Ashlok FF- The Love I don't deserve Ch.24 Teaser pg. 133- Page 51

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR

supreb update dear👍🏼

am scared about karan's entry ek bar phir,i thought that he will create another problem,but nothing like that happened😃😃😃
love whloe ashlok part,finally everything will be cleared in between ashlok😛
hope shlok will trust astha in baba's matter too😃
egerly waiting for next partupdate soon...

p.s :plz don't say that dear😔if u stop writing,what about ur regular readersas i said earlier u r an excellent writer dear👏👏so don't stop writing.we all love u and ur writings🤗❤️



Karan was always good just blinded by his love :P
Aastha will help Shlok recover from the heart breaking moment when he will see the truth :)
Will update today :D


I won't stop! Never ever :D Don't worry🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Dear Amel...

U note is very touching one ...
Eventhough i am not a writer, i can understand ur feeling well...
i can understand if poeple wont reply or response...but...
U r a gifter writer... as may of us even cant write a comments properly...
so pls dont stop writing...we are there to support u dear...
Dont lose heart...keep writing and treat us...
Dont worry abt the person who doesnt not reply...
They r the one who is losing a great treat from you...
Actually u should be glad that u got such a great talent...
We r there to support and shower our love to you...
so no worries...



Don't worry I will never ever stop writing :D Not even when I am dead. I will return as a Ghost and will keep writing :D Thanks for understandign and support me :D Love you🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Dearest Amel, please don't be dishearten. I know it take one to know what goes into a single chapter. The amount of time you spend. I too sometimes feel guilty of the fact I spend so much of my time putting up updates rather than spend with my kids or my hubby.

If it gives you pleasure and makes you happy then continue writing. For I, and many would agree with me, you have a real talent to write and you should continue it. I would really hate if I don't get read any more of you're wonderful creations in future.

Coming back to the update. Finally she forgave him. So happy that he came to her and made her hear his insecurities. For a moment you had me going, I thought misunderstanding EBP when karan came to see her and Shlok too was on his way to see her. You're not sadistic as we are. Love you for that.

Love the fact that he knowing fully well he'll be devastated to find the truth about his dad, but for her for the love he has for and for the she has for him, is still willing to go down that path.

Do update soon. Will be waiting as always for the next update.


Anu I am better now XD I guess that was the frustration talking the other Day because I could never ever stop writing no matter what :) Wirting relaxes me and makes me happy because it is much easier to write about feelings than talking about them,so I could never stop because I love it too much and need it. Writing makes me feel happier and good about myself. It makes me feel free :D And reading all those lovely comments of yours I can't believe I ever thought of quitting I mean I have you guys who comment always so why should I worry? :D I hope you can forgive me my moment of weakness. I will continue writing In fact I am already working on a new FF :D

Coming back to the Update: yes she forgave him and he will truly be devastated the moment he sees the truth but He knows no matter what the future holds Aastha will be there helping him getting up the moment he falls, healing his wounds with her love :)
Thanks for your lovely comment and words
I simply love you dearest Anu 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Don't feel bad for getting minimum response sometimes dear..

Its not ur fault actually..May be some of the readers may be busy with some or other work..

Even I have decided to stop writing many times because of low response..😭But then some day I will again get many more comments than I expected..😊

Its just a matter of some days my dear..So don't get disheartened at all ok my sweet Amel..🤗

You are a wonderful writer and you write emotional scenes beautifully..The stories which you write are really intense with many emotions and you are successfully portraying them with so ease..👍🏼

So you must continue writing sometimes for the 20 readers who support you or sometimes for the 10 readers who support you..Because when you update the next chapter ur 20 readers may come back with may be extra new readers also..So don't feel discouraged any day..Life is like that only..It will not be the same every day..So be happy my sweet friend❤️



I know it won't be the same every Day dearest :D
I can't ever think of quitting writing because I need it to be happy and I need all of you guys as well. Thanks for support and encouraging me to never stop :D❤️🤗
Love you for your support :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArVi-licious

Dear Amel, as an ardent reader I must sincerely apologise for making u feel this way. When we need updates we keep posting, but when u do we don't acknowledge it, very sorry. Your ff is simply amazing n plz plz don't stop. Even after this ff I'd love to read more of ur work.. Thanks again, loved d chap as always.


I won't stop dearest :D And never ever apologies :) I can forgive myself If i made you feel bad :(
So just enjoy the story and keep support me :D Be it as a silent reader or not :)
I Love all of you :)😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jhumjhum

Amel I know u r hurt dear n understand your feeling but as a reader of your story I don't want u leave so don't leave plzzz 🤗. Coming up to update amazing yaar I really like the way Varad try to understand Shlok motive of bringing Astha back & Shlok also tell him his true feeling. Karan tell Astha about NA behind all this n somehow feel bad for him he truly love her but Astha make him understand everything calmly n warmly. Finally Ashlok patch up & that's good that Shlok will give her chance to prove her point regarding NA. Thanks for PM dear n waiting for next part to know more about the journey of Ashlok unfolding truth of NA 😃.



I won't leave you and the story :D Don't worry actually I am even working on a new FF so ;) stay tuned you will get to read a lot from me :D
AQbout the update : Thanks for hightlighting a few aspects like Shlok and Aastha finally saying their true feelings and their fears. They separation helped them to realize the worth of the other and the basic elements their marriage was lacking .)

Thanks for your comment and your support :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 14- The Truth Unfold
Guys I just wanted to thank you for udnerstanding my Moment of weakness the other day and for reminding me why I started to write: Because I love it and sometimes I am good at it 😆 SO I thank you for supporting me and for making me believe in myself again.
Special thanks to Jane, Anu, Meeru, Natasha, Ayesha , Deepa and and and..so many more.
I love you guys😳SO please enjoy this Chapter in which Shlok will finally see the true Face of his Father.

Deepa thank you so much for your lovely Poem :D It meant a lot to me

Chapter 14 The Truth Unfold

On their drive Home neither of them spoke a word. They didn't have to because they have said everything they ever wanted to say. Shlok opened the door with his keys and Aastha smiled ;entering her House again. Being at her parents' house just proved that after you started to live somewhere else to start a life in a new house ,you missed it the minute you would leave it.

"I will go up and sleep immediately. Tonight was a rough night and tomorrow I would love to talk to you about what I found out today." Aastha said going up the stairs to their room. Shlok was following her.

"Does it have something to do with Karan being at your parents' house tonight?" he smiled faintly at her and Aastha looked a bit shocked.

" You saw him?"

"Yes I did but I knew he wanted to apologize for his behavior and maybe explain you why he did so. I knew that he was saying Goodbye I have seen it in his eyes before entering." Shlok kissed her fore head and helped her change into her Night gown. She just nodded, happy about the fact how mature and calm he reacted. Looks like he really trusts me, Aastha thought with a smile and lay down to sleep. Shlok laughed silently and took a shower to wash away all the doubts and fears he had experienced the past few hours.

After seeing Karan leaving her House He was sure Karan just came to apologize to her. Shlok trusted Aastha and knew she could never cheat on him. Maybe Karan was needed to bring in that Change in him, Shlok thought and took out a few clothes to wear when he suddenly heard a loud sound coming from downstairs.

"What was that?" He whispered and left the room quietly to see where the sound came from. He looked down from the stairs and saw his Mother and his father in front of their bedroom. His mother was arranging a mattress to sleep on and cleaned a wound on her forearm. Shlok was shocked since the wound looked like she was beaten up by something. Suddenly while stepping closer, he heard the soft voice of his Father.

"Anjali didn't I tell you to keep Aastha away from my Son? These Photographs should have ended their relationship but what happened instead? My Son, My blood ran after a bloody Girl like a obedient puppy! Is that what a Agnihotri does? No, never. "Niranjan clinched his fists came nearer to his wife. Anjali started trembling and she raised her hands; pleading him to stop his torture.

"Sahib...Please. I tried my best, Let them be together. Don't you see how happy they are with each other? Do you want to see your son as unhappy as he was before when Swati left him because of you? I will control her better will make her the bahu she should be. I promise.." A tight Slap stopped his mother from talking further and Shlok from breathing. His Father was a cruel Monster without a heart, despite her plea of keeping him, Shlok happy, he had slapped her. Shlok felt disgusted by the way his father slapped his mother. How could he do that? How could he try to separate me and Aastha my sending me the picture? Why did he do that? Why does he want to see me unhappy? Shlok thought. He had so many questions but no answer to them.

"Your words have no worth dearest." He smiled at his wife and caressed her face

,, You promised the same when he was dating that Bitch Swati. I am happy shat she left him and married someone else. Her love and now Aastha's Loved are the cause for my Son turning into an Idiot who listens to his heard and not his Mind. If I have to keep him unhappy to let him succeed and be like me than so be it: I will snatch away his Happiness without even thinking twice. I mean he wants Equality for both the genders? Has he gone crazy? MEN ARE SUPERIOR TO WOMAN. Women are nothing without their husbands." He laughed and turned around to sit down on his bed. He prayed a second and then lay down to sleep. His Mother stood up, wiped away her tears and turned off the Lights.

"You are right Sahib. A woman is nothing without her Husband. She has to be an obedient wife to be happy. I am sorry for disappointing you...:" her voice trailed off and Shlok heard her crying into her pillow.

Slowly and visibly shocked Shlok went back to his room. He closed the door and started to cry. The tears fell down uncontrollable and he was indeed shattered. That was the reason why he was afraid that Aastha had been right: Shlok had known he would be devastated the minute he would see how evil his father was. Aastha had been right all the time...She tried telling me but I didn't listen I even insulted her and almost lost her, Shlok thought bitterly. How was I better than my Father? By my actions I proved I am his son...

"Shlok...?" Aastha opened her eyes just to find her husband leaning against the door; crying vigorously. She ran to him and hugged him somehow. Being 6 Month Pregnant wasn't a help.

Instantly she knew he was broken, his trust and his Heart. The truth finally had been unfolded.

"Aastha I am so sorry. You were right. I am so sorry for not believing you. He slapped her? How can someone slap his own wife? How low can a Man fall? He even tried separating us Aastha, he had sent me these pictures because he doesn't want me to be happy. I heard him say it. He punished my mother for letting me happy..."Shlok stood up and ran his finger through his hair, emotionally he was drenched out. The man he had loved, who he had treated like God turned out to be a Monster, someone not even worth being called a human being. The man that pretended to care for his Happiness was the one who tried to snatch it away.

"He wants to see me unhappy so he can keep me in control. I mean how sick is that Aastha? How can he think that way and still claim to love me, to care for me? He never did. He was the one who separated me from Swati, who tried separating me from you." Shlok said with the bitterness visible in his voice.

Shlok felt lost and broken. His trust has been shattered and only God knew how he had stopped himself from going to his Father and beat the crap out of him for abusing his wife and for trying to separate him and Aastha.

"I know Shlok. He is a cruel and evil man but he loves you. Maybe He does the wrong things to show you that. We have to make him understand that Women are equal to men. We need to make him realize that he could lose his family if he doesn't change. The most important thing is that you finally saw the truth and know that your Mother loves you deeply. She always longed for your love Baby. We can work against him, make everyone see the truth and Aayi will get back the Love of her children." She kissed his tears away. Shlok simply held her in his arms. Years of hatred towards his mother vanished away in thin air when he had seen her pleading his father to keep him Happy.

"I need to ask for her forgiveness..." Shlok whispered and Aastha smiled at him with tears in her eyes. She had known he would come to the conclusion to ask for Forgiveness.

"She already forgave you." Aastha said but Shlok didn't look convinced.

"How do you know?" He asked again; the pain in his eyes almost killing her. She took his hands and placed them on her abdomen.

"Because I am a mother. And she is one as well. A mother always forgives her children,. Her heart is not able to be angry with them, to see them unhappy. Your mother forgave you the minute you hurt her Shlok. She would rather die than seeing her children suffer. I can understand that feeling now being pregnant myself. A mother's Love is unconditional; she loves us despite our flaws and mistakes. If we are hurt she is the first one to cry, If we are happy she is the first one to hug as and to pray to always keep us happy,, If we are sad and cry she is the first one to wipe away our tears. It is in her nature." Aastha led Shlok to their Bed and asked him to lie down for a while, then she turned around to leave but he caught her hand and asked where she was going.

"I will just get us some hot Tea so our nerves will calm down Baby. Don't worry I won't leave you- never ever. Even dead can tear us apart." She kissed him and went to the kitchen to make the tea. Suddenly she heard footsteps behind her.

"So you returned?"

Aastha turned around. Niranjan came closer and Aastha shirked away in fear. Her hands holding her abdomen as If to keep the live inside her womb save.


Edited by GoWithTheRhythm - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
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u know when
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me first after a long time
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meerab...

res
will unres later
u know when
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Sure dearest ;) Take your time and good luck with the exams of yours😳

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