'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 73

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

manik hehe u did not wait for her answer and then forgot to ask her taht also

wow now the fun starts
do continue
bye sumi

Yes next parts will b fun to watch
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww so sweet n cute MaNan's converstation 😳 , thanks for the beautiful update !
Poor Manik , when he's with Nandu he 4gets everythin...plz continue soon ! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
HAPPY Manan!!! i am loving this
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry guys...u ll have to bare me for one more day bcz i cudnt windup in this part...so may b it ll take one or two more parts...sorry for troubling u guys

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MaNan's Fear---Part 30

Recap

Manik says I LOVE U to Nandini

Manik informs Mukti that Abhi has to leave for his treatment within couple of days

Mukti:Arre usne tujhe I LOVE U bola ki nahi

Manik gets up in confusion:Ohh...Shit...usne toh mujhe bola hi nahi

All of them shout at ones:What...

Manik calls Nandini but doesn't pick the call thn Manik runs towards Nandini's home

All starts laughing...

On otherside Nandini meets Navya behind the college n discuss everything about the surprise she wants to give to Manik...

Nandini and Navya decorates everything

Nandini wanted everything to b perfect as when first she wanted to express her feelings to Manik but she cudn't n next day Manik decides to walk away

Nandini got lost in her thoughts thinking about Manik n her sweet n sad times...

Here Mukti decides to throw a small farewell Party for Abhi

But Dhruv interrupts

Dhruv:But I had some plans for Aliya...

Mukti n Cabir smiles...n Aliya blushes

Cabir:Haa toh theek hai na...tumlog baadme join karlena

Mukit:Ya guys...ab toh Manik bhi Nandini ke muh se I LOVE U sune bina aayega nahi ...toh we ll postpone it a bit ...n we can do it after 10pm...aur waise bhi sirf ye hamare liye hai no outsiders...

Dhruv :That's k for me

All three of them agrees

Mukti decides to call Navya to invite

Mukti:Navya...kaha ho tum...

Navya:Hum toh college me hi hain ...Nandini ke saath

Mukti gets surprised:Nandini tumhare saath hai then great...use bhi leke aana mujhe kuch batana hai...we r in Jam room...

Navya:Theek hai hum aate hai

Nandini cums out of her thoughts when she listens that Navya informed about her being in college to Fab5

Navya:Chalo...

Nandini:Tumne kyu batay ki main tumhare saath hun...mere surprise ka kya...ab Manik ko bhi pata chaljayega

Navya:Hum hai na...hum kuch bahana banalenge tum chalo

On otherside Manik reaches at Nandu's place...asusual Chachi opens the door n informs Manik that Nandu went to clg only

Manik gets surprised that she told him that she has work at home n she went to clg but Y...

Manik leaves from there in confusion as he calls her but she doesn't pick the call...Manik starts worrying now...

Nandini gets worried that Manik is calling her continuously n may b he got to know that she is with Navya...

Navya:Kya hua

Nandini:Manik baar baar call kar raha hai...mujhe lagta hai use pata chalgaya ki main clg me hun

Navya:Theek hai na...hum boldenge ki humne bulaya tumhe theek hai

Nandini n Navya reaches Jam room...n finds only four of them n gets relieved ...

Mukti starts her ranting:Yeh kya Nandini tumne Manik ko I LOVE U kyu nahi bola pata hai who kitna pareshaan hai...

Nandini goes all shy...but Navya interrupts...

Navya:Ohhooo...tumlog Nandini par kyu baras rahe ho...woh toh use surprise deneka sochrahi hai

All four of them:Ohhh k ...then yelog bhi busy honge

Navya :Busy matlab

Mukti:Actually I was planning for a farewell party for Abhi... ...but I guess everyone is busy

Nandini:Mukti...no need to get dishearten bcz we ll come to the party...My surprise is not that big ...so Manik can join u guys at the party

Mukti cums near Nandini n holds her in side ways...:This party is not only for Fab5 but for all of us...n even I have to thank u for everything

Nandini smiles...

Cabir:K then its decided...U ppl can join us later...Mukti tu Abhi ko lekar aaja party me...

Main aur Navya arrangements dekhlenge n These two couples will join us by 10pm...whats say guys

Cabir gives a questioning look to Nandini n Dhrulya

Nandini nods her head in Yes...n Dhruv also assures to join by 10pm

Everyone leaves from there after deciding...

Navya excuses herself from Nandini

Manik spots Nandini n calls her...Nandini looks around n picks the call

Manik:Kaha ho tum

Nandini:Main ...main toh ghar par hun...Y

Manik cums from behind n grabs Nandini into a class room

Nandini gets surprised

Manik:Tumne college ko apna ghar kab banaliya

Nandini doesnt anwer his question:Manik kya kar rahe ho...koi aajayega

Manik:Pehle ye batao...tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...agar tumhe aana that oh mere saath kyu nahi aayi

Nandini starts blabbering:Woh...woh...Mukti...Mukti ne mujhe bulaya...she is throwing a party for Abhi so she called me here...huh

Manik:Really...

Nandini:Haa ...kyu tumhe nahi pata...

Meanwhile Manik gets a msg from Mukti that she arranged a party tonight

Manik:See ...she msged me now...yelog ab sab pehle tumhe batate hai aur fir mujhe...

Nandini smiles:par tum kaha gaye the I thought u will b here only

Manik:Main tumhare ghar gaya tha...Chachi said u r here

Nandini:But y...i said na we ll meet as I finish my work

Manik:I got worried Nandini ...when u dint take my call

Nandini:Manik I m fine...Y u always panic about me...

Manik looks at her in angry:Nandini after what all happened last week u still asking me

Nandini hugs him :Accha baba sorry...next time pakka I ll attend ur call

Manik holds her tightly n feels her safe...

Nandini breaks the hug:Now tell me why u were searching me...

Manik:Hmmm...Tumse kuch puchna tha...

Nandini:Kya...

Manik goes near Nandini n bends to kiss her...but Nandini stops him...

Nandini:Manik...What is this...we r in class...tell me what u wanted to ask

Manik:Yahi...ke kal raat tumne jawaab nahi diya...

Nandini gets confused:What answer...did u ask me anything

Manik:I dint ask u anything but I told u something

Nandini:What

Manik:Yahi ke...I LOVE U...but u dint answer me...

Nandini starts avoiding his gaze...but Manik pulls her near n lifts her chin

Manik:I m not Gonna leave u without getting my answer

Nandini:KK...i m telling na wait...

Manik:I m waiting

Nandini takes a long breath n looks at Manik:Haaa...wohh...I mean ...I ...I ...

Manik's phone rings flashing Cabir's Num...Nandini tries to move back but Manik grabs her

Manik:He ll wait...U continue...

Nandini smiles...:...I...LOVE...

This time Nandini's phone rings flashing Mukti's num

Nandini tries to move out from Manik's grip...

Nandini:Manik...leave me...kuch urgent hoga...see both r calling continuously

Manik gets another call from Cabir...

Manik grins:I swear Cabir I m gonna kill u for sure

Nandini smiles n picks the call...

Mukti:Nandini cum to Jam room...its urgent

Manik picks the call...

Cabir:Yaar Manik kabse call kar raha hun jaldi aa ...humlog Jam room me wait kar rahe hai

MaNan look at eachother n rushes to Jam room...

As they enter...

Cabir:Ohh toh tum dono saath me hi the...khama kha ek call waste hogaya

Manik:Kya problem hei kuch der wait nahi karsakta tha...

Cabir:Kyu disturb kiya kya maine

Nandini goes shy n tries to avoid her gaze from everyone

Mukti:Accha guys plz...lets leave this...sorry to disturb u guys but we have some work

Manik:What...

Mukti:Arre I told u abt the party right...so u guys go n prepare for it...we girls have some other work...

Manik:What...

Cabir:Chalna yaar Manik...nahi Mukti jaan khayegi...

Manik looks at Nandini with a upset face that she dint tell him those three Magical words...

Cabir:Haa...baadme ghoor lena use abhi chal...chal Dhruv

On other side...Mukti n Aliya plans something for Nandini...n They take Nandini n Navya for Shopping

They informs boys that they ll meet them soon at the college itself

Mukti n Aliya buys dresses for themselves n for Navya...n selects a nice short dress for Nandini

But Nandini reuses to wear it

Mukti:Nandini tum hamesha thodi na pehnogi...bas sirf aajke liye

Nandini:No no...i cant wear this...I ll take something else

Nandini selects a dress for herself which was suitable for her comfort zone

Aliya:Nandini...do one thig if u r not confortable then wear this for party n this short dress for ur surprise for Manik

Nandini feels awkward abt that dress...

Navya joins them:Haa...Nandini tum Manik ko surprise derahi hona ...toh uskeliye isse bada surprise kya hoga...Tumhe iss dress me dekhkar woh toh behosh hojayega

Nandini goes all shy:Navya...

Mukti pleads her:Nandini plz...take it as a small token of Thanq from myside for what u did for me

Nandini:Plz Mukti no need to thank me again n again...i did nothing

Aliya:No Nandini ...if u want Mukti to feel happy then wear this dress for ur date with Manik...i know Manik will definitely like u in this new avatar

Nandini gets surprised n thinks may b Aliya is right...bcz he was in relationship with n she used to wear this kind of dresses only

After thinking so much...Nandini picks two white dresses one of her choice n one of their choice

Mukti msgs Manik shop for themselves for party...

So boys also goes for shopping n unfortunately Manik also buys white Suit for himself...

Eeryone meets ones again at college

Precap

Manik is upset with Nandini...

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Posted: 10 years ago






ps. I cant wait for Maik to see her in short dress.. Manik will open and close his mouth like a fish.

and loved you are making Manik wait till he hears Nandu say the 3 magical words...i thought it will go like bhagasree in maine pyaar kya that i...love...abhi mood nehi hain...just like you wanted remember Kresh??? But this is cute too..interuptions interuptions interuptions...
Edited by dushturain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm so happy you couldn't finish this story today!
I love reading it everyday.
And after you're done with this one. Keep Writing new stuff. Please!!
Waise amazing parttt
I knew Manik would get upset. I feel ki he'll say
You don't need to change your style. Because I love you the way you are. :D
And this parttyyy thingg is superr exciting!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dushturain







ps. I cant wait for Maik to see her in short dress.. Manik will open and close his mouth like a fish.

and loved you are making Manik wait till he hears Nandu say the 3 magical words...i thought it will go like bhagasree in maine pyaar kya that i...love...abhi mood nehi hain...just like you wanted remember Kresh??? But this is cute too..interuptions interuptions interuptions...

U read my mind Dushtu...do u really think that i will this chance of writing...n my favorite scene for MaNan...Its cmg up buddy🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
uh precap here also manik is angry with nandu..
uff yeh dono
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice nd awsme update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
don't be sorry..i am happy that it didn't completed today.Nicely written...little worried for the precap...
manik upset with nandini😭...waiting for the next part..Hope when this ff will finish u will start another one...coz i really enjoy reading ur ffs😊😉😉

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