#2 One Mistake Chapter 27, pg- 12 & 15 (both parts)

OMG 2nd thread!!!!!!!!!!! its either you have lost your mind to work thru this or i'm still dreaming? I mean come on i never though that ONE MISTAKE will even last that long.. i cant thank you enough for the love that you showered for me by your sweet feed backs. Thank you for the compliments. each word of yours makes me overwhelmed and I LOVE YOU ALL muaaah keep showering your love 🥳☺️

THREAD 2

TEASER!



"Ting tong... " the door bell ranged

"thadaaa it's her..." he exclaimed n went out up to the door

Took a deep breath n said "whoever you are.. Save yourself from this bad boy darling!"

He opened the door, was about to say something but then his words got stuck inside his throat.

there it stands a beautiful gorgeous girl, back facing him, bending down on her knees so she can pick up her keys.

2 seconds later, he dashed against the pillar and begin to whistle like a tapori chichora :p

She heard his whistle n turn her face, gazed him with piercing eyes.

He grinned misceviously and mumbled "Slexy"

She got up and walk forward
He was checking her out form top to bottom, carrying a Casanova attitude.

She stopped at the door leaving 4 inches distance form him

V- "hello shorty..." said with a smirk

M- excuse me?

V- oh no, don't be. You are being squeezed.

M- "what?" totally confused with his answer and attitude

V- he crossed his arms n said "what are you doing here?"

M- 1st learn some manners. You don't tell your guest that "what are you doing here?"
2nd: I'm not short so don't ever call me that.

He stood up straight n decreased her distance then did a HUG style sneak peck of her behind (meaning checking if someone else was there or not.)
She closed her eyes feeling him so close again but then pushed him apart instantly

M- what the hack are you doing?

V- just checking whom were you referring to as a "guest"? He lifted his chin to see far distance n said "I don't see anybody"

M- "you" pointed finger.

V- don't be hyper shorty I'm just playing.. Well welcome to Vadhera Mansion

M- Stop calling me short. I'm 5"5 and that's a legit height for a girl you understood?

V- he checked her again

M- stop being a lofar n checking me out.

V- 4 inches hill n u looking 5"9 so yah you are 5"5. but you are still short.

M- what the...
V- he bend down close to her face and in a husky voice "I have to bend down in order to kiss you, so you are short for me!" n winked

M- :O :O :O :O :O :O

Confused? Aah don't be... It's ONE MISTAKE ONLY...see you all soon

Sayonara <3

Congratulations for new thread

Congrats on the thread ...😃
and the teaser nothing different again am confused let that be am gonna keep it shut and just read the updates 😛
waiting for the update 😃

Originally posted by: NushIsh

<font color="#cc0000" size="3">I'm not confused,</font>

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<font color="#cc0000" size="3">Is this when Manvi comes to Vadhera house, am I right am I right.</font>

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<font color="#cc0000" size="3">You know the thing I love most about One Mistake is its snappy dialogues, and also how you put your two sense in the middle of scenes, makes me crack up, you've really done an amazing job with not only Virat's but every single characters dialogues be it Damon, Jeremy, Raj, Vihaan, all your literature reading is paying off.</font>

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<font color="#cc0000" size="3">And Congrats on the new thread, where ever it maybe I'm going to come and read it.</font>

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<font color="#cc0000" size="3">Love ya</font>

Lol snappy dialogs haha try to make it funny.. Too much seriousness chokes me to be honest. My two cent worth of senses. Ahhaha u see I feel bored when I write so I just talk with u for my entertainment :p
I believe when u enter a new character.. U sud give justice to it :) hope it works... 2 more characters r yet to be introduced! :p u know wat? I don't feel like writing psh going TVD mania againnn my brain gives up
N u r right n right ehhe but there is more into why he is acting like that n y she is reacting like that :p secret : she is mad at him ;)