'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 68

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: basket_101

Nice part!

So glad he finally said I love you to her ^_^
Can't wait for the next part!
Update as soon as you can 😃

Yup am updating in few mins
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

sweet heart...pls update soon...😉

Originally posted by: pared

plz update soon yar...

I m updating now sorry for the delay
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanq to everyone who is enjoying my writing...

sorry for the delay...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for delay guys...hope u read my OS which i posted yesterday...thats y cudnt post this update

MaNan's Face-off

If u get time do read this One shot too

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MaNans's Fear --Part 27

Recap

Manik tells Nandini that he said Fab5 that he loves her

There was silence from both the sides n Manik was waiting for Nandu's reaction

After waiting for some time

M:Nandini...say something...u said na u ll not break our friendship...Nandini

Nandini doesn't give any reply...bcz she dozes off bcz of medicines n stress

M:Hello...Manik checks the phone where he finds that she is still on line but not responding

Finally Manik realizes that she must have slept n feels upset that finally he said it but she dint listen.

He disconnects the call n crashes on his bed with a disappointment.

Next day this was day before Valentines that is friday [plz don't calculate the days even I forgot]

Nandu gets up late n finds that she dozed off talking to Manik last night n dint listen what he wanted to say...she gets worried that don't know how he ll react

She tries calling but he doesn't take the call so Nandu leaves a msg saying sorry that she dozed off bcz of medicines

Navya leaves for college n

Nandini then gets freshen up n she was feeling better that day n she decides to give the good news to Mukti n she dials her num

As it was late till Nandu calls ...Mukti was in practice so she doesn't pick her call

Nandini realizes that they myt b in practice that's y Manik also dint reply...

She waits for sometime n starts getting worried that Y Manik is not responding to her

Meanwhile Nandini gets a call from Mukti...on other side Manik also gets time to call Nandu as he dials her num he gets a busy tone...he gets irritated...

Dhruv n Aliya exchange glances n moves out of Jam room...which Cabir notices n smiles

Mukti n Nandu on call...

Mukti:Any good news Nandini

Nandini:Yes Mukti...but first u tell me did u express ur feelings to him

Mukti feels shy n says yes

Nandini gets excited :So...what did he say...

Mukti :Nothing...

Nandini:What...

Mukti in low voice:Listen I m in jam room so cant tell u now but u tell me na what Doc said plz...

Nandini:KK ...my uncle said he can b cured but

Mukti:But ...But what...

Nandini:It myt cost...n don't have any idea about Abhi that he can afford or not...i clueless in this matter...

Mukti:Nandini u don't worry about that...but u r sure na that there is hope...

Nandini:Yes Mukti...

Mukti:Nandini...u don't have any idea what u have given me...

Nandini:I know Mukti...even I m more than happy to give u this news

Mukti:K then I ll leave n give this news to Abhi...

Nandini:Yes u shud...n don't forget to ask his answer also

Mukti smiles n disconnects the call

Nandini sees Manik's miss calls n gets worried that he called again n I was busy

She calls him back...as he was irritated so he doesn't picks the call

Nandini gets worried...n keeps on calling

Mukti goes to hospital to inform n share the good news...

Abhi was on bed

Mukti:Hey...

Abhi:So ...looking happy...

Mukti:Guess what...

Abhi:My cancer can b treated

Mukti gets shocked:Then Y u said that its not curable

Abhi:So that u don't get involved in this

Mukti:R u crazy...what do u think of urself

Abhi:I was for u but came to reality

Mukti:Y u don't want to b cured

Abhi:Nothing like that but I left all hopes

Mukti:You don't want to be cured for me also...

Abhi looks at her lovingly

Mukti:So tell me what u think of me

Abhi:What...

Mukti:K I ll come to the point...U love me or not

Abhi:Y don't u understand Mukti I m dieing

Mukti puts her hand on his lips to stop him saying those words

Mukti:I ll save u...

Abhi:No...u cant bcz I cant

Mukti:U love me or not

Abhi:Mukti...

Mukti:Yes or No...

Abhi thinks for a while ...:Yes I do...n that's y I went away from u bcz I dint want to give u the same pain again

Mukti feels very happy n hugs him

On otherside Dhruv n Aliya on terrace

Aliya:What happened Dhruv

Dhruv:Woh...tumse kuch puchna tha

Aliya:Haa...bolo na

Dhruv:Will u come out with me for a date tmrw

Aliya feels shy but agrees...

On other side it was evening n Nandini was restless n worried that Manik was not taking her call

Finally she decides n msgs him..."If u r not taking my call then I ll cum to college now"

As soon as Manik reads the msg n He calls Nandini but he don't speak

As soon as Nandini takes the call starts apologizing

Nandini:Sorry sorry...many times

Manik listens n feels happy but don't utter a word n thinks of playing for sometime

Nandini gets worried when he dint say any word...:Manik ...Manik...R u thr

Manik:hmm...

Nandini:Kuch toh bolo

Manik:Nahi main wiat kar raha tha ki kahi galti se mujhe call toh nahi lag gaya...kyunki tumhare paas toh mereliye time hi nahi hai

Nandini with her puppy face n low voice:Manik...sorry na...plz again I wont repeat

Manik:Next time karne dunga tabna

Nandini:Matlab

Manik:Next time agar tumne mera call lift nahi kiya toh I ll directly come to u

Nandini:Accha...u r challenging me

Manik:So u think I cant do...

Nandini:I wont let this happen na...bcz I ll definitely take ur call ...

Manik:Lets see...bcz this time it wud b ur mistake n my benefit

Nandini:Lets see

Manik:Waise tum kalse itna kisse baat kar rahi ho ...jo tumhare paas merliye time nahi hai

Nandini starts blabbering:Woh...Nothing like that I was just talking to Ams...

Manik:Ams se baat kar rahi thi ya...kisi aur ko frieeend banaliya hai

Nandini:what do u mean...

Manik:I mean ...I think u forgot ur Monster Manik I guess

Nandini:Accha...so u mean to say I cant be friends with anyone

Manik:U can b...but sochlo he has to face me then

Nandini smiles n diverts Manik:Accha woh sab chodo...Kal raat tum kuch kehne waale the na

I m really sorry when I slept ...I don't know...may b bcz of medicines...

Manik:Its k ...nothing important

Nandini:Y not important u told na u wanted to talk to me n u said something like secret ...ya u said secret

Manik:No I dint say that...r u dreaming...

Nandini:Manik I said na sorry...so Y cant u tell me...

Manik:No now I don't have mood...jab milogi tab bataunga...now plz ...dont ask me again

Nandini:K k ...sorry don't b angry n lets not fight

Manik:Main fight nahi karta tum karwati ho...u know what I was write from the start that u find ways u to stay

Nandini gets angry :N u know what u don't know what I feel...

Nandini cuts the call in anger...

Manik starts worrying:Shit...satane ke chakker me gussa dila diya...but then smiles ...aaj manalunga use...ruthi rahegi toh manane me aur Mazaa aayega...

On otherside :Ab main bilkul call nahi karungi use...let him be...

Precap

Cavya,Dhrulya,Mukbhi n MaNan spend time with each other as couples...Not Cavya actually


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Guys this will b finished within 2 3 parts so stick to it...i ll finish this by Monday


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update yaar...
Manan ;)so cute...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice part 😊
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayayayyaya
Thanks for the update.
She dozed off because of the medicine. Uuhgh!!
Anyways,
It's Valentine's Day. At least here we'll get what we wanted and not a fight.
ThankYouuu!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update... beautifully written...
thank you... waiting for next update...


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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome update dear...loved it😊
manan...awww..so cute...😉.
take care...continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update..
Loved it..😃😃

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