'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 45

Originally posted by: Zoya_09

WoW Kritika, just WoaW (Manik's style 😆 ) !!!

So soo beautiful , read part 14 n 15 in one go,

had tears in my eyes when I read part 15,poor MaNan 😕

very well written...simply brilliant, keep it up !!!

Eagerly waitin 4 the next update , thanks ! 😊

Originally posted by: appy111

When r u updating??!!

Guys i m not aware of medical things so spare me if i did any blunders,i just tried what i know

MaNan's Fear--Part 16

Recap:

Manik rescues Nandini n admits her in hospital...but she was still in danger

Early hours

Manik looks at Nandini's face...n remembers every moment spent with Nandini

Manik puts his fingers on Nandini's wounds n starts caressing them slowly...but he was feeling the same pain which she was going through

With Manik's touch Nandini in her unconsciousness starts remembering every moment spent with Manik

Suddenly she takes Manik's name with long Breathe ...

Manik gets worried

Manik:Nandini...kya hua Nandini...i m here...

When she was breathing fast ...Manik runs out n calls for Doctor...

All three of them gets up on hearing Manik's shout

Cabir n Mukti runs to him...

Cabir:Manik kya hua...

Manik doesn't listen to him n still shouts for Doctor...

Abhi runs to call doctor

Cabir shouts at Manik to calm down...

Manik calms down n says...:Woh Nandini...Manik...then he shouts again for Doctor

Mukti runs n checks Nandini ...she was breathing very badly...

Meanwhile Doctor barge in n nurse sends Manik out...

Mukti:Manik calm down she will b fine...

Cabir:Manik tu pagal hogaya hai...Nandini theek hai

But Manik was going cranky n slowly he was loosing hope...bcz he promised himself that he ll never let anyone harm Nandini...looking Nandini in that condition Manik was broken totally broken

Doctor cums out ...Abhi runs to doc...

Mukti n Cabir also runs to doc

But Manik was stepping back n stood leaning the wall...n dint even looked at doc...[remember he dint listen to doc when doc said 12hrs crucial...if she gains conscious then she is out of danger or else]

Doc:She is out of danger...

Mukti,Cabir n Abhi were very happy...Cabir hugs Mukti in joy...

Abhi:Thanq Doctor...but what happened to her...

Doc:Nothing just she had a problem in breathing...in this condition anything can bring them back...may b fear,joy,worry,responsibility...anything...Something has definitely striked her to fight back...

Doc to Cabir:u were right young boy...she is a fighter

Cabir gets tears in his eyes...bcz he remembers the time when she was along with him when he was in the same condition

Doc:She is unconscious now...n kuch aur der lagega hosh aane me...

Mukti:Doc anything serious

Doc:No...she is fine now...but she is weak bcz of blood loss...it ll take time in recovery too...we ll inform u...for now she has to b under observation...Ones she wakes up we can tell her exact condition

Abhi:Thanq Doctor...Thanq verymuch

Doc leaves...

Manik starts blabbering:Nandini was right

Cabir turns back hearing that...n cums to Manik

Cabir:Manik suna tune Doctor ne kya bola

Manik without listening to him continues his blabbering: Nandini was right ...we r toxic...we cant stay with eachother

Cabir:What...

Manik starts behaving weirdly...n breaks down infront of them...

Manik:We harm eachother that's it...

Cabir:Will u shut up Manik...

Mukti:Tujhe pata bhi hai tu kya bolraha hai...

But Manik continues n Abhi understands his condition...n suddenly utters

Abhi:Nandini theek hai...

Manik looks at him...even Mukti n Cabir looks at Abhi...

Manik looks at him with a question on face..."What did u say?"

Abhi repeats:Haa Nandini theek hai...woh bhi tumhare wajah se...

Abhi assures him so that Manik stop blaming himself...n come out of guilt

Manik smiles n looks at Cabir

Cabir:Haa Manik...tune suna nahi...Doc said she is absolutely fine...

Manik hugs Cabir in joy n Without wasting time Manik runs into ICU...

Mukti was shocked seeing Manik like that

Mukti:Maine Manik ko aise pehle kabhi nahi dekha...

Abhi:It was his fear...fear of losing ur loved ones...

Mukti was falling for Abhi...completely

Manik enters ICU n sits beside Nandini holding her hand

Manik speaks to unconsicious Nandini:U scared me Nandini...Main kaise jee pata tumhare bina...I Love u Nandini n I cant live without u...Aaj mujhe sach me samaj aagaya hai ki dur jaana kise kehte hai ...n crashes beside her on chair holding her hand...but this time in relief

Sun rised n at 7am Aliya reaches hospital along with Dhruv n Navya...

Aliya asks about Nandini's condition n

Dhruv was worried about his best buddy...As Manik was the one who stood in his worst conditions every time he got attacks...

Cabir informs them...

Cabir:Guys she is fine...n out of danger

Navya:Shukar hai Mata rani ka...hum abhi Chachi ko phone karke aate hai

Mukti:Guys Manik needs us...he always stud for us in worst conditions...now its our turn

Abhi:Sorry to interrupt between ...but I think u shud bring Manik out of his guilt...he myt still feel the same what he did last nyt...

Dhruv:What...kya hua Manik ko

Mukti:He broke down...use laga Nandini...she cudnt continue

Cabir:Yes guys...but some how Abhi managed to bring him back from depression...

Aliya:But Manik aisa nahi tha...

Mukti:I know Aliya...but I think instead of asking him questions we ll have to just cheer him up

Aliya:Tumlog ghar jao...we ll be here...go n freshenup...

After some time when Manik doesn't come out

Cabir:Guys I think Manik ko bhi ghar bhejna hoga...he has not slept whole nyt I think...

Mukti:Hmm...but I don't think he ll go...

Dhruv:Mujhe nahi lagta woh Jayega...

Cabir looks at Chachi cmg in ...

Cabir:Ab woh chahkar bhi waha nahi ruksakta...

Navya:Kyu...

Cabir points towards Chachi...

Cabir:I ll bring Manik out...n runs into ICU

With suddenly opened door sound...Manik getsup worriedly...

Manik in shock:Nandini...but he finds she is not awake...

Cabir:Manik its me...chal yaha se...ghar jaate hai...

Manik gets annoyed n dint leave Nandini's hand:Cabiiir...tu jaa...main nahi aaraha...jab tak Nandini utnahi jaati I cant move from here...

Cabir:But Manik...before Cabir completes...Chachi walks in...

Manik slowly leaves Nandini's hand n places it properly on bed n looks at Cabir...

Cabir gives him an expression of what he was trying to tell n why...

Manik starts blaberring:Chachi woh...Nandini theek hai...

Chachi:Haa...Navya ne bataya...ab tum sab ghar jao...main yaha rukti hun...

Manik was left with no choice but to leave...

Manik looks at unconscious Nandini before leaving...n thinks..."I ll b back soon"

Manik n cabir leaves the room n Rishab n Chachi sits in ICU...

Aliya:Guys go n freshen up...

Cabir:Manik...chal...we ll come back soon...

Manik looks back to ICU ...

Chacha cums near to FAB5,Navya n Abhi...joins his hands n thank them for saving his child with tears rolling down...as they were not their child but Nandini n Rishab completed his family...

Manik cudn't react to such a gesture infact Fab5 was speechless

Abhi looks at their faces n understands that they never came across such situation as they were rude to everyone their whole life

Abhi:Uncleji...Thanq ki koi baat hi nahi...Navya joins him...

Navya:Haa Chachaji...Kya Nandini kisiki madat karne se piche hat ti hai...agar uske jagah yaha hum me se koi bhi hota...toh woh bhi yahi karti na...

Chacha nods his head in Yes

Chacha goes into ICU...

Cabir:Manik ...chal...

Abhi,Mukti leaves together n ManBir together...

Manik rushes fast into n gets freshenup n goes back to hospital within half n hour...n leaves a "sorry" msg for Cabir n a msg to Mukti to pick Cabir while coming to college

Manik rushes to Hospital...

Dhruv gets shocked seeing Manik so early

Dhruv:Buddy tu itni jaldi...

Manik:Nandini kaisi hai...is still Chachi inside...Nandini ko hosh aaya

Aliya:Manik relax...she is fine but hosh nahi aaya...n Chachi is still with her...tumhe gaye sirf aadha ganta hua

Manik gets upset that Nandini is still unconscious ...

He waits till 15mins outside but was going restless bcz Chachi was not coming out n he wanted to see Nandini...meanwhile Doc walks into the ICU...

Doc sees that all three of them were in ICU n asks them to leave...

Chacha ,Chachi n Rishab comes out of ICU...

Navya asks them to sit...Manik was still restless...as now Doctor was in to check Nandini

Manik cums near Chachi n asks her to go n have some tea...as she was sitting near Nandini for almost from one hour...

Navya:Hum leke jaate hai...Chaliye Chachi

Chachi:Par beta...Nandini...

Manik:Huh...Chachi ...Main hun na...i mean hum sab hai yaha...aap jaake aayiye

As they leaves...

Cabir n Mukti runs in...

Cabir pushes Manik hitting on his shoulders...

Cabir:Pagal hogaya kya tu...Haa...agar tujhe kuch hojata toh

Aliya:Haa Manik...how did u drive...u were back in 30mins

Cabir:Tum logo pata hai...jaate waqt toh meri jaan nikalke haath me aagayi thi

Manik was feeling guilty to leave him back...n came to hospital

Manik:I m sorry Cabir...woh...

Cabir:Tujhe kya Nandini ko yaha bhi akela chodne ka iraada nahi...uske bajume tera bhi bed lagwana padega hume...

All cracks up laughing...

Meanwhile Doc cums out...Manik looks at doctor n runs to him...

Precap

Nandini finally comes out of unconcsiousness

Next part will try to update tmrw

Originally posted by: priyanka3677

Good one kriti. Dekh mere saare prediction sach ho rahe hain. Aaj bhi hoga.