'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 37

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Posted: 10 years ago
Yes update soon... Plsss cant wait ufff that cliffhanger
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Originally posted by: 8seetha

Manik realization was superb
Awesome update but anxious to read the next part.
Anyway thank u for this splendid story.



Thanq for liking it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: appy111

Yes update soon... Plsss cant wait ufff that cliffhanger

Yes i m doing it in few mins
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Posted: 10 years ago

Guys this part I like most...n i really hope that CV's shud show something like this...I mean Manik's part...

N i m sure that after towards the end u myt hate me...so dont panic

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MaNan's Fear ---Part 14

Recap

Album is launched.

Fab5 gets to know about MaNan.

Manik:Yes guys...I n Nandini r together ...from long time...infact I ...I...I Love her n cant stay away n even cant imagine anything without her

All were happy except Dhrulya as they had somany questions in their mind even Mukti wanted Some answers.

Manik continues...I wanted her in my life...i was falling for her

Mukti:But Manik...Manik interrupts her before she completes

Manik:I know Mukti...u ppl don't like her...i know even she knows that...n trust me she never came in between us...me n Fab5...

Aliya:Manik...she...Again Manik interrupts Aliya

Manik:No Aliya she never came in between us...infact she hated me a lot...i was the one who was torturing her every now n then...at that time I was obsessed with her...

When the goons thing happened ...she dint believe me when I said that I dint send that goons until u confessed infront of everyone Aliya...uss din shayad Fab5 tutjaata but she was the one made me realize that it was my mistake...she was not angry on u or Dhruv...instead she was angry on me n said that bcz of my ego n anger I ll lose my friends

I was like melting...she always managed to calm down my anger...Whenever I was confused n was breaking apart I never showed my weakness to u ppl but unknowingly I used to land up at Nandini...She always showed me way knowingly or unknowingly...But she used to run away kept a distance thinking that I m cheating on Aliya...then I told her that I broken up with u

she started trusting me when I stopped troubling her...n we came so close that no one cud ever break us apart...n I finally had her...but

Mukti:But...But kya Manik...

Manik:I walked away from her on musicana nyt saying that she was just a mission for me to accomplish for that punch ...n then her performance got ruined...where she actually believed me n thought to ruin NH3's performance I did that

Everyone was like WHAT

Aliya:Tumne aisa kyu kiya...

All were silent...but Dhruv breaks the silence

Dhruv:Bcz of me...I said that I think I love her...hai na Manik...tune ye sab mere liye kiya tha na

Manik just continues:Uske baad bhi woh himmat nahi haari...Like Cabir says She is a fighter

Everyone smiles as he says that

Manik Continues:----.woh chahti toh wahase jaasakti thi ...but when we found Cabir in that condition ...we rushed to hospital...n I swear agar woh nahi hoti toh shayad main Cabir ko nahi bacha pata...kyunki doctor was not admitting Cabir...par uske kehne pe doctor ne admit kiya as she managed to tell him that it was just an accident...warna police aane tak Cabir admit nahi hopata...

Everyone looks in Shock towards Cabir...n Cabir smiles...

They were listening to Manik like they were listening to a fairytale

Manik continues:...then she thought that I lied to her abt each n everything...even she dint believe that I have brokenup with Aliya...she thaught I really cheated her n Misunderstanding were started increasing which I wanted but somewhere I was not liking it that she was hating me...

Long pause...everyone was silent

Manik continued:...But Slowly she understood that all I did it was all lie when Dhruv proposed her...N finally she made me confess that what I did was all for my friend Dhruv...She finally understood that I can do anything for my friends...but she was angry that I dint trust her...

I don't know how many times I apologized her but she was so broken that only apology was not enough...But Fir bhi she never gave up on me...She protected me like I stand for u guys...After knowing abt Harshad she helped us to bring him down...but I showed my stupidity there also I kept a deal infront of her that if she accepts my apology then only I ll get dressing to my bruised hand

All started laughing...

Navya gets a call from Chachi...n she goes out to talk...

Manik continued :Her fear came true n I really landedup in hospital which made her to walk away from my life

All were shocked...

Dhruv :What ...ye kya kehraha hai buddy

Manik:She thought we r toxic...we just hurt eachother if we r together...

Manik smiles...everyone gets confused...

But then We cudnt stay away from eachother for long thanks to Chudail... ...n now we r friends... Yet i don't know what she feels about me...n I don't want to lose her bcz of my stupidity again... But when Chudail attacked her ...I understood Nandini's importance in my life n what I actually feel for her

Aliya :Attack...what attack

Cabir:Aliya...Chudail is trying to harm Nandini from the time she came to know about them...that's y she took all of us to farmhouse so that she can harm her

Manik sadly ends his story by saying...She never hated u guys after what all we did...she knows that u ppl r more important to me...n she never expects anything from me or from our relation...she just wants us to b happy

Everyone was silent...Aliya breaks the silence

Aliya:She loves u Manik...

On the other side

Chudail some how manages to take unconscious Nandini to Store room n ties her up in the chair ...

Nandini comes into senses n finds herself in store room n Chudail was sitting infront of her...

Nandini gets a shock when she sees a blade in her hand...she struggles to get out of the chair

Nandini:Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...aur kya chahti ho

Chudail:Tumhe kya laga Nandini Album launch hogaya toh ab Manik tumhara hojayega...

Nandini:Y don't u understand...What is ur problem

Chudail:But I do...n I can do anything for him

Nandini:Yes even I can do anything for him bcz I LOVE HIM...thats y I stayed away from him these many days...for his sake

Chudail:Now u have to leave him forever Nandini...that too for his sake bcz I love him n he loves me not u

Nandini:What ...u r mad... n u seriously need a treatment

Chudail gets furious:S I m mad ...madly in Love with Manik...U said na u can do anything...then die...n leave Manik for me...

Navya cums in running worriedly...

Navya was fully horridied to tell: Manik...woh...

Manik was not interested to listen to her after what all happened...that His realtioship is out infront of everyone...which he thought there is no future to it...bcz his friends don't like her n somewher he felt even Nandini doesn't love him...

Navya shouts:Manik...woh Nandini

Manik gets up from chair in shock:Nandini kya...

Navya:Woh Chachi ka phn aaya tha ...Nandini ghar nahi pohachi...

Manik:What...tumne kaha woh ghar gayi hai

Navya :haa uska msg aaya tha...par ab toh ek ghanta hogaya uska msg aake

Manik goes all panic n starts calling...her phn was ringing but no one was picking the call

Cabir suddenly remembers something:Ohh Shit...

Manik looks at him...

Mukit :Kya hua Cabir...

Cabir:Chudail ne Manik aur Nandini ka pic bheja right...Ohh God how can I forget this

Manik:Kya...

Cabir:Manik ...Chudail ne Nandini ko blackmail kiya tha do din pehle to stay away from u...usne ye pic bheja matlab she got to know that u r still together...woh zaroor Nandini ke saath hai...she has not come here yet...

Manik gets furious:Tu pagal hai Cabir...tu ab mujhe bata raha hai...

Mukti:Lets go...first we ll have to searh her

Dhruv:But dhoonde kaha

Manik checks his cell for her location:She is still in College...

Everyone heads towards college ...

Store room

Nandini: U have gone mad...totally mad

Chudail tortures Nandini a lot...as she was a psycho she dint know what she was doing with her...

Chudail cuts her arms...hits her on head...inshort she badly hurts Nandini...

Manik,Cabir,Mukti in one car

Manik:I ll not leave this psycho today...i ll kill her

Cabir:Calm down...Manik kuch nahi hoga

Mukti:Manik drive faster

Cabir:Mukti call the cops...we ll finish this ones n for all

Everyone reaches college...

Manik:We ll split up in two two...as we don't know what is she upto...if anyone knows anything inform me

Mukti stops Navya n asks her to stay at gate n if cops come bring them as she ll call where is Nandini

So Mukbhi n Dhrulya goes inside the college but Manik stops suddenly

Cabir:Kya hua

Manik checks his cell n it was showing behind the college

Manik:Cabir...Backyard

ManBir runs behind the college...

Manik cudn't think in tension...so Cabir snatches Manik's cell n tries to locate the exact location

Cabir says:Manik...Storeroom

ManBir rushes towards storeroom

Cabir informs everyone n asks them to cum to storeroom

Mukti informs Navya to come to store room if cops come there

Chudail pushes Nandini's chair to one corner n tries to hide her by covering with some things kept in store room

As finally Chudail cuts her wrist nerves

Precap

Manik cudnt find Nandini in store room

Chudail lies to Manik that Nandini locked her in store room

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Sorry guys i m unable to send PM's to all...as i m sending those who r in my Buddy list...So if u want PM on next update plz buddy me

Actually i was updating daily so thought no need of PM but some requested me

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I ll update next part tmrw mrng so have patience

Plz like n drop a comment

Edited by kresham - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
R u crazy?? I mean seriously aftr readin this u thnk I hv this tiny lil bit of patience left inside me.. Nooo..
U got to update this today.. Plss pls *puppy face*
Awesome brilliant bt u hv to update 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Again a clifffhanger... Humara sabr ka imtihan mmat lo yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kriti good writing. I liked the clear confession to FAB 5 and now Manik's panic
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update!! Bt hidden nandini.. how s manik gonna find her??
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome and plz update nxt part soon 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manan58

R u crazy?? I mean seriously aftr readin this u thnk I hv this tiny lil bit of patience left inside me.. Nooo..
U got to update this today.. Plss pls *puppy face*
Awesome brilliant bt u hv to update 😃

😆😆😆I know but i have some other work today...so i can do it tmrw itself...sorry

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