'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 75

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

Awsum update yr ...
but next part m manik will b upset that scares m...
Just 2 part left 😕
I m going to miss dis

Yes two r left...dont know yaar...likhrahi hun toh badte jaaraha hai😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sana.1990

amazing gal i read all updates together i knw am unable to rep on daily basics ,,but well done ,,

manik forgetting that nandini didn't say i love u was perfect loved it ,, made me laugh bhuddu manik :😛

an i am happpy u didn't ended it ,, really wish it continues more but i knw u will end tomorrow ,,😊

but anyways i loved the story ,,u should write more now on😉👏👏

Sana...two more parts r thr...so dont miss
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Posted: 10 years ago

MaNan's Fear--Part 31

Recap

Manik catches Nandini n asks her to tell those three words but she escapes .

So boys also goes for shopping n unfortunately Manik also buys white Suit for himself...

Everyone meets ones again at college.

Manik was sitting quietly where others were discussing abt the party n all

Nandini notices Manik n understands that he is still angry on her abt her confession

Finally after talking n deciding everyone decide to leave from there for their respective works...

As Mukti decides to goto hospital n Cavya decides to goto the venue n decorate

N Dhrulya for their date the candle light dinner which Dhruv decided earlier

But Manik was not listening to others n was deeply looking into his phone

Mukti:Chalo guys lets go...we have less time

Manik refuses:U guys carryon...waise bhi mujhe yaha kaam hai...

All agrees n moves out...but Nandini understands n comes back to Manik

Nandini:Manik what happened...Y u were so silent all the while

Manik stays silent...

Nandini:Manik...again u r angry on me...

Manik:I m not in a mood to talk to u so leave before I say anything

Nandini:K...but I wanted to tell u something

Manik ignoes n starts playing Guitar...

Nandini:Theeke hai main boldeti hun fir mat kehna ki bola nahi...

Nandini clears her throat:...I LOVE...

Manik was still playing the guitar...so Nandini tries to walk away leaving the sentence half...

Manik suddenly grans Nandini n pins her at the wall n locks her

Manik:I LOVE... What

Nandini smiles teasingly:Abhi mood nahi hai...n escapes from there ...

Manik stops her:Listen Nandini...after this if u say also ...i m not gonna listen

Nandini smiles:Really Manik...

Manik gets more furious:Really

Nandini:Then the challenge is accepted

Manik gets confused...n Nandini leaves from there

Nandini asks Mukti to msg Manik to pick her up sharp at 8pm...

Mukti msgs Manik to pick up Nandini sharp at 8pm...but Manik was angry n otherside he cant even ignore or avoid Nandini.

Nandini wears her choice of dress at home n reaches college n she calls Manik exactly at 7.45

Manik:Ya I m cmg be ready

Nandini:Manik I m waiting at college ...so plz pick me up from college

Manik:But whatr u doing at college...u went home right

Nandini:Manik don't worry I m fine just come to college

Manik in worry rushes towards college

As in college also there was party going on Nandini dint had to panic...so she just changes her dress n waits for Manik behind the college where she was about to give surprise to Manik...

On otherside Cavya reaches Venue n were preparing everything

But suddenly Navya feels dizzy n was about to fall...But Cabir manages to handle her n makes her sit

Cabir:Navya tum theek ho...achanak kya hua

Navya:Kuch nahi bas chakkar aagaya...

Cabir gets worried:Doc ke paas jana hai

Navya:Nahi cabir its k...aisa hota...aaj kuch zyada hi bhaag daud hogayi thi na so...

Cabir gets annoyed:Ab tum kuch nahi karogi just take rest n I ll handle everything...

Navya:But Cabir...

Cabir:Main apni baatein repeat nahi karta toh chup chaap baithi raho yaha par...

Navya nods her head in yes...

Mukti reaches hospital n goes through all the discharge papers so that she can spend the rest of the time with him before he leaves to US

On the otherhand Dhrulya were enjoying their Candle light Dinner

Meanwhile Manik reaches college n calls Nandini

Manik:Where r u

Nandini:Manik come behind the college

Manik:What the hell r u doing there

Nandini:Manik plz

Manik gets irritated n cuts the call but Nandini was feeling uncomfortable bcz of the dress n tries to hide herself behind the decorations

Manik reaches there n starts shouting

Manik:What hell Nandini...where r u...

Nandini slowly comes infront of Manik adjusting her dress

Manik:What is this Nandini...What r u doing here...then he suddenly stops looking at dress

Manik was awestruck looking her in short dress...Nandini was avoiding his gaze...

Manik comes out of thoughts n looks around at the decoration n understands that they have first expressed their feelings exactly with the same place.

Manik looks at uncomfortable Nandini:Toh ye sab tumne kiya hai

Nandini looks at him finally...but was pulling her dress down

Nandini:Manik woh...woh...

Manik takes out his jacket n cums near Nandini ...he drapes his jacket around her waist in sideways so that it covers it till her knees n she don't feel uncomfortable anymore

Nandini was amazed seeing all this...

Nandini:Manik...Manik interrupts her by putting his finger on her lips

Manik:No need to tell anything Nandini...i know u did this for me ,u thought I am expecting something like this from u...

Nandini removes his finger:Nahi Manik maine socha surprise...aur woh...Navya,Aliya n Mukti ne bhi kaha that u ll like to see me like this

Manik smiles n pulls Nandini closer:U dint understood me yet Nandini...i like the way u r...I never expected this from u...I love ur innocene n ur pure heart...i was impressed by Ur inner beauty ...I Love u as u r Nandini

Nandini eyes were filled with tears:Thanq Manik...coming into my life...I ll trust u Humesha...Main Humesha tumhe apne prayers me rakhungi...N I ll always shine for u

Manik hugs Nandini tightly...

Nandini gets amazes seeing fireflies around them again...

Even Manik gets surprised...n now he gets Curious to know the secret about them too

Nandini remembers her mothers words n smiles

Manik breaks the hug n curiously asks Nandini

Manik:Nandini today u have to tell abt theses fireflies...How come they always glow when we r together


Nandini:Bcz we r destined to be together Manik

Manik:Matlab

Nandini finally says those three Magical words: I LOVE U Manik...

Manik gets surprised listening to those words where he was expecting the story of fireflies.

Manik gets very happy n ends up hugging her tightly...

Nandini without breaking the hug:My Mom use to say that Fireflies glow when there is true Love

Manik opens her eyes n breaks the hug...:What...really...this was ur Moms story...

Nandini:Yes...n it came true today...we r destined to be together

Manik:I don't believe in all this but Yes I agree that we love eachother

Nandini:If I make u believe then

Manik gets confused :How...

Nandini:When did we first meet Manik...do u remember?

Manik:Ya...at college...u n Navya barged into our practice n that Navya broke my guitar string

Nandini:No...
Manik:What... U trying to say hum bachpan ke bichde hue saathi hai...n u r stalking me

Nandini hits him playfully...Manik laughs:KK tell me

Nandini:U remember where were u on ...10th july

Manik:Ohh...God Nandini dont ask me abt dates I m very bad at them n u remember dates n all when we met

Nandini:Not actually but later I recollected it that was our first meet...bcz I was coming to Mumbai for the first time...On Bangalore-Mumbai highway our bus got collided with a car n we all got down to see if any major accident or something

Manik suddenly remembers:Yes...we were coming back from Bangalore n hit the bus n we left our jeep there n started walking form there...Ya I remember even I got collided actually bcz of my guitar with someone n she was abt to drop something which I caught n gave it back...but I cudnt see who was it...

Nandini steps back n folds her hand towards her chest:That was a jar kind of thing right which u caught

Manik:Yaa...something like that

Nandini looks at him waiting for him to remember properly

Manik cums out of thoughts n shouts:Was that u...really...

Nandini smiles...:Yes...it was me...

Manik gets surprised...:Really...i mean then how did u recognize me...have u seen me on that day

Nandini:No...actually I cudnt see u bcz I was happy that u saved my jar of Fireflies n by the time I can say thanq... u left...I saw u with the guitar with star hanging on it n u five were walking...N i realized slowly that u were the one on that day who saved my fireflies...

Manik gets surprised n amazed:This is unbelievable Nandini...I mean

Nandini:Yes Manik...n u wanted to know na what I think abt u ...n I came on that day with my fireflies to tell u that I LOVE U But

Manik cums near n cups her face:I m sorry for hurting u Nandini...N I promise I ll not hurt u ever...I lost u any times...but now I cant let this happen...

Nandini s eyes were filled with tears...:Manik...

Manik:Sshhh...no more crying...

Manik brushes off her tears with kisses...n kisses her forehead...

Nandini comes forward to kiss Manik n ends up kissing his cheek...

Manik then endsup kissing Nandini passionately n Nandini gives in without any hesitation

Precap

Final Party

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Plz do like n comment

Hopefully one more part is left

Edited by kresham - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful... that is all I can say 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
Jacket scene was so lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago


I was reading this update like this...i even hv a pillow clutched like him

and when they started talking about their first meeting...






thanks for the amazing update!!

Edited by dushturain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it totally
glad these two are together
please continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww Kritika, u deserve a big 🤗 ... so happy that m still smilin 😊

Yay !!! Finally MaNan confessed 😆 🥳...hope to read the next update soon
n wish it was not the final chapter 😕

Anyways , eagerly waitin...thanks !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
Loved it!!!
Manik understood her so much...n tht jacket scene awsum...
Very well written...

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful..
Loved it so much..😳😳

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