Ashlok FF- The Love I don't deserve Ch.24 Teaser pg. 133

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GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#931

Originally posted by: jhumjhum
Hi Amel lovely teaser. Astha nervous about her return to he after this long years n her relation with Neela it's obvious but i know she will pass this phase also with Shlok love n family's support.

Dear don't worry about readers I think some of them may be busy in their personal life that's why can't comment that regularly. We all r here who love to read your beautiful story n will wait for full update 😃

She will but she will have a little break down

it is too much to handle in such a short time

she is afraid and insecure but will manage soon

I know dear but It is kind of sad that they can't like or say they will comment later xD

Anyway who am I to complain right?😆

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#932

Originally posted by: ss1609
touching teaser dear!!!!!!!
pls do update ASAP...

and no worries about the readers dear all are getting busy and anyhow it is about how u feel writing it... ur a wonderful writer dear, u have the ability to grasp a reader's attention by ur choice of words and the way u narrate the story...my personal opinion is that u bring out the emotional tracks outstandingly ...
its not ur fault so cheer up and pls do update soon...

Thanks dear for the pm

I will update soon

I am so sorry for letting you wait for soo long

thank you so much for saying those nice words

they mean a lot and give me the strenght to keep writing

because I love it

it is what makes me happy

and If ou like it i am thrilled

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#933

Originally posted by: Efinah36
Great teaser
Aastha is nervous she comes back after so many years
I understand her inner feelings. She looses 4 years with her family, husband and child
Waiting for the next part
update soon dear
Viel Glueck nochmal

Danke dir meine liebe :D Habe echt keine Freizeit

Well Aastha knows that she needs time to get used to her new life

as a mother and she is overwhelmed in the beginning but will manage it soon ;)

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#934

Originally posted by: hp_2006
Ohh Amel..😊😊😊 I just loved the teaser..

I can understand Aastha's worry...But I think that Neela will love Aastha..😳'

Hmm..next update is a hot one..😉 hmm..can't wait for that..😃😃😃

Update soon Amel..😊

Neela will of course love her xD but both need some time Xd

I will update soon dearest 😳

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#935

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar
The teaser is really a teaser dear! 😉
Don't worry Amel those who'll love the story and your writing style won't leave it ever but i think some of them had even left the forum! 😕. And some may come irregularly or maybe too busy to comment but those who like it would still come. Like I am late now so you can punish me as much as you want! 😆
So i think altogether it's not your fault dearu! 😉 Astha, poor gal missed so much on her dear daughter! But Shlok will strengthen the bonding between mother and daughter and after all neela is her daughter by blood, children are naturally attracted towards their mother it's a natural instinct that is embedded by God inside them! 😳

So next update will be a hot one okay will wait for it! But no problem dearu update whenever you get time, because studies must come first! 👍🏼 Good luck for them! May your future be as bright and shining like your writing! 😳

Mahiii thank you for understanding me

for encouraging me to keep writing to ignore those who left

And I will try my best

I will :)

I thank you for still being with me and for supporting me

I feel honored that an amazing writer like you loves my story ;D

I hope that you will like it till it lasts ;)

God you understood me so well XS

Aastha missed her entire family and she knows that and Shlok will help her understand that both of them need some time.

Neela loves her mother despite not having her It is like you said it is a natural instinct

All children love their mothers xD😉😉