Ashlok FF- The Love I don't deserve Ch.24 Teaser pg. 133- Page 42

Hello,

Originally posted by: Serviana

Great update. Wondering if they will get separated...

True Lovers are never really separated dear ;) Physically maybe but never emotionally.
Shlok has done a Mistake but he loves her truly :) And Aastha knows that but is hurt- Shlok isulted her and that hurt her self-respect. Both need Time apart to realize that Life simply said is not easy at all and that their is alway some obstacle on the Road of Happiness :D


Thank you for your lovely update means very much to me😳

Originally posted by: tk1730

Hello,

I have been a silent reader of this ff and need to comment now. It is a great story and i loved how you portrayed Shlok so close to the current character in the serial because I can imagine him thinking like this being so short tempered and not thinking things through. I thought he really crossed the line when he pushed and she fell on the floor. I hope Astha really makes him pay. Please update soon-any chance getting another dose today?

Dear thank you that you decided to leave a comment behind. That means more to me than you can imagine :)
Well I try to keep them as realistic as possible and we all fell in Love with Shlok because his anger, his short temper his whole being was different :D
He did cross his limits and Aastha will make him pay for that😉 :) He will realize that he has been a fool😆


Well I could Imagine to update today as well but in Germany it is 23:44 pm and I have school tomorrow but will update as soon as I am back home :)😊
Thanks for your lovely comment and your support :D😳

Chapter 13 Teaser - Getting back my Love

Shlok what happened between the two of you? Why is Aastha still at her maternal house?" Varad looked at his younger brother and sipped from his drink. After a week away from the Family with Sojal and Kavya, Varad finally managed to solve his own problems in his marriage and intended to give Sojal another Chance. He had returned with the thought of having a chat with Aastha and a drink with Shlok but to his surprise he found out Aastha was staying at her parents' house for obvious reasons. He knew Shlok must have done something wrong, like always. Why couldn't his brother see how much Aastha loved him? How she always put his happiness before hers? Varad thought sadly.

Both were now sitting in Shlok's Bedroom, watching some TV when Varad had asked the question Shlok was afraid of.

It has been almost one and a half week since that terrible night and Aastha was still on not talking terms with him. He had sent her thousands of sorry messages, roses everything but she stayed firm in her decision of staying away from him for a while. After that night he realized that he had done a terrible mistake and he regretted it truly. Never in his wildest Dream did Shlok think he would stoop so low and would force himself on her. He knew that this time he could lose her forever. Because he had questioned her character and her Love. He had accused her of infidelity knowing she couldn't forgive him that easily this time- and she was right in that.

I just hope she will forgive me, he thought and drank his drink in one zip.

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Dearest Friends I couldn't go to bed without giving you a little surprise :P Please enjoy this Teaser for Chapter 13- Getting back my Love ;)
And Thanks for your support and lovely comments ;)

xoxo
Amel

Amel,

Originally posted by: tk1730

Amel,

great teaser which had all the elements I wanted. Can't wait for the full chapter and hope you can give a double update.

I loved the way you portrayed their emotions but i hate shlok now 😡😡. He needs to take a leap of faith in her.

Thank you for your insomnia🥱

Wow...another beautiful update. ..wha t can I say other than feeling their pain,u did a amazing job in portraying their feeling...