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Posted: 12 years ago
FARIA DAT WAS SUCH A GREAT N LONG UPDATE
A CORRECT BLEND OF EMOTIONS👏
THIS UPDATE WAS KINDA FUNNY AT D START AND KINDA SAD AT D END
BUT IT WAS ALL TOO FANTASTIC
THE DRIVING PART WAS LIKE LAUGHING GAS 😆😆
I WAS TOTALLY FREAKED OUT
IT WAS SOOO FUNNY
FIRSTLY VIRAT ASKS RAJ TO C MANVI
BUT WEN NOTICES HIM TOUCHING HER HE THREATENS TO CUT OFF HIS FINGERS😃
THEN WHENEVER RAJ ASKED HIM TI DRIVE SLOW HE INCREASED HIS SPEED😃
IN HIS DRUNKEN STATE HIS LOVE AND CONCERN FOR MANVI GOT ITS WAY OUT WHICH DIDN'T WANT TO HAVE FOR D GIRL😡
POOR HIM!!!
AND RAJ HE WAS GONNA DIE DUE TO HIS STUPID, CRAZY BEST FREND.😆😆
VIREN WAS SUPER CUTE

COMING TO TEASER--WAT WAS DAT??... I MEAN VIRMAN TOGETHER???
Edited by IISHITA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
NOTE!


Taking a deep breath n letting out all my frustration+confusion+dilemma

---> First n foremost, just wanna say sorry if u find VIRAT a psycotic person! BUT he is not a crack head its jst when a person drinks excessive amount of alcohol they act cranky n I made him extra cranky intensionally just to let u know that if he is weird while drunk thn wat he will be in normal state!
Hint hint I'm "planning" will be a wrong word but IM MAKING him a weird, cranky a n bit different boy thn usual ones!!!
Still don't know if I will be able to give justice to the character or not but will try my best to put my input!

---> Sometimes he will do sum stuff where manvi will think y he is like that n pull her hair for selecting him as a BF!
Ahem did I spill the beans? Psh well it's a dark LOVE story so ur Virman will be together but not easily baby.. U have to wait n so does manvi... :) so if u have enough patience thn read it if no then u r most honorably welcome to say "adios kido u have tortured me enough, I won't read ur trash anymore"
Trust me I won't mind at all cuz me as a writer n a reader thinks its a piece of crap n I sud not continue further!

---> One more thing I will pay attention to my boys character more thn anyone else.. Y? Cuz I'm biased fan as u know my love is my two boys <3 so yah ur manvi will be evolving her traits but not so much! Y I'm being mean cuz she got the best thing in the world VIRAT. Don't need anything else psh but yah just to make u all satisfy I will pay attention to her a bit.. XD

---> DO NOT ASK ME WHERE IS VIRAT IN FUTURE! Cuz u won't know baby until the last chapter!
So if u ask that sentence thn it will be ignorance is a bliss :)
I said b4 n will again he is very much safe with me ^___^ don't worry

---> now here comes the main problem! Sighs sadly
U see I'm a crack mind. Ok don't laugh but I accept I am.. So wat happen was whatever u r reading in FUTURE sudnt be there wat so ever! Like it had no base when I started the story..
I added Vihaan just cuz I love kids n I love the character from #addicted by blue bolt "Ria n Nikki" so he is inspired by them ^___^

--->In the beginning the diary wasn't in the plan but I added cuz one day randomly my evil mind did a 360 spin n said Faria u idiot u sud have written this story as PAST or like some one is reading it..
Cuz WAT U READING IN FUTURE is actually PRESENT! & wateva inPRESENT IS PAST.. Samjheee? If no thn u will at the end!
So that got added from no where.. I know u r abt to hit me sorry :/ u see I'm not a constant thinker I change everything on last min. So u have to bare with that

---> Very important part which I'm still struggling.
Viren's rejection n odd behavior about the diary n stuff is also out of the blue n the main reason for his behavior which im still not satisfied with. Like I know y he is doing that but im not happy with the reasoning it's kinda lame actually.. So don't hit me at the end if u find it stupid cuz im accepting my fault b4 hand!

---> U see I'm pulling my hair each day to come up with a solid reason for Future, but lacking n I badly need help BUT I can't let anyone know wats cooking inside my evil brain or else u will know wat will be the ending :/sighs
All this mess is cuz of the ending .. Urghhh. I exactly know wat the ending will be but getting there is very difficult :/ so yah that be all.
Y am I telling u all this now? Cuz I'm saving sum chapples for later on! Heheehhehe.

---> oh yes! I get to scold u!!! Buahhahaha u guys don't pay attention huh >__< lol some of u asked VIRMAN together? Lol well remember when Vihaan was thinking abt "Goa" virat said he got EVERYTHING in there? Including his love :p tch tch...Virman story hai toh lady love manvi hogi nah silly. Well on second thought I can change that hmm interesting hehe JK
It's ok don't pay attention good for me I get to confuse u more Buhahahah :p

One more thing! Soon there will be sum embarrassing stuff in the story so do me a HUGE favor don't mention them outside the forum.. Or else I have to hide my face.. Lol!



If u r a new reader thn umm for new update send buddy req

Lastly, I just figure out how to do the "members only n copywrite issue" post find it cool so just trying it lol don't mind ok?

Sayonara <3
Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
FARIA MAY ASK U SOMETHING??
I WANTED ASK U SOMETHING FROM A LONG TYM BACK
WHETHER U SAY YES OR NO, DOESN'T MATTER I'LL ASK

>R U MAD???
NO SERIOUSLY..I MEAN U WROTE LETTING OUT YOUR FRUSTRATION N CONFUSION BUT IN WHOLE OF IT U TRANSFERRED YOUR FRUSTRATION N CONFUSION TO ME
N AGAIN U WROTE DAT FREAKING STATEMENT-"WAT U READING IN FUTURE IS ACTUALLY PRESENT N WATEVER IN PRESENT IS PAST"

>DON'T U FEAR DEATH??
U GET SO MUCH THREATS..IN FACT I MYSELF THREAT TO KILL U STILL U CONTINUE TO DO SUCH THINGS.
MAKING VIRAT A PSYCHO,VANISHING VIRAT FROM FUTURE.. NO NO ..PRESENT N SOMETIMES AS U SAY U URSELF R CONFUSED

>R U D SAME AT UR HOME WID UR FAMILY???
IF YES I FEEL PITY ON THEM WHO BEAR U 24*7
IF NO PITY ON US WHOSE HEADS START SPINNING WID JST AN UPDATE

ANSWER ME SOON


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IISHITA

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">FARIA MAY ASK U SOMETHING??</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">I WANTED ASK U SOMETHING FROM A LONG TYM BACK
</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">WHETHER U SAY YES OR NO, DOESN'T MATTER I'LL ASK</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">>R U MAD???</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">NO SERIOUSLY..I MEAN U WROTE LETTING OUT YOUR FRUSTRATION N CONFUSION BUT IN WHOLE OF IT U TRANSFERRED YOUR FRUSTRATION N CONFUSION TO ME</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">N AGAIN U WROTE DAT FREAKING STATEMENT-"WAT U READING IN FUTURE IS ACTUALLY PRESENT N WATEVER IN PRESENT IS PAST"</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">>DON'T U FEAR DEATH??</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">U GET SO MUCH THREATS..IN FACT I MYSELF THREAT TO KILL U STILL U CONTINUE TO DO SUCH THINGS.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">MAKING VIRAT A PSYCHO,VANISHING VIRAT FROM FUTURE.. NO NO ..PRESENT N SOMETIMES AS U SAY U URSELF R CONFUSED</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">>R U D SAME AT UR HOME WID UR FAMILY???</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">IF YES I FEEL PITY ON THEM WHO BEAR U 24*7</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">IF NO PITY ON US WHOSE HEADS START SPINNING WID JST AN UPDATE</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="1" color="#000099">ANSWER ME SOON</font>




Ahem clears throat! My reaction reading ur comment - :O n ROFLOLOLOL

I'm not psyco in real life believe it or not I'm really not in fact I am very shant bacha at home ^___^
U must be like na aa u r lying but wats truth is truth!!! Wat happen is I get so much energy when I write n be the crazy fan that I want to n that's when u get to see the crazy me! Lol pity My family? Hawww well u can't Pity them cuz I don't bother them na :p it's just mom gets irritated sometimes with my obsession that's it lol

For past n present sighs ok whatever u r reading is ALREADY HAPPENED! Future is the correct time that's wat u gonna be aware of at the end!
Where is VIRAT y can't I how him? Cuz baby doll... U gonna know the inside story from manvi, Viren n thru Vihaan!' that's y leaving him out! Cuz he is my main sikka <3 it's his tale written by himself! N u gonna read it through different people! Does it make sense? If no thn don't scratch ur head LOLOL I promise I will solve every mystery toward the end!

This note wasn't going to be a long passage it's just I was holding my feelings since longhggg time n just gotta blur out... Pheww I rest my case! But yah if u all r confused thn WRITE WAT U R CONFUSED OFF! Or else ur sentence will be ignored heehhe

Oh for death! Nah I'm not scared cuz u any kill me nor I can Die b4 I meet my boys ^______^ <3 <3 lol :p
Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria12345



Ahem so much loveee I'll be flying in heaven if u guys shower more ^____^

Thank u!! But yes always expect the unexpected from me!! I will give u things that u want but then crush it at the same time!!! *evil mind grins* so that time don't stop loving me ok? :p hahahahah I feel like a hitler ^___^



Omg faira u r frigtening me !! Wat is cooking in ur *evil brain*!! Yea i m always ready for the unexpected things coz u r rotating 360 degree !!:D for tat i m ready :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Yamin.



Omg faira u r frigtening me !! Wat is cooking in ur *evil brain*!! Yea i m always ready for the unexpected things coz u r rotating 360 degree !!:D for tat i m ready :)



Read the note above u will know :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hawww i dont know where the f did my unres went lamo😆😆😆
ok gona do it again 😳 dont kill me if you find it lame coz i dont remember what i wrote yesterday pshhh😕😕😕
firstly again i will say the gyaan guru parts which you write are damm true sometimes to shak hoing k tune hi likhe ke nai lol 😉😉
but i loveddd the way viru boy tricked her to stay but man ja na manvi is a goodiee girl too isiliye ruki or umm maybe noone can resist our boy's charm bakwas huff i know but how much you are making him workkk😡😡😡 are you planning to get killed but im not in a mood to get jailed so pulezzz jaldi se end this work torture for him na 😳😳 fatty wala part was chooo cuteee lol crazy boy should have paid some attention na bechare ki puri shop ki mummy sister kar di 🤣 but i loved how he is adamant to be punished for his mistake and wants to get everything back to its place hayeee *comes back form the la la land* lol he was crazyyy believe him to do the most craziest stuff when he is high i salute u kamini no one else can write such fun stuff 🤗 wondering he will be back to normal or will fly to mental hospital soon hehehe dont kill me he was behaving like one but i loveddd it do i need to tell you?? no na 😛 proceed 😆😆 and the things he did in manvi's washroom was ummm can i skip commenting on that rofl 😆 that was i dont know i enjoyeddd it ahahaha it seriously made me high believe me or not i was literally shouting on some of the stuff and whistelling too thank God my siso wasnt with me at that time naito i should have been with a doc right now😲 lotion perfume private stuff🤬 lingeries i mean who write this i should give u an award faria ki bachiii sach mein jadu ki jappi for u on that u write all the stuff ur minds works on and i think i would think thousand times before doing it but then again u have gutsss 👍🏼 sachii mein u wrote stuff which most of us dont just coz umm ok i admit it freaks me out writing it lolololol it was sooo much fun reading it and cherru on the cake it was longgg tch tch tch how much we make u work na 😉😛😆 better or else u start being lazy so get on work for the next update give a pat to your evil mind form my side 😈 and han my last one was more longer but i hate grrr dont know why its being mr india haiii itna lamba comnt kiya tha mein ok forget it lol😆
lots of loveee ❤️
Edited by vamps1996 - 12 years ago
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FOCL...hahahaha...hihihihihi...buhahaha...u cracked me up faria...it was freaking hilarious...i must say this is 1 of the best chappi till now...superb work girl (y)

rofl...talli virat n crazy non stop blabber n idiotic acts...so cute yet so amusing...

Cont soon...waiting fr thier reaction in the morning...lolzzz
Edited by rasp_berry - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg...this was amazing...luved the drunken virat.he was so cute !!!!!😳😳...still waiting for tht night...nd update fast...cuz im so eager...

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