'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 51

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Awesome update...me when MaNan were talkin ,

then the cheek n forehead kiss...awww

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Lovely convo betwweeen manik and nandini
Loved it
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awesome update ...loved it :)
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thank u so much for ur updates!!!😃
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Beautiful update as always..
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luvly update... cntue soon 😊
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awesome update...

they r not walking away from each other...

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manik ko ithna gussa kyun aata hai????

poor nandu...
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Thanks for reading n replying...next part in few mins
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MaNan's Fear---Part 19

Recap:

Manik spends nyt with Nandini n takes out his guilt infront of Nandini.

Next morning...

Cabir comes to hospital n rest go to college...

Cabir peeps in n Manik gets up with doors sound...n comes out

Cabir:Tu ghar nahi jayega...aur college bhi jana hai na

Manik:Cabir...I have to stay with her...i cant leave her like this...

Cabir:But Manik maine kab kaha use akele chodnekeliye...tu jaake aa main rukta hun

Manik:But Cabir...

Cabir:Manik...ghar jaa aur fresh hoke aa...waise bhi who uthi nahi hai...

Manik agrees to leave...

Manik:Theek hai...tu hilna mat yaha se

Cabir:Mujhe marna nahi hai tere haatoh...aur sun kal ki tarah jald bazi mat kar...have patience n drive slow...warna Nandini mujhe maardegi

Manik smiles n leaves from there...

After some time Nandini wakes up n Cabir comes in to meet...

Cabir:So miss. Moorthy how r u today

Nandini says thanq instead of answering him

Cabir:Maine pucha how r u...aur tum mujhe thanq bolrahi ho...

Nandini:Hmmm...thanq for sending Manik home...he was not listening to me last nyt...

Cabir:Nandini...then I shud thank u...

Nandini:Me...y

Cabir:For coming into my friends life...Manik needs u ...

Nandini smiles...

Cabir:U know what...he never shares his worries with anyone...he only lives for FAB5 n now for u too...

Nandini:Cabir...i know what Fab5 is for Manik...u ppl r above everything

Cabir:Ya...i know but now whatever happened with u ...he... he...is blaming himself

Nandini:He will not Cabir...everything is fine now...

Doc comes in for checkup...

Doc:So Nandini...u r recovering fast...is it medicines or something else

Nandini smiles...

Doc looking at Cabir:So young boy u were right this fighter really fights well n with fast results...

Cabir:I know doc ...n I m always right

Doc smiles n leaves...

Nandini:Cabir...here also...

Cabir:I talk facts u see...

Nandini:Cabir a small req...take Manik to college...

Cabir:N u think he ll listen to me...use maine ghar kaise bheja hai mujhe pata hai...ab college bolunga toh...

Nandini:U don't worry about that...tumhara phone do

Cabir:Bolo I ll call u don't take stress...

Nandini tells the num n asks him to dial Chachi's num...

Cabir dials the num n gives to Nandini

Nandini:Chachi...kya aap Ri...ko saath leke hospital aajao ...i want to see him n want to spend time today...

Chachi says that she ll be there in half n hour...

Nandu cuts the call n looks at Cabir...

Cabir:Nandini u never fails to impress me...What an idea Sirjee...

Nandini smiles...

Cabir :Nandini u take rest...nahi who hulk aagaya toh fir chillayega ...isbaar hum dono pe...

Nandini:No cabir I m not feeling sleepy

Cabir:Tum mujhe marwaaogi...

Nandini:Hmm...u tell me something about Raghav sir...

Cabir:What...Raghav ke baare me kya bolu...r u crazy

Nandini:Y not...u only said na ...ur friends don't talk about Raghav with u...then u can share with me...if u feel like...orelse its K

Cabir:What should I tell about him...He walked away...uss din ke baat sirf ek msg aaya bas then he disappeared

Nandini:What ...i thought u myt b in contact...

Cabir:No...he messaged me that not to find him...

Nandini:U miss him...

Cabir:I do...but now I moved on...

Nandini:Cabir...don't feel bad...n whenever u feel like talking about him u can talk to me...

Cabir n Nandini stay quite for sometime...

Meanwhile Manik barge in holds Cabir's neck...

Cabir shots:aaa...ab tujhe kya hua...iska khyal toh rakha maine...

Listening that Nandini shouts.:Manik...what r u doing leave him...i m fine...

Manik:No its not because of Nandini...u don't take stress

Nandini:But what happened...first u leave him

Manik:Tu mere ghar se nikla kaise mujhe bina bataye

Cabir understands n frees himself from Manik's grip...

Cabir:Kisne batay tujhe Mukti ne na...use toh main chodunga nahi...

Manik:Nahi...mere maid ne bataya...

Nandini:Guys u scared me...Manik tum pagal ho...y did u react like that

Manik:Toh kya karu...iss idiot se kaha maine...to stay with me

Cabir:Haa na...ab toh album bhi milgayi hai...so I shud be independent na

Manik:Toh maine kab kaha mat ban independent...

Nandini:Will u plz explain hua kya hai...

Cabir:Nothing ...I took a flat on rent n I shifted yesterday without informing him...thats it

Nandini:Manik what is ur problem...What the harm in this...Manik tries to open his mouth furiously but Nandini shouts at Cabir

Nandini:Cabir...how can u b so irresponsible...Y u dint inform Manik...i dint expect this from u

Cabir:Professor shuru hogayi

Manik goes all happy when Nandini shouts at Cabir n joins Nandini:This time I support her

Cabir:Haa ab toh tu dono ko support karega

Nandini:I m not supporting any one of u...y cant u ppl act normally

Manik n Cabir looks at her surprisingly...

Cabir:Doc was right she is cured...

Manik looks at Cabir n smiles...

Nandini understands that she was shouting at them n feels embarassed...

N three of them starts laughing...

Nandini:Guys u r getting late for college so leave...

Manik:R u crazy...main kahi nahi jaaraha...

Cabir:Tujhe chalna padega kyunki tu chahkar bhi nahi ruksakta...

Manik gives a weird look to Cabir:Why...

Cabir:Chachi aarahi hai...iske bhai ke saath

Manik:What...but y...

Nandini smiles...

Cabir:Manik woh iski Chachi hai...

Before Manik says anything...Chachi enters...

Chachi:Arre tumlog yahi par ho...

Cabir n Manik greets Chachi n Rishab...

Rishab goes n hugs Nandini...

Manik tries to stop him bcz of Nandini's wounds but Nandini gestures him "I m fine"

Chachi:Ab kaisi hai Nandu...Doctor ne batay ghar ka lejasakte hai

Nandini:Nahi Chachi

Manik:Haa Chachi...aaj shamko checkup ke baad batayenge...Doc

Chachi:Accha toh fir theek hai...Chalo tumlog bhi Nashta karke hi jana

Manik n Cabir shouts together:Nahi...

Chachi:Kya hua...

Manik:Woh...hum khake aaye hai...aur main Nandini keliye bhi lekar aaya hun woh usse sada khane bola hai doctor ne

Chachi:Uska toh theek hai par ...tumlogo ko main khaye bina jaane nahi dungi

Manik n Cabir looks at Nandini pleadingly...Nandini smiles

Nandini:Chachi ...woh unko college keliye late horaha hai...

Cabir:Haa theek kaha Nandini ne...Chal Manik...

Cabir rushes out of the room...Manik goes near the door n turns back to see Nandini n gestures her that he ll be back soon.

Nandini gives a smile to Manik...

Manik n Cabir in car...

Cabir:Tujhe pata hai ...Chachi ki sweetness dekhkar unka khana tasre karne ka mann kar raha tha...

Manik smiles:Kar lena tha...tereliye bhi bed lagwa deta hospital me...

Cabir:What...tu toh aise bolraha hai jaise tune unka khana taste kiya hai

Manik gives a stern look to Cabir n asks:Tune kabhi Manchurian Puri ka naam suna hai

Cabir:Nahi

Manik:Maine suna hai...aur Bhindi pasta...

Cabir:haa suna hai par alag alag...

Manik:Maine saath me khaya hai...

Cabir:What... R u kidding me

Manik:Yes its Chachi ...unhe Naye naye dishes banane ka shauk hai aur khilane ka bhi

Cabir:Damn crazy maannn...Nandini kaise khati hai ye sab

Manik:God nows...

Manbir reaches college n Cabir spots Navya with bags...Cabir asks Manik to go n he ll just come...in 2mins

Cabir goes to navya n asks her

Cabir:Tum ye bags ke saath yaha kya karrahi ho...

Navya:Tumse matlab

Cabir:Sidhe tarah batati ho ya...main jau

Navya doesn't speak...

Cabir was about to leave but Navya speaks up...

Navya:Woh hume hostel se nikaaldiya...kyunki hu pregnant hai...

Cabir:What ...ab...kisiko batay tumne

Navya:Nahi...humari ek hi toh dosth hai Nandini par who khud hospital me hai...aur hume Mukti se bolne me hichkichahat horahi thi...

Cabir hands over his flat keys n tells her togo n sttle there ...n gives the address too

Navya:Ye kiska ghar hai...

Cabir:Mera...tum waha rehlo tab takmain kahi aur adjust karlunga

Navya:Par...hum

Cabir:Jab tak tumhe koi ghar nahi milta tabtak aur haa kisiko batane ki zaroorat nahi...Nandini ko toh bilkul nahi...warna Manik mujhe maardega

Navya:Theek hai...Thanq...

Cabir smiles ...puts his goggles n leaves from there...

Precap:

Doc says that Nandini can go home.

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Next part soon but cant promise mrng or evening as i get time i ll update

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