Ashlok FF- The Love I don't deserve Ch.24 Teaser pg. 133 - Page 94

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jhumjhum

Hi Amel lovely teaser. Astha nervous about her return to he after this long years n her relation with Neela it's obvious but i know she will pass this phase also with Shlok love n family's support.

Dear don't worry about readers I think some of them may be busy in their personal life that's why can't comment that regularly. We all r here who love to read your beautiful story n will wait for full update 😃

She will but she will have a little break down
it is too much to handle in such a short time
she is afraid and insecure but will manage soon

I know dear but It is kind of sad that they can't like or say they will comment later xD
Anyway who am I to complain right?😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ss1609

touching teaser dear!!!!!!!

pls do update ASAP...

and no worries about the readers dear all are getting busy and anyhow it is about how u feel writing it... ur a wonderful writer dear, u have the ability to grasp a reader's attention by ur choice of words and the way u narrate the story...my personal opinion is that u bring out the emotional tracks outstandingly ...
its not ur fault so cheer up and pls do update soon...

Thanks dear for the pm


I will update soon
I am so sorry for letting you wait for soo long
thank you so much for saying those nice words
they mean a lot and give me the strenght to keep writing
because I love it
it is what makes me happy
and If ou like it i am thrilled
:D

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Efinah36

Great teaser
Aastha is nervous she comes back after so many years
I understand her inner feelings. She looses 4 years with her family, husband and child
Waiting for the next part
update soon dear
Viel Glueck nochmal


Danke dir meine liebe :D Habe echt keine Freizeit


Well Aastha knows that she needs time to get used to her new life
as a mother and she is overwhelmed in the beginning but will manage it soon ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Ohh Amel..😊😊😊 I just loved the teaser..

I can understand Aastha's worry...But I think that Neela will love Aastha..😳'

Hmm..next update is a hot one..😉 hmm..can't wait for that..😃😃😃

Update soon Amel..😊


Neela will of course love her xD but both need some time Xd
I will update soon dearest 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

The teaser is really a teaser dear! 😉

Don't worry Amel those who'll love the story and your writing style won't leave it ever but i think some of them had even left the forum! 😕. And some may come irregularly or maybe too busy to comment but those who like it would still come. Like I am late now so you can punish me as much as you want! 😆
So i think altogether it's not your fault dearu! 😉 Astha, poor gal missed so much on her dear daughter! But Shlok will strengthen the bonding between mother and daughter and after all neela is her daughter by blood, children are naturally attracted towards their mother it's a natural instinct that is embedded by God inside them! 😳

So next update will be a hot one okay will wait for it! But no problem dearu update whenever you get time, because studies must come first! 👍🏼 Good luck for them! May your future be as bright and shining like your writing! 😳


Mahiii thank you for understanding me
for encouraging me to keep writing to ignore those who left
And I will try my best
I will :)
I thank you for still being with me and for supporting me
I feel honored that an amazing writer like you loves my story ;D
I hope that you will like it till it lasts ;)

God you understood me so well XS

Aastha missed her entire family and she knows that and Shlok will help her understand that both of them need some time.
Neela loves her mother despite not having her It is like you said it is a natural instinct
All children love their mothers xD😉😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww Chapter 23 is jus fab 👍🏼
So many emotions!
And d way u had written it is freaking perfect as always 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser!
Waiting 4 d update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..AngelicAnu..

Nice teaser!

Waiting 4 d update 😊


Already updated in the second thread xD
I sent you a pm too dear ;D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm


Already updated in the second thread xD
I sent you a pm too dear ;D


Uff
Was clearing d pms, nahi dekha 😕
Let me check again 😆
Btw thanks 4 d pms 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..AngelicAnu..


Uff

Was clearing d pms, nahi dekha 😕
Let me check again 😆
Btw thanks 4 d pms 😊


hahah no prob dear :D
waiting for your comments on the 2nd Thread

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