'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 42

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Where is the update? 😭😕
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MaNan's Fear---Part 15

Recap

Manik tells his story to Fab3

Chudail hurts Nandini n ties her up in store room

As finally Chudail cuts her wrist nerves

Nandini starts going slowly into unconsciousness...as she was bleeding

Nandini recalls every moment she spent with her family...Ams,Chacha-Chachi then Rishab

As soon as she remembers Rishab she suddenly opens her eyes wide n starts saying:I cant leave Rishab n go in this condition...he needs me...

She again struggles to getup from the chair...she looks around...when she remembers the store room scene she spent with Manik...

Her thoughts starts flowing from the day first she met Manik till today when she met her behind the music block after the album launch

Slowly she was loosing n she was closing her eyes

ManBir reaches at Storeroom which was closed from inside

ManBir breaks the door n finds Chudail alone...

Chudail suddenly starts crying...n hugs Manik

Manik's eyes were searching Nandini

Chudail:Manik ...Thank God tum aagaye ...woh Nandini hai na usne mujhe yaha band kardiya tha...

Everyone barges in...

Cabir looks around for Nandini n finds blood on floor

Manik holds neck n then pushes her n she falls on ground...

Manik:Agar Nandini ko kuch bhi hua toh I ll kill u

Chudail smirks ...

Cabir :Manik...Cabir shows the blood to Manik

ManBir rushes to the corner following the blood stains...Cabir,Manik,Dhruv,Abhi all of them throws the things which were covered to hide Nandini...

Chudail tries to stop them...Mukti holds her n gives a tight slap on her face

Navya rushes in with Cops...n gets a shock seeing blood on the floor

Mukti hands over Chudail to the Cops...n handles Navya

Manik finally finds Nandini unconscious on the chair...

Manik cudnt take his eyes of her n her bruises ...but he handles himself

Dhruv n Cabir helps Manik in untieing Nandini from the chair...

Manik holds Nandini n tries to wake her up...shouting her name.:Nandini open ur eyes...Nandini

Cabir:Manik...we shud stop her bleeding first

Mukti n Aliya rushes n ties hanky's to her wrists n arms wounds where she was bleeding from n Manik was still trying to wake her up...

Manik shouts in anger:Nandiniii

Nandini suddenly opens her eyes in shock...

Manik:Bring the car

Cabir rushes to bring the car...Abhi talks to one of the cops n asks him to come along with them in case any help at the hospital...

Manik sits behind with Nandini in his arms n Cabir drives the car...Mukti sits along with Cabir

Others come in their respective vehicles

Manik:Nandini don't close ur eyes...n was so panicked that he was also crying...

Mukti:Manik tu aise karega toh kaise...

Manik in fear:I cant lose her Mukti

Cabir:Shut up Manik...aisa kuch nahi hoga

Manik tries to talk to Nandini...as she was opening n closing her eyes on regular intervals

Manik:Nandini...aankhen kholo...

Nandini starts blabbering: Manik...i don't want to die Manik...

Manik:Shutup Nandini...nothing will happen to u...just don't close ur eyes...

Nandini:Manik...Rishab...Manik...i cant leave u alone Manik...plzzz

Manik:Nandini stopit...don't utter a word

Mukti:Manik bolne de use...dont let her close her eyes ...Cabir u drive fast...

Cabir :we almost reached

Cabir stops the car at the nearest hospital...

Manik rushes in with Nandini in his arms...

Cabir pulls a stretcher n Manik puts Nandini on it n shouts for Doctor...

Doctor walks in n sees Nandini's wounds...

Doctor:We ll have to inform to police

Abhi comes in with that Cop...Doctor takes in Nandini after talking to the Cop

Everyone rushes along with the stretcher towards OT...

Manik holds Doctors collar n warns him that if anything happens to Nandini then he ll burn the whole hospital...

Cabir n Dhruv pulls him back n calms him down...Abhi apologizes to Dotor n requests him to attend Nandini ASAP

Manik was getting furious...as he was thinking n blaming himself that I cudn't save her...its all my fault

Cabir:Shut up Manik...kuch nahi hua hai Nandini ko...

Dhruv:Haa buddy...abhi doc aakar bolenge ki she is fine...tu dekhna

Navya:Ye sab hamari galti hai...Hume Nandini ko akela nahi chodna nahi chahiye tha

Manik:No... ye sab meri galti hai jo maine Chudail ko seriously nahi liya...Nandini is right I don't think at all...she warned me number of times abt Chudail

Mukti:Chup raho tum sab...everyone is blaming themselves...kuch nahi hoga use

Aliya:Mukti is right...

Abhi:Buaji...Nandini ke Chachi ko inform karna hoga...she must b worried

Manik looks at him in shock...

Navya:Hum call karte hain

Navya calls Chachi n informs...

Doctor comes out of OT...

Doc:She lost somuch of blood...we attended her n stopped her bleeding but her condition is critical...

Manik gets a shock n falls on chair...

Doc continues :we cant say anything upto 12 hrs...this 12 hrs wud b very crucial for her...

If she fights this 12hrs thn only she can survive or else...

Cabir says with proud :She will survive Doctor bcz she is a fighter...

Doc:Just hope for the best

Manik was sitting there in shock n was not even lifting his head...n dint even notice what doc said...bcz he was helpless n was feeling responsible for what happened with Nandini

Everyone was trying to console him...but he was not even looking at anyone

Chacha-Chachi n Rishab rushes in...Navya addresses them that Nandini met with an accident Navya:Subah tak wait karna hoga chachi

Chachi:But kaise hua accident...

Navya:Woh...woh...

Abhi joins in...:Pata nahi Buaji woh shayad road cross kar rahi thi...aur jaise hume pata chala hum use yaha le aaye

Chachi looks at Manik whose cloths were full of blood stains...Chachi goes near him

Chachi puts a hand on his shoulder...Manik starts crying...I m sorry Chachi ye sab mere wajah se hua...

Chachi:Manik ye sab kya bolrahe ho...

Navya interferes...:Woh Chachi hum aage nikalgaye the aur Manik use party me laane wala tha aur jab Manik waha pohacha tab tak accident hogaya

Cabir calms Manik down...

N Navya asks Chachi to go home n rest n they ll inform as soon as Nandini gains conscious but Chachi doesn't listen to her...

As Rishab n Dhruv sees eachother Rishab goes all mad...so Chacha-Chachi takes him away...

Chachi asks Navya to inform her...

As Dhruv also feels the attack he takes his pills

Cabir asks everyone to leave n says that he ll stay with Manik...

First no one agrees...but then Mukti looks at Navya...n realizes that its not good for her n her baby

Mukti goes near Navya n asks her to go home...but Navya refuses...

Mutki:Navya aisi halat me u cant stay here...

A nurse walks in...:Itne log yaha nahi ruk sakte...sirf do log hi ruksakte hai...baki sab chalejayiye...kuch der me patient ko ICU me shift kardenge...wha koi ek ruk sakta hai patient ke saath...

Everyone looks at Manik but he was not attentive to the words nurse uttered

Navya:Haa sister hum chale jayenge...ek baar patient ko dekhle phir ...

Nurse:K...

Hospital boys brings out Nandini on stretcher n shifts her in ICU...

Manik suddenly gets up n follows along with the stretcher n sits beside Nandini's Bed in ICU

Everyoen looks at Manik very shockingly...finally Mukti breaks the silence

Mukti:I ll stay with Manik...u ppl go home...

Aliya:I think u ryt...Navya aaj raat tum mere saath chalo...we ll cum early mrng

Cabir comes near Mukti:Nahi Mukti... Manik is not in a proper condition u ll not b able to handle him if he loses control

Dhruv agrees:I think Cabir is right...let him stay here...mukti u also stay...if they need anything then Cabir cant leave Manik alone n go na

Mukti:Yaa...

Dhruv,Aliya,Navya heads towards...Abhi says I have some work here u ppl carry on

One of the nurse cums n used to check Nandini in regular interval...she asked Manik to move out of ICU but when he dint listen...she came out n informs Cabir to bring him out

Cabir:Sister ...tumne dekha na who kitna pareshaan tha...plz use rehne dijiye...

Nurse:But...kisi doctor ne dekhlya toh problem hojayegi

Mukti interferes:Who hum manage karlenge

Manik spends time looking at Nandini...if at all she makes any moment

Cabir n Mukti spends the whole nyt outside the ICU...

Abhi goes for his therapy session bcz unfortunately it was the same hospital n he had missed that session bcz of whole chaos...so he escapes from Mukti n Cabir n goes for that session

It was late nyt...and both Cabir n Mukti crashed on the chairs in the corridor

But Manik dint even blinked his eyes for ones...n was looking at Nandini hoping that next min she ll open her eyes...

Manik looks at Nandini's wounds n remembers how he used to touch her arms,hair,lips,her face...n calls out her name softly... Nandini...

Manik:Nandini...plz getup...i promise I ll never leave u alone...i ll never trouble u Nandini

Manik crashes sitting on stool itself putting his head beside Nandini's hand... blabbering those words repeatedly

But after some time he suddenly getsup n looks at Nandini...but still she was not awake

It was early hours now...Cabir n Mukti were still sleeping...Abhi joins them late nyt n crashes beside Mukti

Manik puts his fingers on Nandini's wounds n starts caressing them slowly...

With Manik's touch Nandini in her unconsciousness starts remembering every moment spent with Manik

Precap:

Manik breaks down infront of Abhi,Mukti n Cabir


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Guys spare me if at all i miss to update tmrw mrng...have some other work

I ll try to update but cant promise

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Posted: 10 years ago
As if the show's cliffhangers aren't enough, now you're doing this to us??? 😛 JK.
Please update soon as you can 😃. Loving this FF!!
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Originally posted by: zrn1312

As if the show's cliffhangers aren't enough, now you're doing this to us??? 😛 JK.

Please update soon as you can 😃. Loving this FF!!


Lol, you did!! Sorry about that little outburst 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manan58

Where is the update? 😭😕

Updated dear ...enjoy😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zrn1312


Lol, you did!! Sorry about that little outburst 😆

😆😆Its k
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Posted: 10 years ago
😃Awesome update.. Loved it.. It's ws calmin one so I dnt mind if u update tmrw or nt.. This ws a really nice one.. So calmin effect chl jaega 1-2 din..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely!! Poor MaNan.. 😭
Update soon plzzz 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manan58

😃Awesome update.. Loved it.. It's ws calmin one so I dnt mind if u update tmrw or nt.. This ws a really nice one.. So calmin effect chl jaega 1-2 din..😉

Thanks for understanding...but i ll definitely try to update
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update ... continue soon 😃

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