and added few of your dresses in it. You look like a goddess like this, so come." he approcher her to scoop her. She swat his hand and climbed drown from her bed before entering her bathroom from other side.

- I don't need to make you mine.
You are mine.
Your are just MINE. -

*** Instead of thinking about a way to get out of this, I slept.
Me and my sleeping habit. Ouf!
Now I will not even get a second free.
I hate myself.
I hate it! ***

Once she came back, she found a note on her bed.

"Waiting in my car.
Bags are with me.
Lock the house and come."

She tore the note, showing the anger she has on herself and on him.
She made her way downstairs checking everything and locked the main door before taking her place in his car.

They made their way to Rajvanshi Mansion.
The night went as the previous one with a single difference that Suraj is the one cooking dinner.

The rest of the days before their trip went as per Suraj wish.
He kisses her whenever he felt like and sometimes he ask her to start it for him to dominate later.
He feeds her breakfast, lunch and dinner, making her sit in his lap.
Even if lunch was in office, he made sure that he got their meals in his room.

- I can't get enough of her.
I want to make her mine with her being the one to initiate.
Mine in every sense.
I'm happy that we are together and she is giving in.
I know that one part of her is happy while the rest is angry on herself and on me.

One day, she will know the truth and will be with me, her Love. -

She on the other had was frustrated with his activities.
She can't go against him. Could she?
All her efforts to not give in to his actions fails with a simple touch of his skin with hers.
The more the time for trip gets close, the more she is fidgeting with whatever she gets.
The reason for that is Suraj not informing her the destination and the need to go there.

*** Agrrr! I want to pull my hair and his.
He is making me become a mad person.
Alway threatening me with his words.
I don't think I can take it anymore but I have to for my family.
He didn't even said where we are going.
I know that there is a meeting planned with a client but I couldn't get my hand on the piece of information to know where he is taking me and who is this client.
And even if it's real.
I hate myself for giving in to his demands. I hate my heart who is aching for the love I thought that died the moment I got to know he is no more mine. Agrrr! ***

Once they are seated in his private jet, she pulled her headset and shuffled the list in phone before selecting the one to play. Closing her eyes she leaned over her seat and went into deep slumber.

With the turbulence outside, she jerked out of her sleep to find his one hand on hers and his other hand rubbing his eyes. She removed her headset from her ears and yawned, closing her mouth.
"Can I get something for you to eat?"
"No I don't feel like eating while travelling." she replied.
"We have more than 3 hours to land."
"Land where?"
"Land innn" passing his hand through his hair "SURPRISE Doll!"

She made a face and turned to the other side to see white clouds moving slowly in the blue sky which gives her a feel like being in the fairy world.
The journey arrived to a stop when plane landed announcing the arrival without telling the destination as instructed by Suraj.

Suraj without leaving her hand free, took her out of the plane.

"Bienvenue a Paris!" the lady outside the jet said in with full on French accent.
"What is she saying?" asked Chakor turning to Suraj.
"Welcome to Paris Baby Doll!" he smiled and entwined his fingers with hers.

*******

Thanks for reading!
Which part is the surprise according to you?
Was it really a surprise? Or wasn't it a surprise?
LIKE & COMMENT your views if you are interested in next part!
Who wants to visit paris through my writings?
I'm planning to do that for the next part.
Hope you will enjoy that too.

Next part: Part 9

- Maithili


Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting update👏
Chakor is so confused between her heart & mind😆
Suraj is aware of chakor's confused state & taking the advantage of her😉
Loved chakor's monologue about suraj & his family
What is suraj hiding from chakor
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting👍🏼
About surprise,I thought he would make her sign some contract,but I was surprised to see Visa papers
Would love to see Paris through ur writing !
Waiting for next !
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fine di..
How r u?
It was an awesome update..
I became mad on suraj..eventhough he s arrogant..i love him a lot..
While reading i can feel the suraj touches on chakor..here i got a goosebumbs..
For me it s a surprise..tat wat is the truth he speaking about?
Becoz i know when he said abt honeymoon tat he s going to take her to paris nly..lol
I love paris so excited for next part..
And also waiting for wat suraj s going to do with chakor..
I am waiting..😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update!

The dialogue between Chakor's heart and mind was awesome. She wants to hate him so badly but can't.

I hope Suraj doesn't push things forward between them before the whole truth is out.

Can't wait for their Paris trip.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello everyone!


Thanks for all your support and likes!

Here goes how I will be posting my stories:
CAY - Wednesday and Saturday
Orenda - Thursday and Sunday
TTW - Tuesday

When one story ends, I have something reserved to replace the day.
So for now I just hope I follow my schedules.
In case I can't post one day, I will inform you all.

Thanks a lot!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow..
Excellent work..

I just cannot believe. . *paris* superb surprise. .

Mind v/s heart dilemma.. another one of my fav part..

Such a thin difference b/w lust & love.. chakor def of love = suraj lust..

Dee.. can't wait for nxt update..

Again... chakor inner turmoil is so evident. . Shes confused b/w her feelings & whts right ?..

Suraj.. can't he simply tell her.. how much he love her.. he always demanding physicl pleasure. .thats y.. wo zyada scary n wrong lagta hai..

But I know... whenever.. he disclose his feelings. .the real truth.. uska alag e mza ayega...
Moreover.. he cnt do anythng w/o chakor consent.. but I still hope she shud nt easily givein..

I just want.. broken chakor.. crying her heart.. n then wanna see.. wht shud b suraj take..his lusty side.. or the caring??

* enjoyed loads*
Dhanyavaad dee

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