'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb

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Guys this is my 2nd try on writing...i dont know what FF,OS,TS...etc are called actually but this a short situation based on present track...n that to based on the pic which was shared by Niti with a wound

U can address me as mad for MaNan...but i really want something like this also in the show...hope u ll like it

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MaNan's fear

The poll was going on peacefully after Manik handled the situation...n ppl start voting

Manik left from there bcz he was happy but was also upset with whatever going on ...he goes to Jam room n plays guitar... Chudail[Soha] enters Jam room just to stop Manik from going there to the polling booth bcz she sends some goons to hurt Nandini

On the otherside Fab4 n Abhi were with Nandini at polling booth where 4 boys cum n start talking rubbish n starts abusing girls...Cabir ,Abhi n Dhruv try to stop them...In the mean while One of them sneak out of that fight n hurts Nandini...

Nandini's get hurt n blood starts flowing from head...as soon as Cabir spots that Nandini got hurt he rushes to her...n everyone spots it n runs to her...meanwhile that goons runs away

Cabir: Nandini u have to rush to the hospital v ll take care of everything here u don't worry n asks Abhi to take her to the hospital...

As they start leaving he goes behind Nandini n Abhi to talk to them...he stops Nandini

Cabir:Nandini...u have to stay away from college for some days until this wound is clear...Aur haa galti se bhi Manik ko pata nahi chalna nahi chahiye ki tumhe chot lagi hai...

Nandini:But Cabir...Manik will

Cabir:Nandini ...u know na aaj kya hua...u don't worry I ll take care of him n I ll do some bahana ...that u r had emergency at home something like that...Abhi u also keep this in mind

Both Nandini n Abhi nods head n leaves

Nandini gets dressing n goes home...but she was tensed bcz she know that Manik will trace her...so she switches of her phone

Manik tries to sneak but Chudail doesn't allow him...but somehow he manages n reaches principal's office where Princi decides to take Navya back bcz they won the poll

Everyone becomes happy and Mukti msgs Navya that Princi took her back in college but Manik's eyes were just searching Nandini...

Manik to Cabir:Cabir ...Nandini kaha hai...

Cabir :Who toh ghar gayi...usne tujhe inform karne ko kaha par main bhulgaya sorry

Manik gets confused:Ghar...par mujhe kyu nahi bataya usne

Cabir:Chodna Manik ...chal chalte hai... practice bhi karna varna Nandini will start with her lecture...

Manik: k chal...

At Nandini's place

Navya gets shocked seeing Nandu's bandage ...

Navya:Ye kya hua ...humne kaha tha ...ye sab chid do ...humari waja se dekho kya hua

Nandini:Dekho Navya ...i m sure kit um kal se college zaroor jaogi

Navya gets a msg from Mukti:She gets a shock that clg has taken her back n shares with Nandini

Nandini:dekha maine kaha na...tum kalse clg zaroor jaogi

Navya: Jaogi ka kya matlab hai tum nahi aogi...

Nandini:Nahi...jab tak ye chot teek nahi hojati main Manik ke saamne nahi aasakti...tumne dekha na aaj kya hua...aur Cabir ne bhi kaha ki Manik ko nahi pata chalna chahiye

Navya:Theeke ...jaisa tum kaho...hum kehdenge kit um apne Ams ke paas chaligayi kuh din keliye

Nandini :I think its great idea n thinks but kya Manik believe karega

Manik reaches home n tries to call Nandini but her phone was switched off

He thinks she myt b tired so let her take rest will talk to her in the mrng

Next mrng in clg...Manik n Cabir spots Navya alone...

Before Manik asks anything to Navya Cabir interrupts

Cabir with a wink:Navya...woh Nandini nahi dikh rahi...afterall tumhare saath sath uski bhi jeet hui hai

Navya starts blabbering :Haa woh...kal uske Ams ka call aaya that oh who Mangalore chali gayi do teen din keliye

Manik:What...usne kuch kyu nahi

Navya:Haa who usko achanak jana pada na toh batane ka mauka nahi mila hoga Manik

Cabir:Haa theek hai Manik...she ll get some break from all this chaos

Manik feels fishy...looking at Cabir n Navya's Blabbering

Navya leaves from there in hurry

Cabir :Manik ...chal practice karna hai kuch hi din baaki hai

Manik : Haa tu chal main aata hun...n tries to call Nandini but phone goes switched off

Manik spots Abhi n asks...

Abhi unaware of what to say n starts Blabbering n says...Mujhe kaise pata hoga ...tumhe pata hona chahiye n leaves from there

Manik feels more fishy n walks towards Jam room

As Cabir enters Jam room Mukti asks everyone...that where is our Manager guys...how is she now

Cabir :Ya she is fine...but she ll not um today bcz Navya told she left to Mangalore bcz of some emergency

Mukti:What...ye ladki ka kuch pata hi nahi chalta...i mean kal use chot lagi n aaj who Mangalore me hai

On the otherside Manik overhears Mukti's words n before anyone spots him he leaves from there in anger

At Nandu's place Nandu n Chachi

Chachi:Nandu...tu aaram kar ...main jara bazaar se hokar aati hun

Nandu:Theek hai Chachi

Nandu locks the door n goes to take rest as she was feeling dizzy bcz of medicines...

Manik reaches Nandu's place n spots Chachi outside...n asks about Nandu

Chachi:Manik tum yaha...

Manik:Haa who Nandini clg nahi aayi thi toh...Chachi interrupts

Chachi :Haa who use chot lagi thin a isiliye ...furious n worried Manik interrupts Chachi

Manik:Kya main milsakta hun...

Chachi:haa jao na...main kuch der main aati hun

Chachi leaves n Manik rings the bell

Nandu:Lagta hai chichi fir kuch bhulgayi...cums to open the door n gets shocked

Manik looks at her anger n worry but his fear was also clear...when he see the bandage on Nandu's forehead

Nandini:Manik...plz don't get angry...i can explain...plz calm down

Manik bangs his hand on the door

Nandu:Manik plz Rishad utjayega...plz

Manik holds her arms in anger :What u think of urself ...how dare u hide this from me,I told u I cant see u hurt...

Nandu tries to calm him down:This is why I dint tell u...u go mad for small things Manik...its just a small cut...I m afraid of this anger whih turns to b dangerous some time

Manik:Nandini Y cant u understand that I cant see u in pain even if it is a small one...U don't know the time when I came to know that u r hurt...i died 100 times till I saw u

Nandini:I m sorry Manik...i ll not repeat this I m really sorry...I was afraid that how u ll react...I was afraid when u hit that guy yesterday...so I was feared...even I cant see u in pain

Manik calms down: Don't u dare do this to me...ever Nandini

Nandini:Promise...but on one condition

Manik:What...

Nandu:U ll try to control ur anger

Manik:I ll but not when it cums to ur safety...

Manik kiss Nandini on her wound n hugs her...promising each other...


Part 2 on pg 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118676276


Part 3 on pg 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118783011

Part 4 on pg 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118818346

Part 5 on pg 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4285774/manans-fear-part-32-on-pg-111updtd-on-26th-feb?pn=20

Part 6 on pg 25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118978240

part 7 on pg 29

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119036329

part 8 on pg 31

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119085618

part 9 on pg 35

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119123199

part 10 on pg 39

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119159192

Part 11 on pg 42

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119195733

part 12 on pg 44

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119200447

part 13 on pg 48

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119230911

part 14 on pg 52

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119265255

part 15 on pg 59

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119298496

part 16 on pg 64

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119334892

part 17 on pg 69

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119373254

part 18 on pg 71

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119410235

Part 19 on pg73

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119447292

part 20 on pg 76

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119486944

Part 21 on pg 80

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119500420

Part 22 on pg 82

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119537032

Part 23 on pg 86

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119556662

part 24 on pg 88

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119592824

Part 25 on pg 90

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119629243

Part 26 on pg 93

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119666643

Part 27 on pg 97

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119741298

Part 28 on pg 99

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119774624

Part 29 on pg 102

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119806724

Part 30 on pg 105

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119844523

Part 31 on pg 108

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119880159

Part 32 on pg 111

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119917381


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This is my second try...
My first work who dint read my first try new bond

CV's plz meri bhi sun lo----ek naya bond--SCENE 6 updated

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This is just a sitution dear so i dont know i l be able to continue this or not ...

but i ll try to write more in future

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