Ashlok FF- The Love I don't deserve Ch.24 Teaser pg. 133 - Page 60

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

Hi Amel, what an update👏 the ending was soo scary, i hope he doesn't hurt poor Astha When Shlok found out the truth, it was heartbreaking. The description you gave was amazing👏👏A tight Slap stopped his mother from talking further and Shlok from breathing. I absolutely loved this line, it means soo much👏 Can't wait till you update, do update quick⭐️


He won't hurt her for now but soon she and Anjali will be in danger and than Shlokw ill have to choose who to save first :O OH NO I did not want to spoiler xD

That line described the whole chapter into one sentence :D
I am hapy you higlighted it😳

I will continue soon dearest I promise😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello dearest readers :D
I will upload as soon as possible
means tomorrow :D Pls bear with me till then

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi! Dear Amel...I'm very late...forgive me.
Loved the last two updates. But one thing bothered me much. Why didn't Shlok confront his dad and why didn't he go and help his mom. He knows that his dad abused her. So why didn' he?

Loved the last two updtes. amel.

trust is back and their back together.

Waitng for the next updte eagerly!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Hi! Dear Amel...I'm very late...forgive me.

Loved the last two updates. But one thing bothered me much. Why didn't Shlok confront his dad and why didn't he go and help his mom. He knows that his dad abused her. So why didn' he?

Loved the last two updtes. amel.

trust is back and their back together.

Waitng for the next updte eagerly!

Anuu dear no need to say sorry :)

Don't worry Shlok will react but he will do it wisely
He will save his mother from his abuse
In the next updates he will protect his mother and will very soon confront his father but every revolution takes its time right? ;)
Thanks for your comment :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm



Thanks Tash :D I too liked her brave reaction :D

I can't blame you but I wanted to make it reaistic if NA ever changes that he before was a decent and romantic man :D😆

Shlok is getting better day by day to flatter his wife :D He wants her to feel loved for her and not for her body😳

I love you and your support :D Thanks a big wala🤗 for you and ❤️


Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm


Tash my sunshine :D
I am relieved that you loved it :)

Varad knows how easy it is to misjudge a person- taht is why he gave sojal another chance :)

Karan was a grey character but never a black one :=

Thanks Shlok's apology was really cute I must admit😆😳


@Bold Love you too Amel🤗 Sunshine? Thank you😳
@bold purple Ofc I'll love it😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Natasha.


@Bold Love you too Amel🤗 Sunshine? Thank you😳
@bold purple Ofc I'll love it😡



@Tash 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Enjoy this Chapter guys will update another one in a bit ;)
Chapter 16 Changing Rules

Please God, help me be strong and change the rules of the house.'
Anjali closed her eyes while praying and remembered the events of yesterday night.
She would bring in a change that for sure but she wasn't sure as to how Shlok or Niranjan will react to eat.
I should start with something simply...like Breakfast!' Anjali smiled and went to the kitchen to prepare the Breakfast. After a while she set the table and Niranjan and Varad came down. Sojal followed him with Kavya in her arms.
When she saw Kavya hungrily gazing at the Breakfast she took a deep breath.
"From today we all will eat together."
Everyone looked at her in shock. What did she just say?
"Kya?" Sojal asked; still adjusting her pallu. Since she and Varad had patched up he seemed insatiable for her, she thought with a blushing smile.
"You heard me Sojal. From Now on you and Kavya and Aastha and I will serve the man and then sit with them to eat, right Sahib?" Anjali bitterly smiled at her husband. Ever since she decided to stand up for herself she wasn't afraid of his wrath anymore. She wouldn't give him the right to be superior to her- after all it was not a sin to be a woman but to be a slave.
Varad silently smiled at his Mother's words. After all this years He had never thought she would change her way of thinking. He asked Kavya to sit and fed her lovingly.
Anjali smiled and Varad winked at her. She nodded ensuring him that she was alright. He knew that his father wasn't nice to his Mother but he did not have the strength to fight against him. So he had supported her silently and mentally. Anjali thank all the gods for a son like Varad. And Shlok...She thought sadly.
"Shlok! Aastha! Come sit" Sojal said and started eating. Anjali walked towards the approaching couple and asked them too to sit down to eat something, she would serve them. Her smile was so natural that Shlok immediately smiled back and to the utter shock of everyone he even bend down and touched her feets; seeking her blessing for his plans. He wanted to slowly expose his father, to make him realize his mistakes. But he needed time to adjust to the situation. But he was sure of one thing: He would protect his mother's by all means. He would not let any harm reach her. He intended to tell her but how without making his father doubt his loyalty?
When Niranjan saw Shlok bending down he immediately stood up.
"Shlok!" He said with a faked smile and came closer. Instinctively he drew Aastha behind his back and grabbed his Mother's Hand.
"Yes Baba?" Shlok tried hard not to punch him, not to beat him black and blue. He wanted to make him regret badly for keeping him away from happiness all this years, for keeping him away from his mother.
"Son, please don't forget the meeting at 9. I will see you in office...and Anjali..." He turned around and caressed her cheek aggressively to which she winced in pain, not going unnoticed by Shlok who clinched his fists and Aastha had to hold him back else he would have killed his father right there , right now.
They had to act according their plan else Niranjan would never learn.
"Anjali. Don't forget to take care of Aastha. She is pregnant and needs extra care else who knows what happens...right? "His angry gaze wandered to Aastha who had a hard time not to vomit into his fake smiling face. With that >Niranjan left the place and the minute he left through he huge main door Shlok released his breath. He felt suffocated being in the same room as that animal. Who was he to threaten his Mother and Aastha?
"Shlok, calm down. I am save- you are with me hain na?"Aastha whispered into his ears and he nodded and kissed her forehead. "Always." He smiled lightly.
"Can we eat now?" Shlok asked looking at his Mother who nodded immediately. She was thrilled that Shlok finally spoke to her with a sincere voice. It seemed almost like the old days, when he used to sit by her side telling her stories about his college mates and his girlfriends. She used to hit him and would say: "The day you meet the one you will stop talking like that about Girls and their girlish Fantasies! She will make your life a living Dream. Listen to my words I am your Aayi I know you the best."
He had laughed and had kissed her cheek before leaving the house.
"Of course Beta. Come sit. I made your and Varads favorite dish. I thought it would make you happy." She served Aastha and Shlok and then sat down herself to eat.
They had a sweet and enjoyable breakfast. Sometimes Anjali caught Shlok glancing gazes at her but she did not wanted to interpret too much in it. She was still to fragile to believe he would easily love her again.
Aastha took her Hand and squeezed it slightly.-
"That is just the beginning Aayi. " Aastha said. Shlok was talking to Varad but was also listening to Aastha and his mother. He couldn't help but smile.
"Yes dear. The Rules are changing. It just started." Anjali said smiling surprising everyone sitting on the tale. It had been such a long time since she smiled the last time.
Soon Aayi. I will give you the respect you deserve. Together we will bring in a change. We will change the rules. That was just the beginning.' Shlok thought and looked at his mother with confidence.

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Posted: 10 years ago
SRY GUYS FOR KEEPING YOU WAITING
WILL UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER ON THE NEXT AVAILABLE PAGE😳

Edited by GoWithTheRhythm - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Me first🥳
Break the rules.. Yay, Anjali has become courageous finally. Hope to see more changes in their lifestyle. Shlok kissed Astha infront of others, naught boy😉. I would understand his feelings to punch him, i am with him on this😆. So Varad knows about the abuse already?why did he kept mum? Hope Shlok protects the women in danger from his father. Amazing update Amel :) 👏 🤗🤗. Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
so sweet of you my rhythm dear..

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