'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 56

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: akiraroy

Wow luving this more and more..manik Proposing nandu will be fun.The best thing about ur FF is mukti and aliya are so positive opposite to d show...gr8 work kritika...Please update the next part soon...eagerly waiting...😉😉😉

hahaha I know...

chudail was enough for me...so mukti n aliya r nice in.my story
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

Very bad Krits! This is blackmail!!

Anywho, yeh le

Amazing part again yaar! Kitni baari wahi baat bolun? Your FF is the only thing I login for in the mornings yaar. Par you never update when i check...so I always miss the first page and then mera enthusiasm for commenting khatm...so like dikhe toh khush rehna😆
Something MaNanilicious on Vday? I want it ! I want it!!
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hahaha... yaar dad Jane tak toh rukna padta hai...warna jhooti padne me der nahi lagegi... agar subah subah pc on.kiya toh

n i though of giving another update today only but i m not getting pc...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: basket_101

Heyy!! :)

Nice part!! :D
I especially loved Fab5 bonding in your FF <3
It was shown very well!
Please do try and give another update today if it is possible for you😳
Would love to read it!!!

i m trying but pc is busy
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Smiley_23

hahahah itana sab hone ke bad bhi Manik don't know Nandu kya sochati haine usake bare maine???😲😲

waiting for next update...

bcz of friendship jhatka she gave him
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prati_25

lovely update!!!

looking forward to read about Valentine's surprise by Manik..😳😳

will try my best to portray
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update yaar...continue soon😊
Your story is the only good thing this valentine
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: apoorva1999

Awesome update yaar...continue soon😊

Your story is the only good thing this valentine

Ohh Thanq somuch...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kresham

hahaha... yaar dad Jane tak toh rukna padta hai...warna jhooti padne me der nahi lagegi... agar subah subah pc on.kiya toh

n i though of giving another update today only but i m not getting pc...



Ohhh😆 chal koi nahin..the night is still young. I'll be waiting to see if you're able to update tonight. 😃 try karna
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Posted: 10 years ago
Guys i m updating the next part ...r u guys ready...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Guys as i promised her ei s the next part for u as a Valentines Day gift enjoy...
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MaNan's Fear---Part 21

Precap

Abhi asks Nandini to propose Manik.

Fab5 asks Manik to propose Nandini.

Dhruv:I think she also loves u

Everyone gets a shock listening to that...

Aliya:How u know

Dhruv:I saw her pain for u Manik...when u were in hospital jab Doc said tera haath kaatna padega...n later her happines when ur hand was saved n u were fine...at that time I cudn't understand but now I understood that no one can love u more then her

Manik:That ...may b bcz...Cabir interrupts

Cabir:Ab ye mat kehna ki woh love nahi sirf tender aur care tha uska...

Manik:R u crazy Cabir...uske baad hi she walked away

Mukti:Manik tu pagal hogaya hai...u only said she risked her life for u n u think she don't love u

Manik:I don't know but I don't want to lose her that's it...

Cabir:Ek baar bolke toh dekh

Manik:Aur usne mana kardiya toh...I don't want to lose her as a friend also

Cabir:Tu free hojayega na...bas jyada kuch nahi...

Aliya:Shutup Cabir...Manik is right...n he knows her better then us...let him take time

Dhruv:I agree...Buddy tujhe jaise theek lagta hai waise kar.

Manik:Plz guys ...i ll try my best to know her feelings par tab tak u ppl stay quite ...u shud not let her know that I told eveything to u guys abt us...plz

Everyone nods in yes...

Manik:Chalo lets go...i m tried of this practice today...

Mukti:Chal ...r u going to hospital

Manik:No I ll go home n take food for Nandini n then we ll go to hospital

Cabir:Cool then we ll meet u there

Manik:Meet there matlab...kaha

Aliya:Hospital...

Manik:Hospital kyu...r u guys planing something

Dhruv:Nahi buddy...we just want to see Nandini that's it

Manik:Tumlogo ka pata nahi par I don't trust Cabir...ye apna muh khole bina nahi rahega I m sure

Cabir:Really Manik...

Mukti:Agree

Dhruv:I second that

Cabir:Dhruv tu bhi...

Aliya:Aur main bhi

Cabir making a crying face:Mujhe laga tumlog mujhe samjhoge...par nahi...

Mukti:Nautanki...bas haa...ye magamach ke aansu kisi aur ko dikha

Dhruv:Haa chalo...

Manik:Wait I ll make a call to bring food...

Cabir changes his expression:Lagta hai ye nahi manega...chalo guys

All heads towards hospital...

Nandini was chatting with Navya...

Navya suddenly feels giddy n runs into washroom to puke ...Nandini gets up from n goes towards the washroom

Nandini:Navya r u alright...I told u to see Doctor ones

Meanwhile Manik opens the door n gets shock seeing empty bed...n calls out Nandini's name

Nandini:Manik I m here...Manik looks towards the side ways n feels releaved but shouts at her

Manik:Y arent u on ur bed...

Nandini:Manik woh...Navya...

Cabir n Mukti both of them shouts at ones..."Kya hua Navya ko"

Manik:First u sit here...

Nandini nods her head n sits on bed...

Nandini:Mukti just do me a favor just take Navya to the doctor...she needs checkup plz...she will not listen to me

Mukti:Yaa I will...

Aliya:R u fine Nandini...

Nandini:Yes much better then before

Aliya:But u look tensed...

Dhruv tries to tease Manik:Uski aadat hai...sabke liye pareshaan hona...Kyu Manik

Nandini recollects the hospital incident n Manik recollects their convo in college sometime back

Meanwhile Navya comes out...sees everyone looking at

Mukti:Chalo...

Navya:Kaha...

Nandini orders:Doctor ke paas...

Navya silently nods head...

Mukti excuses her from others...but Cabir says I ll cum with u...Then Dhrulya also says even we ll cum thinking that they shud leave MaNan alone...

Everyone leaves from there leaving MaNan alone...

While going Mukti spots Abhi on a hospital bed in of the room

She asks Aliya to take Navya to the Doc n she ll b back

Mukti goes to Doc n enquires about Abhi...She gets shock of her life...she gets to know that Abhi has Cancer n he is on treatment there...

Somehow she managed her tears n comes out...She runs out of Hospital crying n heads towards home...

Aliya tries to call Mukti but she doesn't take call...

Doc tells Navya to take care n bcz she is weak n this will conitnue for few more weeks so take care

All cums out of Cabin n goes back to Nandini's room

Nandini:Kya kaha doc ne

Aliya:We need to take care of her...

Manik:Aliya...drop her at hostel

Cabir n Navya looks at each other

Cabir :No...i ll drop her...mujhe uss taraf kaam hai toh I ll drop her

Navya:Par humne Chachi se kaha ki hum yaha Nandini ke saath rahenge

Nandini:No need go n take rest...n I don't want anyone to stay with me I m fine now

Manik gives a confused look at her but she dint notice

Navya:Nandini hum tumhe akela nahi chod sakte

Cabir:Aur tum yaha rehkar use pareshaan karogi...

Manik:Guys chill...main yaha rahunga aur tum sab ghar jaoge

Cabir:Cool...Dhruv can u give ur bike for today...i ll drop Navya n have some other work also.

Dhruv:Haa lena...Aliya will drop me...

Aliya smiles:Ya no problem...

Cabir to himself:Tumlogo toh mauka chahiye...

All says bye to Nandini n Manik n heads towards homes...

Manik gives a look to Nandini...

Nandini:What...Y r u staring me

Manik:Y u said that u don't want anyone here...

Nandini:Woh...toh bas aise hi...n now u also go because I m fine

Manik:What I mnot going anywhere...i will stay here today also...so don't take stress n take rest...

Nandini:Manik...U ll spoil health by staying here

Manik puts his finger on her lips:Shhh...Y don't u understand...ones u go home I cant stay with u so plz...

Nandini removes his fingers:N that's y u want me to stay here...

Manik cups her face n says:Plz Nandini...dont take this from me...I want to spend this most precious time with u without any disturbance...

Nandini in low voice:...Manik ...kya hua aaj aise kyu baat karrahe ho ...

Manik leaves her face n controls his emotions:Nothing...

Manik to himself:Shit I LOVE HER...but shud I tell or not

Meanwhile Doctor comes in for checkup...

After Checkup

Doc:Manik u can take her home...

Nandini gets excited but Manik gets upset

Nandini:Really Doctor...

Doc:Yes ...but tmrw...

Now Manik gets excited n Nandini gets upset...

Doc leaves saying that she is absolutely fine now n she has to come after two days to change the bandages.

Manik nods head n looks at Nandini...Nandini was upset

Manik gets up n hugs her tightly ...

Precap

MaNan's spend last nyt together at hospital


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Next part tmrw but ones i complete it writing so cant promise in the mrng itself...it myt take time

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