Ashlok FF- The Love I don't deserve Ch.24 Teaser pg. 133 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update yaar.. sorry for the late comment...
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Really nice story dear..superbly written..Whats goin to happen nxt..Aastha will be alright na..Thanks for ur PM
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Awesome just super duper owesome update... loved ur FF nd read in one go...👏👏👏 update soon waiting eagerly
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Chapter 4(A)

Chapter 3:

,, Doctor My Wife...?"

,, Mr. Agnihotri...Your Wife..."



Chapter 4

,, Doctor My Wife...?"

,, Mr. Agnihotri...Your Wife..." The doctor looked at each of the Family Members. Shlok felt like something was dying inside him.

,, What is with my wife?" He asked.

,, No need to worry your wife is completely fine. Just like your child but I must say her blood pressure was too high and her sugar level too low. Is she having any mental stress? Something which bother her? That could be one reason for her condition but she will be fine. Give her Medicines on time for at 4 days and she should not do any household chores , no sexual intercourse. Nothing what could exhaust her body." The doctor smiled and wrote down some medicine after that he took his leave. Shlok and his Family rushed inside the room and he hugged Aastha tightly. She blushed and asked him to leave her as his whole family was watching. Anjali gave her a strict look and asked her to take better care of herself after all she was pregnant with a possible grandchild, then she left the room with Sojal. Aastha sighed, everyone seemed to be possessed by the thought of her having a boy. She was sick of listening to their demands, after all she just fainted.

,,Aastha are you really fine?" Varad asked and touched her Shoulder. She nodded and he and his Uncle left after asking her to rest. Only Shloks Father was left and Aastha tried not to look at him.

,,Shlok you should take care of your Wife in this state , alright? And Aastha Beta please don't work to hard we were so afraid that something was terribly wrong with you." He faked a smile and closed the door behind him as he left. Aastha felt relieved, at least she didn't had to see him anymore. Shlok caressed her Face and kissed her cheeks, her forehead, her nose.

,, I was so scared Aastha..." His Breath was trembling and she hugged him again. She knew he was hardly holding back his tears and she tried to cheer him up.

,, Arre Patidev Nothing can happen to me as long as you love me, am I right?" She kissed him softly and he smiled at her. This Woman really knew how to cheer him up. She understood each of his feelings and how to deal with them.

,, Do you need anything?" He asked.

She nodded.

,, I want you."

,,Aastha..." he warned her softly; smiling a little.

,,Arre let me finish. I want you to cuddle with me. I need your warmth. My day always is good the Moment I am lying in your arms." Shlok sat beside her and took her in his Arms. They were quiet for a while and shlok played with her hair. Aastha fell almost asleep till he pushed her away a little bit and tried to stand up. She pouted and he laughed.

,, Where are you going?"

,, I am bringing you something to eat; your sugar level was too low. Do you want something? I can order everything you want."

,, No just bring me some fruits and maybe some kheer. "

,,Aastha you need to eat real food not just sweets." He taunted her like she was a little child asking for too much chocolate.

,, Shlok...please...The baby wants fruits and Kheer and some Aloo curry."

Shlok seemed not convinced so she tried getting up herself.

,, Hey you are not allowed to go anywhere..:" he said and tried to hold her back. Both of them fell on the Bed; Aastha on top of him.

They shared an eye lock which seemed to last forever.

Shlok closed his eyes and kissed her cheeks. Aastha blushed and locked her lips with his. They started kissing each other slowly and Shlok rolled on top of Aastha. She moaned in pleasure and both seemed to forget everything.

No sexual intercourse, said the Doctor.

Shlok jerked away and stood up; leaving a confused Aastha behind.

,, Kya? Don't you want to?" She asked and sat straight. Aastha did not like it at all that her dear husband was rejecting her love.

But Shlok did not answer her; he couldn't.

,, I will get you something to eat and then we will watch TV. The doctor advised you no physical intercourse, no household chores and no sexual intercourses...So please don't make me lose control." He left to get them something to eat.

So her Shlok was afraid if they would sleep with each other it could harm the baby or her? Aastha smiled and waited for her loving hubby to return.

,, I got you everything I found and we had. Mrs. Agnihotri asked you to have some almonds with the kheer. You can choose according to your mood.-" Shlok entered their Room just to find his beautiful Aastha sleeping cuddling his cushion. Shlok smiled and put the food on the table; he sat next to her and looked at her fragile figure. She looked like a little child while sleeping in their kind size bed all alone. He had brought it after their first intimate encounter. Shloks Hand caressed her cheeks and he got closer to kiss her on her eyes. Aastha automatically smiled in her sleep and robbed closer. Even when she was asleep she wanted to be near him, wanted to feel him.

A Voice in his Head reminded him of the work his Father asked him to do but Shlok did not listen. He laid beside his pregnant better half and watched her sleep. He could finish the work later on but for now nothing seemed more important then looking at the reason of his Life.

,,Shlok wake up. Please...Shlok!"

A whisper, a moan. Shlok did not want to open his eyes.

,,Shlok you are heavy please. I am not feeling well...".

He opened his eyes just to see Aastha lying beneath him holding a hand infront her mouth. The Morning sickness had started to trouble her and he rolled to the other side.

,, Aastha I am so-" He could not finish because she already ran inside the bathroom.

He felt pity for his tiny wife. Maybe some tea and snacks would make her feel better.

Shlok stood up and took the food away which he had brought yesterday. In the Kitchen he started to look around for Sita.

,, Kya hua? Do you need anything?" His Mother entered the Kitchen and looked at her Son. He tried to stay calm and did not look at her.

,,Aastha has nausea and I wanted Sita to make some tea for her. That's it."

Anjali could not help her smile and started to prepare some Tea.

,, Anything else?" she asked.

,, Nahi. Just some snacks..." He did not want her help but because of Aasthas Condition he allowed himself to be like every son would be.

,, Okay. Take some pretzel sticks for her. They will help with the Nausea. When I was expecting you they helped me a lot..." She broke off. Shlok hardly could control his emotions. She handed him over the pretzels and the Tea and left.

But he noticed her tears and tried to hide his own while returning to his Room.



to be continued...on page 16 or 17



Edited by GoWithTheRhythm - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
ok so shlok is giving more importance to astha and nt baba
i hope dat does nt bring trouble for astha
nd mother nd son talikng dats good
do update soon
Posted: 11 years ago
#96
awesome awesome
fabulous fabulous
amazing amazing
its a lovly nice update
plz continue the next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashlok

awesome awesome

fabulous fabulous
amazing amazing
its a lovly nice update
plz continue the next




I am already on it dear :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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a very caring shlock, wonder what niranjans next move will be
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Chapter 4(B) a very short one sry


Chapter 4

Aastha was sitting in front of the dressing table and was putting on her bindi.

,, Aastha Meri Jaan I brought you some Tea and pretzels. Mrs. Agnihotri said they would help with the Nausea." He smiled at her lovingly, still trying to forget what just happened between him and his mother. For the first time after so many years he felt like he was her son again. He knew she loved him but he was still not able to forget what she did in the past. But shouldn't he be grateful? Afterall he met Aastha and his Life started the day they fell in Love. So why should he be angry on his mother for separating him from Swati? Maybe it was Fate...

,,Thanks." Aasthas Voice brought him back to reality. ,, I will have it in a minute maybe then I will finish all my household chores without throwing up." She laughed and drank some tea. She closed her eyes and he saw she felt better.

,, Aastha I told you: No Work for you. You are still not complety fine and you have to drink your medicine on time, understood?"

She looked at him, drank the medicine and tried to go downstairs to help Anjali with the breakfast. Shlok just picked her up and carried her to the Bed. She was stunnend by his sudden reaction and blushed as she felt his Body rubbing against hers.

He too felt it but ignored it. That Woman really was a temptation.

,,Shlok! I have to do some Work otherwise Mother in Law will be angry with me. You can't tell me what to do!" She pouted and tried to stand up but he forced her back on the Bed. They looked at each other angrily.

,, I can tell you what to do because I am your Husband and the Father of your unborn child, remember? How many times should I tell you : You are not allowed to do any Work in the next 2 Days." His voice didn't show his anger but his body did. His eyebrows were raised and his hands clinched in fists. He was looking very hot, Aastha thought and giggeld. That irritated Shlok even more.

,,Lekin Shlok." Aastha made a puppy face. ,, I will get bored, sitting in the Bed all by myself. You know me I can't stay still."

Shloks anger vanished and he sat beside her.

,, I know Baby but can't you do it for me?"

,, That is not fair. I would do anything for you." She kissed his cheek.

,, That is why I am asking you and if you want..."

,,Yes?"

,, If you want I can stay here today and we spend the day watching TV cuddling. "

Aasthas face light up with Joy. He really wanted to forget his work, something which would make his father furious justz to be with her.

,,But your Father.."

,, Baba will understand. Afterall I am not doing anything wrong. Everyone take a leave why can't I? We won't tell him I did not go until he asks."

Shlok looked like a teenager doing something forbidden. Aastha smiled. So he gave her more importance than his father? He cared more for her needs than for his?

She really was blessed to have him.

,, Thekken! First I wanted to ask you to call my parents over but I can inform them later about my pregnancy right?"

Shlok nodded and changed into his Pjyama. Aastha smiled and also changed into a beautiful blue Nightdress with a matching Jacket. The dress was a bit too long for her tiny figure but she managed to walk without falling.

They sat down on the Bed and ate some of the pretzels.

,, They really do help. Your mother knows so much!" Aastha praised Anjali.

,, seems so. She said she ate them while being pregnant with m-"He stopped.

Why did he care for what his Mother said?

,, Shlok it is okay to let your mother come close to you. After all she is the reason for you to be here today. Can't you forgive her?"

Aastha turned Shlok around so that she could see his Face. She saw the tears before they escaped his eyes and he hugged her; in Need of some comfort.

,, It is okay to feel."

,, Aastha I know I should not be angry at her. Because of Swati's Exit from my Life I found you. Else who know what would had happen right? But still she broke my Heart Aastha. My own Mother! She didn't care for me while I loved her so much."

Aastha couldn't control her tears as she listened to his confession.

He loved his Mother but she had betrayed him.

,,If you only knew.." She whispered but Shlok did not hear her.

,, Shlok.." She started and took his face into her hands,, Your Mother was at fault but think about it. Swati did not believe in your Love and you two fought so much. Maybe it was destined for both of you to separate. I believe that it was fate that we met and fell in Love. Your Mother was just an instrument in the Game of Life."





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I don't know why i splitted this Chapter but i felt like it😆

you are allowed to hate ;)

The next chapter will follow in the next days so pls stay tuned.


and thanks to Jane ( bm11) for your Help; even though you

don't know how you helped me😳😆👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amel, oh, dear, I'm always at your disposal, 24/7. Keep writing👏👏👏
Shlok is so good and Astha is so naughty😆 Super-puper-mega-turbo -extra-drive👍🏼
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