'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 76

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dushturain



I was reading this update like this...i even hv a pillow clutched like him

and when they started talking about their first meeting...






thanks for the amazing update!!

U always amaze me with ur replies Dushtu
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zoya_09

Awww Kritika, u deserve a big 🤗 ... so happy that m still smilin 😊

Yay !!! Finally MaNan confessed 😆 🥳...hope to read the next update soon
n wish it was not the final chapter 😕

Anyways , eagerly waitin...thanks !

Thanq Zoya
i was worried whether ppl will like the confession part or not
but happy to see such replies
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful part
I love the jacket scne perfect confession for me.
Take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow lovely update
beautiful confession
loved it
cont soon
Edited by Humzy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsum dr... manan was amazing loved it
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welcome my gorgeous soon i will post part 14 pks tell ur opinion love u forever🤗
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Originally posted by: 8seetha

welcome my gorgeous soon i will post part 14 pks tell ur opinion love u forever🤗

Sure🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey nice update
so lovely update
loved it
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This is fantastic... well done.👏
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So here is the final part finally...Hope u ll love this too
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MaNan's Fear--Part 32

Recap

MaNan n Dhrulya at their dates...

Cavya at venue

Mukbhi at Hospital...

MaNan spends some time there n decides to leave n goto party...

But Nandini was not ready to go in that dress...

Abhi gets discharge n Mukti leaves from hospital taking Abhi

Dhrulya shares some beautiful things about themselves to eachother

Cavya goes back to flat n get ready n comes back to the venue before others

On otherside Nandini decides to change her dress ASAP---as it was only for Manik

Nandini:Manik...give me five mins I ll b back

Manik:Ab kaha jaarahi hi...we r getting late

Nandini:I ll b back soon n we wont b late---hum sabse pehle waha honge

Manik:Nandini party was at 8 n now its 9.30

Nandini smiles:No ...party is at 10

Manik:Firse sabne mujhe jhooth bola...Wait a min---everyone knows about ur surprise

Nandini smiles n nods in YES

Manik:Today I agree...

Nandini gets confudes:What

Manik makes a puppy face:That I m dumb

Nandini laughs out loudly

N they hug each other----------Nandini breaks the hug n goes to change her dress

Cavya looks around the arrangement for final time...

Nandini cums back to Manik wearing another dress

Manik smiles at her Innocence

Nandini handing over his jacket :Kya hua Manik ----Y r u smiling

Manik pulls her closer holding her hand along with jacket

Manik:Jab tumne ye dress lit hi toh who kyu pehne

Nandini:I dint wanted to disappoint anyone n Mukti n Aliya knows u from years so I thought may b they know u better than me

Manik hugs her:Know one knows me better than u...so don't u dare to change urself for anyone n specially for me...I Love the way u r...

Nandini looks at Manik without breaking the hug n kisses his chin

Nandini:Ab chale ...varna late hojayenge

Manik makes a puppy face n says No

Nandini breaks the hug:Manik lets go...sab kya sochenge

Nandini drags him n both heads towards the venue

MaNan reach venue

Nandini looks for Navya n finds only Cabir

Cabir:So lovebirds r here

Nandini:Cabir Navya kaha hai

Cabir:Woh...waha room me hai taking rest

Nandini panics :Kya hua...is she fine

Cabir:Haa she is but she was tired that's it

Nandini turns towards Manik:I shud goto Navya...

Manik nods his head in Yes

Manik:So is everything ready

Cabir:Haa woh sab theek hai...par Nandini ne bola ki nahi

Manik smiles:U were right Cabir...we r made for eachother

Cabir smirks:I m always right

Dhrulya reaches ...n greets Cabir n Manik

Aliya:Where r Navya n Nandini

Cabir:Inside ...

Aliya:K I ll go n meet them

Cabir:Yaa but come soon Mukti can be here at any moment

Aliya:Yaa

Aliya,Nandini n Navya

Navya:Arre hum theek hai bas chakkar aagaya tha

Nandini:Navya tum apna khayal nahi rakti bilkul

Aliya:I second that...u behave like a kid Navya ...u shud take care of urself

Navya:Accha theek hai...hum promise karte hai ki hum apna khayal rakhenge

Aliya n Nandini smiles

Navya:Ab chalo bahar warna dheere dheere sab andar aajayenge

Aliya:Haa Cabir said Mukti will b here any moment

Nandini:K lets go

As soon as all reaches in the hall ...they listen to car sound

They all go n hide so that they can surprise Abhi

Outside the venue

Abhi:Mukti ye ham kaha aaye hai

Mukit:u ll come to know lets go

As soon as they come in...all come out with a shout:Surprise

Abhi feels very happy...n looks at Mukti

Nandini comes forward :U r so mean Abhi...u took aal information about my life but never shared about urself n pain...u said I m ur little sis na than...how cud u do this to me

Everyone were silent as Nandini was the only person close to Abhi more then Mukti n had every right to scold him

Abhi:I m sorry Baby doll...i was here to spread happiness but not sadness

Manik cums forward:N its our time to give u happiness...

Manik hugs him...everyone cums near n gives him a soft group hug

Mukti was in tears...seeing that all girls come near Mukti n consoles her

Nandini gives her another happiness by saying:Mukti u r going with Abhi n settle him there n comeback I have talked my uncle...a concerned person will b taking care of everything

Mukti smiles: u r such a sweet heart Nandini

Cabir breaks the silence by taking the mike in hands...

Cabir:So guys sab emotional horahe hai toh maine socha thoda main bhi hojau...but I guess this wud b the last time

Cabir continues:Navya...i wud like to share the apartment with u forever...i don't know how lifes will shape up tmrw but for now I ll stand by u...bcz I know the pain a single mother goes through n I don't want ur child to grow like me...I m not saying that I ll give him/her a fathers love but I promise I ll stand by u as a friend for rest of my life ...Hope u wont mind n I promise that I wont trouble u from now

Navya was in tears...

Nandini consoles Navya n Manik goes to Cabir n takes the mike

Manik:I want to add something here...I hope Navya,Abhi n My Nandini wont mind

Nandini smiles n gives him a signal as yes

Navya n Abhi were confused along with rest of them

Manik:My life my family was FAB5 till date...n today with due respect I wud like to add three more ppl to my family whole heartedly n I m sure rest of the FAB5 member wont mind abt this decision...

All of them smile as their confusion gets cleared

Navya:Hume bhi apni nayi faily milgayi hai...aap sabke roop me

Nandini hugs her...

Aliya takes the mike from Manik...

Aliya:I wud like to say something...actually wanna apologize both Navya n Nandini...

Hosake toh mujhe maaf kardena for whatever happened in past...

N I wanna confess that Love does happen at any moment ...we think being with someone for years we understand better but no we need only some moments to understand the person n it makes us feel something special which I felt for Dhruv...when I was pushing Dhruv towards Nandini but I dint realize that I was falling for him...So for that I want to apologize Manik,Nandini n Dhruv...

Dhruv cums n hugs Aliya...Aliya says I Love U dhruv...

Dhruv :I love u too

Nandini finally speaks...:I think we shud give a chance to our guest of Honour

Aliya gives the mike too Abhi

Abhi:What shud I say...I completely lost hopes about myself but when Mukti came to mylife I was falling for her but then I thought I shud not make Mukti suffer bcz of me ...so I decided to stay away...but like we say Destiny plays an imp role...when I thought Nandini n Manik's life is set n Mukti got her smile back...Manik called n said plz take care of Nandini till I come back...

N when Nandini was attacked infront of my eyes...i thought Nandini's life is imp then mine bcz my end is already decided...

Then slowly things changed I had to stay back n got involved with u ppl n forgot to leave but Mukti got to know abt me...n I cudnt hide anything...Yes I LOVE her...n I wanted my life back but dint know that the person whom I saved will give mylife back that is Nandini...Nandini gave me the ray of hope for living n loving Mukti ...Thanq wud b a small word Nandini...

Nandini had tears in her eyes...

Mukti takes the mike...:I Love You Abhi n I ll stay with u till my last breathe

All were silent for a minute

Dhruv breaks the silence...:Guys we r here to party but not to share sad moments...

Everyone smiles...Cabir joins him...

Cabir:Exactly I second that...so lets rock the floor guys...

Lets have some music...Madhubalaji kya aap mere saath dance karengi

Navya smiles n nods yes

Every one dances with their respective couples...

Party finishes with a happy note...

After two days...at Airport

MukBhi were all set to leave to US...

Everyone cums to drop them...as soon as they leave ...everyone heads towards college

MaNan at their favorite place

Behind the music block on the stairs...

Manik holds Nandini's hand n she rests her head on his shoulder

Manik:Nandini tumne bataya nahi tum kitna pyaar karti ho mujhse...

Nandini:What...ye kaisa sawaal hai

Manik:Yaa u have to prove na...

Nandini:Accha...if I ask u that can u prove how much u love me...

Manik:Yaa I can...n I promise that I wont miss a single day to prove my love

Nandini gets confused:What...

Manik:U want me to show u...

Nandini:Hmm

Manik:Then promise me even u have to prove ur love daily as I do u

Nandini:what...what r u thinking...that I ll stop loving u

Manik:Janedo tum nahi karogi

Nandini:K...I promise

Manik:Nandini promise

Nandini:Haa Baba Nandini promise ab bolo...

Manik bends down to kiss her...

Nandini:Manik...tum kabhi nahi sudroge na ...

Manik:any doubt...

Nandini:Manik we r in college

Manik:N u think I care...

Nandini gives a smile n shys...

Manik:So fulfill ur promise...

Nandini kisses Manik on cheeks

Manik:This is cheating Nandini...u promised

Nandini:Haa...but I dint promise that I ll kiss u on ...n shys

Manik:But my promise was that only na...

Nandini tries to run away but fails as Manik holds her n cups her face...

Manik:Nandini this promise will result in a way that we can brush off all our fears,misunderstandings,stubbornness,fights,ur tears,my anger n many things of the previous day...n we can start a new day with new hope for more happiness ahead n I want to make everyday better than yesterday

Nandini melts in Manik's words...n Manik ends up with a passionate kiss n fulfills his promise...

This promise was continued forever n ever...as Love becomes more beautiful everyday

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N expect a comment from everyone as this is the last part

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