'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
lved it
eager to read next soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prati_25

awesome update!!!

I wanna kill this chudail 😡😡

Pls update next part soon..


Towards end of Chudail u myt feel like killing me😆
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Originally posted by: sizzysehrish

nice update
lved it
eager to read next soon


Thanq ...will update tmrw
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update, super excited...continue plz, thanks !😊
p.s. poor Manik, think he's becomin like Superman...SuperManik 😆
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Originally posted by: Zoya_09

<font size="2">Awesome update, super excited...continue plz, thanks !😊</font>

<font size="2">p.s. poor Manik, think he's becomin like Superman...SuperManik😆</font>

hahaha thanq...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
Please just end this chudail part already..
I mean she is crossing all the limits...
Nandu needs to tell Manik that Chudail is blackmailing her..
Continue Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanq... i ll update within an hr or two...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Amazing update...

Please just end this chudail part already..
I mean she is crossing all the limits...
Nandu needs to tell Manik that Chudail is blackmailing her..
Continue Soon


I know...she is a pain...still she is thr in 4 parts
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Posted: 10 years ago

MaNan's Fear--Part 11

Recap:

Chudail blackmails Nandini...

Nandini decides to stay away from Manik...n he agrees

Nandini:Manik please...let the album get released ...u know how Mukti reacted on that day when u saved me...

Manik agrees to Nandini...

Manik leaves from there...

Nandini to herself:...I just hope Manik stays away from me atleast for a while...

Or else its better I wont go to college itself n be at home...

On the other side...

Khurana:So...my lovely daughter...is ur Fab5 ready with the songs...

Chudail happily replies:S dad...so tell me when r u launching them...

Khurana:U r looking happy so that means u achieved what u wanted

Chudail :S dad ...almost

Khurana:K then...tell them to get ready for this weekend for there grand launch...as I finalize with other board of directors n let u know the final decision...till tmrw I ll tell the result

Chudail:I know u ll make them agree Dad...

Khurana:Offcourse...did I say no to u

Next day Chudail comes college n asks Fab5 to meet her in college so that she can give them this good news

All gathers in Audi

Chudail:So guys...here is an awesome news for u guys...

Except Dhruv n Aliya nobody was interesting in her news...bcz they were not expecting the album launch so soon n were giving her fake smile

Aliya:What...n Why r u so happy...

Chudail:Bcz...Ur album is approved by Q-Label n they gonna launch u guys this Weekend

Fab5 gets surprised n happy listening to the news...n hugs eachother in joy...

Chudail:U forgot me...

Manik:This is just Fab5 group hug...n nobody has place in us

Chudail:But I m ur manager...

Fab5 looks at her but doesn't offer her for a hug

Chudail:Fine...but still I want to share something that I m throwing a grand party after the launch but for only some selected ppl in our lifes...n there I have surprise for u guys too

Fab5 gets all excited...

Chudail:So guys I want u to prepare a special song for the launch to perform...so that u can show the glimpse of ur magic

Fab5 agrees in joy...

Chudail tries to know where Nandini is n is she coming to college or not daily...

Chudail:BTW where is Nans...i dint see her these days ...i hope she fine...

Cabir:Yes she is fine...but tum kyu pooch rahi ho...

Chudail:No actually I want someone to help me out in arranging this party bcz dad has handed over the responsibility to me...so I need her

Manik thinks this is the right time to make her realize that he n Nandini r not together anymore...

Manik acts as if he is angry:No...she will not...I m not at all interested ...the way she was handling us...we myt have not completed our album...thanks to u that u handled us n in correct time we completed the album...

Chudail feels happy:K...but then I can atleast call her to the launch n party right...

Manik wanted Nandini to stand along woth him at the launch so he agrees but annoyingly:...As u wish...bcz u r throwing the party...

Chudail :K ...thanq somuch

Mukti wanted to call Navya n Abhi so she asks Chudail:Can we call our friends also ...if u don't mind...

Chudail:Yes offcourse Mukti...the party is for u guys...call whoever u want

Chudail leaves from there...Fab5 gives group hug n decides to party tonight...

Cabir:Before that lets decide a song for the launch

Mukti:Cool...sounds like good idea...

Manik was restless...as he wanted to share the big news with someone who actually made this possible...

Dhrulya were in their own land whereas Cabir n Mukti notices Manik n smiles at each other

Cabir:Manik...itna restless mat ho...pratice ke baad chale jaana...abhi Chudail yahi ghoom rahi hogi...

Manik changes his expression:K...guys lets rock it...

As they practices till 5pm n Manik stops suddenly as he was restless to meet Nandini n asks them to shutter down will comtinue tomorrow

All leaves deciding that they ll meet for the party at Manik's place...exactly at 8pm

Manik asks Cabir:Will u come to Nandini's place or shall I drop u home...

Cabir:Mujhe kabaab me haddi banne ka shauk nahi hai toh tu jaa...mera kal interview hai...abhi filhaal flat dekhne jaaraha hun...so u go n enjoy ...see u at the party

Manik :K...as u wish...n drives to Nandini's home in joy

Manik rings the door bell n hides so that he can see who opens the door...

First Chachi opens the door n finds no-one...n goes back to kitchen

Nandini was fine now just a bit pain but Navya was still staying with her just to follow Manik's instructions

Navya cums down from Nandini's room n again doorbell rangs...

Chachi:Navya beta...dekh toh kaun hai jo baar baar bell bajake pareshaan kar raha hai

Navya:Ji Chachi...

Manik again hides but seeing Navya he comes in front...

Navya:Tum bell baja rahe the...

Manik:Shhh...mujhe Nandini ke saath thoda time spend karna hai ...toh don't tell Chachi n runs upstairs escaping from Chachi's site before Navya says Yes

Chachi:Kaun hai beta...

Navya:Koi nahi Chachi...

Chachi:Koi sach me pagal hogaya hai ...jo baar baar bell baja raha hai

Navya to herself:Haa Chachi pagal toh hua hai par Nandu ke pyar me...smiles n goes to kitchen

Manik barge in n locks the door from inside...

Nandini gets shocked seeing Manik...n surprised too because yesterday only they decided to not to meet

Nandini:Manik what is this...how come u r here n Y u locked the door ...Chachi kya sochegi...

Manik cums near keeping his finger on her lips:Shhh...Chachi don't know that I m hear so don't shout

Nandini gets shocked n worried:What ...Manik R u mad...n what she ll think if she cums to know...n Why r u here...

Manik gives a puppy look to Nandini...

Nandini calms herself:K now tell me Y u r here...y decided not to...before she can complete...

Manik lifts her into his his arms n turns around...

Nandini struggles n tries to talk to him low voice:Manik...leave me...what r u doing

Manik stops after taking 3 4 rounds n kisses Nandini on her cheecks n surprises Nandini

Nandini goes all shy:Manik...what r u doing

Manik:I m very happy that's y...

Nandini:Put me down n tell me y r u happy...

Manik puts her down n both of them sits on the bed

Manik:Guess...

Nandini:Ohh My God u got the album...

Manik:Yes...

Nandini forgets everything n hugs him...:I m so happy Manik

Manik:See...now u understood Y I m happy...n hugs her back...

Nandini recollects Chudails words...n breaks the hug...

Manik :Kya hua...

Nandini:Nothing...

Manik turns n sleep on Nandini's lap holding her hand

Nandini:Manik...ye kya kar rahe ho Chachi aajayegi...

Manik:Shhh...dont worry...she will not...Chachi ko Navya sambhal legi

Nandini smiles n says:What...

Manik:woh sab chodo...now u tell me r u happy...

Nandini nods her head in yes...

Manik:But y I cant find that spark of happiness...

Nandini kisses his forehead:I m really very happy Manik...

Manik looks at her n her eyes were filled with tears...seeing that he suddenly gets up

Manik gets confused:Hey...what happened...why r u crying

Nandini:Nothing...this is my way of feeling the happiness...

Manik:What ...

Nandini wipes her tears:Mr.Manik Malohtra u still don't know me...

Manik:K...then we have to know eachother right...then we have to spend more time together...so I will stay here for some more time...

Nandini gets shocked

Nandini:No u cant...

Manik:Y r u finding ways to stay away from me...

Nandini:No Manik nothing like that...

On the other hand...Mukti decides to call Abhi n Navya for the party...

Mukti calls Abhi but he doesn't pick the call...As he was at the hospital with Doctor n he dint wanted to take her call...just to make distance from her

Then Mukti Calls Navya...

Navya:Hello...

Mukti:Navya main Mukti bolrahi hun...

Navya:Haa...

Mukti:Dekho...mujhe milna hai tumse...kuh zaroori baat karni hai...tum hostel hi hona

Navya:Nahi woh hum Nandini ke saath hai...

Mukti says k n cuts the call

Upstairs...MaNan in room

Manik:Then what happened...Is there any problem

Nandini:No Manik...Y don't u understand Manik we r at my home that too in my room n Chachi ko pata chalgaya that u r here what shud I tell...I think u shud go ur friends must b waiting for u

Manik:Yes we r meeting for a small Fab5 party...so I think we shud also party...for this success

Nandini:No I wont cum...

Manik sarcastically :So I dint say to cum today...we ll go out tmrw just both of us...

Nandini:What...no ways...

Manik:But Y...

Nandini :I don't know Y...

Manik:I don't want to listen anything ...u r coming...

Nandini:We ll c...now I think u shud go

Manik gets angry at Nandini's behavior

Precap

Mukti comes to Nandini's house when Manik was still there.

Mukti pulls Maniks leg.


I felt this part is a bit slow n long so if u want i ll add the next part within some hours...or else directly tmrw mrng...

So do let me know if u want it early

Edited by kresham - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
luved it!!!Waiting 4 next part update soon😉

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