'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Paro_rudra

read all in a go

awesome baby

Ohh Thanq Shree
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tanshita171

Nice update 👏

Do continue soon 😊

Thanq
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing Kritika...just amazing...I just love your writing yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: faizaskhan

Really interesting progress and the way u continue to call she who'll never be named as chudail really cracks me up 😆 keep it up 😊

😆😆😆thanq
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Originally posted by: Ireena7

Amazing Kritika...just amazing...I just love your writing yaar

Thanq so much Iru...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...

loved manbir convo...

nandini s so mature n understand situations really well...
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Posted: 10 years ago
As i promised i m posting the next update...
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MaNan' Fear---Part 7

Recap:

Manik gets angry on Nandini n leaves the place

Cabir informs that Chudail is behind all this

Cabir calls someone n asks him to meet behind the college in an hour

Chudail enters music room n finds that Manik was not there ...n cums out of jam room moves to the corner of the corridor n dials a num from her phone

Manik n Cabir were coming back to music room where they spots Chudail n follows her

They both overhears Chudail's convo on cell that

Chudail on call:We have cum back...so jo bhi karna hai savdhani se karna...toh main wapas call karungi kab next step lena hai

Both of them gets confirmed that whatever is happening was bcz of Chudail...Manik cant control his anger but Cabir controls him...they enters music room...n after sometime Chudail also enters the room

Chudail questions Manik:So u r here...What was the emergency that u have left the place without informing me

Manik:I think its non of ur business

Chudail:I m ur band Manager...so it is my business

Manik:Well ...i think Cabir informed u I guess

Chudail:Fine...only two days r left so...buck up...bcz this time I cant save u guys from my dad's anger...

Manik replies in anger:We know that Ms.Khurana...

Cabir holds Manik's hand n says:...Yes Ms.Khurana we ll definitely do that...

Chudail:Waise Nandini kaha hai...n how is she now

Cabir n Manik gets shocked as well as surprised that why is she asking abt Nandini

Cabir:Ya she is at home only...taking rest

Chudail:Will she cum today

Cabir:No...kuch kaam tha...

Chudail gets upset that she cant execute her plan today also n replies:...Nahi bas aise hi puchliya ...u guys practice I ll b right back...

After some time Cabir gets a msg..."I m waiting behind the college"

Cabir n Manik excuses themselves n leaves the Jam room

Mukti:Ye in dono ko kya hua...kalse kuch ajeeb behave kar rahe hai

Aliya:Yaa...agree

Dhruv:Shayad album ke pressure ke wajah se

Mukti:Hmm ...may b...chal hum bhi canteen chalte hai...

Manik n Cabir cums behind the college finds that person

Manik gets angry seeing Abhi n grabs his colar:Maine tumhe kaha bhi tha Nandini ke saath rehne ko

Cabir holds Manik n pushes him back:Manik kya kar raha hai...chod use maine bulaya hai

Manik:Cabir ...tu jaanta hai na kal iski wajah se Nandini ke saath ye sab hua

Cabir:Haa aur isike wajah se Nandini kidnap hone se bachgayi ...Manik...think straight

Abhi:Look...I m really very sorry ke...meri ek choti si galti ki wajah se ye sab hogaya...i just went to take my car so that I can drop her ...but...Cabir interrupts...

Cabir:Abhi chill...no need to b sorry...but u were the savior...Manik ke taraf se main sorry bolta hun

Abhi:Mujhe yaha kyu bulaya...

Cabir:U have to stay with Nandini today n tmrw till we get through the album...inshort u hve to guard her...

Manik gets shocked n surprised :But Cabir...

Cabir:Manik chill...i know what I m saying...we cant deal with the situation until we cut this album

Manik calms down but Abhi gets a doubt

Abhi:I ll surely guard her but If u don't mind I want to know what is the connection between Nandini n album...she is not even part of it right...

Cabir:I ll cut it short as we don't have time...these attacks on Nandini were done by Chudail...so we cant discuss this things with anyone as only u know now except us...

Abhi:No even Navya knows...abt the attacks

Cabir:That's great...even ask her to join u guys n stick to Nandini after she leaves the college but plz mind u ...they shud not know abt chudail at any cost

Manik:Cabir...ye tu kya kar raha hai...let me handle this in my way...i ll talk to that psycho directly...

Cabir:That's the problem with u Manik...thats y u never understood Nandini

Manik gets chocked by his words n starts thinking n everything flashes in front of him after Dhruv thing happened n what all things Nandini tried to say in jungle ,Farmhouse,hospital n even this friends business...n what she said in morning Cabir was doing that

Cabir:So guys...lets do it...Abhi tu samajgaya na...just for two days...Waise Manik tu kya kehta hai hume Nandini ko batana chahiye...

Manik was in his thoughts...Cabir interrupted him

Cabir:Manik kaha khogaya...main kuch puchraha hun ...

Manik:Haa I ll tell her ...ones I meet her

All of them leaves from there...but Manik turns back n calls Abhi

Manik:Abhi...Thanq for saving her n sorry for what I did...

Abhi:Its k...i can understand...

Cabir thinks that he was a bit rude to Manik n says :Sorry Manik for what I said just now

Manik:No cabir tu sahi hai...sometimes I don't think at all...aaj subah bhi gusse me waha se nikal aaya ...maine theekse baat tak nahi ki Nandini se...she was trying to explain me...infact she always warned me for things...even abt Chudail she warned me

N now she is not worried abt herself and asked me to complete Album for u ppl

Cabir:Yaar Manik...shall I tell u something...dont hurt her ever again..specially bcz of us...she thinks abt us as equally as u do...u ll never get an understanding partner ever..u r lucky to have her

Manik smiles...:Chal chalte hai

Cabir:Plz Manik...Chudail ke saath normally behave kar varna usko shak hojayega

Manik:Cabir tujhe pata hai...main sirf Nandini aur tere wajah se chup hun warna abtak toh she wud have died

Cabir:Pata hai...isiliye toh tujhe control karnekeliye bhagwaan ne Nandini ko bhejdiya

Manik:Kya...

Cabir:Tu nahi samjhega chal...but plz behave urself

Manik angrily:Fine...

Mukti,Alya n Dhruv enters Canteen...n spend some time but suddenly Mukti shouts

Mukti:Ohh shit ...I forgot my cell there itself...u guys carryon I ll just bring it

Aliya: U scared me Mukti...

Mukti smiles:Sorry yaar...

Aliya:Cum soon

Dhruv:Let her take time...atleast we ll get some time to spend together

Aliya Smiles

Mukti heads towards Jam Room

ManBir near anteen...

Manik:Haa...Cabir tu chal I ll get something to eat

Cabir:K ...bring something for me too...m damn hungry

Cabir takes stairs to heads toward Jam room n Manik towards Canteen

Chudail comes to Jam room n finds no one...then she spots Manik's guitar n starts dreaming...

Chudail in hallucination talks to Manik like always:Manik...Y u run away always...I had planned a lot at Farmhouse but u ruined it...

Imaginary Manik:Really...look I m really sorry that I came without informing u...

Chudail:Ya I m angry on u for that

Imaginary Manik:So I will repay that...let this album thing get over we ll go on a vacation for sure

Mukti reaches near the door n spots Chudail talking to Manik's guitar n was behaving like psycho n stands there to listen completely n enjoy her stupidity

Chudail:Then Nandini...

Imaginary Manik:What abt Nandini

Chudail:I know Manik that u n Nandini r together...u r a couple right ...i saw u together so many times

Mukti gets a shock of her life...but stands there tight lipped

Precap

Cabir confess everything to Mukti about MaNan.


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Will update next part soon may tmrw or day after tmrw mrng so plz keep an eye

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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
aaamazing update .. loved it Manik starts to understand nandini ... manbir talk too awesome ..and soha imagination 😆😆... mukti hearing all🥱🥱
and the precap wow cabir told mukti abut manan ..really excited to read further,, update soon 😉

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