'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: roumania

Amazing !!!! Ur writing skills r wao wao ur both d updates are excellent 😊

thanq yaar... that means alot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

S i m trying😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow loved it
very nicely written

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zoya_09

Nice one, I luv ur posts...keep it up...most of ur predictions r rite or more close...

...eagerly waitin ur next work 😊

Thanq...
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Originally posted by: Humzy

wow loved it

very nicely written

Thanq😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a a wonderful OS... I love it.👍🏼

TBH I really love Manik's monster side but he does need to control a little bit Nandhu seemed kind of scared in the last episode.

And thought she can calm him down, he needs to learn to control a little bit... hope the CVs do consider such a track. Especially nearing the end of Soha tracks... I think that will be the worst of his reactions so far considering how precious she has become for him now.

Thanks for sharing- terrific job wiring this.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

What a a wonderful OS... I love it.👍🏼

TBH I really love Manik's monster side but he does need to control a little bit Nandhu seemed kind of scared in the last episode.

And thought she can calm him down, he needs to learn to control a little bit... hope the CVs do consider such a track. Especially nearing the end of Soha tracks... I think that will be the worst of his reactions so far considering how precious she has become for him now.

Thanks for sharing- terrific job wiring this.



Thanks for replying n liking my stuff
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Hope u guys remember my small try...n suggested me to continue...so i tried
Like everyone wanted me to continue this...i had written the second part also...hope u ll like it

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MaNan's fear---Part 2

Part 2

MaNan breaks the hug ...

Nandini :Manik u shud go n practice now...everyone myt b searching for u

Manik:Hmm...starts to leave ...but turns back n kisses her on forehead

Manik:I ll call u in the evening ...take care

Nandini: I Will

Manik at college enters Jam room...

Cabir:Manik...kaha gaya tha tu...

Manik dint answer to Cabir

Mukti:Manik woh kuch puch raha hai...kaha tha tu

Manik:Haa woh kuch kaam yaad agaya tha...so jana pada...chalo practice karte hai

Cabir feels fishy n murmurs in fear:Lagta hai ise pata chal gaya ki Nandini ko chot lagi hai aur ye definitely usise milne gaya...aaj toh pakka meri maut aayegi

Mukti:Cabir...ab tujhe kya hua...

Cabir:Nahi kuch nahi ...

They peacefully finishes the practice n starts leaving

Manik was angry but was still waiting for Cabir to cum with him...bcz he was staying with him

Cabir:Manik ...tu chal mujhe thoda kaam hai...main aata hun thodi der me

Manik leaves from there without uttering a word

At Manik's home...he freshen ups n calls Nandini

Nandini:Kaisi thi tumhari practice...any progress

Manik:Ms.Manager...tum manners ki baat karti ho aur Hi bhi nahi bolti...

Nandini:Hi...Manik...is it k...ab batao kaisi thi practice...koi song ready hua

Manik:Nandini...maine tumhe ye discuss karnekeliye call nahi kiya...aur waise bhi maine tumhe rest karne keliye kaha tha ...na ki album ki tension lene

Nandini:What shud I do Manik ...I was so bored today

Manik:Toh jhooth bolne keliye kisne kaha tha...ab raho 2 3 din ghar me...

Nandini:No...I wont ...i ll cum tmrw

Manik:Accha...apna plan khud hi bhulgayi...tum toh Mangalore me hona ...mujhe chance milne do sabko dekhlunga...pehle toh uss Cabir ko dekta hun...

Nandini:Cabir...Manik isme uski koi galti nahi...ye ...ye sab mera plan tha...

Manik:K...then u take care I think Cabir aagaya...n no need to cum tmrw I ll cum n meet u as I get time

Nandini:K ...bye Manik...Gud nyt

Manik cuts the call...

Nandini:Fir cut kardiya...Aiyyappa ye ladka kab sudrega

Cabir cums into the room n sees Manik in good mood

Manik:hi...kaha gaya tha

Cabir in shock:Mujhe laga aaj mera ram naam satya hone wala hai isliye aane se darr raha tha

Manik:Its k...mrng I was rude to u bcz u dint inform me abt Nandini...sorry...but Nandini told me everything that it was her plan n all

Cabir:Matlab Nandini ne un ladko ke saath saath mujhe bhi bachaliya...

Manik:Matlab...

Cabir :yahi ke plan mera tha...aur woh shayad janti thi ke hum pakde jayenge aur tujhse zyada der hupa nahi sakte...

Manik holds his neck:Cabir...tu kisi din mere hi haathon marega

Cabir:Seriously dude...Nandini knows how to deal with u

Cabir:But on a serious note Manik...the guys who attacked Nandini were not looking like they were from our college

Manik:What...toh tune choda kaise unhe...u wud called me atleast then n there na

Cabir:Actually ...Nandini ki chot dekhkar hum dar gaye n we ran to her...mean while that goons ran off

Manik:I think someone is targeting Nandini for sure...

Cabir:What ...R u crazy...Why Nandini

Manik:Maine tujhe bataya nahi...par that day jab after college she was attacked even at her home...

Cabir:...What what tell me clearly ...what happened...

Manik:After that trap in college to hurt Nandini with that sharp thread...i was worried so I went to her place to meet her...waha use kisine mere naam se gift bheja...woh toh acha hua main waqt par waha pohach gaya

Cabir:U r not making anysense Manik...gift bheja toh kya hua...

Manik:It was a doll which blasted with in mins I opened it

Cabir: WTH...tune kuch bataya kyu nahi

Manik:We actually thought that Harshad myt have done it before leaving...but now I msure some one else is doing all this

Cabir:This is something very serious Man

Manik:S Cabir even on that new year nyt...someone broke the glass in that tower n power was disconnected...We thought u myt have done some mischief

Cabir:No man...how can I do that...

Manik:I know yaar Cabir... but its getting clear now that someone knows about us...

Cabir:Means...u mean to say there was someone in that tower spying on u

Manik:S ...Cabir...remember we went back to take My phone in that tower...tab Nandini mujhse kaha tha ki someone was messaging her from my phone but I dint took her serious n thought it myt b Harshad n neglected

Cabir:Manik...how can u b so reckless...itna sab hogaya aur tune Harshad samajke neglect kiya

Manik :I know Cabir...i have to sort this out

Cabir:But ab toh Harshad yaha hai bhi nahi...fir kaun kar raha hai

After thinking somuch...

Cabir:Chal abhi sojate hai we ll talk tmrw


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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Very nice... Pls continueee soon and update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
wow awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon

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