[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: NushIsh
Virat is changing and I'm loving it and love how even Manvi is sensing that he's changing, I wont comment on all his crazy antics after getting drunk but it was really fun to read those parts.

the future parts were cute with the Vihaan moments but its confusing for me as to where Virat is in the future and I know your never going to tell us so wont go there again.

The taxi drive was really sweet, love how Virat is trying ti show to Manvi that people can change, she needs to get it through her thick skull that Virat although bad from the outside has a good heart unlike Jer who acts all high and mighty but just wants to mess with Virat and show his mistakes to Manvi,

now you said alot will be revealed in the next few chapters so waiting for them and I'm really happy that you give me exclusive peaks as well. Makes me feel all special😉

She will get some stuff in her skull in next 2 chs! B4 that I gotta show u how he seduces her :p lol
Thank u for the feedback <3 n for ex preak ahem :p

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago

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.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

Awwwieee !!!!! drunk virat is sooo cute !!! :D i cant' stop smiling n laughing !!!! gosh !!~~
virat working in kitchen is hilarious !!! OMG i can't stop laughing !!! he was talking to tomato !!!😆 jeez !!! this is really sweet !!!!
n the drunk virat !!! my god !! he is so adorable !!! ❤️ the way he was talking n his antics !!! hayye !!! i wanna go home !! eeeks can he be more adorable n sweet !!! :P
n the mess he did in manvi bathroom !!!! 😆😆omg !!! i can't stop laughing !!!n the way he was saying abt Fatty !!!! hahahaha :P
i m juz in love with this crazy sweet n adorable viat !!! ^_^
Faria sach main this is soo awesome !!! i juz enjoyed every bit of the update !!!! it was really mast and mazedaar !!!!
the taxi drive part was nice !!! loved virat antics n the way he was annoying manvi !! sweet !!! :) n also the small virman moment<3
vihaan is so cute !!! the way viren apologize him n the small father son scene was sweet !!!
but wat is viren hiding ?? !!!
Amazing update Faria !! i really really loved it ❤️
continue soon :P i noe i always says tat !! but we readers want tat only :P hehe !!!! looking forward for next !!!! take care !!!! :)

Edited by .Yamin. - 12 years ago

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

amazing update

loved it

drunk virat was awesome

loved his madness

loved virman convo in taxi

loved virat and fattty part

poor maanvi her restroom

viren is hiding something

plz cont soon

thanks for the pm

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IISHITA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

HAHAHAHAH...HIHIHIHIHIHI...😆😆🤣🤣🤣🤣

D UPDATE WAS A DAMN GD AND HILARIOUS ONE

FELT LIKE ROLLING ON FLOOR BUT CONTROLLED

VIRAT SERIOUSLY WANTS MANVI TOP ATLEAST HATE HIM ...CRAZY GUY...😉

FATTY WAS A NYC CHARACTER😊

VIRAT AGAIN SCREWED UP HIS KITCHEN / TEMPLE😭

DRUNK VIRAT IS FUNNY YET DANGEROUS..😆.

U SERIOSLY MAD VIRAT DO THOSE FREAKING IDIOTIC THINGS😆

WEAR MANVI'S BATH RUB, PUT PERFUMES, APPLY LOTION 😆

N THEN INVESTIGATE THOSE PERSONAL STUFF😳

WAT'S D THING VIREN'S HIDING ABT DAT N8????

UMMM..JST GUESSING...THAT IT WUD SORT OUT VIRAT'S DISAPPEARANCE FROM PRESENT

N FOR UR INFORMATION UR UPDATES R NOT GETTING WORSE

BUT BETTER, INTERESTING, NOW FUNNY N MYSTERIOUS N MORE N MORE AWESOME

N NOW ITS COMING STRAIGHT😊

U WRITE TOO WELL.. ACTUALLY BALANCE THINGS WEL👏👏

KEEP WRITING

THANKS FOR PM

Edited by IISHITA - 12 years ago

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luv nishal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

faria awesum updates...plz pm me d nxt tym u update...

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

TEASER!

"coca butter? But I don't use coca butter" he said looking at his palm. Then looked around the surroundings n blurred out "where am I? Why my room is pink? N why do I smell ladies perfume?"
He looked down on the bed n it was pink too. Then his eyes met the rub that he was wearing n he just freaked out! It was also PINK n wasn't his size..

V- what the hell.. He smelled himself n it smelled like he was dropped inside a girl's perfume pool...

His eyes grew big like a tennis ball n then he shaked his head from left to right babbling "nooo... This can't happen... I can't... Holy smufers... No no no no".Then begin to pat his chest checking something :p

Ahem! Silly boy :p

U will get a good chunk of Jiju sali, vihaan-manvi n of course ur VIRMAN in next update ^___^ still not done so update won't be soon! Just wrote that part n giving u this just cuz other parts r too big to fit :p

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago