'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 71

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zoya_09

Awww Kritika, thanks for the amazin, awesome update !!!

Was literally meltin , when he said '' will u be my valentine 4eva '' ... ahhh

luvin more n more the naughty n jealous Manik 😆😆




Thanq...i was afraid that will u ppl like or not...bcz i dont have much idea abt this kind of things
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks to everyone who replied😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congratulation kreesham u have reached 100 pages
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is the second last part guys...tmrw i ll update the last part...thanq for baring me...hope u ll like this twoparts also

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MaNan's Fear---Part 29

Recap

All couples are spending night with each other

Manik raises his hand towards Nandini:Will you b my Valentine for rest of my life

Nandini without wasting time gets up n holds his hand and accepts by simply saying Yes...

Manik getsup n hugs her lifts her n twirls her around in joy...

Fireflies keeps on glowing...

Manik finally stops n puts her down

Nandini looks at Manik lovingly n they ends up in deep passionate kiss...

Manik lifs her up in his arms n takes her to the bed...

Nandini just says NO n he understands n they cuddle into each other...

After sometime Nandini breaks the silence

Nandini:Manik...have u slept

Manik with closed eyes:Hmm...

Nandini:I want to ask u something

Manik:hmm...

Nandini:For saying this u were afraid that our friendship will break

Manik doesn't reply...

Nandini looks up to see whether he slept or what

Nandini:Manik...

Manik opens his eyes:Nandini ...I LOVE YOU...

Nandini's eyes were filled with tears n tears starts rolling down...

Manik:Hey...isliye main darr raha tha...tumse kehne keliye...i dint know how u ll react

Nandini smiles...

Manik:I thought u ll b angry n myt break our friendship but u r crying n smiling at the same time

Nandini in sarcastic way:Tumne iss friendship ko kabhi bhi seriously liya hai...

Manik smiles

Manik:Nandini ...

Nandini:hmm

Manik:U were surprised na that y Fab4 were acting nice to u...

Nandini:Ya...i was surprised n shocked too

Manik smiles:Actually I told them that I LOVE YOU... in that party itself.

Nandini gets up in Shock:What...n u dint tell me...but how n what did u tell them

Manik:Calm down Nandini ...dont take somuch stress

Manik continues:Woh actually on that day after launch we met na...that Psycho took our pic n sent to Fab4...n then she kidnapped u after that...so I had to confess them about us

Nandini:But Manik...

Manik pulls her near n gives a peck on lips:No Ifs n buts...just calm down...they don't have any problem

Nandini smiles n holds Manik again...

Nandini:But Manik how will I face them now...

Manik:What is there to face haa...I m with u na...no need to worry

Nandini:even I want to tell u something...

Manik:What...

Nandini:Its about Mukti...

Manik opens his eyes.:What u want to tell about Mukti...

Nandini :U know na yesterday Mukti stayed back after u left

Manik:Hmm

Nandini:Actually I stopped her from going bcz I wanted to know about her feelings for Abhi

Manik smiles :What ...R u crazy Nandini...Nandini interrupts

Nandini:They love eachother

Manik gets shock:Tum toh mujhe roz ek shock derahi ho Nandini...Kal Cabir ke bare me aaj Mukti ke bare me...My mind is gonna explode with somany shocks...

Nandini:Manik listen completely na

Manik:No I urgently want a hug like our first hug ...when I was in shock n landed here

Manik hugs her n Nandini gives in...but without breaking the hug Nandini tells the truth about Abhi

Nandini:Manik...But Abhi is suffering from Cancer

Manik breaks the hug in shock:What ...

Nandini:Yes Manik...i came to know yesterday only

Manik gets upset n worried for Mukti:Nandini...u dont know how Mukti reacts...i don't want her to break n go back to same situation where Harshad left her

Nandini calms him down:Manik listen...nothing will happen he ll be fine

Manik:Nandini what r u saying...

Nandini :Mukti knows everything...n we sorted out the problem also

Manik:Matlab...

Nandini explains everything what all she did along with Mukti after he left n Y she cudnt talk to him from Morning...n informs him that within couple of days Abhi has to leave for US for treatment

Manik looks at her amazingly...

Nandini:Kya hua Manik

Manik:U r a real star Nandini...u r shining my world n u r protecting my friends too like I do...

Nandini:Manik...

Manik:Sshhh...U r correct or I shud say perfect thing happened to my life...I cant even think my life without u now...u r like oxygen to me...

Nandini feels overwhelmed...

They cuddle into each other n sleep

Next Morning Manik sneaks out before others wakes up n leaves a note for Nandini saying he ll pick her up at 10am as they have to goto hospital for her hands dressing.

Both of them goto hospital as per the appointment...

After coming out of hospital

Manik leans at the car holding Nandini from waist n makes her lean on him in the car parking

Nandini:Manik ye kya hai...hum car parking me khade hai...

Manik :U think I care

Nandini gives a look...

Manik grabs her more closer:So princess...Kaha jaana hai tell me

Nandini:Kaha matlab...Ghar...as if u ll allow me to come to clg...makes a puppy face

Manik:Nandini...tum puri tarah theek toh hojao

Nandini:I m getting bored at home...

Manik:What...tum kab bore hui...koi na koi toh tha hi tumhare saath...infact main bore hogaya tha ...n u dint even talk to me

Nandini:Manik I told u na what happened...

Manik:Kk...I understand

Nandini:Accha listen...plz I want u to inform Mukti abt Abhi's treatment n he ll have to leave with in couple of days

Manik smiles n hugs her :K my princess...So when we ll meet then...

Nandini:I have some work at home so I ll inform u...aur waise bhi tum toh kabhi bhi aajate ho...so do u need anyone's permission...

Manik smiles at Nandini's sarcasm

Nandini:Chalo...lets go...u r getting late for college

Manik making a sad face:No...i want b with u today...u r spoiling the fun Nandini...

Nandini:So u don't want me to take rest...then lets go I ll also come to college

Manik:What...I dint say clg...u better go home...

Manik drops Nandini n drives off to clg with a bit upset mood

Nandini thinks:I know how to change ur mood Manik...

Nandini msgs Navya n asks her to meet behind the clg but without informing others in 30 mins.

...

Fab5 meets at clg...like daily in Jam room

Cabir:Toh Manik aaj Valentines hai...kya tu Nandini ko propose karne wala hai ya humlog batade

Mukti:Haa yaar Manik...ab humse aur chup raha nahi jata

Dhruv:Buddy...i think its high time ab toh who ghar bhi aagayi hai...toh ab kya problem hai

Aliya:Don't tell me u r afraid Manik...

Manik gets irritated...:Stop it guys...u ppl don't share ur feelings with me out of fear n u ppl expect me to tell Nandini my feelings.

Cabir:Humne kya chupaya tujhse...Maine toh sabkuch batadiya...aur kya

Manik:Really guys...

Dhruv:K I ll start...I love Aliya...

All of them gets shocked n give a questioning look to Aliya

As she shyd everyone understands that she is also in Love with Dhruv

Manik:Maine ye expect nahi kiya tha

Cabir:Haa...par Mujhe aur Mukti ko shak zaroor tha

Now Dhrulya gives a shocking look at Cabir n Mukti

Mukti:Yes guys...I saw u ppl many times n shared it with Cabir but we thought u it ll b better if u ppl announce it ...

Manik:Matlab main yaha ek akela aisa hun jise kisike bare me kuch nahi pata...

Mukti:I m sorry to tell u guys but even I have told u half truth

Manik cums near Mukti n hugs her tightly...Mukti looks at him n she understands

Mukti:Nandini ne mera kaam aasaan kardiya...She is perfect for u Manik

Dhruv,Cabir n Aliya gets confused...

Cabir:Kya hua koi hume bhi batayega ...kaunsa sach

Manik:Guys...we all know that Mukti loves Abhi...but Abhi has cancer

All three of them gets shocked n looks at Mukti...n she nods her head

Manik:But guys not to worry bcz Nandini has solved this problem...n now just we have to send Abhi there for treatment n soon he ll b back to Mukti...

Mukti's tears roll down n looking at her Aliya cums n hugs her...

All three boys hug both of them covering them...

Manik:Guys...dont worry we ll fight n get through this too...

After sometime

Manik:So now a good news for u guys...Abhi will b going to US for treatment within couple of days...

Mukti:Really ...that means Nandini managed about that Doctor appointment n all but usne mujhe bataya kyu nahi...

Manik:Calm down Mukti...she wanted me to give this good news...n God knows she said she ll b busy today

All feels relaxed but suddenly Cabir's mind strikes

Cabir:Abe...saale...tune hamara mind divert kardiya

Manik:Matlab

Cabir:Agar aaj woh busy hai toh...use tu propose kaise karega

Manik:Accha woh...

Aliya:Plz Manik...don't tell me that u r not proposing her

Dhruv:Sochle buddy ...aaj kahi koi aur na chance maarle

Manik gives a stern look:Aisa kuch nahi hoga

Cabir:Toh kab bolega

Manik:Tumhe kya lagta hai...maine nahi bola use...u see I m smart

Cabir:Matlab...saaf saaf bol

Manik sacarstically: Maine kal raat hi boldiya...

All four of them gets excited...

Mukti:Wow...Manik finally tune boldiya

Manik:Haa...even I told her that u ppl know everything...actually bolna pada bcz she was surprised n confused with the way u ppl were behaving with her...i mean she was literally shocked

All started laughing

Cabir:Ek min...ek min

Aliya:Now what...

Cabir:Manik...beta usne jawaab diya...

Manik gets confused:Jawaab...matlab

Mukti:Arre usne tujhe I LOVE U bola ki nahi

Manik gets up in confusion:Ohh...Shit...usne toh mujhe bola hi nahi

All of them shout at ones:What...

Precap

Manik cums to know that Nandini is in clg...

Final party.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: appy111

Congratulation kreesham u have reached 100 pages

Thanq Appy😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow... U updated... Amazing dear... Loved it too d core... U r ending dis soon na.. Will miss it...
Edited by appy111 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww this part is sooo cute!!
Seriously, manik is always the last one to know about anything in fabb5.

Im glad there are no more secrets between fab 5.


Awww nandu didnt say I love you back!!! Buddhu manik didnt even realise before... Ha ha

Its really sweet kresh


Too bad its coming to an end...but i guess with I love yous both manik and Nandinis fear will vanish. And they will live happily ever after.

Kresh u r amazing...
Edited by dushturain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waaooo kriti.. u always amazes m... i love dis part... n d last part was fantastic... waiting for d next part... continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww it was cute..so we heading towards d end hope u write another soon..
N update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
No pls pls pls don't end 😭 😭 😭
It was an amazing part
If u end I will not write anymore

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