#2 One Mistake Chapter 27, pg- 12 & 15 (both parts) - Page 15

Originally posted by: virmanhus

what can i tell about the couple of chaps???

you just made me the happiest person and the sadest one in the last single update.. dont worry there's no point venting my anger on u so not going to scold u.. i dont wanna leave out the beautiful moments of the couple of updates just becoz u mentioned 'virat is dead' good girl let me live peacefully with my boy..

well well as always,, this virat is rocking!!! he's way more than different and i just love him for his unique character.. u are doing an awesome job faria vt this bad/good but unique and interesting virat.. i cant praise u enuf for such an attempt and such a success vt the attempt of a very very UNIQUE virat..

his approach in issues, his dialogues, his attitude, his perspective and his antics and much more characters hiding in him are so adorable.. they are given to me for the first time by an author and thats u.. i swear this Virat is amazing!!! and just a single piece!! muwahhh for such a beautiful characterisation.. I totally feel like a scholar by reading this.. but tyhen i fell sad too cuz im not giving enough attention to manvi which is equally important however doing EVERYTHING for her so i can ignore her no? lmao

lmao still at the police-virat moments! oh god his approach is killing me! dont get me started again on this virat, ill keep on praising him.. but but his antics,,, they are just childish yet mature.. his attempt to make a person understand his is weird yet stylish.. his love for manvi is torturous yet adorable.. his perspective is unique yet amazing.. he is different hence is heart throbbing!! goddd what a creartion faria!!! i love him alot his character is one in a zillion.. this virat is new, trendy, adorable, cute, arrogant, determined, sane, insane, good and bad at the same time.. and a well matching pair wud be this manvi.. you introduced her as an equally arrogant stylish youngster but later on,, her purity came into action.. u showed her as a victim,, showed her innocence, showed her adorable side and made her a fragile angel.. she's too innocent to understand virat and too fragile to stand his mischievous crazy acts,, yet too perfect for this virat.. loved the couple thru and thruout..

virat's inquiry and manvi's 'hmmm' were bang on

''V- I asked you if you are infected by HIV and you just agreed to it

M- wait wat

V- and now you are shooting for the next target which is ME.. How cud you do this to me? ''

you are crazy faria!!! you are a package of all this crazy hilarious moments!!! lmao at virat's dialogues and manvi's situation!! to be honest i was scare to write anything cuz my ideas literary dried out n i was typing bullshit idk Y u all like it so much? screw dheela toh nehi hai na sab ka?

in the interesting virman moments,, i really forgot that there's a future in the story.. well manvi went to an eternal coma and virat is dead,, can this get any worse???

only one gud thing, manvi was a surrogate mother that gave me a huge easy breath,, shud i call u evil or good?? i am a confused soul and u are the perfect author who is driving me mad! as promised i wont scold u for killing my and ur bad boy but i am STILL expecting a miracle.. if u are laughing at this,, i dont mind!!!! atleast i can hope??!!

vihaan was cute in chatting vt his mumci and driving the hospital staffs crazy.. loved the little boy and his antics! viren's pov was not bad,, i think he vl be the one to narrate us how and what happened to virat,, um waiting.. this section i wanted tgo do something special but then i forgot wat i was about to do so that became lame too..

now,, sorry for digging but i just have this one confusion.. have u solved kristina's role in the story?? what happened between her and virat?? is it still an issue which wud play back again or did i miss track, and the issue is solved already??? yeh ladki mujhe chan sde jeene nehi dete yaar.. humesha CID banti rehtio hai.. why did U REMIND ME THAT I STILL HAD TO UNCOVER KRISTINA? well i was gonna later on but since u mentioned i'll bring her back soon :p

glad that the story is gonna be in india here after

do continue quickly I hate to transfer the story in India.. reason i have to kick off my evil mind😭

always get going!!!

Originally posted by: mamaian-Afshan

Res...will write after reading part 2 of it for timebeing let uwknw it wasnt bad at all i liked it! Man tis virat is seriously cray bt i love him

Originally posted by: virmanhus

my sixth century Faria ji😳😳

😃😃love you faria and one mistake!!!😃😃

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Goa scenes ahem I have to make blog for that or else DT will kill me! Do a favor if u know how to make one enlighten me... I don't like creating stupid stuff for lame story.. Sighs!

Originally posted by: Luvmahuya

<font color="#0033ff">hiii FARIA ,, AM READING FIRST TYM..

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STORY CONCEPT IS GOOD ...PLZZ SEND ME PM..👍🏼</font>

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

Ahh ! Late comer here ! :/
Blame my uni >.<
Both updates were amazing Faria !
I must say it is really captivating !
Loved the way u r taking the story !
Different yet interesting !
Looking forward how it unfolds further !
Will be waiting for next :)
N thanks for the long update :) :-D