'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

awsome...😊pls continue soon...

thanq
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome as usual.. Keep updating fast fast 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tanshita171

awesome update!! Finally Mukti knows 👏

Update soon 😊

Originally posted by: prati_25

amazing update!!!

So even Mukti know about MaNan now..😃😃 excited to read next part..😉
continue soon..:)

Yes Mukti knows...n there will b a surprise for u all
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dushturain

AT LAST!! ATLAST!!AT LAST!!

i read seven chaps in one go!! phew!


fabulous one Kreshu!! Loved it.👏

I like how this is going!!

Manik the smart cookie!! lol put a tracker on nandini's cell.
My favourite part is offcourse Cabir in CID mode!! So glad they found out.

Now I really want to see how mukti handles it...she is a no nonsense girl. I hope she downright calls Soha a psycho in her face

Hope Mannyubir comes up with a plan to trap this chudail.

great story Kritika.



Really...thanq somuch for taking out time n reading it Dushtu...more interesting stuff is on the way
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manan58

Awesome as usual.. Keep updating fast fast 😉

updating it now
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Posted: 10 years ago

MaNan's Fear---Part 8

Recap:

Manik,Abhi n Cabir plans to keep Nandini away from college n protect her till the album is done.

Mukti reaches near the door n spots Chudail talking to Manik's guitar n was behaving like psycho n stands there to listen completely n enjoy her stupidity

Chudail:Then Nandini...

Imaginary Manik:What abt Nandini

Chudail:I know Manik that u n Nandini r together...u r a couple right ...i saw u together so many times

Mukti gets a shock of her life...but stands there tight lipped

Cabir cums near Mukti n puts a hand on her shoulder ...she gets shocked n after seeing Cabir she asks him to be silent and listen to Chudail

Imaginary Manik:Yaa...but that doesn't mean we r a couple

Chudail:No...don't lie Manik I know on new year eve also u were with Nandini only but not with any doctor...

Imaginary Manik:Yes I was with her but how did u come to know that

Chudail:I followed Cabir when u called him for help...n I spied him when he was checking ur location

Cabir near the door thinks...that means I was right...but forgets that he is standing with Mukti

Chudail:U know... what all things I did to separate u both.

Imaginary Manik:What u did...

Chudail:I tried all possible ways to harm Nandini but everytime u saved her...but even after I took u away from her...she got saved by someone...

Imaginary Manik:Then finish this matter ones n for all...

Chudail :I will Manik...i will then u ll b all mine forever

Cabir n Mukti moves away from there...cums into another room

Cabir gets shocked n thinks to himself that how to stop her from harming Nandini n what is she upto now

Mukti goes all mad thinking about MaNan...n bursts out their name:Seriously like Manik n Nandini...

Cabir comes into senses n bangs his head that Mukti now knows everything about MaNan

Mukti confronts Cabir:Aur tu ...tujhe ye sab pata tha...mujhe shak horaha tha ki kuch toh gadbad zaroor hai par...humesha tu use bacha leta tha

Cabir:Gadha dhari bheem shaant hoja...i ll explain

Mukti:Tu kya samjhayega mujhe...main toh uss Manik se puchungi directly n tries to leave the room

Cabir :Usse khud nahi pata toh usse kya puchegi

Mukti stops n turns back:Kya...Cabir...tu apni baaton se mujhe mat fasa...

Cabir:Main sach kehraha hun...he himself don't know what he want he is confused ...isliye I dint tell anything to u ppl ...n I wanted him to tell everyone

Mukti:Tujhe lagta hai main pagal hun...jo teri baaton me aajaungi

Cabir:Mukti...sochke dekh...remember Dhruv loved Nandini but Nandini said no to him...

Mukti starts thinking:Matlab ye dono...Cabir interrupts her

Cabir:Haa...Manik ke feelings ke baare me woh khud sure nahi hai...toh woh hume kya batayega...hume chod he dint even opened his heart to Nandini also...thats y they r playing friends-friends

Mukti:Matlab they love eachother...

Cabir:Happy realization...yaar lagta hai Manik tujhse bhi zyada dumb hai

Mukti:Matlab...

Cabir:he thinks its just tender n care but not Love

Mukti:Hain...ab ye kaunsa twist hai

Cabir:Iss relationship me bohat saare twists hai...remember Aliya,Dhruv n now this Chudail

Mukti:Ohh shit...Alya...Manik moved on from Aliya

Cabir:Yes...i think hume abhi keliye chup rehna chahiye...n let Manik confess things

Mukti:I think u r right

Cabir:Aur tu bhi plz apna muh bandrakh agar Manik ko pata chala maine tujhe bataya then he ll definitely kill me

Mukti:But Y Nandini...Manik ki choice aisi nahi thi

Cabir:Mukti...tu bata agar tu agar kisise pyar karegi toh uska chehra ya dressing stlye dekh kar pyar karegi...or will u see that he shud not b a commoner

Mukti:No... offcourse not...infact just he shud understand me...n u all guys n specially our bond that is Fab5...its my family

Cabir:So I think u got ur answer

Mukti:U mean Nandini...

Cabir:Haa...Mukti...she understands Fab5 more than we understand eachother

She stood by Manik at every point where he was broken bcz of us...like my secret being Gay if u remember she handled the situation very intelligently fight at college,admitting me in hospital n now this album

Mukti:What...matlab usse pata tha ki tu gay hai

Cabir:haa Mukti...after Manik she was the first one to know...Soch she cud have used it against us...but she dint even after what things we did to her...N Now I think I have rights to tell only this much about her...rest Manik shud tell u...but only if he wants...so lets not force him...let him understand his feelings for her

Mukti:But what about this album n what Chudail was saying holding Manik's guitar...

Cabir:I can only say that Nandini's life is in danger bcz of us now...

Mukti:What...u r scaring me Cabir...

Cabir:Chudail is a psycho n Nandini par jo attacks hue hai woh Chudail ne kiye hai

Mukti:What the Hell...

Cabir:Haa...infact kal Nandini kidnap hote hote bachgayi ...but thanks to Abhi that he saved her...n that's y why Manik left from Farm house suddenly yesterday

Mukti:What...par Abhi toh jaanewala tha...aur use kaise pata...aur Nandini theek hai na

Cabir:Calm down Mukti ...Haa he was about to leave but Manik stopped him n asked to stay with Nandini...Nandini got sprain in her leg...Now Abhi is with Nandini...we only sent him there...n Nandini don't know anything abt Chudail yet...

Mukti: Aur tumlogon ne hume kyu nahi bataya

Cabir:Mujhe bhi aaj hi pata chala abt Chudail before leaving from farm house n after coming here i told Manik n v discussed everything with Abhi

Mukti: Ye kaisa pagalpan hai...is she really a psycho or what

Cabir:I think so...bcz just now Manik said that even Nandini noticed this weird Chudail in this condition n warned Manik...but he ignored itseems...i guess she is obsessed with Manik

Mukti:But y r v tolerating her ...

Cabir:Bcz we have this album in our hands n Nandini wants us to cut this album first n don't want us/Fab5 to break bcz of her n Manik's relation as Chudail knows everything abt them now...aur tumlogo ko pata chalta toh shayad ye Album nahi pura hota...u remember na what happened last time when Aliya sent goons behind her n then Dhruv-Manik fight...Fab5 almost break hochuka tha...she thinks u ppl don't like her n even Manik thinks that ...she wants us to cut this album specially for me...knowing my condition

Mukti:I think Nandini is much more mature then us...we r so impulsive

Cabir:Agree...but now I m worried that what Chudail is upto...we shud definitely keep an eye on her

Mukti:Don't worry I ll do that...

Cabir:Great...but make sure that what ever u hear,sense or cum to know u ll inform me...bcz Manik shud not know that I told everything to u n now u r with us

Mukti:Don't worry...I want Manik to tell...aur usdin main uske kaan zaroor pakdungi

Precap:

Chudail calls Nandini n asks her to come to college bcz Manik is hurt.

Manik comes to meet Nandini at her place.


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Guys i will try to finish Chudail track in this week so will try to update fast...so please follow

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update Kritika...
i love Cabir yaar...
and love your writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update Kritika...
i love Cabir yaar...
and love your writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
So finally mukti knows...loved mukti n cabir's talk..
Cont. Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome part...loved it...mukti is also in action...wow ...loved mukti & cabir talks...
please continue soon...take care😊

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