Ashlok FF- The Love I don't deserve Ch.24 Teaser pg. 133

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So I had time and decided to upload a preview of my first Fan Faction called: The Love I don't deserve. I hope you like it and pls leave a comment below :D





Prologue

,, Congratulations Mrs. Agnihotri! You are 2 Month Pregnant." The Doctor said and gave Aastha her pregnancy report. After almost 2 Weeks of throwing up Aastha decided to visit her Doctor only to be left schocked. She was in the middle of a possible divorce, her life wasn't settled to have a baby. Especially with HIM.
Shlok...What would his Reaction be? He would be anything but happy, right? Maybe he would even take her baby away from her= So what should she do? Abortion? Nahi, Aastha couldn't kill an innocent soul...Meaning that she would have the baby.
At least she would have some part of HIM in her Life.
,, In these first few Month you have to be careful. Don't exhaust yourself and only do a few household chores. Would you like to have a Sonograph?"
Aastha just nodded;still numb with the discovery she just made.
After her visit she went back home and didn't realize she was crying. Shouldn't be Pregnant an amazing feeling? So why was she unhappy? She should have been absolutely happy but still Tears were constantly flowing and she was scared to tell Shlok that he was about to be a Father.
Suddenly she remember their First Night; The Night Shlok and she became intimate with each other.

It was a few weeks after Swatis Death and her Acceptance Ceremony. Shlok had finally confessed his Love and wanted Aastha to be his wife in true senses. That was before Aastha found out about her Father-in-Law.
She was getting ready once again for her Wedding Night but this Time it would happen. Aastha was overhelmed by her feelings. She didn't know what the Night had in store for her. She always had dreamed about her First Night to be memorable and she knew tomorrow she would not be the same.
A smile appeared on her lips and she tried to calm herself down. She was praying that she wouldn't faint due panic and excitement.

After a while Shlok called her in to their Room and what laid infront of her made Aastha almost cry. The Room was beautifully decorated the way it was on her first Wedding Night with Shlok. There were flowers and candles everywhere and she slowly entered the Bedroom to touch the roses hanging from the ceiling.
Thousand of emotions were flowing through her body. Happiness , Excitement, Desire and Impatience.
Familiar Arms suddenly were cralling around her waist, pulling her closer to his body. Aastha closed her eyes and leanded er Head against his Shoulder. His Fingers slowly pushed her Hair away and his lips drove over her Neck, teasing her, marking her.
,,Shlok...I love you..." she whisperd.
,, I know meri Jaan...I love you too. Always and Forever. You are mine and I am yours..."He turned her around and started kissing her softly. His lips were moving on hers and she tried to enter his mouth but he didn't let her. Today he wanted to make Love to her.
,,We have Time...Why the Rush..." His Finger opend her Dori and unhooked her Blouse. She clinched his Shoulders and gasped out. Shlok smiled and lifted her up. She was starring in his eyes.
,, Is this really happening? I am not Dreaming right?" Aastha asked and Shlok stopped. He smiled with pain and nodded his Head.
,, Yes it is true. Aastha from Now on i want us to be always together. Never Leave me , even if you realize I don't deserve your Love..."
,,Never could i leave you.."
Their Lips met again and Shlok laid Aastha down on the Bed.
Slowly they started undressing each other. Aastha felt like she was in heaven. Shlok was an gentle and knowing Lover.
But then fear over came her desire and she turned her face away.
,,Are you really ready Aastha? We can wait, we don't have to establish an intimate Relationship today. I want you to be comfortable." Shlok caressed her face;her cheeks.
Aastha smiled. He cared for her feelings He cared so much that he could even wait for her. Aastha knew exactly what to do.
,, I am sure. Now even more than ever. Shlok Love me...Mark me as yours...Please..." He smiled happily and kissed her.
Finally they broke every last barrier that seperated them and then finally they met as Husband and Wife.







So Guys that was the The Prologue of my Fan Fiction. Please tell me: How did you like it? Should i continue? :D


Index:
Prologue pg. 1

Chapter 1(A)
Chapter 1(B)
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4 (A)
Chapter 4 (B)
Chapter 5
Chapter 6(A)
Chapter 6 (B)
Teaser Chapter 7
Chapter 7 Ray of Light
Chapter 8 Silent Love
Chapter 9 Behind Closed Doors
Chapter 10 Teaser Confessions of the Forgotten
Chapter 10 Confessions of the Forgotten
Chapter 11 Forbidden Kisses
Teaser Chapter 12 The Love I don't deserve
Chapter 12 The Love I don't deserve
Teaser Chapter 13 Getting back my Love
Chapter 13 Getting back my Love
Chapter 14 The Truth Unfold

Chapter 15 Breaking Free
Chapter 16 Changing the Rules
Chapter 17 Mothers Love
Chapter 18 Patience is a virtue


Chapter 20 Broken Promises pg. 111
Chapter 21 Sweetest Revenge pg. 114
Chap. 22 Neela Sklok Agnihotri pg. 122


Chapter 23 Hush little Baby
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4057339&PID=118495831&#p118495831

Chapter 24 Freed Desire
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4057339&PID=119176288&#p119176288
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