Arshi FF: Falling in love with your Best Friend *Completed* Pg 96

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Hey guys,

I have for the first time thought to write something. To start with I have given a thought to write a Arshi teeny love story - Falling in love with your Best Friend. Hope you like it.. Your comments and likes will provide me with encouragement. Thank you!

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Falling in love with your Best Friend





~Prologue~


The door bell rang.

A middle - aged lady went to open the door.


"Namaste Auntie" came a cute voice of a beautiful young teenaged girl.


"Tum? Maine pehchana nahi."

(You? I didn't recognize you)

said the lady with a confused expression.


"Aap kaise pehchanengi? Main Khushi hoon. Yahan Goa mein nayi hoon, ek room ke search mein hoon. Parso se mera college session shuru ho raha hai. Par abhi tak koi rehne ki jagah hi nhi mili. Yahan dekha ki ek room on rent hai aur voh room occupied nahi hai. So may I..?"

(How would you recognize me? I'm Khushi. I'm new in here, searching for a room to stay. My college session has to begin from day after tomorrow. But I've still not found any place to stay. I came to know that you have a room in your house on rent which is not occupied. So may I..?)


"Ya ya.. Please come in"

said the lady politely.


They both went in.

It was a beautiful house. A double - storeyed house in which the lady utilized the ground floor for herself and kept the two rooms on the first floor on rent.


The lady led Khushi to the vacant room on the first floor.

As Khushi was about to enter her respective room, she glanced at the door, which led to the other room, on which the name plate read,

"Arnav Raizada."


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That's it guys. How's it? Good? Bad? Great? or Ekdum Bakwaas? Drop in your likes and comments. [I am a new writer*sniff*😆]


INDEX

CHAPTER 1 - Their First Meeting CHAPTER 2 - First Day at College

CHAPTER 3 - Instant Love

CHAPTER 4 - Friends

CHAPTER 5 - Growing Fond














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Posted: 11 years ago
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niceee love it plzz contiued soon
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Nice start
Waiting for next update
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Yay another best friend story..update soon! Seems interesting! x
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Here I am. Thank You to all who liked and commented. Love you! I know they were very less, but koi baat nhi.. It was the prologue and after all I am a beginner at writing. Here goes the first chapter of the FF. Hope you like it. Waiting for the response. Hope there are more likes and comments. Criticism welcome. 😃


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Falling in love with your Best Friend


~Chapter 1 - Their First Meeting~


"Coffee." said the lady handing over a cup of coffee to Khushi, which she took gladly.

"Thank You auntie", Khushi replied.


Khushi was settled in her new house. Her landlady, Ira was a kind lady. Khushi felt really lucky to get such a house to live in easily, that too owned by a great - hearted landlady. She sipped her coffee reminiscing her parents. How much she was pampered since childhood! Never left home without any of her family member accompanying her! And now she was in a totally new city, all alone..! Her trance was broken when the doorbell rang.


Ira went and opened the door. And there was he! Clad in a black tee and blue denims, he stood there waiting for the lady to let him in.

"Come Arnav beta.." said the lady in her ever polite tone. As soon as he stepped in, he saw a girl sitting shyly on the couch.


"Tum kaun ho?" he asked her, quite rudely.


"Arnav beta, she's Khushi.. She will be living as a paying guest in the room adjacent to yours. I hope you don't have any problem. See she looks so innocent", said Ira smilingly.


"Why should I have a problem? Just tell her to not to interfere. We both are living here as paying guests so I think she has her own resources. I hate begging and borrowing business."


Not able to bear her insult, Khushi stood up and replied in the same way as Arnav conversed with her, "Excuse me! Mr. whosoever you are, firstly I am not a beggar and moreover, if I need something, I'll ask Ira auntie. It would be much better."


"No less than a beggar" he murmured.

"MIND YOUR LANGUAGE"

"First you mind your voice"


"Oh God, Arnav.. Khushi.. What's the argument about?" the poor lady was caught in between their out-of-no-reason fight.


"She is so irritating auntie"

"And the same goes with him auntie"


"Now you both STOP!" Ira auntie literally shouted. "Khushi, I think your room must be cleaned up by now. You may go and arrange your belongings. And Arnav, you must go and freshen up. You must be tired.." the lady said, trying to avoid any more arguments between both of them.


"Ji auntie" they both replied simultaneously marching to their respective rooms.


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"Yes Maa, I've reached here. Will you just stop taking tension? Ya I've found a house.. Kal se hai college.. Thik hai.. Everything's fine na? Okay, I'll talk to you later.. Lots of love.. Muahh.."

Khushi spoke speedily on the phone, making her mother believe that she has settled herself properly now.



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"Payal!!"

Khushi squealed hearing her friend's voice, while they were talking over phone. A kind of excitement spreading all over her face.


"Haan yaar, I've found a house, its beautiful.. "


"Why didn't you come to my house? We would have resided together over here." Payal said, feeling a little upset that her best friend chose to live as a paying guest instead of living in her house.


"No yaar, I just didn't wanted to burden myself on you and your Mom.."


"Burden kaisa yaar? In fact, Mom would have felt really happy."


"That's so sweet of her. But its absolutely okay.. I'm super comfortable here..Moreover, if I would be needing anything, you are there na.."


"Ya right!"


"C'mon yaar.. Now laugh.. Its okay.."

Khushi was trying her best to make Payal feel normal. She knew she was wrong. Having her own friend's house in the same city, still she was living in a rented house!


"Chal its ok.. And if your landlord troubles you, you come here. Tera hi ghar hai.."


"I know"

Khushi giggled.


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"Yaar you know--" Arnav said over to the phone, conversing with his best friend Aakash, "--there's a girl called Khushi.. She will be living in in the same house I live..Oh gosh.. She is so irritating...!"


"What?!" came the flabbergasted reply from the other side, "You are such a lucky man Arnav.. A girl living in your house.. Ok tell me, is she beautiful?"


''Just shut up Aakash! God knows when you'll come out of your this kind of attitude towards girls? Here I'm just fed up of her in our for-a-minute conversation.. and you are thinking of her beauty..? Are you mad or what?''


"Take this in written from me Arnav. There will be a time when you'll die to talk to her. A time when you'll smile thinking of her. Seeing her happy would be your greatest happiness..." Aakash said in a dreamy tone.


''Its futile to talk to you. You can explain your these 'love guru' expressions to someone else but definitely not me." saying that irritatedly, Arnav cut the call.

"He is totally mad!" he muttered to himself before entering the washroom.


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That was the first chapter. I know this update was really short.. Only 808 words. But, take is as an introduction to all the main characters. I promise next ones will be long and frequent. Drop in your likes and comments. Criticism will help me improve. Your suggestions or ideas are always welcome. Post them here or PM or scrap me. BUDDY me to receive future updates. 😃



Edited by -SanjanaSobti- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That is amazing yaar.
Loved it.
Would definitely love to read more.😃
Arnav & Khushi under same roof...gonna be a lot of sparks. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update
please pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Looks Interesting...
Do PM me when you update 😳
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Seems Interesting..

Do send me the PM for the update
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arnav is really rude .how can he take like that? 😡
waiting for the next chappy

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