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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

I m eagerly waiting for tomorrow sis..

I'm too dear!

Need to finish it and edit it and then everything ends!

I'm so happy and sad that this is ending!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: chasa
Sorry maithu for late comments...
It was awesome...
For the very first time,i liked imli...felt sad for her child..
I really liked the revelation ..heart touching..
Now i want to see the the swag wala suraj taking a stand for sukor...
Waiting for your next update...

Hey! No need to say sorry!

I'm really glad that you liked Imli here!

Me too dear! Child didn't do anything, so pitying the poor soul!

Glad you liked the revelation part!

And I assure you that you are going to see that Suraj in the next part!

See you!

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#293

Part 13

Emotional but Mind Blowing at the same time

Suraj receives a call and rushes to hospital while Chakor follows him she reaches near him just when the doctor tells him both mother and baby could be saved and Chakor obviously breaks down with this news seeing her sister who will no longer be there she has now lost her sister her best friend and guardian and she blames Suraj for her death she blames him as she too feels guilty for loving him while she knew he was married to her sister

but there seems to be some mystery letter left for Suraj

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#294

Part 14

Wow that was just awesomeness galore !!!!

So Suraj never cheated he was actually keeping Imli's secret promise as she was married to Vivaan

and she also knew about the girl the braclet belonged too

Imli and Suraj were great friends both knew the other loved someone only Imli didnot know it was her sister inlove with Suraj

now that Chakor calmed down Suraj could sit next to her and elsers too left them alone

but the moment it was time for Chakor's parents to leave and they wanted to take their daughter Suraj drops a bomd on them telling them that he and Chakor is already legally married and that they soon to be parents , is he saying this because he cannot afford to lose his love

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: taahir004
Part 13

Emotional but Mind Blowing at the same time

Suraj receives a call and rushes to hospital while Chakor follows him she reaches near him just when the doctor tells him both mother and baby could be saved and Chakor obviously breaks down with this news seeing her sister who will no longer be there she has now lost her sister her best friend and guardian and she blames Suraj for her death she blames him as she too feels guilty for loving him while she knew he was married to her sister
but there seems to be some mystery letter left for Suraj

Thanks a lot!

You resumed it superbly and you got the point!

It's a mysterious letter!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: taahir004
Part 14

Wow that was just awesomeness galore !!!!

So Suraj never cheated he was actually keeping Imli's secret promise as she was married to Vivaan
and she also knew about the girl the braclet belonged too
Imli and Suraj were great friends both knew the other loved someone only Imli didnot know it was her sister inlove with Suraj
now that Chakor calmed down Suraj could sit next to her and elsers too left them alone
but the moment it was time for Chakor's parents to leave and they wanted to take their daughter Suraj drops a bomd on them telling them that he and Chakor is already legally married and that they soon to be parents , is he saying this because he cannot afford to lose his love

Thank you so much!

Suraj is no less than a bomb himself ! LOL

Ah the question!

I love how this story keeps getting questions.

You will find it tomorrow dear!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#297

Hello everyone!

Thanks a lot everyone for being here and reading this story!
We are in our last part!
I tried to implement most of your people's wishes!

Link to previous part: Part 14

Happy reading!

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Part 15

After waiting for few minutes for any reaction from his family members, he said:
"I thought you would congratulate us at least for our marriage as the pregnancy is not yet confirmed. I don't think Chakor herself knew about it." raising an eyebrow at Chakor who is hiding behind Suraj after punching in his arms with a grumpy face.

*** What does he think about himself?
Can't he talk to me before talking to others?
I wish there was a hole here to take me in it. ***

"When.did.this.happen?" KN
"How?" Teju
"Why.this.secret?" Bhuvan
"Chakor" is all Kasturi could say.

- What's this reaction? I'm telling them a good news and changing the mood but this. -

*** What am I going to tell them?
How am I going to face them? ***

"What? It's normal between husband and wife. If you ask about our marriage, it's a bit complicated." passing his hand through his hair "I knew she loves me, so I tricked her to sign our marriage register papers. She came to know about it only when we were in Paris and then we made it." she punched again "I mean we made him or her." smiling shyly.
"Shameless creature!" she muttered making him grin.

"Oh!" "Ahann!" was the reaction they got from their parents.

Once the elders got back to their normal sense, they were ready to start the war by breaking the eye-lock Suraj and Chakor were sharing.
"You tricked my daughter?" Bhuvan accused.
"You know that we aren't against love marriage, you could have told us before taking this step." KN said for which Teju nodded.
"I think we need to get a check-up done for my baby!" Kasturi said and Teju nodded.

"Uncle, if I didn't do that, your daughter would have gone into a depression mode. And I don't want my Life to be like that. Aunty and Maa, I got an appointment with my friend for tomorrow when I saw her faint yesterday after the cremation."

*** Would I really went into a depression mode? May be I would have distanced myself the moment I will get to see that I couldn't forget my feelings and then went back to Australia and never return. Is it depression? I don't think so! ***

"So?" KN turned towards Bhuvan.
"So?" he repeated.
"I think" Teju trailed.
"You think?" Kasturi repeated in a questioning form.
"She must be the one to say or think something." Suraj said pointing towards his wife.
Everyone turned their attention to Chakor who is full visible to them as Suraj has moved away from her.

- What is there to think when I clearly said she is mine and we are together? Old people! -

*** Is there any invisible screen to hide me? ***

Felling all the pair of eyes on her, she opened her mouth:
"I don't know!" she said calmly.
Everyone has their brows raised except Suraj who is smirking.
"I think I like him." she added after few seconds of silence.
"Just like?" Suraj asked interrupting her.
She bent her head shyly saying "I love him more than before." and hides behind him as he smiled or can be said laughed just to get a punch in his back.

- Is this also called mood swings? -

"I think hormones are playing games with my daughter." Kasturi muttered.
"It's decided that my daughter will stay with us from now on." KN announced.
"There was nothing to decide Dad! She is staying with me." Suraj holding her hand.

Bhuvan came near the duo and glared at Suraj before turning his complete attention to Chakor with an affectionate smile.
"I lost one daughter with my behaviour. I want you to be happy. We all want that." he turns towards others and sees all are nodding before turning back "We want you to be happy. And I can see that your happiness is here. If you need anything, your Papa is always there."
"Don't worry Bhuvan, I will twist his ears if he plays with my daughter from here on." KN.

"Take care of her!" her mother said as she was holding his hand as a promise and he nodded. He felt her hand slid away and a metallic object rest there, which is the bracelet her daughter brought, which is the bracelet that was mentioned in the letter, which is a sign of their love. He slides it in his pocket as he sees her move towards his wife.

*** Am I rightfully staying here? ***
~ Yes! You are! It's your home! Where your love resides! Where your husband lives! Where your child's father lives! ~
*** It's not yet confirmed! ***
~ Do you think he will be this confident if it isn't? ~
*** Nope! By the way, are you willing to stay? ***
~ Of course yes! My dream is coming true! Even if my parents aren't fully out of the trauma, they are happy for me and I want this! ~
*** Yes but the marriage? ***

"Take care baby!" Kasturi caressed her daughter's head bringing her back before hugging after bidding bye to everyone else.

*** My future is here and I want my parents to be happy! ***

Her parents left from there and they all settled in the hall.
"I think you should take rest." he said turning to her with his hand laying over the head of the sofa.
"No I'm ok."
"No dear! Go and take rest. It has been a long day for you. I will call you for dinner. Now go." said Teju.
"I'm fine Mom."
"You must take rest during this time." her husband said.
"It's not yet confirmed." she pleaded with her eyes.

*** Why is he embarrassing me? ***

"I have a solution." Suraj announced.
"What?" everyone asked in chorus.
"This!" he got up and picked her in bridal style and started to walk from there.
"We are still here." KN informed his son as if he couldn't see that.
"Leave me. I can walk." she whined.

*** Oh God! How am I going to leave with him? ***

- It feels so good to see her like this in my hands, in front of others. If only Imli and Vivaan were here, they would have been happy for us! Especially Imli! -

"I can see that Dad!" turning his head lightly to his right and then back to Chakor's face "That option was already out."
"Leave me down you Pervert!" she said in a way that only he can hear her.
"Am I still that?"
She nodded.
"Ok! I will show you what this pervert can do!" kicking his room door close.

*** What is waiting for me now? Is he going to take all his power in his hands? Nope! I'm not letting him! ***

- I have my important work to do! And that's what I'm going to do! -

He put her in front the bathroom and turned away from there before directly going to his walk-in-closet to get a box.
"Why here?"
"Wait I will come." he answered.
He came back and handed her the box.
She opened it to find PregTest kit.

"Why?"
"Just to know."
"But"
"Just go and do it Doll! Use 3 sticks or even more." he cut her in-between.
"Okai!"

*** How can he be this sure about the fact? I know that sometimes I will not get my monthly regularly and it's normal that dates can change! Let's do the test and see! ***

She closed the door and took 3 stick to test.
Outside the bathroom, Suraj was walking forth and back like walking in front of the labour room.
He couldn't take it any more so he started to knock on the door which turned into banging on the door and finally, he opened it to find Chakor crying with her mouth palmed.

He jumped near her and hugged her, calming her by rubbing her shoulder.
"It's ok Baby! Whatever it is we will handle it." He didn't still see the sticks laying near the sink.
"Wwwee aarree ppreeggg." she said still her hands over her mouth.
"Hmmm?"
Freeing her mouth "We are pregnant."
He kissed her forehead and brought her to their bed before making her lay over him with her head on his chest and their arms wrapped around each other's body.

- I'm really a father now! I I'm so happy -

She has calmed down since few minutes and now she is making circles over his body while he is taking her scent when his hands are playing in her body and her hair.

With his one hand, he brought the bracelet out and on her hand.

"How come you knew that?"
"What? Pregnancy?" locking the bracelet and hugging her.
She nodded.
"We are together since that day in Paris. I mean your honeymoon destination." she blushes and he kisses her cheek before continuing "Then your emotions started to change rapidly since 1 week, I mean a little bit of mood swings. Plus, your diet changed a little compared to before, you added pickle in almost every dish. And you fainted yesterday."
"Oh!"

"If I loved someone else, what would have you done?" she asked after few seconds.
"2 options are there. I would have killed him or made you fall for me."
"If we never meet after that?"
"Destiny will not play cruel to everybody."
"Oh! Trusting in Destiny!"
"No trusting in my love for you."

- I would have waited and searched for you until the last breath of mine! -

*** I love this man more and more! Is this called mood swing too? I don't think so! ***

"You are mad!" she said as she laid besides him.
"I know that. And that too only for you."
"We love you." she said caressing her tummy.
"I lust you Baby Doll!" he peeks her lips "I love you too." he kisses her tummy.
"Crazy!" punching lightly on his shoulder.
Caressing her cheek with his thumb "Only Crazy About You!"

END!

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I can't believe that the story is finished.
Thanks a lot for your support and love.
Please don't ask epilogue, it's really a difficult task to say no to you all.

I may come back with a season 2 of this story!
Hope I satisfied most of your wishes here and you guys enjoyed reading this.

Thanks for coming along with me until now.
LIKE & COMMENT your views if you find this SS entertaining.
See you guys with other stories.

- Maithili

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